| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 48.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "quickly" | | 5 | "slowly" | | 6 | "very" | | 7 | "inexorably" | | 8 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 61.51% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "down her spine" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "delved" | | 4 | "intricate" | | 5 | "crystal" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "racing" | | 8 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "begin to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1174 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 1174 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.77 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Carter" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "faces that seemed to peer from the knots and whorls of the wood" | | 1 | "seemed tall and gangly, the next squat and bulbous, as if it could not decide what form it wished to wear" |
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| 29.64% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.704 | | wordCount | 1174 | | matches | | 0 | "not constrained by the demands of bone and muscle, but its shape was mutable, shifting" | | 1 | "no choice but" |
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| 0.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "noticed that the" | | 1 | "knew that she" | | 2 | "realize that she" | | 3 | "say that Aurora" |
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| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 73.38 | | std | 9.93 | | cv | 0.135 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 88 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 80 | | 5 | 80 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 86 | | 9 | 85 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 75 | | 12 | 65 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 71 | | 15 | 69 |
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| 70.18% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "being torn" | | 1 | "being consumed" | | 2 | "was lost" | | 3 | "was drawn" | | 4 | "been sealed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 50 | | ratio | 0.12 | | matches | | 0 | "But it was the marks upon the stone that drew Rory's eye – strange symbols carved deep into the rock, their lines worn but still distinct." | | 1 | "It was then that she saw it – a small slot in the heart of the design, just large enough to accommodate the crystal that nestled in her pendant." | | 2 | "But this was no natural phenomenon – the air was being torn asunder, ripped open to reveal a glimpse of another world beyond." | | 3 | "A figure stepped through the rift, emerging from the chaos of clashing color and light – a figure that bore only a vague resemblance to the human form." | | 4 | "It reached out a hand – though whether it had five fingers or six, Rory could not say – and beckoned to her." | | 5 | "It took a long moment for her to realize that she was no longer in the grove – that she stood instead in a place far removed from the world she knew." |
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| 99.82% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1169 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.04020530367835757 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01454234388366125 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 50 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 72.50% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 50 | | mean | 23.48 | | std | 7.78 | | cv | 0.331 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 32 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 74.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.46 | | totalSentences | 50 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, she turned to face" | | 1 | "Slowly, she opened her eyes," |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 97.55% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Her gaze flitted from one" | | 1 | "You shouldn't be here, a" | | 2 | "She walked faster, boots squelching" | | 3 | "She approached slowly, wary of" | | 4 | "It was then that she" | | 5 | "She held her breath, waiting" | | 6 | "It was the faintest of" | | 7 | "She staggered back, her hand" | | 8 | "It moved with an easy," | | 9 | "She knew that she should" | | 10 | "It reached out a hand" | | 11 | "She felt a sudden tug" | | 12 | "She closed her eyes against" | | 13 | "Her heart pounded in her" | | 14 | "It took a long moment" |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon peered through the" | | 1 | "Rory's boots sank slightly into" | | 2 | "Her gaze flitted from one" | | 3 | "An owl hooted somewhere in" | | 4 | "You shouldn't be here, a" | | 5 | "This place wasn't meant for" | | 6 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter" | | 7 | "The darkness seemed to thicken" | | 8 | "She walked faster, boots squelching" | | 9 | "A sudden gust of chill" | | 10 | "The temperature dropped sharply as" | | 11 | "The overhead canopy began to" | | 12 | "Moss and lichen clung to" | | 13 | "She approached slowly, wary of" | | 14 | "It was then that she" | | 15 | "She held her breath, waiting" | | 16 | "Disappointment flooded through her, and" | | 17 | "It was the faintest of" | | 18 | "The air above and around" | | 19 | "Colors flashed and swirled within" |
| | ratio | 0.714 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "An owl hooted somewhere in the canopy above, a mournful sound that echoed through the stillness of the night." | | 1 | "But the glowing pendant that hung around her neck, pulsing softly with an inner light, had drawn her here, like a lodestone enticing her closer." | | 2 | "Rory pulled her jacket tighter around her shoulders, as if the worn leather could ward off the growing unease that skittered down her spine." | | 3 | "She walked faster, boots squelching in the soft earth, desperate now to find the source of the strange energy that called to her from the heart of the grove." | | 4 | "The temperature dropped sharply as she delved deeper into the woods, and her breath came in pale clouds that dissipated quickly in the dark air." | | 5 | "As she drew closer, Rory noticed that the symbols seemed to grow more intricate, forming intertwining patterns that spiraled out from the center of the altar." | | 6 | "But as she made her way back toward the path that would lead her out of the grove, a sound stopped her in her tracks." | | 7 | "A figure stepped through the rift, emerging from the chaos of clashing color and light – a figure that bore only a vague resemblance to the human form." | | 8 | "It moved with an easy, liquid grace that spoke of a body not constrained by the demands of bone and muscle, but its shape was mutable, shifting and changing wit…" | | 9 | "The figure drifted closer, its edges blurring and merging with the shadows that clung to the trees." | | 10 | "She felt a sudden tug deep within her chest, as if the strange being had laid claim to her very soul, and she knew with sick certainty that she had no choice bu…" | | 11 | "As she stumbled forward, drawn inexorably toward the figure, she saw the rift begin to widen once more, revealing a dark, swirling vortex that led to who knew w…" | | 12 | "The creature's hand closed around hers, and though its touch was icy cold, she felt a burning heat begin to spread up her arm, as if her very flesh were being c…" | | 13 | "Rory screamed, but her voice was lost in the surging rush of wind that tore past her ears." | | 14 | "She closed her eyes against the blinding light that spilled from the rift, feeling the world drop away beneath her feet as she was drawn into the void beyond." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |