| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "his voice creaked like [like]" | | 1 | "Rory spoke evenly [evenly]" | | 2 | "Evan admitted quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.514 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 91.08% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1121 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.33% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1121 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "efficient" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "unspoken" | | 5 | "tenderness" | | 6 | "unravel" | | 7 | "scripted" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "grappling" | | 11 | "complex" | | 12 | "tapestry" | | 13 | "depths" | | 14 | "velvet" | | 15 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1118 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 872 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.49 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 3 | | Silas | 6 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Evan | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Blackwood" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.755 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 20.69% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed eternal companions of the Nest" | | 1 | "as if ticking items off a list" | | 2 | "as if convincing himself" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.94% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 27.95 | | std | 12.01 | | cv | 0.43 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 26 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 875 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.026285714285714287 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 14.33 | | std | 6.46 | | cv | 0.45 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 89.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5384615384615384 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he looked past her," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 62.62% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes, the" | | 1 | "She hadn't been to the" | | 2 | "Her fingers traced the scar" | | 3 | "his voice creaked like old" | | 4 | "She grinned, nodding to the" | | 5 | "His voice held a rasp" | | 6 | "She didn't move, an unspoken" | | 7 | "He approached with deliberate steps," | | 8 | "he said, settling onto the" | | 9 | "It was almost an apology," | | 10 | "She’d had years to prepare" | | 11 | "He chuckled, a sound that" | | 12 | "His eyes dropped to her" | | 13 | "he remarked with a seriousness" | | 14 | "She didn’t flinch, maintaining her" | | 15 | "She tapped her wrist lightly" | | 16 | "His head bobbed in understanding," | | 17 | "He wanted to ask about" | | 18 | "His fingers brushed the rim" | | 19 | "His eyes lifted to meet" |
| | ratio | 0.393 | |
| 25.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The muffled chatter of patrons" | | 1 | "Rory nestled into a stool" | | 2 | "Her bright blue eyes, the" | | 3 | "She hadn't been to the" | | 4 | "Tonight, though, was different." | | 5 | "The letter had been brief," | | 6 | "Her fingers traced the scar" | | 7 | "Silas ambled over, a slight" | | 8 | "his voice creaked like old" | | 9 | "She grinned, nodding to the" | | 10 | "The man’s shoulders were broader," | | 11 | "Any hope of remaining unnoticed" | | 12 | "Recognition flashed, and then a" | | 13 | "His voice held a rasp" | | 14 | "She didn't move, an unspoken" | | 15 | "He approached with deliberate steps," | | 16 | "he said, settling onto the" | | 17 | "It was almost an apology," | | 18 | "Rory replied, fighting to keep" | | 19 | "She’d had years to prepare" |
| | ratio | 0.869 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Dim lights played across the polished wooden bar, casting long shadows that tangled together on the floor of The Raven's Nest." | | 1 | "She didn’t flinch, maintaining her cool, examining the differences in him as if ticking items off a list." | | 2 | "A hint of their old dynamic whispered through, and, for an instant, they weren't two strangers grappling with spectres but Rory and Evan, the duo once inseparab…" | | 3 | "Silas reappeared, setting down fresh glasses with an easy familiarity that spoke of years unspoken." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory replied, fighting to keep her tone neutral" | | 1 | "Evan admitted quietly, more to himself than to her" | | 2 | "he replied, as if convincing himself" |
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| 35.71% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Evan acknowledged (acknowledge)" | | 1 | "Rory corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "Rory spoke evenly (speak)" | | 3 | "Evan admitted quietly (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.229 | |