| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.423 | | leniency | 0.846 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1048 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1048 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "wavering" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "grappling" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "tracing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 19 | | totalWords | 1038 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The Grove remembers. It’s time to return what was taken.\"" | | 1 | "Thief. Thief. Thief." | | 2 | "We’ll give you what you lost." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 906 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.77 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.617 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1038 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 30.53 | | std | 20.02 | | cv | 0.656 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 6 |
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| 97.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "been instructed" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "A breeze slithered through the grass, carrying the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong in Richmond Park." | | 1 | "Another sound—this time a whisper, like fabric dragging against bark." | | 2 | "It was small—no taller than Rory’s hip—with skin like bark and eyes that glowed the same crimson as the Heartstone." | | 3 | "She’d seen things in the Grove before—glimpses of movement, shadows that didn’t belong—but never this." | | 4 | "She barely had time to register the change before the creature was on her, its hands—too many fingers, too many joints—grappling for the pendant." | | 5 | "Behind her, the creature’s wail rose into the night, joined by others—dozens of voices, all screaming the same word." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 915 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay heavy against Rory’s" | | 1 | "lay cold against her" |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.03278688524590164 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007650273224043716 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 9.61 | | std | 6.56 | | cv | 0.683 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 51.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3425925925925926 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the swaying grass and" | | 1 | "Of course there wasn’t." | | 2 | "Then, from the darkness between" | | 3 | "Instead, it pressed the container" | | 4 | "Only then did she dare" | | 5 | "Just an empty stretch of" |
| | ratio | 0.073 | |
| 83.41% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 2 | "She exhaled, her breath curling" | | 3 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 4 | "She forced herself to keep" | | 5 | "She reached into her bag," | | 6 | "She didn’t know which." | | 7 | "She took a step back," | | 8 | "she muttered, voice steadier than" | | 9 | "It echoed from everywhere and" | | 10 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 11 | "It was small—no taller than" | | 12 | "Its mouth stretched too wide," | | 13 | "it said, voice like dry" | | 14 | "She’d seen things in the" | | 15 | "It held out a hand," | | 16 | "It didn’t open it." | | 17 | "It took a step closer," | | 18 | "It pointed a clawed finger" | | 19 | "It took another step forward," |
| | ratio | 0.341 | |
| 33.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay heavy" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The standing stones of the" | | 3 | "A breeze slithered through the" | | 4 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 5 | "Rory stepped past the boundary," | | 6 | "The wildflowers here were too" | | 7 | "The usual hum of the" | | 8 | "She exhaled, her breath curling" | | 9 | "A twig snapped." | | 10 | "The sound had come from" | | 11 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 12 | "She forced herself to keep" | | 13 | "The pendant’s glow had intensified," | | 14 | "She reached into her bag," | | 15 | "A peace offering." | | 16 | "She didn’t know which." | | 17 | "Another sound—this time a whisper," | | 18 | "Rory spun, her breath hitching." | | 19 | "The trees at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.854 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "A breeze slithered through the grass, carrying the scent of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong in Richmond Park." | | 1 | "The wildflowers here were too bright, their petals unfurling in the dark as if lit from within." | | 2 | "She forced herself to keep moving, her boots sinking slightly into the soft earth." | | 3 | "She didn’t stop running until she reached the park’s edge, her lungs burning." |
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| 34.09% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "It took, its bare feet silent against the grass" |
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| 34.62% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "it murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "it hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.231 | |