Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQSP34JF02NHYB8XBJBXE

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first thing Aurora registered was that Lucien hadn't changed a bit. Same impeccable posture. Same tailored suit that probably cost more than her monthly rent. Same sardonic little half-smile that had once made her heart flip in her chest. "Carter." His voice slid through the silence like velvet over stone. One amber eye, one black—both studying her with the calculating intensity that she remembered all too well. "What the hell are you doing here?" Aurora gripped the doorframe of Eva's flat until her knuckles whitened. Nine months, two weeks, and four days since she'd last seen him walking away. Not that she'd been counting. "Is that any way to greet an old friend?" Lucien leaned lightly on his ivory-handled cane, the one she knew concealed a blade sharp enough to slit a throat. "We're not friends." "No," he agreed, "we never were quite that, were we?" A hiss and scrabble of claws against hardwood announced Ptolemy's arrival. The tabby wound between Aurora's ankles, tail high and curious. "May I come in?" Lucien asked with exaggerated politeness. "Or would you prefer I discuss matters of arcane significance in this delightfully public corridor?" Aurora's jaw tightened. Of course he knew exactly which buttons to push. "Eva's not here." "I'm aware. I came to see you." The tension between them crackled like static electricity. Nine months of silence, and now he appeared on Eva's doorstep like he had every right to be there. "Fine." She stepped back, hating the way her pulse quickened as he brushed past her. Lucien moved through the cramped flat with familiar ease, navigating around the towering stacks of books and scrolls. He didn't sit, instead standing by the window where wan London sunshine filtered through the glass. From this angle, his platinum hair caught the light, creating a halo effect that Aurora found darkly ironic. "Still living out of a suitcase, I see," he remarked, nodding toward her half-unpacked bag in the corner. "Still making observations no one asked for, I see," she countered, folding her arms. "What do you want, Lucien?" He tapped his cane against the floorboards—once, twice. "Perhaps I merely wished to see how you were faring." "After nine months of radio silence? Try again." "Nine months, two weeks, and four days, to be precise." The corner of his mouth quirked upward. "But who's counting?" Heat rushed to her face. Damn him. "Say what you came to say, then leave." "You're angry with me." "Brilliant deduction. Did your demonic half give you mind-reading abilities, or is that just your natural talent for stating the bloody obvious?" The barb hit its mark; she saw it in the slight tightening around his eyes. Good. Let him feel something for once. "I deserved that," he conceded. He set his cane against the wall and removed his suit jacket with unhurried precision, draping it over the back of Eva's reading chair. The gesture was so presumptuous, so typically Lucien, that Aurora nearly laughed. "You deserve a lot more than that," she said. "Such as?" "Such as me throwing you out this third-floor window for starters." "You always did have a flair for the dramatic, Carter." He rolled up his sleeves with methodical care, revealing forearms corded with lean muscle. "Though I suspect Ms. Cheung wouldn't appreciate losing her best delivery person to an assault charge." Aurora stiffened. "How do you know I work for Yu-Fei?" "Please." He scoffed. "Did you think I wouldn't keep tabs on you?" "I think you lost the right to 'keep tabs' when you disappeared after Coventry." The name of the city hung between them, heavy with unspoken accusations. Coventry, where everything had gone terribly wrong. Where he'd made promises he hadn't kept. "I had my reasons," he said quietly. "You always do." She moved to the kitchenette, needing distance between them. The cramped space felt suddenly airless with him in it. "Tea?" "No, thank you." Aurora filled the kettle anyway, needing something to occupy her hands. "Nine months, Lucien. You could have called. Texted. Sent a bloody carrier pigeon." "Would you have answered?" Her silence was answer enough. Ptolemy jumped onto the counter, eyes fixed on Lucien with feline suspicion. The cat had always been an excellent judge of character. "You left me bleeding in that warehouse," she said finally. "You made your choice." "I made the only choice available to me at the time." "Right. Always the pragmatist." "No." The word came out sharper than his usual measured tone. "Not pragmatic. Necessary." Aurora slammed the kettle down, water sloshing over the rim. "Necessary? I nearly died!" "And had I stayed, we both would have." His heterochromatic gaze held hers steadily. "The Knights of Solemn Ash were coming. I led them away from you." "That's your explanation? That you were, what, protecting me?" She laughed, a brittle sound. "Next you'll tell me you did it all out of love." Something flashed across his face—so brief she almost missed it. Pain, perhaps. Or something dangerously close to vulnerability. "I did what I thought was right," he said. "You never contacted me after. Never checked if I survived." "I knew you had survived, Aurora. I made certain of it." The use of her full name startled her. He'd always called her Carter, even during their most intimate moments. "How?" she demanded. "I paid your hospital bills. Anonymous donor." The revelation hit her like a physical blow. She'd wondered about that—how the astronomical costs of her treatment had mysteriously vanished. "That doesn't change anything," she said, though the conviction