Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQRZ8KMVNDNV8R8S2SQKAR

Run Details

Model:
Mistral Large 2
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
31.5s
Cost:
$0.012842

Evaluation summary

Score Evaluator
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100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags (details)
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency (details)
100.00% AI-ism character names (details)
100.00% AI-ism location names (details)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency (details)
100.00% Cliché density (details)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell) (details)
100.00% Filter word density (details)
100.00% Gibberish response detection (details)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse (details)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) (details)
50.77% Name drop frequency (details)
48.65% Narrator intent-glossing (details)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse (details)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) (details)
100.00% Paragraph length variance (details)
97.95% Passive voice overuse (details)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse (details)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse (details)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload) (details)
100.00% Repeated phrase echo (details)
100.00% Sentence length variance (details)
43.33% Sentence opener variety (details)
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts (details)
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts (details)
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts (details)
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts (details)
90.59% Technical jargon density (details)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions (details)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) (details)
79.3006% Overall

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed like sentinels, their gnarled roots twisting into the earth. Rory adjusted the strap of her messenger bag, the Heartstone Pendant tucked safely beneath her shirt, its warmth a steady pulse against her skin. The air smelled of damp moss and something sweeter—honeysuckle, maybe, or something older. Nyx stepped forward first, their shadowy form rippling like smoke caught in a draft. "The boundary’s thin here. Can you feel it?" Rory exhaled, her breath fogging in the chill. "Like static before a storm." Isolde glided between the stones, her silver hair catching the dim light. She didn’t leave footprints in the dew-damp grass. "The Grove remembers those who enter with purpose. It will show you what you seek." Her voice carried the weight of a riddle, as always. Rory followed, the grass giving way beneath her boots. The moment she crossed the threshold, the world tilted. The trees ahead weren’t just trees—they were too tall, their bark shimmering with veins of silver, their leaves shifting between green and gold like a living kaleidoscope. The air hummed, thick with the scent of blooming nightshade and something metallic, like ozone after lightning. Nyx solidified beside her, their violet eyes wide. "This isn’t just Earth." Isolde smiled, but it didn’t reach her lavender eyes. "No. It’s the space between." A path wound ahead, lined with flowers that glowed faintly blue in the twilight. Rory crouched, brushing her fingers over one. The petals were cool, almost damp, like morning dew—but it was dry. The petal pulsed under her touch, a slow, rhythmic throb. "Did you see that?" Rory whispered. Nyx’s shadow stretched long and thin, pooling around her boots. "It’s alive." Isolde knelt beside her, plucking a flower. It didn’t wilt in her hand. "The Grove feeds on memory. It blooms where the past lingers." She held it out. "Take it. It will remember you, too." Rory hesitated, then tucked the flower into her bag. The moment it left Isolde’s fingers, the petals darkened, deepening to indigo. A sound cut through the quiet—a whisper, but not from any of them. It slithered through the trees, a voice without a source. Rory’s pulse jumped. "Did you hear that?" Nyx’s form flickered, their edges blurring. "Voices. But not words." Isolde stood, her gaze fixed on the path ahead. "The Grove speaks in echoes. It’s showing you what it wants you to see." The trees parted, revealing a clearing. At its center stood a pool, its surface still as glass. But the reflection wasn’t theirs. It showed a figure—a woman with Rory’s face, but older, her bright blue eyes sharp with something like triumph. She wore a cloak of deep crimson, and in her hand, she held a dagger that glinted like moonlight. Rory’s breath hitched. "What the hell is that?" Isolde’s voice was soft. "A possibility." The reflection rippled, the image dissolving into mist. The pool’s water darkened, swirling like ink. Rory stepped back, her boot sinking into something soft. She looked down. The ground was covered in petals—thousands of them, all the same deep indigo as the one in her bag. They weren’t scattered. They formed a pattern, spiraling outward from the pool’s edge. Nyx’s voice was tight. "That wasn’t there before." Isolde’s fingers twitched at her sides. "The Grove is changing." A breeze stirred, carrying the scent of rain and something sharper—copper, maybe, or old blood. Rory’s scar prickled. She rubbed at it absently, her gaze locked on the pool. The water stilled again, but this time, the reflection wasn’t hers. It was Evan. His face twisted in a snarl, his hands reaching up from the depths as if trying to claw his way out. Rory’s stomach lurched. She stumbled back, her heel catching on a root. Nyx’s shadow lashed out, wrapping around her wrist like a cool ribbon. "It’s not real." Isolde’s voice cut through the haze. "The Grove shows you what you fear. It doesn’t make it true." Rory swallowed hard, forcing herself to look away. The image wavered, then vanished. The pool’s surface settled, once again reflecting the sky. But the sky wasn’t right. It wasn’t the warm amber of Dymas, nor the muted gray of London. It was a deep, bruised purple, streaked with veins of gold. And the stars—if they were stars—weren’t pinpricks of light. They pulsed, slow and steady, like distant heartbeats. Nyx’s grip on her wrist tightened. "We’re not in your world anymore." Isolde turned, her silver hair catching the strange light. "No. But we’re not in Hel, either." She gestured to the path ahead, where the trees thinned into another clearing. "The Veil is thin here. The Grove exists in the cracks." Rory followed her gaze. Beyond the trees, something glinted—a structure, half-hidden by vines. It looked like a temple, its stone weathered but still standing, its pillars carved with symbols that made her eyes ache if she looked too long. Nyx’s form solidified, their shadow pooling at their feet. "That wasn’t here before." Isolde’s lips curved, but there was no humor in it. "It was. You just couldn’t see it." Rory stepped forward, her boots crunching on something brittle. She looked down. The petals were gone. In their place lay bones—small, delicate, like those of a bird. But they weren’t white. They were black, as if scorched, and they crumbled to dust at her touch. Nyx crouched beside her, their fingers hovering just above the remains. "Something died here." Isolde’s voice was quiet. "Or something was born." The wind picked up, carrying the scent of rain and something else—something sweet and cloying, like rotting fruit. Rory’s stomach twisted. She stood, brushing her hands on her jeans. "We should keep moving." Nyx rose beside her, their violet eyes glowing faintly in the dim light. "Agreed." The path narrowed, the trees pressing in closer. Their branches twisted overhead, forming a tunnel of gnarled wood and shifting leaves. The air grew heavier, thick with the weight of something unseen. Rory’s skin prickled, her breath shallow. Then the path opened again. The temple stood before them, its entrance a gaping maw of darkness. But it wasn’t empty. Inside, something moved—a flicker of light, like a candle flame in the wind. Isolde stepped forward, her bare feet silent on the stone. "The Grove has been waiting for you." Rory hesitated, her fingers brushing the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt. It pulsed once, warm and steady. She took a deep breath and followed.
total_cost0.012842

