Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQRRQ1QKFGWCKNPAM9NG0P

Run Details

Duration:
43.3s
Cost:
$0.016807
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Dim lights played across the polished wooden bar, casting long shadows that tangled together on the floor of The Raven's Nest. The muffled chatter of patrons created a low hum, punctuated by the occasional clink of whiskey glasses meeting solid oak. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood moved with deliberate slowness, his gaze attentive as he noted Rory's entrance, her figure silhouetted against the green neon sign. Rory nestled into a stool at the far end, shaking the raindrops from her coat with quick, efficient motions. Her bright blue eyes, the same striking hue as always, scanned the room. She hadn't been to the Nest in a while, the familiar setting wrapped now in layers of memories she'd rather leave unexamined. Tonight, though, was different. The letter had been brief, unsigned save for an innocuous nickname that felt for a moment like a hand reaching out from shadows. Her fingers traced the scar on her wrist, a reflexive gesture from years past. Silas ambled over, a slight limp undetectable unless one knew where to look. "It's good to see you, Rory," his voice creaked like old leather, carrying with it an unspoken tenderness. "I'd say the same, Si. Still keeping everything just so, I see." She grinned, nodding to the old maps lining the walls alongside the monochrome photos that seemed eternal companions of the Nest. As Silas leaned in to hear her better over the growing drone of conversation, a figure by the jukebox caught her eye. The man’s shoulders were broader, his once sandy blond hair had darkened with time, but there was no mistaking the profile. For a moment, Rory felt the world tilt. Was this some clever game, a twist of fate designed to unravel her composure? Any hope of remaining unnoticed evaporated as the man turned, his eyes meeting hers. Recognition flashed, and then a slow, hesitant smile spread across his face. "Rory?" His voice held a rasp she didn't recognize, rough edges that spoke of cigarettes and late nights. "Evan." She didn't move, an unspoken challenge crackling between them like static before a summer storm. He approached with deliberate steps, his expression cautious. "Long time," he said, settling onto the stool beside her. It was almost an apology, a peace offering she wasn't entirely sure she wanted. "Seems so," Rory replied, fighting to keep her tone neutral. She’d had years to prepare for this moment and none of them useful. Silas took his cue to busy himself, leaving them with the space they needed. Rory folded her hands, anchoring herself at the intersection of past and present. "Never thought I'd see you here," Evan ventured, searching for something in her gaze that she wasn't ready to offer. "I could say the same. But then, life's full of surprises, isn't it?” He chuckled, a sound that drip-fed nostalgia into the room. "Sorry for barging in on your night. Didn’t expect to find anything familiar in London right now." "London’s a labyrinth. Full of ghosts, right?" His eyes dropped to her wrist, the tell-tale crescent visible between the folds of her sleeve. "I’ve changed, Rory," he remarked with a seriousness that belied the bustling backdrop. "Life has a way of doing that." She didn’t flinch, maintaining her cool, examining the differences in him as if ticking items off a list. The set of his jaw had matured, the lines on his face scripted narratives she hadn’t been part of. "I see you still wear your stories." She tapped her wrist lightly. "Guess that means something." An awkward silence stretched between them, rich with the weight of the unsaid. Evan spoke again, his voice softer. "I’ve been learning to live without leaving scars." "Well, life has lessons for all of us." Rory allowed a corner of her past to slip into the open, but carefully, like relinquishing a captive bird. A hint of their old dynamic whispered through, and, for an instant, they weren't two strangers grappling with spectres but Rory and Evan, the duo once inseparable, carving their initials into a tree in a world that felt simpler. "We were foolish," Evan acknowledged, his head bowed, words tumbling out like an overdue confession. "I was foolish." "Young," Rory corrected, her tone holding an edge that resisted softening. "But the past is another sea, deep and dark.” His head bobbed in understanding, respect woven into the motion. He wanted to ask about her life, what roads she had wandered down to find herself here, but it was too early for that excavation. Instead, he looked past her, through the walls lined with stories so vivid he could almost touch them. "What's it like, living above a bar?" "Like living with a river," Rory spoke evenly. "The current’s always shifting, filled with faces and tales that drift in and out. Sometimes... sometimes there’s peace in the rapids.” "I could use some of that peace," Evan admitted quietly, more to himself than to her. His fingers brushed the rim of an empty glass, a repetitive plea for courage. Rory allowed herself a long look at him, trying to bridge the chasm with her gaze alone. “We can all find peace, Evan, if we look closely enough. Sometimes it's right under our noses.” His eyes lifted to meet hers, fueled by an ember of shared mischief that had survived. "Maybe you're right. You've always been good at seeing things that aren't there yet." A slight smile ghosted across Rory’s lips, a small conquest in the war against their history. "What avenues have you been haunting, Evan?" "All the ones painted in the wrong shades of red and grey." His blunt honesty surprised them both. "Sounds... complex." "It’s getting simpler," he replied, as if convincing himself. "The edges are sharpening, blurring less." They lapsed into another