in her voice wavered. "I'm not asking for forgiveness." "Then what are you asking for?" Lucien moved toward her, each step deliberate. She could smell his cologne now—sandalwood and something darker, something not quite human. He stopped when barely a handspan separated them. "Your help," he said simply. "My help?" She shook her head. "You're unbelievable." "The Knights have resurfaced. They're hunting again." That got her attention. The Knights of Solemn Ash—religious zealots who believed in purging the world of "unnatural" beings. The same group that had captured and tortured her for information on Lucien's whereabouts. "What does that have to do with me?" "They're not just targeting half-demons anymore." His gaze dropped to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—the one he knew wasn't really from a childhood accident. "They're coming after anyone who's had contact with the supernatural." "So you came to warn me? How gallant." "I came because they already have Eva." The room seemed to tilt beneath her feet. "What?" "She was taken three days ago. That's why she isn't here." Aurora's mind raced. Eva had texted about visiting her mother in Cardiff. Said she'd be gone for a week. "You're lying," she whispered. "I wish I were." For the first time, she saw fatigue in the lines around his eyes. "They're using her as bait. They know about your connection to me." "There is no connection." "We both know that's not true, Carter." The familiar use of her surname somehow hurt more than anything else. It reminded her of whispered conversations, of his voice in her ear as they'd moved together in darkness. "I need your help to find her," he continued. "No one knows Eva's research better than you. And no one knows the Knights better than I do." "So you want us to work together? After everything?" "I want us to save someone we both care about." Lucien reached out, his fingers hovering near her face but not quite touching. "After that, you never have to see me again." Aurora could feel the heat radiating from his body, could see the pulse beating in his throat. Despite everything, there was still that pull between them—that inexorable gravity that had drawn them together from the first moment they'd met. "If you're lying to me..." she began. "I'm not." "If anything happens to Eva—" "It won't." She looked up at him—this man who had saved her life and broken her heart in equal measure. This half-demon who kept secrets like others kept souvenirs. "One last job," she said finally. "For Eva." Something like relief flickered across his face. "Thank you." "Don't thank me yet." Aurora stepped away from him, needing to clear her head. "This doesn't change what happened in Coventry." "No," Lucien agreed, his mismatched eyes holding hers. "Nothing can change the past. But perhaps..." He paused, choosing his words with care. "Perhaps we might influence the future." Aurora said nothing. She simply moved past him to retrieve her jacket from the hook by the door. "Well?" she asked, hand on the doorknob. "Are you coming or not? Eva isn't going to rescue herself." For the first time that day, Lucien's smile reached his eyes. "After you, Carter. Always after you."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
26.09% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags35
adverbTagCount8
adverbTags
0"Lucien leaned lightly [lightly]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
2"his mouth quirked upward [upward]"
3"he said quietly [quietly]"
4"she said finally [finally]"
5"he said simply [simply]"
6"she said finally [finally]"
7"Aurora stepped away [away]"
dialogueSentences92
tagDensity0.38
leniency0.761
rawRatio0.229
effectiveRatio0.174
89.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1478
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1478
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"silence"
count4
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"calculating"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count2
8
word"navigating"
count1
9
word"methodical"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"measured"
count1
12
word"wavered"
count1
13
word"raced"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"velvet"
2"calculating"
3"intensity"
4"tension"
5"pulse"
6"quickened"
7"familiar"
8"navigating"
9"methodical"
10"unspoken"
11"measured"
12"wavered"
13"raced"
14"could feel"
15"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1460
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.20% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount869
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Lucien11
One1
Eva4
Nine2
Ptolemy2
London1
Heat1
Carter1
Knights1
Solemn1
Ash1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
2"One"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Heat"
6"Carter"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.752
windowScore1
38.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite human"
1"not quite touching"
2"Something like relief flickered across his f"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1460
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences152
matches
0"was that Lucien"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean16.4
std11.02
cv0.672
sampleLengths
040
128
237
329
43
510
621
724
815
97
1027
1115
1252
1318
1419
1518
168
1720
1815
194
2022
2122
2241
239
242
2511
2640
2710
2812
2914
3026
317
3223
333
3424
354
365
3722
3814
3911
404
4114
4214
4327
4425
4518
469
4710
4811
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences152
ratio0.066
matches
0"One amber eye, one black—both studying her with the calculating intensity that she remembered all too well."
