Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQRSGC1HR5H8Q20SJHH2V8

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
42.9s
Cost:
$0.015670
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain scratched at the windows of The Raven’s Nest, distorting streaks of neon green across the old city glass. The bar offered shelter to those who found comfort in shadows—a handful of regulars, old jazz slurring through the speakers, and a bartender whose name carried more weight than any bottle behind him. Aurora Carter stepped inside, the evening’s chill still clutching her. Water dripped from the hem of her coat, forming a delicate constellation on the warped wooden floor. She kept her head down, swept her black hair behind her ears, scanning for a familiar face, although she knew Silas preferred to vanish into his back room when the world outside knocked too loudly. She moved towards the counter, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist, a nervous ritual from days better forgotten. Only three strangers at the bar tonight: a couple lost in their phones, a third man hunched over a notebook, pen gliding furiously. Aurora slid onto a free stool and waited, gaze tracing the maps along the wall, lines crisscrossing continents and decades. The whole place smelled of old books and lemon polish. Behind the counter, a shadow stirred. Silas Blackwood leaned forward on his good leg—when had his hair gone so grey? The beard suited him, carved his jawline sharp as ever, but the limp was more pronounced now, almost rhythmic in its inevitability. He wore his silver signet ring, still bright against his tired knuckles. His hazel eyes flicked up, landed on her, narrowed for a breath before widening with something like recognition. “Funny seeing a ghost in my bar.” His voice cracked with the gravel of too many early mornings. “You hidden from the rain or from something else, Rory?” She let his words settle, then shrugged out of her coat, pooling it on her lap. “Rain’s the least of my problems. You serving whisky or just stories tonight, Silas?” He tugged a glass from the shelf, no hesitation in the precise movements. “Depends. You want the good stuff, or have your tastes gone as bland as your choice in umbrellas?” Aurora smirked. “Go on, impress me.” He poured, no theatrics. The whisky caught the dull light, amber rippling. She took a sip, flames curling in her chest. “Better,” she said. “No offense, but you look like you went twelve rounds with a steamroller.” He ran a hand through his hair — auburn flickered, still clinging to life beneath the frost. “And you,” he gestured with his glass, “look like you finally buried that wild child I used to know.” Aurora bristled, jaw tense. “That was a long time ago.” “Was it? In my head, last week.” He leaned in, elbows pressed to dark wood, voice lowering. “How’s Eva?” “She’s—” Aurora hesitated. “Running. Like always.” Silas grunted, something unreadable settling behind his eyes. “You two used to be inseparable. Cardiff pub crawls, those idiotic late-night debates over chess moves. When did that become running?” Aurora picked at the label on her glass. “People change.” He tipped his head, a thousand stories caught in that look. “Hell, if that isn’t true. Thought I’d seen every face you wore, Rory. Now you got new ones?” A beat. She exhaled, feeling the weight of old laughter threatening to surface. “Had to. London’s not Cardiff. Things—got complicated.” Silas limped around the bar, propped himself on the adjacent stool. “So what brought Miss Complicated to my door tonight? Wasn’t nostalgia.” Aurora’s bright blue eyes drifted to a photo pinned behind the counter—Silas in Prague, younger, sharper, standing beside someone with a blurred-out face. “Curiosity, maybe. Or I just wanted to remember what safe felt like.” “Safe.” The word clanged between them. “Raven’s Nest, haven for broken wings. Never thought you’d be the one nesting.” “I’m not nesting, Silas. I deliver food, and I sleep in a bedsit above dodgy plumbing. I just—needed a drink.” He searched her face. “Who’re you running from now?” She squeezed her wrist. “Nobody that matters.” “Not what I asked.” He let the statement hang, heavy as smoke. “You asked for stories. Here’s one: people let time pile on them, till they can’t stand up straight. That why you’re bent over your glass?” Aurora traced a knot in the wood. “You ever wish you could start over? Not a big thing. Just—one evening, one wrong turn. Fix it. Avoid the regrets.” Silas considered this, lips twitching under the beard. “Wish, sure. Regret, always. Had a hundred chances for clean slates. Never took one. Habits like that, they get at your bones.” They sat a moment in silence, only the hum of a cooler breaking the quiet. “Was it worth it?” Aurora asked, voice thin. He flexed his good knee, and pain flickered in his eyes—ancient, permanent now. “Didn’t die, did I? Worth has nothing to do with it.” “That why you opened this place?” He shrugged, silver ring flashing. “Bars and spies. Both trade in secrets. Easier to hide behind a bottle than a gun.” Aurora’s gaze drifted to the bookshelf in the corner, slightly askew. “Still running a side-business through there?” Silas raised an eyebrow. “Only for old friends with worse secrets than mine.” Aurora almost smiled. “You still play chess, Silas?” He snorted. “Not since you wiped the board clean in under seven moves. My pride never recovered.” “Your pride was never the point.” He looked at her properly, none of the crowd around—just a mentor and the bright-eyed girl she’d been crushed under new layers. “Alright then, what’s the point, Rory?” She gripped her glass, knuckles pale. “I don’t know anymore. Every choice feels heavier now. Even coming here.” Silas studied her. “You know what’s funny about time? It’s not the years. It’s the things you don’t say. The people you never call back, the apologies you keep in your pocket for a rainy day that never comes.” Aurora’s mouth curled, not quite a smile, not quite a frown. “Is this your idea of comfort?” “It’s honesty. We’re old enough for that.” The rain beat harder against the windows, a desperate rhythm. Aurora finished her whisky, throat pulsing as the liquid burned. “You remember that night in Aberystwyth—the last