| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1067 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1067 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "almost alive" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "pounding" | | 11 | "oppressive" | | 12 | "chill" | | 13 | "down her spine" | | 14 | "rhythmic" | | 15 | "quickened" | | 16 | "sense of" | | 17 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1070 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1054 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.66 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 7 | | Aurora | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a warning" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to come from all around her" | | 2 | "seemed deeper now, darker" | | 3 | "thumping that seemed to emanate from the ground itself" | | 4 | "as though suffocating" | | 5 | "gash that seemed to twist into a smile as it approached" | | 6 | "as though considering her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1070 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 17.55% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 62.94 | | std | 13.31 | | cv | 0.211 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 91 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 72 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | |
| 8.40% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.047 | | matches | | 0 | "The map had marked a specific tree — an oak with a hollow at its base." | | 1 | "Not just wrong — dangerous." | | 2 | "Her breath caught in her throat as the rustling grew louder, morphing into something more distinct — a low, guttural whisper that seemed to come from all around her." | | 3 | "She couldn’t make out the words, but the tone was unmistakable — a mixture of hunger and malice that sent a chill down her spine." |
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| 87.64% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1051 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.05233111322549953 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.021883920076117985 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 98.64% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 12.59 | | std | 4.99 | | cv | 0.397 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 40.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.2235294117647059 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 15.24% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped past the ancient" | | 1 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 2 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 3 | "he’d said, his voice low" | | 4 | "He hadn’t mentioned the Grove," | | 5 | "He hadn’t mentioned the way" | | 6 | "She crouched to inspect one," | | 7 | "It felt warmer than it" | | 8 | "She straightened up, her eyes" | | 9 | "She spotted it almost immediately," | | 10 | "She moved toward the tree," | | 11 | "She paused, glancing over her" | | 12 | "She shook her head, forcing" | | 13 | "She had to deliver the" | | 14 | "She knelt beside it, setting" | | 15 | "She hesitated, her fingers tightening" | | 16 | "She glanced around, her eyes" | | 17 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 18 | "She stood abruptly, her heart" | | 19 | "Her voice sounded thin, almost" |
| | ratio | 0.512 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Fae" | | 1 | "She stepped past the ancient" | | 2 | "The pendant around her neck" | | 3 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 4 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 5 | "he’d said, his voice low" | | 6 | "He hadn’t mentioned the Grove," | | 7 | "He hadn’t mentioned the way" | | 8 | "Rory had assumed it was" | | 9 | "The wildflowers underfoot were unnaturally" | | 10 | "She crouched to inspect one," | | 11 | "It felt warmer than it" | | 12 | "She straightened up, her eyes" | | 13 | "The map had marked a" | | 14 | "She spotted it almost immediately," | | 15 | "The pendant pulsed again, stronger" | | 16 | "She moved toward the tree," | | 17 | "The sound echoed oddly, as" | | 18 | "She paused, glancing over her" | | 19 | "The standing stones loomed behind" |
| | ratio | 0.94 | |
| 59.52% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in the heart" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 80.20% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught in her throat as the rustling grew louder, morphing into something more distinct — a low, guttural whisper that seemed to come from all around…" | | 1 | "The pendant flared briefly, its warmth spiking before fading again." | | 2 | "The wildflowers around her began to wilt, their vibrant petals folding inward as though suffocating." | | 3 | "The figure stopped, its head tilting to one side as though considering her." | | 4 | "She scrambled to her feet, grabbing the pendant and shoving it into her pocket." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he’d, his voice low and urgent" | | 1 | "she muttered, her voice trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he’d (would)" | | 1 | "He hadn’t (have)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |