Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQRGSSH06Z55W9D4PMC79Z

Run Details

Duration:
2m 28s
Cost:
$0.001690
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stones felt cold against her palm. Rory tightened her fingers around the nearest standing stone, its surface slick with night dew. The moonlight did not touch the Fae Grove tonight; a low, clinging mist had swallowed the clearing, turning the ring of ancient oaks into spectral sentinels. She’d come because the Heartstone had pulsed against her sternum all evening, a soft, insistent heat that felt like a finger tapping between her ribs. It had guided her through Richmond Park’s sleeping expanse, past the sleeping deer, to this place that existed between tick and tock. But the quiet was wrong. She knew the grove’s silence — a living, breathing hush, full of rustling leaves and distant, musical chimes. This was a dead quiet. The air sat heavy in her lungs. No crickets sang. No night birds called. Even the wildflowers, which bloomed here in perpetual defiance of seasons, seemed to have closed their petals and bowed their heads. She stepped inside the ring of stones. The mist swallowed her footsteps. The Heartstone’s warmth intensified, a dull throb through her jumper. She pulled the pendant out, letting it rest on her palm. The deep crimson gemstone emitted a faint, inner glow, just enough to illuminate the condensation on her skin. It wasn't pulsing now. It was a steady, watchful light. A twig snapped somewhere to her left. Rory froze, her breath catching in her throat. She stared into the milky darkness beyond her tiny circle of light. Nothing moved. She strained her ears against the silence, hearing only the frantic drum of her own heart. Probably a deer. The park was full of them. They wandered here sometimes, dazed by the grove’s timeless air. She took another careful step forward, aiming for the center of the clearing where the grass was smoothest. Her trainers made no sound on the damp earth. The mist parted before her, curling away like smoke only to close again in her wake. She felt watched. It was a physical sensation, a prickling at the nape of her neck, a cold trickle down her spine that had nothing to do with the November chill. Another sound. Not a snap this time. A whisper. A scratchy, dry rustle, like dead leaves dragged over stone. It came from behind her now. She spun around, the Heartstone swinging wildly on its chain. Its light sliced through the mist, revealing only more mist, thick and impenetrable. Empty. “Hello?” Her voice was a dry croak. It fell into the quiet and died without an echo. Stupid. Who did she expect to answer? Isolde was gone. The grove was empty. Except it wasn’t. The rustling came again, closer. A skittering, multi-legged sound from the undergrowth near the base of a standing stone. The stone looked darker than the others, a pitch-black blot against the grey. She blinked, and for a second, she thought she saw the shadow at its base shift and coil. She took a step back. Her heel sank into something soft. Not grass. Something wet and yielding. She jerked her foot free with a soft gasp, stumbling backward. The Heartstone flared brighter, casting a red-tinted light on the ground. A patch of moss had turned black and viscous, dissolving into a foul-smelling sludge. A single, perfect white bellflower lay crushed in the middle of it, its petals smeared with rot. The rustling stopped. The silence pressed in, heavier than before. Then, a low hum began. It vibrated up through the soles of her feet, a subsonic thrum that made her teeth ache. It came from everywhere and nowhere. The standing stones themselves seemed to be groaning. The mist began to churn, not parting now but swirling in slow, deliberate vortices. Something gleamed in the shifting fog. A pair of points of light, low to the ground. They held no warmth, no reflection. They were like chips of pale green ice, watching her. Her breath hitched. She took another step back, then another, putting distance between herself and those eyes. The Heartstone was hot against her palm, almost uncomfortably so. Its glow was no longer faint. It illuminated the panic on her own face, her wide, bright blue eyes, the stark contrast of her black hair against the pallid mist. The eyes did not blink. They tracked her retreat. A shape coalesced around them. Low-slung, quadrupedal. It moved with a stuttering, uneven gait, one limb dragging slightly. As it came closer, stepping into the outer edge of the pendant’s light, Rory saw it was no deer. Its pelt was matted and patchy, stretched taut over jutting ribs. Its head was too large for its body, its muzzle elongated into a snout that twitched as it sniffed the air. Those ice-chip eyes were set deep in sockets of raw, pink flesh. It opened its mouth, and a low, guttural whine escaped, a sound of perpetual hunger and profound wrongness. It was a dog. Or had been one. Now it was a thing of the grove’s corrupted silence. It took a step forward. The dragging limb scraped across the ground. Rory’s mind, usually so quick, locked in a loop of terror. Run. Scream. Fight. None of the options seemed viable. Running in this mist, disoriented… she’d be lost instantly. Screaming felt like it would tear her throat open and achieve nothing. Fight with what? Her empty hands? The creature’s whine climbed in pitch, becoming a thin, eager keen. It lowered its head, shoulders bunching. The Heartstone pulsed once, a sharp, almost painful burst of heat. The light flared so brightly it burned a red afterimage against her vision. The creature flinched back, letting out a yelp of surprise and pain. It shook its massive head, those cold eyes blinking rapidly. It was scared of the light. Rory didn’t think. She raised the pendant high, holding it out before her like a ward. “Stay back!” Her voice sounded stronger, laced with a defiance she didn't feel. The stone’s radiance pushed against the mist, carving a small dome of visibility around her. The creature paced at the edge of the light, its whine returning to a frustrated growl. It darted forward, a testing snap of its jaws, and recoiled as if burned when the crimson glow touched its muzzle. It was holding it at bay. For now. But her arm was already trembling. The pendant was growing heavier, its heat bordering on scalding. How long could she keep it aloft? The creature seemed to sense her weakening. It began to circle, a slow, predatory orbit just outside the circle of light. Its dragging limb left a dark, wet trail in the grass. She had to move. She had to get to the stone circle’s boundary. The creature was between her and the way she’d come in. She had to go the other way, through the heart of the grove, toward… what? She didn’t know what lay in that direction. More mist. More silence. Maybe nothing at all. She took a slow, sideways step. The creature matched her, its