time we all got together?” Silas’s face clouded, memory cutting deep. He nodded. “You said,” she continued, “every mistake’s a lesson, so long as you don’t make it twice.” “That was a lie,” Silas interrupted. “But I meant it. We all hoped for better.” She let her hand fall, palm open on the counter, as if surrendering to some silent referee. “Do you ever wish I’d stayed? Left London. Gone back.” Silas shook his head, gaze unwavering. “You left for a reason, Rory. If you returned, you wouldn’t be you. Pain lingers, but so does purpose. Even when it looks nothing like you pictured.” They listened to rain and old jazz, the world outside dim and indistinct. Aurora finally leaned back. “I suppose I owe you a game, then.” His grin broke free, shaking the dust off forgotten camaraderie. “Only if you promise not to take it easy.” “After tonight? Not a chance.” Silas reached below the bar, sliding a battered chess set towards her. “Rory, I’ll let you have white. Don’t say I never gave you anything.” She settled in, fingers hovering over the pawn. The weight between them eased—not vanished, but acknowledged, made manageable by ritual and memory. Old friends played a quiet game, lost in the bright and wounded present, across pieces that remembered more than they let on.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.192
leniency0.385
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1263
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1263
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count2
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"eyebrow"
count1
12
word"unwavering"
count1
13
word"pawn"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"chill"
2"scanning"
3"familiar"
4"tracing"
5"rhythmic"
6"flicked"
7"flickered"
8"unreadable"
9"traced"
10"silence"
11"eyebrow"
12"unwavering"
13"pawn"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1250
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount709
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Silas12
Blackwood1
Aurora14
Prague1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Prague"
globalScore0.513
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like recognition"
1"not quite a smile, not quite a frown"
2"not quite a frown"
3"as if surrendering to some silent referee"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.8
wordCount1250
matches
0"not vanished, but acknowledged, made manageable by ritual"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean20.83
std13.81
cv0.663
sampleLengths
052
162
273
354
418
528
616
714
831
96
1021
1116
1217
1319
1410
1519
166
1729
1810
1929
2020
2122
2223
2312
2419
2520
269
277
2837
2928
3030
3115
328
3324
346
3521
3617
3713
388
3917
406
4128
4218
4339
4417
457
4620
4712
488
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"been crushed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences109
ratio0.064
matches
0"The bar offered shelter to those who found comfort in shadows—a handful of regulars, old jazz slurring through the speakers, and a bartender whose name carried more weight than any bottle behind him."
1"Silas Blackwood leaned forward on his good leg—when had his hair gone so grey?"
2"He ran a hand through his hair — auburn flickered, still clinging to life beneath the frost."
3"Aurora’s bright blue eyes drifted to a photo pinned behind the counter—Silas in Prague, younger, sharper, standing beside someone with a blurred-out face."
4"He flexed his good knee, and pain flickered in his eyes—ancient, permanent now."
5"He looked at her properly, none of the crowd around—just a mentor and the bright-eyed girl she’d been crushed under new layers."
6"The weight between them eased—not vanished, but acknowledged, made manageable by ritual and memory."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount716
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03770949720670391
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0111731843575419
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean11.47
std7.26
cv0.633
sampleLengths
019
133
210
317
435
520
623
720
810
96
1014
1122
1212
1318
1418
1510
1616
1714
1813
1918
202
214
224
238
249
253
2613
2717
2819
294
306
3117
322
333
343
358
3621
378
382
3911
4018
412
4211
437
4411
4511
4623
4712
486
4913
70.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.43119266055045874
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners47
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Only three strangers at the"
ratio0.017
43.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences59
matches
0"She kept her head down,"
1"She moved towards the counter,"
2"He wore his silver signet"
3"His hazel eyes flicked up,"
4"His voice cracked with the"
5"She let his words settle,"
6"He tugged a glass from"
7"He poured, no theatrics."
8"She took a sip, flames"
9"He ran a hand through"
10"he gestured with his glass"
11"He leaned in, elbows pressed"
12"He tipped his head, a"
13"She exhaled, feeling the weight"
14"He searched her face."
15"She squeezed her wrist."
16"He let the statement hang,"
17"They sat a moment in"
18"He flexed his good knee,"
19"He shrugged, silver ring flashing."
ratio0.441
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences59
matches
0"The bar offered shelter to"
1"Aurora Carter stepped inside, the"
2"Water dripped from the hem"
3"She kept her head down,"
4"She moved towards the counter,"
5"Aurora slid onto a free"
6"The whole place smelled of"
7"Silas Blackwood leaned forward on"
8"The beard suited him, carved"
9"He wore his silver signet"
10"His hazel eyes flicked up,"
11"His voice cracked with the"
12"She let his words settle,"
13"He tugged a glass from"
14"He poured, no theatrics."
15"The whisky caught the dull"
16"She took a sip, flames"
17"He ran a hand through"
18"he gestured with his glass"
19"Aurora bristled, jaw tense."
ratio0.932
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Old friends played a quiet game, lost in the bright and wounded present, across pieces that remembered more than they let on."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Aurora asked, voice thin"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she continued (continue)"
1"Silas interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.077
76.9416%