Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQRS6YBG1BSE6W3GE0A62Q

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pounded the streets of London, turning the city into a blur of shimmering lights and shadowy figures. Detective Harlow Quinn moved with purpose, her steps precise and unwavering despite the slick pavement beneath her feet. Her eyes, sharp and discerning, scanned the crowd for the suspect she had been tailing for the better part of the evening. The man was slippery, a ghost among the living, but Quinn had learned to trust her instincts. They had never failed her before. The suspect—a wiry figure with a hood pulled low over his face—darted through the throng of pedestrians, his movements erratic and desperate. Quinn quickened her pace, weaving through the crowd with the agility of a predator honing in on its prey. Her heart thudded in her chest, a steady rhythm that matched the urgency of the chase. "Stop!" Her voice cut through the night, commanding and unyielding. But the man only glanced back, his eyes wide with fear, before plunging into the alleyway ahead. Quinn followed, her breath misting in the cold air. The alley was narrow, hemmed in by towering buildings that seemed to lean in conspiratorially. The rain had pooled in the uneven cobblestones, creating treacherous patches that threatened to trip her up. But she pressed on, driven by the memory of her partner, DS Morris, and the unresolved mysteries that haunted her. The suspect was fast, but Quinn was relentless. She rounded a corner just in time to see him disappear through a rusted gate, its hinges protesting with a screech. Beyond lay a set of stairs, descending into the depths of the city. Quinn hesitated for a fraction of a second, her mind racing. She knew of the Veil Market, whispered about in hushed tones among those who trafficked in the supernatural. It was a place of secrets and shadows, a realm where the ordinary laws of the world held no sway. Her hand brushed against the worn leather of her watch, a grounding presence amidst the chaos. She had come too far to turn back now. With a determined breath, she pushed through the gate and began her descent. The stairs spiraled downward, the air growing cooler and more oppressive with each step. The sound of the city faded, replaced by an eerie silence that seemed to pulse with its own life. Quinn's senses were on high alert, every nerve attuned to the possibility of danger lurking in the dark. At the bottom, she found herself in a cavernous space, the remnants of an abandoned Tube station. The Veil Market sprawled before her, a labyrinth of stalls and makeshift shops, each one offering wares that defied the imagination. The air was thick with the scent of incense and something more primal, a hint of magic that tingled at the edges of perception. Quinn scanned the crowd, searching for the suspect among the eclectic mix of patrons. Creatures of all kinds mingled here, their appearances ranging from the subtly unusual to the overtly fantastical. Her eyes caught on a stall selling shimmering vials of liquid, their colors shifting like the surface of a soap bubble. Another offered talismans and charms, their surfaces etched with runes that seemed to pulse with hidden power. She spotted him then, slipping between two stalls, his hood still obscuring his face. Quinn moved swiftly, her presence a ripple in the market's strange currents. The suspect glanced back, his expression a mask of panic, and ducked into a narrow passageway lined with flickering lanterns. Quinn followed, her footsteps echoing in the confined space. The passage twisted and turned, a maze designed to confound the unwary. But she was not easily deterred. Her mind was a steel trap, focused and unyielding. The suspect stumbled, his foot catching on a loose stone. Quinn seized the opportunity, closing the distance between them. Her hand shot out, gripping his shoulder with a force that brooked no argument. "You're not going anywhere," she said, her voice low and steady. The man twisted in her grasp, his eyes wild. "You don't understand," he gasped, his words tumbling out in a rush. "They'll kill me if I don't deliver." Quinn's grip tightened, her gaze unwavering. "Who? Who are you working for?" He hesitated, fear and desperation warring in his expression. "I can't—" A sudden commotion erupted from the market, a cacophony of voices raised in alarm. Quinn's attention snapped to the source, her instincts screaming danger. The suspect took advantage of her distraction, wrenching free and bolting down the passage. Quinn cursed under her breath, her decision made in an instant. She couldn't let him escape, not when he held answers to questions that had plagued her for years. She sprinted after him, her movements fluid and controlled. The passage opened into a larger chamber, the ceiling arching high above. The suspect skidded to a halt, his path blocked by a group of figures cloaked in shadow. Quinn slowed, her senses prickling with unease. The figures turned as one, their eyes glinting in the dim light. "Detective Quinn," one of them intoned, their voice smooth and unhurried. "You've wandered far from your jurisdiction." Quinn's jaw set, her posture defiant. "I'm here for him," she replied, nodding toward the suspect. The figure chuckled, a sound that sent a shiver down her spine. "He's under our protection now. You should leave while you still can." Quinn's mind raced, weighing her options. She could feel the weight of her watch against her wrist, a reminder of time slipping away. But she couldn't walk away, not when the answers she sought were so tantalizingly close. She took a step forward, her gaze locked on the suspect. "I need to know what he knows," she said, her voice firm. The figures exchanged glances, a silent communication passing between them. The leader nodded, a gesture of acquiescence. "Very well," they said, their tone laced with amusement. "But be warned, Detective. The truth is not always what it seems." Quinn's heart pounded, a mix of anticipation and dread. She had come this far, and there was no turning back. As she stepped into the circle of light, she knew she was crossing a threshold into a world where the rules were different, and the stakes were higher than she had ever imagined.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1049