quiet stretch, words failing to encompass the tapestry of yesterdays they folded away with care. But the silence was less heavy now, a shared understanding lightening its weight. Silas reappeared, setting down fresh glasses with an easy familiarity that spoke of years unspoken. The moments had passed like a soft rain, leaving a clearer sky. As Evan took his first sip, Rory angled herself towards him, a decision forming in the depths of her gaze. “You stick around Soho long enough, you’ll find what you’re looking for, I think.” "Will I find you?” Evan’s question hung in the air, delicate and precarious. Rory considered, the layers of time thick as velvet around them. "Perhaps." She paused, letting the word settle between them. "Sometimes paths are meant to recross." Evan nodded, accepting her non-answer for the gesture it was. Silas watched from afar, the past orbiting the present in a tender dance only time understood.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"his voice creaked like [like]"
1"Rory spoke evenly [evenly]"
2"Evan admitted quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.514
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
91.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"efficient"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count3
5
word"tenderness"
count1
6
word"unravel"
count1
7
word"scripted"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"grappling"
count1
11
word"complex"
count1
12
word"tapestry"
count1
13
word"depths"
count1
14
word"velvet"
count1
15
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"efficient"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"traced"
4"unspoken"
5"tenderness"
6"unravel"
7"scripted"
8"silence"
9"weight"
10"grappling"
11"complex"
12"tapestry"
13"depths"
14"velvet"
15"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1118
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount872
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest3
Silas6
Blackwood1
Rory13
Evan8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Blackwood"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"Nest"
globalScore0.755
windowScore0.667
20.69% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed eternal companions of the Nest"
1"as if ticking items off a list"
2"as if convincing himself"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1118
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
79.94% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean27.95
std12.01
cv0.43
sampleLengths
066
154
241
331
433
543
648
718
824
924
1023
1127
1220
1313
1427
157
1636
1737
1816
1927
2027
2139
2218
2320
2435
2525
2629
2730
2834
2930
3023
3118
322
3315
3432
3527
3634
3713
3826
3926
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences78
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount875
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.026285714285714287
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean14.33
std6.46
cv0.45
sampleLengths
021
120
225
319
413
522
64
723
814
913
1018
1133
1222
1321
148
1514
1614
1712
1818
1916
208
2110
2214
2310
2413
2514
2613
2720
2813
2910
3017
317
3216
3313
347
3518
3619
3712
384
3913
406
418
4227
4339
4415
453
4611
479
4810
4925
89.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5384615384615384
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners42
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Instead, he looked past her,"
ratio0.016
62.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes, the"
1"She hadn't been to the"
2"Her fingers traced the scar"
3"his voice creaked like old"
4"She grinned, nodding to the"
5"His voice held a rasp"
6"She didn't move, an unspoken"
7"He approached with deliberate steps,"
8"he said, settling onto the"
9"It was almost an apology,"
10"She’d had years to prepare"
11"He chuckled, a sound that"
12"His eyes dropped to her"
13"he remarked with a seriousness"
14"She didn’t flinch, maintaining her"
15"She tapped her wrist lightly"
16"His head bobbed in understanding,"
17"He wanted to ask about"
18"His fingers brushed the rim"
19"His eyes lifted to meet"
ratio0.393
25.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences61
matches
0"The muffled chatter of patrons"
1"Rory nestled into a stool"
2"Her bright blue eyes, the"
3"She hadn't been to the"
4"Tonight, though, was different."
5"The letter had been brief,"
6"Her fingers traced the scar"
7"Silas ambled over, a slight"
8"his voice creaked like old"
9"She grinned, nodding to the"
10"The man’s shoulders were broader,"
11"Any hope of remaining unnoticed"
12"Recognition flashed, and then a"
13"His voice held a rasp"
14"She didn't move, an unspoken"
15"He approached with deliberate steps,"
16"he said, settling onto the"
17"It was almost an apology,"
18"Rory replied, fighting to keep"
19"She’d had years to prepare"
ratio0.869
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Dim lights played across the polished wooden bar, casting long shadows that tangled together on the floor of The Raven's Nest."
1"She didn’t flinch, maintaining her cool, examining the differences in him as if ticking items off a list."
2"A hint of their old dynamic whispered through, and, for an instant, they weren't two strangers grappling with spectres but Rory and Evan, the duo once inseparab…"
3"Silas reappeared, setting down fresh glasses with an easy familiarity that spoke of years unspoken."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory replied, fighting to keep her tone neutral"
1"Evan admitted quietly, more to himself than to her"
2"he replied, as if convincing himself"
35.71% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Evan acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"Rory corrected (correct)"
2"Rory spoke evenly (speak)"
3"Evan admitted quietly (admit)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.229
75.9201%