Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQRC4TK94J9N5X35X8BNXP

Run Details

Duration:
32.1s
Cost:
$0.036492
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's fingers froze on the doorknob. Through the peephole, Lucien's tall frame filled the narrow hallway of Eva's building, his platinum hair catching the harsh fluorescent light. Her pulse quickened. She hadn't seen him since that night at the docks three months ago. "I know you're there, chérie. I can hear you breathing." His voice carried through the door, that familiar French lilt making her stomach twist. Aurora pressed her forehead against the cool wood. "Eva's not here." "I'm not looking for Eva." Of course he wasn't. Aurora glanced down at her oversized jumper and leggings - hardly the outfit for facing Lucien Moreau, who probably emerged from the womb wearing a bespoke suit. She unlocked the first deadbolt. Then the second. Her hand hesitated over the third. "What do you want, Lucien?" "To talk. Please." That 'please' did it. In all the months she'd known him, she'd never heard him say that word. She opened the door. Lucien stood with one hand in his pocket, the other gripping his ivory-handled cane. His charcoal suit was immaculate as always, but shadows lurked under his eyes. His mismatched gaze locked onto her face. "You look terrible," Aurora said. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "You look beautiful." She stepped back, allowing him inside. Eva's tabby cat Ptolemy darted between Lucien's legs and disappeared behind a stack of ancient texts. The flat felt smaller with him in it, his presence filling every corner. "Three months without a word, and now you show up at midnight?" Aurora crossed her arms. "Did you run out of other people to manipulate?" Lucien's jaw tightened. He leaned his cane against the wall. "I deserved that." "You deserve worse." She moved to the kitchenette, putting the counter between them. "You used me to get to Eva's grimoire. Made me think-" She cut herself off, refusing to voice how foolish she'd been. "Is that what you believe?" His voice dropped lower. "That everything was a manipulation?" "Wasn't it?" She grabbed the kettle, needed something to do with her hands. "The drinks at Silas's bar, the late-night walks, all those conversations about my life in Cardiff?" Water splashed over the sink's edge. "Was any of it real?" Lucien moved closer, his steps silent on the cluttered floor. "All of it was real. Every moment." "Right." She slammed the kettle down. "That's why you vanished the second you got what you wanted." "I left to protect you." Aurora barked out a laugh. "Original. Did you practice that line in front of a mirror?" "Dammit, Rory." He ran a hand through his hair, disheveling its perfect arrangement. "The grimoire wasn't for me. There are people - dangerous people - who wanted it. The further you were from me, the safer you'd be." "That wasn't your choice to make." She turned to face him, anger and hurt burning behind her eyes. "I'm not some fragile thing that needs protecting. I survived Evan, I survived moving to London, I'm surviving this whole supernatural nightmare. I deserved the truth." Lucien closed the distance between them, his heterochromatic eyes intense. "You're right. I should have trusted you. But when I saw Malachi's men at the docks..." His hands gripped the counter edge on either side of her. "The thought of them getting to you because of me-" "So you just decided for both of us?" Her voice cracked. "Do you know what it was like, waking up alone in that warehouse? Not knowing if you were dead or alive?" "Every day away from you has been torture." His thumb brushed her cheek, wiping away a tear she hadn't realized had fallen. "Je suis désolé, mon coeur." Aurora's hand found the crescent scar on her wrist, a nervous habit. "I can't do this again, Luc. I can't let you in just to watch you walk away." "Then don't let me walk away." His forehead touched hers, breath warm against her lips. "Come with me. Help me finish this. Together."
created_at"2026-02-19T10:39:59.135Z" 2/19/2026, 10:39:59 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount664
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount664
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"quickened"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"quickened"
2"familiar"
3"lilt"
4"stomach"
5"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences41
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords665
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.37% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount366
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien7
Eva2
French1
Aurora7
Moreau1
Ptolemy1
Water1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
3"Moreau"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Water"
places(empty)
globalScore0.544
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences28
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount665
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"say that word"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean23.75
std13.67
cv0.576
sampleLengths
043
124
211
35
445
55
63
722
834
95
1011
1135
1225
1313
1435
1514
1640
1717
1817
195
2016
2138
2244
2347
2432
2527
2629
2723
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs64
matches(empty)
96.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences61
ratio0.016
matches
0"Aurora glanced down at her oversized jumper and leggings - hardly the outfit for facing Lucien Moreau, who probably emerged from the womb wearing a bespoke suit."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount320
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.034375
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.00625
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean10.9
std6.97
cv0.639
sampleLengths
06
121
23
313
424
58
63
75
84
927
105
113
126
135
143
154
1614
174
1814
1913
207
215
228
233
246
2516
2613
2716
289
293
307
313
3213
3322
349
355
3613
3722
385
3910
407
416
4211
435
445
4511
4613
4725
4818
4926
84.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5245901639344263
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences39
matches
0"Of course he wasn't."
1"Then the second."
ratio0.051
4.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences39
matches
0"Her pulse quickened."
1"She hadn't seen him since"
2"His voice carried through the"
3"She unlocked the first deadbolt."
4"Her hand hesitated over the"
5"She opened the door."
6"His charcoal suit was immaculate"
7"His mismatched gaze locked onto"
8"She stepped back, allowing him"
9"He leaned his cane against"
10"She moved to the kitchenette,"
11"She cut herself off, refusing"
12"His voice dropped lower"
13"She grabbed the kettle, needed"
14"She slammed the kettle down"
15"He ran a hand through"
16"She turned to face him,"
17"His hands gripped the counter"
18"Her voice cracked"
19"His thumb brushed her cheek,"
ratio0.538
11.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences39
matches
0"Aurora's fingers froze on the"
1"Her pulse quickened."
2"She hadn't seen him since"
3"His voice carried through the"
4"Aurora pressed her forehead against"
5"Aurora glanced down at her"
6"She unlocked the first deadbolt."
7"Her hand hesitated over the"
8"She opened the door."
9"Lucien stood with one hand"
10"His charcoal suit was immaculate"
11"His mismatched gaze locked onto"
12"A ghost of a smile"
13"She stepped back, allowing him"
14"Eva's tabby cat Ptolemy darted"
15"The flat felt smaller with"
16"Aurora crossed her arms"
17"Lucien's jaw tightened."
18"He leaned his cane against"
19"She moved to the kitchenette,"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences11
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She cut, refusing to voice how foolish she'd been"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.5642%