| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1008 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1008 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "glinting" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "footfall" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "churned" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "tracing" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "unspoken" | | 17 | "loomed" | | 18 | "vibrated" | | 19 | "chill" | | 20 | "footsteps" | | 21 | "measured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 132 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1003 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 940 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.64 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Hel | 1 | | Silence | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Aurora | 4 | | Roots | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Silence" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Aurora" | | 7 | "Roots" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.997 | | wordCount | 1003 | | matches | | 0 | "Not emptiness, but a corridor twisting into deeper night" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 29.5 | | std | 16.12 | | cv | 0.547 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.28% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 132 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "She brushed her fingertips across one of the runes—worn shapes that meant nothing to her, yet teased the edges of recognition." | | 1 | "Their petals shimmered in impossible hues—violet, cerulean, a bruise of indigo." | | 2 | "The grove had to yield something—proof Hel’s threshold lay hidden beneath these oaks." | | 3 | "A figure loomed behind her—tall, gaunt." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 945 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.016931216931216932 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004232804232804233 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 132 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 132 | | mean | 7.6 | | std | 4.13 | | cv | 0.543 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 47.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.32575757575757575 | | totalSentences | 132 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 59.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the wind weaving through" | | 1 | "Only the moon watched, its" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 74.87% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "She drew a breath." | | 1 | "she said, voice low" | | 2 | "Her boots pressed into soft" | | 3 | "She brushed her fingertips across" | | 4 | "She’d come hoping for clarity:" | | 5 | "She spun, chest hammering." | | 6 | "Her hand flew to the" | | 7 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 8 | "Their petals shimmered in impossible" | | 9 | "She leaned closer, curious." | | 10 | "She jerked back, boots sinking" | | 11 | "she murmured, trying to steady" | | 12 | "She whirled again, fists clenched." | | 13 | "She needed to test the" | | 14 | "She dropped the pendant, cupping" | | 15 | "Her lips parted." | | 16 | "Her heart slammed." | | 17 | "She knelt and scooped up" | | 18 | "Her voice quavered but held." | | 19 | "She lifted her chin" |
| | ratio | 0.363 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 105 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight draped the clearing in" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped between two" | | 2 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 3 | "She drew a breath." | | 4 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 5 | "she said, voice low" | | 6 | "Her boots pressed into soft" | | 7 | "The stones towered, carved eons" | | 8 | "She brushed her fingertips across" | | 9 | "She’d come hoping for clarity:" | | 10 | "Something to prove the portal." | | 11 | "A rustle to her right." | | 12 | "She spun, chest hammering." | | 13 | "A flash of movement at" | | 14 | "Her hand flew to the" | | 15 | "The pendant throbbed faintly, warm" | | 16 | "The light remained slack, no" | | 17 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 18 | "The ground dipped, hollowing beneath" | | 19 | "A hush settled, pressing in." |
| | ratio | 0.929 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight draped the clearing in pale silk, glinting off the slender blades of grass and the weathered oaks that ringed the grove like silent sentinels." | | 1 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something that might have bled through centuries of roots and moss." |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice low" | | 1 | "the grove intoned, voice fracturing through the branches" | | 2 | "she said, voice low" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "She hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.476 | |