Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQR45P9VY0HS9YEWNRNACX

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Duration:
29.4s
Cost:
$0.010452

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy against Rory’s collarbone, its crimson glow bleeding through her shirt like a slow, steady heartbeat. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the weight of the takeout containers inside suddenly oppressive. The standing stones of the Fae Grove loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisting into the night sky like skeletal fingers. A breeze slithered through the grass, carrying the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong in Richmond Park. She shouldn’t have come. Not after the last time, when the Grove had spat her back out hours later, her phone dead and her skin prickling with the memory of eyes watching from the trees. But the pendant had pulsed against her sternum, warm and insistent, and the note tucked into her bag had been clear: *"The Grove remembers. It’s time to return what was taken."* Rory stepped past the boundary, the air thickening like syrup as she crossed into the clearing. The wildflowers here were too bright, their petals unfurling in the dark as if lit from within. The usual hum of the city had vanished, replaced by a silence so deep it pressed against her eardrums. She exhaled, her breath curling in front of her, though the night wasn’t cold. A twig snapped. Rory froze. The sound had come from behind her, near the stones. She turned slowly, her pulse hammering in her throat. Nothing. Just the swaying grass and the unnatural stillness of the trees. She swallowed. "Hello?" No answer. Of course there wasn’t. She forced herself to keep moving, her boots sinking slightly into the soft earth. The pendant’s glow had intensified, casting long, wavering shadows across the ground. She reached into her bag, fingers brushing the smooth surface of the takeout container she’d been instructed to bring. A peace offering. A bribe. She didn’t know which. Another sound—this time a whisper, like fabric dragging against bark. Rory spun, her breath hitching. The trees at the edge of the clearing seemed to lean inward, their branches knitting together like fingers lacing tight. She took a step back, her heel catching on a root. The pendant flared, hot against her skin. "Alright," she muttered, voice steadier than she felt. "I brought the damn food. Where is it you want me to—" A giggle cut her off. High, childlike, and wrong. It echoed from everywhere and nowhere, bouncing between the trees until Rory couldn’t tell which direction it had come from. Her fingers tightened around the container. "Who’s there?" The giggle dissolved into a sigh, long and shuddering. Then, from the darkness between the oaks, a figure emerged. It was small—no taller than Rory’s hip—with skin like bark and eyes that glowed the same crimson as the Heartstone. Its mouth stretched too wide, lips peeling back to reveal teeth like splinters. "You’re late," it said, voice like dry leaves skittering across stone. "We don’t like waiting." Rory’s stomach twisted. She’d seen things in the Grove before—glimpses of movement, shadows that didn’t belong—but never this. Never something that stood and spoke. "I—I didn’t know there was a time limit." The creature tilted its head, its neck cracking like a branch in the wind. "Everything has a time limit." It held out a hand, fingers ending in jagged points. "The food. Now." Rory hesitated, then pulled the container from her bag. The creature snatched it, its nails scraping against the plastic. It didn’t open it. Instead, it pressed the container to its chest like a cherished toy. "You brought the right one," it murmured. "Good girl." A chill slithered down Rory’s spine. "What do you want with it?" The creature’s grin widened. "We want what was promised." It took a step closer, the crimson glow of its eyes reflecting in the pendant. "You have something of ours. And we have something of yours." Rory’s blood turned to ice. "I don’t have anything of yours." The creature laughed, the sound like breaking glass. "Don’t you?" It pointed a clawed finger at the pendant. "That doesn’t belong to you. It was never meant to be yours." Rory’s hand flew to the Heartstone. "This was given to me. I didn’t steal it." "Doesn’t matter." The creature’s voice dropped to a whisper. "It calls to us. And we answer." It took another step forward, its bare feet silent against the grass. "Give it back, and we’ll give you what you lost." Rory’s breath came fast. "What did I lose?" The creature’s smile vanished. "Time." It lunged. Rory stumbled back, her boot catching on something soft. She looked down. The grass beneath her feet had withered, blackened, as if something had drained the life from it. She barely had time to register the change before the creature was on her, its hands—too many fingers, too many joints—grappling for the pendant. She twisted away, her wrist burning where the creature’s nails raked her skin. The Heartstone flared, its glow searing her vision. The creature shrieked, recoiling, its bark-like skin blistering where the light touched it. "Thief!" it hissed. "Liar!" Rory didn’t wait. She turned and ran, her boots pounding against the earth. The trees seemed to stretch, the path ahead twisting into darkness. Behind her, the creature’s wail rose into the night, joined by others—dozens of voices, all screaming the same word. *Thief. Thief. Thief.* The standing stones loomed ahead, their outline jagged against the sky. Rory didn’t slow down. She crashed through the boundary, the air snapping like a rubber band against her skin. The sounds of the Grove cut off abruptly, replaced by the distant hum of traffic and the rustle of real leaves. She didn’t stop running until she reached the park’s edge, her lungs burning. Only then did she dare to look back. The Grove was gone. Just an empty stretch of grass and trees, bathed in the sickly orange glow of streetlights. The pendant lay cold against her chest, its light extinguished. Rory’s hands shook as she pulled it out, her fingers tracing the crescent scar on her wrist. The creature’s words echoed in her skull. *We’ll give you what you lost.* She didn’t know what that meant. But she knew one thing for certain. The Grove wasn’t done with her.
total_cost0.010452