1"He tapped his cane against the floorboards—once, twice."
2"The barb hit its mark; she saw it in the slight tightening around his eyes."
3"Something flashed across his face—so brief she almost missed it."
4"She'd wondered about that—how the astronomical costs of her treatment had mysteriously vanished."
5"She could smell his cologne now—sandalwood and something darker, something not quite human."
6"The Knights of Solemn Ash—religious zealots who believed in purging the world of \"unnatural\" beings."
7"\"They're not just targeting half-demons anymore.\" His gaze dropped to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—the one he knew wasn't really from a childhood accident."
8"Despite everything, there was still that pull between them—that inexorable gravity that had drawn them together from the first moment they'd met."
9"She looked up at him—this man who had saved her life and broken her heart in equal measure."
79.18% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount883
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Same sardonic little half-smile"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.05549263873159683
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.021517553793884484
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean9.61
std5.58
cv0.581
sampleLengths
012
13
211
314
411
517
618
714
85
929
103
1110
1211
1310
149
1515
163
179
183
197
208
2119
2215
2318
2416
2518
2618
2714
285
298
3010
318
3217
333
345
352
368
374
3822
3915
401
416
425
4324
4412
459
462
4711
4824
4916
69.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4473684210526316
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners68
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Of course he knew exactly"
ratio0.012
85.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences83
matches
0"His voice slid through the"
1"She stepped back, hating the"
2"He didn't sit, instead standing"
3"he remarked, nodding toward her"
4"she countered, folding her arms"
5"He tapped his cane against"
6"He set his cane against"
7"He rolled up his sleeves"
8"he said quietly"
9"She moved to the kitchenette,"
10"Her silence was answer enough."
11"she said finally"
12"His heterochromatic gaze held hers"
13"She laughed, a brittle sound"
14"He'd always called her Carter,"
15"She'd wondered about that—how the"
16"she said, though the conviction"
17"She could smell his cologne"
18"He stopped when barely a"
19"he said simply"
ratio0.337
56.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences83
matches
0"The first thing Aurora registered"
1"His voice slid through the"
2"Aurora gripped the doorframe of"
3"Lucien leaned lightly on his"
4"A hiss and scrabble of"
5"The tabby wound between Aurora's"
6"Lucien asked with exaggerated politeness"
7"Aurora's jaw tightened."
8"The tension between them crackled"
9"She stepped back, hating the"
10"Lucien moved through the cramped"
11"He didn't sit, instead standing"
12"he remarked, nodding toward her"
13"she countered, folding her arms"
14"He tapped his cane against"
15"The corner of his mouth"
16"Heat rushed to her face."
17"The barb hit its mark;"
18"He set his cane against"
19"The gesture was so presumptuous,"
ratio0.807
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Same sardonic little half-smile that had once made her heart flip in her chest."
1"Despite everything, there was still that pull between them—that inexorable gravity that had drawn them together from the first moment they'd met."
2"She looked up at him—this man who had saved her life and broken her heart in equal measure."
3"This half-demon who kept secrets like others kept souvenirs."
96.43% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags35
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien reached out, his fingers hovering near her face but not quite touching"
1"Aurora stepped away, needing to clear her head"
73.91% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
1"he conceded (concede)"
2"She laughed (laugh)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"he continued (continue)"
6"Lucien agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences92
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.438
effectiveRatio0.152
77.1839%