head swiveling to keep its eyes fixed on her. Another step. The ground here was firmer, just damp grass. The mist swirled behind the creature, hinting at deeper darkness beyond. A new sound cut through the creature’s growl and her own ragged breathing. A faint, rhythmic tapping. Like a single drop of water falling from a great height onto stone. Tap. Tap. Tap. It came from the direction she was trying to move towards. The creature heard it too. Its ears – one torn, the other a ragged stump – flattened against its skull. A new fear entered its posture, a cowering tension that mixed with its aggression. It didn’t like that sound either. The tapping grew louder, closer. Something was coming through the mist from the grove’s heart. Something that made this malformed watchdog hesitate. Rory stood caught between them, the Heartstone held high, its light beginning to flutter like a dying ember. The cold points of the creature’s eyes glinted with renewed malice as her light wavered. From behind her, the tapping – crisp, deliberate, unhurried – drew nearer. She was not alone. And the second presence felt infinitely worse.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"spectral"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"silence"
count5
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"churn"
count1
14
word"stark"
count1
15
word"profound"
count1
16
word"rhythmic"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
18
word"wavered"
count1
highlights
0"spectral"
1"sentinels"
2"pulsed"
3"silence"
4"footsteps"
5"warmth"
6"throb"
7"down her spine"
8"chill"
9"whisper"
10"echo"
11"perfect"
12"vibrated"
13"churn"
14"stark"
15"profound"
16"rhythmic"
17"tension"
18"wavered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences154
matches
0"was scared"
96.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences154
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1365
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1362
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Tap"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone7
Richmond1
Park1
November1
Rory6
Tap3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"November"
2"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
75.74% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a finger tapping between her"
1"seemed viable"
2"felt like it would tear her throat open"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.733
wordCount1365
matches
0"not parting now but swirling in slow, deliberate vortices"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean34.13
std24.41
cv0.715
sampleLengths
07
188
25
358
412
549
67
757
874
925
1024
1131
123
1350
1470
1510
1650
1732
1857
199
2099
2118
2212
2347
2417
2524
2622
276
2818
2963
308
3155
3255
3341
3433
3511
3640
3722
3845
3911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences154
matches
0"was gone"
1"was matted"
85.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs233
matches
0"wasn't pulsing"
1"was holding"
2"was trying"
3"was coming"
69.12% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences155
ratio0.026
matches
0"The moonlight did not touch the Fae Grove tonight; a low, clinging mist had swallowed the clearing, turning the ring of ancient oaks into spectral sentinels."
1"She knew the grove’s silence — a living, breathing hush, full of rustling leaves and distant, musical chimes."
2"Its ears – one torn, the other a ragged stump – flattened against its skull."
3"From behind her, the tapping – crisp, deliberate, unhurried – drew nearer."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1362
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"single, perfect white bellflower"
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.038913362701908955
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.00881057268722467
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean8.81
std5.83
cv0.662
sampleLengths
07
115
226
325
422
55
618
75
87
93
104
1121
127
135
1410
1511
1618
174
186
197
208
2112
222
2316
243
256
2610
2718
289
2916
303
3128
322
335
342
3510
366
3710
3813
391
407
4110
421
436
443
454
463
475
4814
4913
34.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.2903225806451613
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners45
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences136
matches
0"Even the wildflowers, which bloomed"
1"Probably a deer."
2"Then, a low hum began."
3"Maybe nothing at all."
ratio0.029
49.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences136
matches
0"She’d come because the Heartstone"
1"It had guided her through"
2"She knew the grove’s silence"
3"She stepped inside the ring"
4"She pulled the pendant out,"
5"It wasn't pulsing now."
6"It was a steady, watchful"
7"She stared into the milky"
8"She strained her ears against"
9"They wandered here sometimes, dazed"
10"She took another careful step"
11"Her trainers made no sound"
12"She felt watched."
13"It was a physical sensation,"
14"It came from behind her"
15"She spun around, the Heartstone"
16"Its light sliced through the"
17"Her voice was a dry"
18"It fell into the quiet"
19"She blinked, and for a"
ratio0.426
33.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences136
matches
0"The stones felt cold against"
1"Rory tightened her fingers around"
2"The moonlight did not touch"
3"She’d come because the Heartstone"
4"It had guided her through"
5"She knew the grove’s silence"
6"This was a dead quiet."
7"The air sat heavy in"
8"She stepped inside the ring"
9"The mist swallowed her footsteps."
10"The Heartstone’s warmth intensified, a"
11"She pulled the pendant out,"
12"The deep crimson gemstone emitted"
13"It wasn't pulsing now."
14"It was a steady, watchful"
15"A twig snapped somewhere to"
16"Rory froze, her breath catching"
17"She stared into the milky"
18"She strained her ears against"
19"The park was full of"
ratio0.853
36.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"Now it was a thing"
ratio0.007
69.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She’d come because the Heartstone had pulsed against her sternum all evening, a soft, insistent heat that felt like a finger tapping between her ribs."
1"It had guided her through Richmond Park’s sleeping expanse, past the sleeping deer, to this place that existed between tick and tock."
2"It was a physical sensation, a prickling at the nape of her neck, a cold trickle down her spine that had nothing to do with the November chill."
3"Its head was too large for its body, its muzzle elongated into a snout that twitched as it sniffed the air."
4"It darted forward, a testing snap of its jaws, and recoiled as if burned when the crimson glow touched its muzzle."
5"The pendant was growing heavier, its heat bordering on scalding."
6"A new fear entered its posture, a cowering tension that mixed with its aggression."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.9081%