Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQQZCTRYM90FPEZP8PSA6B

Run Details

Duration:
5.9s
Cost:
$0.000202

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in jagged sheets, turning the pavement to slick mirrors beneath Quinn’s boots. She moved like a shadow, her breath steady, her sharp jaw clenched tight. The suspect had bolted down a side alley near the river, and Quinn didn’t hesitate—she followed, her leather watch ticking against her wrist like a metronome counting down to the inevitable. She ducked beneath a flickering streetlamp, the neon glow painting her face in sickly green. The alley reeked of damp stone and something sharper—oil, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of blood. Her fingers twitched toward the holster at her hip, but she held back. No need for guns yet. Not here. Ahead, the suspect’s dark coat flapped as they turned a corner, vanishing into the labyrinth of Soho’s backstreets. Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles, her breath fogging in the cold air. She kept moving, her military precision honed over years of chasing ghosts and criminals alike. The rain drummed against her scalp, but she didn’t slow. Then, the neon sign. A jagged green glow pulsed above a door half-hidden by ivy. *The Raven’s Nest.* Quinn recognised it—Silas’ bar, a place rumoured to be a front for something darker. The suspect hesitated, glancing back over their shoulder before slipping inside. Quinn’s pulse spiked. This wasn’t just a bar. It was a door. She pushed through the door before the suspect could disappear, the bell above it jingling like a warning. The air inside was thick, stale, the kind of scent that clung to old secrets. The walls were lined with yellowed maps and black-and-white photographs—faces she didn’t recognise, places she’d never seen. A bartender, gaunt and silent, didn’t even look up as Quinn stepped inside. The suspect was already halfway to the back, weaving through tables draped in red velvet. Quinn’s boots thudded against the warped floorboards, her eyes locked on the target. The suspect didn’t turn. They knew she was there. A bookshelf. Quinn’s fingers brushed the spines, feeling the slight give of a hidden panel. The suspect didn’t wait. They shoved the books aside, revealing a narrow doorway. The air beyond was cooler, damp. Quinn’s breath hitched. *No.* The suspect stepped through, the door sealing shut behind them. Quinn’s hand closed around the edge of the panel, her knuckles white. She could leave. She could call for backup. She could— A voice cut through the silence. *"You’re either brave or stupid."* Quinn turned. Tomás Herrera leaned against the wall, his olive skin damp from the rain, his dark curls plastered to his forehead. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck glinted in the dim light. His scar, a thin white line along his forearm, stood out stark against his skin. *"You’re not supposed to be here,"* Quinn said, her voice low. Tomás pushed off the wall, stepping closer. *"Neither are you."* She didn’t move. *"What’s in there?"* *"A market."* His voice was calm, almost amused. *"Underground. Dangerous. Not for the faint of heart."* Quinn exhaled through her nose. *"I don’t care."* Tomás studied her for a long moment. Then, with a slow nod, he reached into his coat and pulled out a small, white bone. *"Bone token,"* he said. *"Lets you in. But once you’re in, you’re in."* Quinn took it. The bone was cold, smooth. *"Why are you here?"* she asked. Tomás’ expression darkened. *"Same reason you are."* The suspect’s voice echoed from the other side of the door—*a sharp curse, a scuffle.* Quinn’s grip tightened on the bone. *"Then let’s go,"* she said. Tomás didn’t argue. He stepped aside, and Quinn slipped through the doorway, the bone token burning in her palm. The air beyond was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that made her skin prickle. The market stretched before her, a labyrinth of stalls and shadows. Lanterns flickered, casting long, dancing shadows on the walls. People moved like ghosts, their faces half-hidden in the gloom. A woman in a long coat haggled over a vial of dark liquid. A man in a tattered suit offered something wrapped in black silk. And the suspect— They were already disappearing into the crowd. Quinn’s fingers closed around the bone token. She didn’t hesitate. *"Let’s find them."*
total_cost0.0002018

