Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQRXR2B6AZZJ5BEE29ZJE9

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Duration:
47.8s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood at the entrance of The Fae Grove, the ancient oak standing stones looming tall against the night sky. A chill crept through her thin jacket, raising goosebumps along her arms, but she pushed the discomfort away. She had come here for a reason. The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against her chest, pulsed with a soft warmth, guiding her forward. That warmth felt distant, a flickering promise lost in the shadows. The moon hung high, casting silver beams across the clearing. Wildflowers whispered in the wind, their colors muted under the moonlight. This place held secrets, she mused, familiar yet foreign. She had only heard tales of it — a hidden pocket where the lines blurred between realms. But standing there, all her imagination could conjure was a sense of dread. Aurora took a breath, the air thick with an unnameable tension. She focused on her purpose, the reason she had left London’s bustle behind—to uncover the truth about the pendant, her recent inheritance from an unknown benefactor. The stories hinted at its power, its connection to the Fae realm. She hoped to discover its significance, but something about the grove unsettled her. The branches rustled overhead, sighing as if sharing buried memories. “Great,” she muttered, shaking her head. “Maybe the stories were just bedtime tales.” As she stepped further in, the wildflowers seemed to lean closer, brushing against her jeans, their soft petals a stark contrast to the hardened reality pressing in. She glanced sideways, convinced she noticed movement—an echo of whispers brushing against her earlobe. Shivers danced down her spine. It felt as if unseen eyes were watching her from the bushes, but each time she turned, the grove offered only silence. “Focus, Rory,” she whispered to herself. “You’re fine. Just a little exploration.” She knelt to examine the flowers, their colors vibrant even in the dim light. "What mystical nonsense is this?" she riffled through her thoughts, attempting to dismiss the creeping apprehension. As she reached for a deep violet blossom, a faint sound, clinking like metal striking stone, broke the stillness. Her heart stuttered. The sound had come from behind her. She turned sharply, scanning the grove. Branches twisted like skeletal fingers against the night sky, and shadows danced ominously. Only the whisper of her breath broke the silence, but she could have sworn she glimpsed a flicker of motion just out of sight. “Just trees.” She encouraged herself as the pendant throbbed, not merely warm, but almost alive against her skin. A soft giggle bubbled beneath the whispers of wind, followed by rustling. Aurora’s pulse raced, the echoes blending in a disorienting symphony around her. “Hello?” Her voice wavered, then fell flat among the darkness. No answer came, only the eerie sound of her breath in the void. The Air itself seemed to grow heavier, thick as syrup. She took a step back, adrenaline flooding her veins. Her instincts shouted that she should leave, but the pull of the pendant anchored her here. It pulsed urgently as if urging her deeper into the grove. Determined, she followed the intuition creeping through her veins. Each step felt like a challenge, an invitation to some unseen force lurking in the shadows. She walked further, the grove tightening around her, trees bending into shapes she could almost recognize. Desperation edged into her mind as she fought against her mounting anxiety. The sounds grew sharper — faint whispers wrapped around her, enveloping her like a blanket. Brief familiar faces flitted through her memories—all the people she’d loved and lost, laughter echoing like a ghost. Then, there it was again—metal against rock, a sound too solid for the ethereal surroundings. She braced herself, searching the darkness, her heart hammering in her chest. “Stop messing around,” she demanded. “I’m not afraid of you!” But deep down, she trembled. The ground beneath her felt shifty, the vibrant wildflowers waning, petals curling as if drowning in her fear. Suddenly, a shadow shifted near the edge of the grove. A figure emerged, but distorted, unfocused, like a mirage wavering in twilight. Aurora raised the pendant in front of her, unsure if it was meant as a shield or a beacon. The glow pulsed rhythmically, casting a faint light that struggled against the enveloping darkness. “Show yourself!” She fought to keep her voice steady, her breath catching in her throat. The figure stepped closer, revealing a slight young woman, her dress tattered and flowing like mist. The girl’s eyes glowed faintly in the moonlight. It sent a chill through Aurora, her instincts screaming to run. “Why are you here?” the girl whispered, her voice lilting like distant song. “You shouldn’t wander without permission.” “Why do you care?” Aurora snapped, trying to appear bolder than she felt. “This is my quest.” The girl tilted her head, a strange smile curving her lips. “Your quest? When you tread on spirits, inside this grove, what