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.423
leniency0.846
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1048
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1048
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"wavering"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"grappling"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"oppressive"
2"loomed"
3"pulsed"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
6"wavering"
7"whisper"
8"echoed"
9"stomach"
10"chill"
11"grappling"
12"searing"
13"pounding"
14"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords19
totalWords1038
ratio0.018
matches
0"\"The Grove remembers. It’s time to return what was taken.\""
1"Thief. Thief. Thief."
2"We’ll give you what you lost."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount906
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Pendant1
Rory16
Fae1
Grove6
Richmond1
Park1
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.617
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1038
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean30.53
std20.02
cv0.656
sampleLengths
078
166
266
33
436
56
654
753
820
937
1019
1148
1232
1332
1444
1512
1635
1711
1830
1915
2038
218
227
2353
2438
2543
263
2751
2821
2930
3024
316
3213
336
97.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"been instructed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences108
ratio0.056
matches
0"A breeze slithered through the grass, carrying the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong in Richmond Park."
1"Another sound—this time a whisper, like fabric dragging against bark."
2"It was small—no taller than Rory’s hip—with skin like bark and eyes that glowed the same crimson as the Heartstone."
3"She’d seen things in the Grove before—glimpses of movement, shadows that didn’t belong—but never this."
4"She barely had time to register the change before the creature was on her, its hands—too many fingers, too many joints—grappling for the pendant."
5"Behind her, the creature’s wail rose into the night, joined by others—dozens of voices, all screaming the same word."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount915
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay heavy against Rory’s"
1"lay cold against her"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03278688524590164
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007650273224043716
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean9.61
std6.56
cv0.683
sampleLengths
020
117
220
321
44
531
631
716
817
919
1014
113
122
1310
149
151
1611
172
181
192
204
2114
2212
2319
243
252
264
2710
285
2920
3011
317
328
3312
345
354
3620
376
382
399
4010
4120
4213
4311
444
453
4615
476
488
4914
51.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3425925925925926
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences82
matches
0"Just the swaying grass and"
1"Of course there wasn’t."
2"Then, from the darkness between"
3"Instead, it pressed the container"
4"Only then did she dare"
5"Just an empty stretch of"
ratio0.073
83.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences82
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She shouldn’t have come."
2"She exhaled, her breath curling"
3"She turned slowly, her pulse"
4"She forced herself to keep"
5"She reached into her bag,"
6"She didn’t know which."
7"She took a step back,"
8"she muttered, voice steadier than"
9"It echoed from everywhere and"
10"Her fingers tightened around the"
11"It was small—no taller than"
12"Its mouth stretched too wide,"
13"it said, voice like dry"
14"She’d seen things in the"
15"It held out a hand,"
16"It didn’t open it."
17"It took a step closer,"
18"It pointed a clawed finger"
19"It took another step forward,"
ratio0.341
33.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences82
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The standing stones of the"
3"A breeze slithered through the"
4"She shouldn’t have come."
5"Rory stepped past the boundary,"
6"The wildflowers here were too"
7"The usual hum of the"
8"She exhaled, her breath curling"
9"A twig snapped."
10"The sound had come from"
11"She turned slowly, her pulse"
12"She forced herself to keep"
13"The pendant’s glow had intensified,"
14"She reached into her bag,"
15"A peace offering."
16"She didn’t know which."
17"Another sound—this time a whisper,"
18"Rory spun, her breath hitching."
19"The trees at the edge"
ratio0.854
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A breeze slithered through the grass, carrying the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong in Richmond Park."
1"The wildflowers here were too bright, their petals unfurling in the dark as if lit from within."
2"She forced herself to keep moving, her boots sinking slightly into the soft earth."
3"She didn’t stop running until she reached the park’s edge, her lungs burning."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she muttered, voice steadier than she felt"
1"It took, its bare feet silent against the grass"
34.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"it murmured (murmur)"
2"it hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.231
78.0653%