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount711
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount711
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"pulsed"
2"pulse"
3"velvet"
4"silence"
5"stark"
6"echoed"
7"flickered"
8"dancing"
9"gloom"
10"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
17.66% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans16
markdownWords64
totalWords702
ratio0.091
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest."
1"No."
2"\"You’re either brave or stupid.\""
3"\"You’re not supposed to be here,\""
4"\"Neither are you.\""
5"\"What’s in there?\""
6"\"A market.\""
7"\"Underground. Dangerous. Not for the faint of heart.\""
8"\"I don’t care.\""
9"\"Bone token,\""
10"\"Lets you in. But once you’re in, you’re in.\""
11"\"Why are you here?\""
12"\"Same reason you are.\""
13"a sharp curse, a scuffle."
14"\"Then let’s go,\""
15"\"Let’s find them.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
15.72% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount633
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.69
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn17
Soho1
Raven1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás4
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.157
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount702
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean21.94
std20.25
cv0.923
sampleLengths
059
152
255
34
451
563
637
72
836
910
1022
116
125
132
1447
1511
1610
176
1816
198
2037
218
226
237
2421
255
2638
2755
283
297
3010
313
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs108
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences78
ratio0.103
matches
0"The suspect had bolted down a side alley near the river, and Quinn didn’t hesitate—she followed, her leather watch ticking against her wrist like a metronome counting down to the inevitable."
1"The alley reeked of damp stone and something sharper—oil, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of blood."
2"*The Raven’s Nest.* Quinn recognised it—Silas’ bar, a place rumoured to be a front for something darker."
3"The walls were lined with yellowed maps and black-and-white photographs—faces she didn’t recognise, places she’d never seen."
4"She could—"
5"The suspect’s voice echoed from the other side of the door—*a sharp curse, a scuffle.* Quinn’s grip tightened on the bone."
6"The air beyond was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that made her skin prickle."
7"And the suspect—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount219
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.0182648401826484
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0045662100456621
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean9
std5.92
cv0.658
sampleLengths
015
113
231
315
417
513
65
72
818
912
1015
1110
124
1311
1417
1511
163
175
184
1918
2015
2117
2213
2315
2413
254
265
272
2813
294
309
316
323
331
3410
3512
363
375
382
396
405
412
4220
4312
4415
4511
467
473
483
493
52.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.358974358974359
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"Then, the neon sign."
1"Then, with a slow nod,"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences61
matches
0"She moved like a shadow,"
1"She ducked beneath a flickering"
2"Her fingers twitched toward the"
3"She kept moving, her military"
4"It was a door."
5"She pushed through the door"
6"They knew she was there."
7"They shoved the books aside,"
8"She could leave."
9"She could call for backup."
10"His scar, a thin white"
11"She didn’t move."
12"His voice was calm, almost"
13"He stepped aside, and Quinn"
14"They were already disappearing into"
15"She didn’t hesitate."
ratio0.262
0.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences61
matches
0"The rain fell in jagged"
1"She moved like a shadow,"
2"The suspect had bolted down"
3"She ducked beneath a flickering"
4"The alley reeked of damp"
5"Her fingers twitched toward the"
6"Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles,"
7"She kept moving, her military"
8"The rain drummed against her"
9"A jagged green glow pulsed"
10"*The Raven’s Nest.* Quinn recognised"
11"The suspect hesitated, glancing back"
12"Quinn’s pulse spiked."
13"This wasn’t just a bar."
14"It was a door."
15"She pushed through the door"
16"The air inside was thick,"
17"The walls were lined with"
18"A bartender, gaunt and silent,"
19"The suspect was already halfway"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The air inside was thick, stale, the kind of scent that clung to old secrets."
1"The air beyond was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that made her skin prickle."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"*The Raven’s Nest.* Quinn recognised, a place rumoured to be a front for something darker"
1"Quinn said, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.9120%