do you seek? Beauty or truth?” Suddenly, the air thickened. The laughter of unseen beings echoed through the trees, harsh and mocking. Aurora’s breath quickened. Everything felt hostile. “I seek answers!” she cried, desperation slicing through her voice. “Answers or more questions?” The girl danced on her toes, a flicker of shadow sweeping around her like a dark cloud. “Your Heartstone calls out, but the Grove listens. You may not like the truth it reveals.” A branch crackled behind Aurora, and she spun around, her heart pounding. The shadows deepened beyond the perimeter of the clearing, stretching towards her like fingers eager to grasp. Fear coiled tightly in her chest, and she could feel it—the unmistakable sense that she wasn’t alone here. Something stirred, lurking just beyond the circle of light, driven by the pulse of the pendant. “You should go!” Aurora called, her voice sharp. The laughter escalating, becoming a chorus enveloping her, creating a nightmare she couldn’t escape. “Go?” The girl’s smile widened, enchanting yet sinister. “But you’ve only just arrived.” An ice-cold wind swept through the grove, extinguishing the warmth of the pendant. Aurora shuddered, the whispers crescendoing, pulling at her mind, seeping into her thoughts like poison. She stumbled backward, the pendant slipping from her grip, landing softly among the flowers. “No!” A scream clutched at her throat as she sprang for it. In that moment, the grove seemed to shift, a pulse of energy thrumming against her feet, as if the earth itself spoke a forbidden language. Shadows lengthened, swirling around her ankles, as the girl’s laughter turned into a haunting melody. Aurora grasped the pendant, warmth flooding back into her fingers. Panic surged and desperation drove her deeper into the grove. She had to find her way back, but the miasma of wrongness engulfed her. The figures in the darkness closed in—watching her with hunger, their whispers jangling in time with her racing heartbeat. She had stepped into something she couldn’t comprehend. “Rory!” The voices rose again, murmuring her name like ghostly echoes. The grove twisted, her path obscured. She ran.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice wavered then [then]"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.652
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
78.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"suddenly"
2"tightly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsms46
found
0
word"looming"
count1
1
word"chill"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"warmth"
count4
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"sense of"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"unsettled"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"apprehension"
count1
13
word"scanning"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count2
16
word"throbbed"
count1
17
word"almost alive"
count1
18
word"pulse"
count3
19
word"raced"
count1
20
word"echoes"
count2
21
word"symphony"
count1
22
word"wavered"
count1
23
word"determined"
count1
24
word"echoing"
count1
25
word"trembled"
count1
26
word"wavering"
count1
27
word"beacon"
count1
28
word"echoed"
count1
29
word"quickened"
count1
30
word"pounding"
count1
31
word"could feel"
count1
32
word"sinister"
count1
33
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"looming"
1"chill"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"familiar"
5"sense of"
6"tension"
7"unsettled"
8"stark"
9"echo"
10"down her spine"
11"silence"
12"apprehension"
13"scanning"
14"whisper"
15"flicker"
16"throbbed"
17"almost alive"
18"pulse"
19"raced"
20"echoes"
21"symphony"
22"wavered"
23"determined"
24"echoing"
25"trembled"
26"wavering"
27"beacon"
28"echoed"
29"quickened"
30"pounding"
31"could feel"
32"sinister"
33"racing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"a sense of dread"
1"sent a chill through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences87
matches
0"a sense of dread"
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1164
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1062
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
London1
Air1
Aurora11
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Air"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
globalScore0.982
windowScore0.667
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if sharing buried memories"
1"as if urging her deeper into the grove"
2"felt like a challenge, an invitation to"
3"as if drowning in her fear"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.859
wordCount1164
matches
0"not merely warm, but almost alive against her skin"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"shouted that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean35.27
std22
cv0.624
sampleLengths
071
160
272
313
468
512
659
743
818
947
1046
1186
1227
1310
1445
1533
1615
1735
1818
1917
2028
2122
2210
2337
2463
2522
2613
2742
2812
2940
3061
3117
322
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs198
matches
0"were watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences95
ratio0.084
matches
0"She had only heard tales of it — a hidden pocket where the lines blurred between realms."
