Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSP28S7J80TM7HXH1T70

Run Details

Duration:
22.8s
Cost:
$0.001691
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones of the Fae Grove stood sentinel, ancient oaks gnarled and twisted, their branches grasping at the indigo sky. Aurora Carter, known as Rory to her friends, stepped cautiously into the moonlit clearing, her bright blue eyes scanning the shadows. She shouldn't be here. The Fae Grove was forbidden to humans, a place where time moved strangely and the walls between worlds thinned. But the Heartstone pendant around her neck, with its deep crimson gemstone, pulsed with warmth, urging her forward. She had to know why it had been given to her, and by whom. A breeze whispered through the wildflowers carpeting the grove, their petals shimmering in the starlight. Rory shivered despite her jacket. The hairs on her arms rose as if electrically charged. She could feel...something. A presence that sent her pulse racing. "This place is giving me the creeps," she muttered, her voice sounding small and lost. She thought of her cramped flat above Silas' bar, of the comforting neon glow of the Golden Empress' sign. Anything but this eerie, unnatural silence. A flutter of movement caught her eye. In the trees? No, beyond them. A shiver ran down her spine. She wasn't alone. "Who's there?" she called, hating the tremor in her voice. "Show yourself!" But the whispering breeze was her only answer, teasing at her straight black hair. Rory took a deep breath, trying to calm her hammering heart. She was imagining things. Letting the stories about this place get to her. Still, as she moved deeper into the grove, she couldn't shake the feeling of being watched. The pendant's pulsing warmth against her chest was both a comfort and a warning. It had led her here for a reason. The air grew thick and heavy, pressing in on her from all sides. Feeling light-headed, Rory stopped, bracing her hands on her knees. The silver chain of the pendant seemed to tighten around her neck. What was happening? Fear spiked through her, sharp and cold. The pendant, previously a faint inner glow, now burned bright as a captured sun. And then she heard it - a voice, low and sinuous, weaving through the wildflower stalks. *"Aurora..."* Her head snapped up, eyes wild. She'd recognize that voice anywhere. "Evan?" But no, that was impossible. Evan was miles away in Cardiff, hopefully never to darken her door again. But the voice had been so like his, dripping with venom and false sweetness. As the Heartstone blazed against her chest, a shadow detached itself from the standing stones. Taller than a man, with eyes that glowed an eerie green, it watched her with a hungry expression. Rory stumbled back, a scream locked in her throat. What was that thing? Its form shifted and changed as she watched, at times almost human, at others a mass of writhing shadows. Her fingers scrabbled at the pendant's chain, desperate to stop the burning. The instant her fingers brushed the crimson gemstone, the creature shrieked, an awful sound that scraped along her bones. Time seemed to slow, the creature moving as if through syrup as it lunged for her. And in that frozen moment, Rory understood. The pendant wasn't just a pretty bauble. It was her only protection against the monsters of the Fae Grove. As the world sped back up, the shadows engulfed her in a suffocating embrace. The pendant's light flared, a shockwave of power exploding outwards... And everything went black.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:39:40.74Z" 2/19/2026, 10:39:40 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount573
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount573
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"sentinel"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"comforting"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"sentinel"
1"scanning"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"charged"
5"could feel"
6"pulse"
7"racing"
8"comforting"
9"silence"
10"down her spine"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"time stood still"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
1"Time seemed to slow"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences53
matches
0"d with warmth"
88.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences56
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords573
ratio0.002
matches
0"\"Aurora...\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount548
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae3
Grove3
Carter1
Rory6
Heartstone2
Cardiff1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.953
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount573
matches(empty)
47.62% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"recognize that voice"
1"was that thing"
88.21% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean30.16
std13.83
cv0.459
sampleLengths
042
155
240
340
422
512
638
738
838
937
101
1112
1232
1333
1432
1531
1642
1724
184
92.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences53
matches
0"was forbidden"
1"been given"
58.16% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs94
matches
0"was imagining"
1"was happening"
91.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences56
ratio0.018
matches
0"And then she heard it - a voice, low and sinuous, weaving through the wildflower stalks."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount152
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.03289473684210526
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.019736842105263157
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean10.23
std5.65
cv0.553
sampleLengths
021
121
24
319
418
514
615
75
810
93
107
1115
1219
136
147
153
163
176
183
1910
202
2114
2211
234
249
2516
2614
278
2813
2910
3012
313
327
3314
3416
351
366
375
381
395
4013
4114
4215
4318
449
454
4619
4712
4819
4916
74.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.44642857142857145
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences53
matches
0"She shouldn't be here."
1"She had to know why"
2"She could feel...something."
3"she muttered, her voice sounding"
4"She thought of her cramped"
5"She wasn't alone."
6"she called, hating the tremor"
7"She was imagining things."
8"It had led her here"
9"Her head snapped up, eyes"
10"She'd recognize that voice anywhere."
11"Its form shifted and changed"
12"Her fingers scrabbled at the"
13"It was her only protection"
ratio0.264
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences53
matches
0"The standing stones of the"
1"Aurora Carter, known as Rory"
2"She shouldn't be here."
3"The Fae Grove was forbidden"
4"She had to know why"
5"A breeze whispered through the"
6"Rory shivered despite her jacket."
7"The hairs on her arms"
8"She could feel...something."
9"A presence that sent her"
10"she muttered, her voice sounding"
11"She thought of her cramped"
12"Anything but this eerie, unnatural"
13"A flutter of movement caught"
14"A shiver ran down her"
15"She wasn't alone."
16"she called, hating the tremor"
17"Rory took a deep breath,"
18"She was imagining things."
19"The pendant's pulsing warmth against"
ratio0.66
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A breeze whispered through the wildflowers carpeting the grove, their petals shimmering in the starlight."
1"Taller than a man, with eyes that glowed an eerie green, it watched her with a hungry expression."
2"The instant her fingers brushed the crimson gemstone, the creature shrieked, an awful sound that scraped along her bones."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she muttered, her voice sounding small and lost"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
75.2629%