Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQR5RJT9F2863JPZ4JKMF5

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Duration:
26.1s
Cost:
$0.009614

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the London streets into a slick maze of reflections and shadows. Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles, her breath sharp in the cold air. The suspect—lean, fast, darting through the alleys like a rat—had a twenty-yard lead. She’d lost sight of him twice already, but the wet slap of footsteps ahead kept her moving. A neon sign flickered above a side street, its green glow bleeding into the rain. *The Raven’s Nest.* The suspect cut left, vanishing into the narrow passage beside the bar. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She followed, her jacket clinging to her shoulders, the weight of her service weapon pressing against her ribs. The alley reeked of stale beer and cigarette smoke. A fire escape ladder dangled just out of reach, but the suspect had already ducked under it, heading for the back door of the bar. Quinn lunged, her fingers brushing the damp fabric of his hoodie before he twisted free. The door slammed shut behind him. She yanked it open, stepping into a dimly lit hallway. The air was thick with the hum of conversation and the clink of glasses. A few heads turned, eyes narrowing at the intrusion. Quinn ignored them, scanning the room. No sign of the suspect. A man with a scar running down his forearm leaned against the bar, polishing a glass with a rag. His Saint Christopher medallion glinted under the low light. "You lost, Detective?" Quinn’s jaw tightened. "Tomás Herrera. Where’d he go?" Tomás didn’t look up. "Who?" She stepped closer, her voice low. "Don’t play games. The kid who just bolted in here. Where’s the back room?" Tomás set the glass down. "No back room here. Just a bar." Quinn’s hand twitched toward her belt. "I know about the bookshelf. I know about the Veil Market. I know you lot deal in more than just whiskey." Tomás finally met her gaze, his warm brown eyes unreadable. "You’re treading thin ice, Quinn. This isn’t your world." She didn’t flinch. "It is now." A beat of silence. Then Tomás exhaled, nodding toward the far wall. "Bookshelf. Third shelf from the top. Push the spine of *The Raven’s Tale*." Quinn didn’t thank him. She moved quickly, her fingers tracing the spines until she found the right one. The bookshelf swung open with a groan, revealing a narrow staircase descending into darkness. Cold air rushed up from below, carrying the scent of damp earth and something metallic. Quinn pulled a flashlight from her pocket, clicking it on. The beam cut through the gloom, illuminating rough-hewn stone walls. She stepped forward, the bookshelf clicking shut behind her. The stairs spiraled downward, the sound of her boots echoing. At the bottom, a tunnel stretched ahead, lit by flickering torches. The walls were lined with stalls, their wares hidden under tarps and behind locked cages. A low murmur of voices filled the air, punctuated by the occasional clink of glass or shuffle of feet. Quinn kept her flashlight low, her other hand resting on her holster. The suspect couldn’t have gotten far. She moved deeper into the market, her eyes scanning the shadows. A figure stepped out from behind a stall, blocking her path. Tall, gaunt, with eyes that gleamed too bright in the torchlight. "You’re not welcome here, Detective." Quinn didn’t slow. "I’m looking for someone." The figure tilted his head. "Aren’t we all?" She sidestepped him, but he moved with her, his voice a low rasp. "You don’t belong. This place doesn’t forget. It doesn’t forgive." Quinn’s fingers tightened around her flashlight. "I don’t care." The figure smiled, revealing teeth that were just a little too sharp. "Then you’re a fool." She pushed past him, her pulse hammering in her ears. The market seemed to stretch endlessly, the stalls blurring together. Then, up ahead—a flash of movement. The suspect. Quinn broke into a run, her boots pounding against the uneven ground. The suspect glanced back, his eyes wide, before ducking into a side passage. She followed, the tunnel narrowing, the air growing thicker. The passage opened into a wider chamber, the ceiling lost in darkness. A bone token lay discarded on the ground, its surface etched with strange symbols. Quinn picked it up, her fingers tracing the grooves. The suspect was close. She could feel it. A sound—soft, like fabric brushing against stone. Quinn spun, her flashlight beam cutting through the dark. The suspect stood frozen in the light, his chest heaving. "End of the line," Quinn said, her voice steady. The suspect didn’t move. Didn’t speak. His eyes darted to the side, toward something just beyond the edge of the light. Quinn followed his gaze. A figure emerged from the shadows—a woman, her face obscured by a hood, her hands clasped around a small, ornate box. She stepped forward, her voice a whisper. "You shouldn’t have come here, Detective." Quinn’s grip on her flashlight tightened. "Who are you?" The woman tilted her head. "A friend. Or an enemy. That’s up to you." The suspect took the opportunity to bolt, vanishing into the darkness. Quinn hesitated, her instincts screaming at her to go after him. But the woman’s presence held her in place, the weight of the box in her hands unnervingly still. The woman extended a hand. "Come with me. There are things you need to see." Quinn’s jaw clenched. The market hummed around her, the air thick with secrets. She had a choice to make. Follow the suspect into the unknown, or trust the stranger with the box.