| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 965 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 965 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "skipped a beat" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "anticipation" | | 5 | "tangible" | | 6 | "symphony" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "unravel" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "trembled" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "chilling" | | 15 | "magnetic" | | 16 | "familiar" | | 17 | "tinged" | | 18 | "charm" | | 19 | "chill" | | 20 | "whisper" | | 21 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.89% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 970 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 966 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.93 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 3 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "rustling that seemed to echo deeper between the ancient oaks" | | 1 | "whispering that seemed to seep from the shadows of the ancient standing stones at the clearing's edge" |
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| 96.91% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.031 | | wordCount | 970 | | matches | | 0 | "not by sound or sight but instinct" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.90% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 53.89 | | std | 18.63 | | cv | 0.346 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 58 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 62 | | 17 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "About the artefact, about who might have gifted it to her — perhaps even more about herself." | | 1 | "There it was again — a soft whispering that seemed to seep from the shadows of the ancient standing stones at the clearing's edge." | | 2 | "She knew one thing for certain — she was no longer alone." | | 3 | "A flicker of movement ahead caught the edge of her vision again — airier now, like drifting smoke." | | 4 | "Every nerve screaming, she turned to retreat, but those ineffable whispers deepened into laughter — a chilling chorus that beckoned her further in rather than out." | | 5 | "Whatever was here — her rational mind warned her to avoid but curiosity urged forth." | | 6 | "Until then, she carried the chill of that haunting laughter with her, a tethered whisper she could scarce escape — a reminder that the secrets of the grove remained cradled in shadow, timeless and patient, waiting for her inevitable return." |
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| 95.85% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 961 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.044745057232049947 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015608740894901144 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 15.16 | | std | 6.51 | | cv | 0.43 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 72.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.453125 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she squared her shoulders" | | 1 | "Finally, she wrenched herself away," | | 2 | "Perhaps she had learned nothing" | | 3 | "Perhaps she had learned more" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Her heart skipped a beat" | | 1 | "Her eyes, bright blue and" | | 2 | "She longed for answers." | | 3 | "She halted, listening." | | 4 | "It started in her ears" | | 5 | "Her scarred wrist tingled under" | | 6 | "she muttered to herself, forcing" | | 7 | "Her worn jeans snagged against" | | 8 | "She knew one thing for" | | 9 | "She calmed her nerves and" | | 10 | "Her voice trembled as she" | | 11 | "She exhaled sharply, fragile threads" | | 12 | "It filled the air dense" | | 13 | "She should leave now." | | 14 | "She could smell the metallic" | | 15 | "Her pulse steadied as she" | | 16 | "She unclenched her fingers from" | | 17 | "It would be hours before" |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 94.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter drew a sharp" | | 1 | "The Fae Grove closed around" | | 2 | "Her heart skipped a beat" | | 3 | "The world felt suspended in" | | 4 | "Her eyes, bright blue and" | | 5 | "An air of anticipation hung" | | 6 | "Aurora had entered here on" | | 7 | "She longed for answers." | | 8 | "She halted, listening." | | 9 | "A disquieting symphony of words" | | 10 | "It started in her ears" | | 11 | "Her scarred wrist tingled under" | | 12 | "she muttered to herself, forcing" | | 13 | "Each step felt more laborious" | | 14 | "Her worn jeans snagged against" | | 15 | "Aurora fought against the urge" | | 16 | "Tension coiled within the grove," | | 17 | "Aurora wasn't sure if it" | | 18 | "She knew one thing for" | | 19 | "The grove played games with" |
| | ratio | 0.73 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, the feeling gnawing at" | | 1 | "Yet, she carried on, perhaps" | | 2 | "Even so, despite the empty" | | 3 | "Yet, comfort notwithstanding, she held" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 74.18% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove closed around her in unsettling silence, save for the distant rustling that seemed to echo deeper between the ancient oaks." | | 1 | "The world felt suspended in a strange, tense quiet, as though the grove itself held its breath." | | 2 | "There it was again — a soft whispering that seemed to seep from the shadows of the ancient standing stones at the clearing's edge." | | 3 | "Her worn jeans snagged against the tangling brambles, which clung to her resolute form like tentative fingers seeking purchase." | | 4 | "Every nerve screaming, she turned to retreat, but those ineffable whispers deepened into laughter — a chilling chorus that beckoned her further in rather than o…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Her voice trembled (tremble)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |