| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice wavered then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.652 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 78.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1169 | | totalAiIsms | 46 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "sense of" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "unsettled" | | 8 | "stark" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "apprehension" | | 13 | "scanning" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "throbbed" | | 17 | "almost alive" | | 18 | "pulse" | | 19 | "raced" | | 20 | "echoes" | | 21 | "symphony" | | 22 | "wavered" | | 23 | "determined" | | 24 | "echoing" | | 25 | "trembled" | | 26 | "wavering" | | 27 | "beacon" | | 28 | "echoed" | | 29 | "quickened" | | 30 | "pounding" | | 31 | "could feel" | | 32 | "sinister" | | 33 | "racing" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "a sense of dread" | | 1 | "sent a chill through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 93.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1164 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1062 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.04 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | London | 1 | | Air | 1 | | Aurora | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Air" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.982 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sharing buried memories" | | 1 | "as if urging her deeper into the grove" | | 2 | "felt like a challenge, an invitation to" | | 3 | "as if drowning in her fear" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.859 | | wordCount | 1164 | | matches | | 0 | "not merely warm, but almost alive against her skin" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 35.27 | | std | 22 | | cv | 0.624 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 86 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 63 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 61 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "She had only heard tales of it — a hidden pocket where the lines blurred between realms." | | 1 | "She focused on her purpose, the reason she had left London’s bustle behind—to uncover the truth about the pendant, her recent inheritance from an unknown benefactor." | | 2 | "She glanced sideways, convinced she noticed movement—an echo of whispers brushing against her earlobe." | | 3 | "The sounds grew sharper — faint whispers wrapped around her, enveloping her like a blanket." | | 4 | "Brief familiar faces flitted through her memories—all the people she’d loved and lost, laughter echoing like a ghost." | | 5 | "Then, there it was again—metal against rock, a sound too solid for the ethereal surroundings." | | 6 | "Fear coiled tightly in her chest, and she could feel it—the unmistakable sense that she wasn’t alone here." | | 7 | "The figures in the darkness closed in—watching her with hunger, their whispers jangling in time with her racing heartbeat." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1067 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "grew sharper — faint whispers" |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03561387066541706 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014058106841611996 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 12.25 | | std | 5.35 | | cv | 0.437 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 74.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.45263157894736844 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the whisper of her" | | 1 | "Then, there it was again—metal" | | 2 | "Suddenly, a shadow shifted near" | | 3 | "Suddenly, the air thickened." |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here for" | | 1 | "She had only heard tales" | | 2 | "She focused on her purpose," | | 3 | "She hoped to discover its" | | 4 | "she muttered, shaking her head" | | 5 | "She glanced sideways, convinced she" | | 6 | "It felt as if unseen" | | 7 | "she whispered to herself" | | 8 | "She knelt to examine the" | | 9 | "she riffled through her thoughts," | | 10 | "Her heart stuttered." | | 11 | "She turned sharply, scanning the" | | 12 | "She encouraged herself as the" | | 13 | "Her voice wavered, then fell" | | 14 | "She took a step back," | | 15 | "Her instincts shouted that she" | | 16 | "It pulsed urgently as if" | | 17 | "She walked further, the grove" | | 18 | "She braced herself, searching the" | | 19 | "She fought to keep her" |
| | ratio | 0.294 | |
| 30.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stood at the entrance" | | 1 | "A chill crept through her" | | 2 | "She had come here for" | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against" | | 4 | "That warmth felt distant, a" | | 5 | "The moon hung high, casting" | | 6 | "Wildflowers whispered in the wind," | | 7 | "This place held secrets, she" | | 8 | "She had only heard tales" | | 9 | "Aurora took a breath, the" | | 10 | "She focused on her purpose," | | 11 | "The stories hinted at its" | | 12 | "She hoped to discover its" | | 13 | "The branches rustled overhead, sighing" | | 14 | "she muttered, shaking her head" | | 15 | "She glanced sideways, convinced she" | | 16 | "Shivers danced down her spine." | | 17 | "It felt as if unseen" | | 18 | "she whispered to herself" | | 19 | "She knelt to examine the" |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked further, the grove tightening around her, trees bending into shapes she could almost recognize." | | 1 | "She braced herself, searching the darkness, her heart hammering in her chest." | | 2 | "The ground beneath her felt shifty, the vibrant wildflowers waning, petals curling as if drowning in her fear." | | 3 | "The glow pulsed rhythmically, casting a faint light that struggled against the enveloping darkness." | | 4 | "Aurora shuddered, the whispers crescendoing, pulling at her mind, seeping into her thoughts like poison." | | 5 | "She stumbled backward, the pendant slipping from her grip, landing softly among the flowers." | | 6 | "In that moment, the grove seemed to shift, a pulse of energy thrumming against her feet, as if the earth itself spoke a forbidden language." | | 7 | "The figures in the darkness closed in—watching her with hunger, their whispers jangling in time with her racing heartbeat." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she riffled, attempting to dismiss the creeping apprehension" | | 1 | "She encouraged, not merely warm, but almost alive against her skin" | | 2 | "She fought, her breath catching in her throat" | | 3 | "the girl whispered, her voice lilting like distant song" | | 4 | "Aurora snapped, trying to appear bolder than she felt" | | 5 | "she cried, desperation slicing through her voice" | | 6 | "Aurora called, her voice sharp" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "She encouraged (encourage)" | | 3 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 4 | "the girl whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Aurora snapped (snap)" | | 6 | "she cried (cry)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.348 | | leniency | 0.696 | | rawRatio | 0.875 | | effectiveRatio | 0.609 | |