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount930
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount930
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count2
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"pounding"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"jaw clenched"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"flickered"
2"weight"
3"scanning"
4"unreadable"
5"silence"
6"tracing"
7"gloom"
8"echoing"
9"pulse"
10"pounding"
11"etched"
12"could feel"
13"whisper"
14"jaw clenched"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords923
ratio0.007
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest."
1"The Raven’s Tale"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
29.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount786
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.42
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Quinn19
Raven1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás4
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Tomás"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.291
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount923
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean26.37
std15.47
cv0.587
sampleLengths
061
151
255
344
431
58
65
720
812
927
1019
116
1225
1332
1444
1555
1629
1727
187
198
2023
219
2216
2328
2434
2543
2626
279
2821
2938
309
3114
3240
3315
3432
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs131
matches(empty)
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences100
ratio0.04
matches
0"The suspect—lean, fast, darting through the alleys like a rat—had a twenty-yard lead."
1"Then, up ahead—a flash of movement."
2"A sound—soft, like fabric brushing against stone."
3"A figure emerged from the shadows—a woman, her face obscured by a hood, her hands clasped around a small, ornate box."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount793
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"suspect—lean, fast, darting"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02648171500630517
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006305170239596469
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean9.23
std5.02
cv0.543
sampleLengths
018
113
213
317
415
515
63
718
89
925
1015
116
1210
1314
149
156
165
1719
189
193
203
215
224
231
246
2514
265
277
286
2921
3010
319
323
333
344
358
3613
374
3814
3914
4015
4110
4210
439
4410
4511
4615
4719
4812
496
49.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.24
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners24
84.39% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Then Tomás exhaled, nodding toward"
1"Then, up ahead—a flash of"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences79
matches
0"She’d lost sight of him"
1"She followed, her jacket clinging"
2"She yanked it open, stepping"
3"His Saint Christopher medallion glinted"
4"She stepped closer, her voice"
5"She didn’t flinch."
6"She moved quickly, her fingers"
7"She stepped forward, the bookshelf"
8"She moved deeper into the"
9"She sidestepped him, but he"
10"She pushed past him, her"
11"She followed, the tunnel narrowing,"
12"She could feel it."
13"His eyes darted to the"
14"She stepped forward, her voice"
15"She had a choice to"
ratio0.203
16.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences79
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through"
2"The suspect—lean, fast, darting through"
3"She’d lost sight of him"
4"A neon sign flickered above"
5"*The Raven’s Nest.* The suspect"
6"Quinn didn’t hesitate."
7"She followed, her jacket clinging"
8"The alley reeked of stale"
9"A fire escape ladder dangled"
10"Quinn lunged, her fingers brushing"
11"The door slammed shut behind"
12"She yanked it open, stepping"
13"The air was thick with"
14"Quinn ignored them, scanning the"
15"A man with a scar"
16"His Saint Christopher medallion glinted"
17"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
18"Tomás didn’t look up."
19"She stepped closer, her voice"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The figure smiled, revealing teeth that were just a little too sharp."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.05
leniency0.1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.8858%