Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSP12SMBKQRK7E0ZKT8F

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
39.0s
Cost:
$0.015654
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The faint glow of the green neon “Raven’s Nest” sign bled through Soho’s bristling night air, tainting the drizzle-stained pavement a sickly jade. Aurora Carter ducked under her hood, knuckles pink as she pushed through the bar’s battered door. Inside, the din of pint glasses, low laughter, and the undercurrent of an old jazz LP shrouded the cramped gloom. Her eyes caught the battered maps lining the walls—Africa faded and bisected by thumbtacks, a black-and-white Paris, unsmiling faces in Soviet hats. She walked a little lighter. She scanned the crowd, searching for Silas. Flashes of auburn new growth poking through a mop of grey—the man himself prowled behind the bar, murmuring to a glass-lifting regular. Rory turned toward the corner, making straight for the tall table near the bookshelf, already half-picturing her unwelcome to-do list of late-night deliveries. Her legs ached at the thought. A figure unfolded from a dark booth beside the whisky bottles—someone slim, braced with the air of a man who hadn’t meant to be noticed. Rory stopped, heart giving a sharp twist. It shouldn’t be him, couldn’t be. The slope of his nose, eyes darker and softer than she remembered, jawline sharp as glass even after all this time. Jamie O’Donnell. She tasted the name behind her teeth, keeping her face level. He looked older, but that wasn’t it—he looked new-made, reassembled. Gone were the startled, reckless smiles. His suit fit, sober and black, hands clean but fidgeting in a way that made her want to reach for the old boy’s knuckles peeking out from under too-long sleeves. He caught her watching. “Rory Carter. Hell, I thought you’d left London,” he said, voice rougher, slower. Eyes tight, but mouth curling into a searching half-grin. “Been busy keeping my head down,” Rory answered, stepping forward. “Didn’t expect Soho to cough you up, Jamie. Thought you’d flown off to Dubai, or vanished to Stanford. Opened a yoga studio in Croydon, something absurd.” He laughed, but it cracked somewhere in the middle, shoulders inching up before he caught himself. He offered her the chair across. She didn’t take it—leaning against the bookshelf, hands in pockets. Familiar distance, old wires. “Your dad always said you’d make a lawyer. I figured you’d be on telly—‘The Barrister’s Daughter’—cross-examining MPs for fun,’” Jamie said, running a thumb along the grey ring on his finger. His nails sat shorter, cleaner. The rings under his eyes matched the whiskey in his voice. “Didn’t stick the landing. Couldn’t hack sermonising from nine to five. I deliver Chinese now. Golden Empress, just round the corner. My social skills are best left untested on clients.” “Yu-Fei’s place. No kidding.” His voice dropped, the next words hovering, trailing away. His gaze flicked around the bar—maps, mirrors, strangers. “You never texted me back.” Rain battered the street, flattening ghost-lit faces in the window. Rory met Jamie’s stare. “You didn’t exactly leave a forwarding address, mate. Last I heard, you’d ‘borrowed’ your uncle’s Astra and buggered off after that disastrous gig in Bristol. Five years.” A small, sad smile perched on his lips, as if some piece of the younger Jamie stood beside him, arms folded, silent. “There was a girl. Or a disaster—I can’t tell the difference now. Spain for a while. Mostly running from the same stuff we all ran from.” He dug at a beer label with his thumb, shreds curling under his nails. “London felt like a punishment. But here I am, circling the old haunts.” The jazz slid to a stop, replaced by the crackle of a new record. Rory shifted, eyes falling on the little shine of a scar at Jamie’s wrist—paler, but still there. She remembered late-night dares on Cardiff rooftops, hands sticky with cider and carelessness. “You look—different, Jamie. Like you finally found your real bones.” He bristled, almost flinched, but grinned anyway. “Spent enough years pretending I was someone else. Fitting rooms, stages, promotions I didn’t want. None of it stuck. Now I push paper round a dull office and pay the bills.” “You look miserable.” His laugh came short—huffed out in a breath. “Are you happy, Rory?” She didn’t answer right away, tracing the seam of an old National Geographic map with her eyes. “I’m not haunted,” she said. “That’s the best I can do, most days.” He tugged his chair closer, elbows on knees. Old echoes—a shared cigarette on a church roof, bad songs sung in freezing alleys, Jamie breaking into tears at a late train. He’d grown into stillness, but the fidget never left his hands. “Remember that winter in year twelve?” Jamie’s gaze hunted her, daring her to lie, to laugh it off. “Everyone else at Douglass’ party trying to snog, or worse. You, me, out in the garden, making plans. We thought we’d take the world by the throat.” “You tried to teach me to smoke joints made of mint leaves,” Rory replied, half-smiling despite herself. “You said we'd be rich doing street magic and reading palms on the beach in Barcelona.” “We never got further than your dad’s old deck of cards. I think about it more than I should.” He toyed with a beer mat, but his eyes glimmered, toeing the edge between amusement and apology. “I should have written.” “You could have,” Rory replied. “But the world rolls on. We weren’t built for postcards.” Jamie reached for her wrist, fingers pausing just short of her sleeve. “There were things I owed you. Explanations I never gave.” Rory drew back, a small, calm defiance in her mouth. “I had to start over. Didn’t have time to wait for old apologies.” He looked down. Above the bar, Silas limped between tables, head cocked at the two of them before he turned, half-smiling at Rory. The barkeeper’s presence felt like a reset; both of them older, sharper, watchful. Rory braced her arms on the table, gaze fixed on Jamie. “Your dad… he’s still around?” Jamie’s voice softened, the old habit of sidelong questions returning. “Cardiff. Mum as well. They send letters, pretend I’m taking the city by storm. They don’t know about Evan. Or why I left—the real reasons.” She tapped the scar at her wrist. “I’m not much for explaining myself either.” Jamie let out a breath, lines around his eyes biting deeper. “The days get shorter after you leave home. I always thought there’d be another chance.” “There isn’t. Not for most things.” Resignation curled around them, a gentle press. Rory stood, her back aching, the weight of old days and missed phone calls settling like damp. Jamie traced the rim of his glass, voice tight. “If you ever want to talk—” “I’ll find you. Or not,” Rory cut in, but her lip quirked at the corner. “Things don’t always break just because you drop them, Jamie.” Rain battered the glass. Jamie nodded, grave as a priest, hands folded around his empty glass. Rory left him there, hiccuping between the memory of old gardens and the sharp, live wire of now. She met Silas' gaze as she slipped past the bar. He raised his brow just slightly—Are you alright?