1"She focused on her purpose, the reason she had left London’s bustle behind—to uncover the truth about the pendant, her recent inheritance from an unknown benefactor."
2"She glanced sideways, convinced she noticed movement—an echo of whispers brushing against her earlobe."
3"The sounds grew sharper — faint whispers wrapped around her, enveloping her like a blanket."
4"Brief familiar faces flitted through her memories—all the people she’d loved and lost, laughter echoing like a ghost."
5"Then, there it was again—metal against rock, a sound too solid for the ethereal surroundings."
6"Fear coiled tightly in her chest, and she could feel it—the unmistakable sense that she wasn’t alone here."
7"The figures in the darkness closed in—watching her with hunger, their whispers jangling in time with her racing heartbeat."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1067
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"grew sharper — faint whispers"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03561387066541706
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.014058106841611996
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean12.25
std5.35
cv0.437
sampleLengths
020
118
27
315
411
510
611
79
817
913
1011
1126
1212
1313
1410
156
167
1727
1814
195
2022
216
226
2314
2416
2519
263
277
286
2913
3024
3118
3212
3312
3410
3513
3610
379
3816
3911
409
4116
4216
4312
4415
4518
4615
4712
485
495
74.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.45263157894736844
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences85
matches
0"Only the whisper of her"
1"Then, there it was again—metal"
2"Suddenly, a shadow shifted near"
3"Suddenly, the air thickened."
ratio0.047
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences85
matches
0"She had come here for"
1"She had only heard tales"
2"She focused on her purpose,"
3"She hoped to discover its"
4"she muttered, shaking her head"
5"She glanced sideways, convinced she"
6"It felt as if unseen"
7"she whispered to herself"
8"She knelt to examine the"
9"she riffled through her thoughts,"
10"Her heart stuttered."
11"She turned sharply, scanning the"
12"She encouraged herself as the"
13"Her voice wavered, then fell"
14"She took a step back,"
15"Her instincts shouted that she"
16"It pulsed urgently as if"
17"She walked further, the grove"
18"She braced herself, searching the"
19"She fought to keep her"
ratio0.294
30.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences85
matches
0"Aurora stood at the entrance"
1"A chill crept through her"
2"She had come here for"
3"The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against"
4"That warmth felt distant, a"
5"The moon hung high, casting"
6"Wildflowers whispered in the wind,"
7"This place held secrets, she"
8"She had only heard tales"
9"Aurora took a breath, the"
10"She focused on her purpose,"
11"The stories hinted at its"
12"She hoped to discover its"
13"The branches rustled overhead, sighing"
14"she muttered, shaking her head"
15"She glanced sideways, convinced she"
16"Shivers danced down her spine."
17"It felt as if unseen"
18"she whispered to herself"
19"She knelt to examine the"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She walked further, the grove tightening around her, trees bending into shapes she could almost recognize."
1"She braced herself, searching the darkness, her heart hammering in her chest."
2"The ground beneath her felt shifty, the vibrant wildflowers waning, petals curling as if drowning in her fear."
3"The glow pulsed rhythmically, casting a faint light that struggled against the enveloping darkness."
4"Aurora shuddered, the whispers crescendoing, pulling at her mind, seeping into her thoughts like poison."
5"She stumbled backward, the pendant slipping from her grip, landing softly among the flowers."
6"In that moment, the grove seemed to shift, a pulse of energy thrumming against her feet, as if the earth itself spoke a forbidden language."
7"The figures in the darkness closed in—watching her with hunger, their whispers jangling in time with her racing heartbeat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she riffled, attempting to dismiss the creeping apprehension"
1"She encouraged, not merely warm, but almost alive against her skin"
2"She fought, her breath catching in her throat"
3"the girl whispered, her voice lilting like distant song"
4"Aurora snapped, trying to appear bolder than she felt"
5"she cried, desperation slicing through her voice"
6"Aurora called, her voice sharp"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"She encouraged (encourage)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"the girl whispered (whisper)"
5"Aurora snapped (snap)"
6"she cried (cry)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0.875
effectiveRatio0.609
72.1252%