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1049
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"unwavering"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count2
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"predator"
count1
4
word"treacherous"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"amidst"
count1
8
word"determined"
count1
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count2
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"footsteps"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"cacophony"
count1
16
word"glinting"
count1
17
word"down her spine"
count1
18
word"raced"
count1
19
word"could feel"
count1
20
word"weight"
count1
21
word"reminder"
count1
22
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"unwavering"
1"scanned"
2"quickened"
3"predator"
4"treacherous"
5"depths"
6"racing"
7"amidst"
8"determined"
9"oppressive"
10"silence"
11"pulse"
12"etched"
13"footsteps"
14"echoing"
15"cacophony"
16"glinting"
17"down her spine"
18"raced"
19"could feel"
20"weight"
21"reminder"
22"anticipation"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences73
matches
0"e with fear"
1"g with unease"
45.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1047
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
58.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount979
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.84
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn18
Morris1
Veil2
Market2
Tube1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.581
windowScore0.667
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"buildings that seemed to lean in conspiratorially"
1"silence that seemed to pulse with its own life"
2"runes that seemed to pulse with hidden power"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1047
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean40.27
std20.79
cv0.516
sampleLengths
081
157
227
361
491
538
651
762
869
946
1036
1133
1211
1328
1412
1511
1638
1738
1848
1917
2016
2124
2238
2323
2438
2553
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was crossing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences79
ratio0.013
matches
0"The suspect—a wiry figure with a hood pulled low over his face—darted through the throng of pedestrians, his movements erratic and desperate."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount981
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.024464831804281346
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007135575942915392
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
99.59% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean13.25
std5.29
cv0.399
sampleLengths
018
118
222
317
46
522
619
716
810
917
109
1115
1217
1320
148
1521
1613
1711
1818
1920
2016
219
2213
2314
2419
2518
2617
2721
2824
2914
3017
3121
3217
3314
3412
3520
369
3712
386
399
4010
419
4214
4311
449
4512
467
476
486
499
42.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.27848101265822783
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
88.49% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences73
matches
0"Her eyes, sharp and discerning,"
1"They had never failed her"
2"Her heart thudded in her"
3"Her voice cut through the"
4"She rounded a corner just"
5"She knew of the Veil"
6"It was a place of"
7"Her hand brushed against the"
8"She had come too far"
9"Her eyes caught on a"
10"She spotted him then, slipping"
11"Her mind was a steel"
12"Her hand shot out, gripping"
13"she said, her voice low"
14"he gasped, his words tumbling"
15"He hesitated, fear and desperation"
16"She couldn't let him escape,"
17"She sprinted after him, her"
18"she replied, nodding toward the"
19"She could feel the weight"
ratio0.329
21.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences73
matches
0"Rain pounded the streets of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn moved with"
2"Her eyes, sharp and discerning,"
3"The man was slippery, a"
4"They had never failed her"
5"The suspect—a wiry figure with"
6"Quinn quickened her pace, weaving"
7"Her heart thudded in her"
8"Her voice cut through the"
9"Quinn followed, her breath misting"
10"The alley was narrow, hemmed"
11"The rain had pooled in"
12"The suspect was fast, but"
13"She rounded a corner just"
14"Quinn hesitated for a fraction"
15"She knew of the Veil"
16"It was a place of"
17"Her hand brushed against the"
18"She had come too far"
19"The stairs spiraled downward, the"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
11.66% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Quinn quickened her pace, weaving through the crowd with the agility of a predator honing in on its prey."
1"Her heart thudded in her chest, a steady rhythm that matched the urgency of the chase."
2"The alley was narrow, hemmed in by towering buildings that seemed to lean in conspiratorially."
3"The rain had pooled in the uneven cobblestones, creating treacherous patches that threatened to trip her up."
4"The Veil Market sprawled before her, a labyrinth of stalls and makeshift shops, each one offering wares that defied the imagination."
5"The air was thick with the scent of incense and something more primal, a hint of magic that tingled at the edges of perception."
6"Her eyes caught on a stall selling shimmering vials of liquid, their colors shifting like the surface of a soap bubble."
7"Her hand shot out, gripping his shoulder with a force that brooked no argument."
8"The suspect took advantage of her distraction, wrenching free and bolting down the passage."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, her voice low and steady"
1"he gasped, his words tumbling out in a rush"
2"them intoned, their voice smooth and unhurried"
3"she said, her voice firm"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.154
71.5896%