—and Rory shivered, nodding in return. She stepped into the London night, drizzle slick on her skin, the world outside neither kinder nor crueler, only itself, indifferent to who had stayed or left. Behind her, the green neon shimmered, steady and unworried.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1252
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1252
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"echoes"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"grave"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"flicked"
4"tracing"
5"echoes"
6"weight"
7"traced"
8"grave"
9"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1225
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount793
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Jamie"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Carter1
Africa1
Paris1
Soviet1
Silas2
Eyes1
Jamie13
Cardiff1
National1
Geographic1
Rory14
Rain2
Are1
London1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
2"Eyes"
3"Jamie"
4"Rory"
5"Rain"
places
0"Soho"
1"Africa"
2"Paris"
3"Soviet"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
globalScore0.617
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a reset; both of them older,"
36.73% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.633
wordCount1225
matches
0"not,” Rory cut in, but her lip quirked at the corner"
1"neither kinder nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean35
std19.14
cv0.547
sampleLengths
086
183
247
350
422
536
636
747
830
926
1041
1175
1254
1338
143
1512
1630
1741
1845
1933
2040
2115
2222
2323
2447
2515
2639
2726
286
2924
3015
3125
3244
3313
3436
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences90
ratio0.122
matches
0"Her eyes caught the battered maps lining the walls—Africa faded and bisected by thumbtacks, a black-and-white Paris, unsmiling faces in Soviet hats."
1"Flashes of auburn new growth poking through a mop of grey—the man himself prowled behind the bar, murmuring to a glass-lifting regular."
2"A figure unfolded from a dark booth beside the whisky bottles—someone slim, braced with the air of a man who hadn’t meant to be noticed."
3"He looked older, but that wasn’t it—he looked new-made, reassembled."
4"She didn’t take it—leaning against the bookshelf, hands in pockets."
5"His gaze flicked around the bar—maps, mirrors, strangers."
6"Rory shifted, eyes falling on the little shine of a scar at Jamie’s wrist—paler, but still there."
7"His laugh came short—huffed out in a breath."
8"Old echoes—a shared cigarette on a church roof, bad songs sung in freezing alleys, Jamie breaking into tears at a late train."
9"The barkeeper’s presence felt like a reset; both of them older, sharper, watchful."
10"He raised his brow just slightly—Are you alright?—and Rory shivered, nodding in return."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount767
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.018252933507170794
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001303780964797914
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean13.61
std8.44
cv0.62
sampleLengths
023
116
220
322
45
57
622
723
86
925
107
116
1221
132
1411
1510
166
1730
184
1913
209
2110
2226
2316
246
2510
264
2731
285
2911
3030
3113
328
335
3410
354
3627
3722
3840
3913
4014
4117
4213
4310
447
4531
463
478
484
4917
67.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4222222222222222
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences65
matches
0"Her eyes caught the battered"
1"She walked a little lighter."
2"She scanned the crowd, searching"
3"Her legs ached at the"
4"It shouldn’t be him, couldn’t"
5"She tasted the name behind"
6"He looked older, but that"
7"His suit fit, sober and"
8"He caught her watching."
9"he said, voice rougher, slower"
10"He laughed, but it cracked"
11"He offered her the chair"
12"She didn’t take it—leaning against"
13"His nails sat shorter, cleaner."
14"His voice dropped, the next"
15"His gaze flicked around the"
16"He dug at a beer"
17"She remembered late-night dares on"
18"He bristled, almost flinched, but"
19"His laugh came short—huffed out"
ratio0.431
21.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences65
matches
0"The faint glow of the"
1"Aurora Carter ducked under her"
2"Her eyes caught the battered"
3"She walked a little lighter."
4"She scanned the crowd, searching"
5"Flashes of auburn new growth"
6"Rory turned toward the corner,"
7"Her legs ached at the"
8"A figure unfolded from a"
9"Rory stopped, heart giving a"
10"It shouldn’t be him, couldn’t"
11"The slope of his nose,"
12"She tasted the name behind"
13"He looked older, but that"
14"His suit fit, sober and"
15"He caught her watching."
16"he said, voice rougher, slower"
17"Eyes tight, but mouth curling"
18"Rory answered, stepping forward"
19"He laughed, but it cracked"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His suit fit, sober and black, hands clean but fidgeting in a way that made her want to reach for the old boy’s knuckles peeking out from under too-long sleeves…"
1"A small, sad smile perched on his lips, as if some piece of the younger Jamie stood beside him, arms folded, silent."
2"Rory stood, her back aching, the weight of old days and missed phone calls settling like damp."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, voice rougher, slower"
1"His voice dropped, the next words hovering, trailing away"
2"He toyed, but his eyes glimmered, toeing the edge between amusement and apology"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.343
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.5109%