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1089
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"carried the weight"
count1
6
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count3
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"throb"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"echoes"
count1
13
word"depths"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count2
15
word"lurched"
count1
16
word"wavered"
count1
17
word"structure"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
19
word"maw"
count1
20
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"chill"
5"carried the weight"
6"kaleidoscope"
7"pulsed"
8"rhythmic"
9"throb"
10"whisper"
11"flickered"
12"echoes"
13"depths"
14"stomach"
15"lurched"
16"wavered"
17"structure"
18"weight"
19"maw"
20"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1074
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount907
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.98
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Rory18
Nyx10
Isolde12
Evan1
Dymas1
London1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.508
windowScore0.667
48.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like triumph"
1"as if trying to claw his way out"
2"looked like a temple, its stone weathered"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1074
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean23.87
std15.26
cv0.639
sampleLengths
050
122
213
345
462
512
614
743
86
912
1035
1121
1230
1310
1423
1560
168
176
1827
1932
208
2110
2240
233
2433
2515
2618
2722
285
2941
3012
3140
3239
3313
3417
3545
3614
378
3833
3914
4038
415
4229
4317
4424
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"was covered"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences120
ratio0.1
matches
0"The air smelled of damp moss and something sweeter—honeysuckle, maybe, or something older."
1"The trees ahead weren’t just trees—they were too tall, their bark shimmering with veins of silver, their leaves shifting between green and gold like a living kaleidoscope."
2"The petals were cool, almost damp, like morning dew—but it was dry."
3"A sound cut through the quiet—a whisper, but not from any of them."
4"It showed a figure—a woman with Rory’s face, but older, her bright blue eyes sharp with something like triumph."
5"The ground was covered in petals—thousands of them, all the same deep indigo as the one in her bag."
6"A breeze stirred, carrying the scent of rain and something sharper—copper, maybe, or old blood."
7"And the stars—if they were stars—weren’t pinpricks of light."
8"Beyond the trees, something glinted—a structure, half-hidden by vines."
9"In their place lay bones—small, delicate, like those of a bird."
10"The wind picked up, carrying the scent of rain and something else—something sweet and cloying, like rotting fruit."
11"Inside, something moved—a flicker of light, like a candle flame in the wind."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount922
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03796095444685466
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004338394793926247
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean8.95
std5.29
cv0.591
sampleLengths
013
124
213
314
48
58
65
712
88
925
109
119
1227
1317
148
154
169
175
1814
197
2012
2110
226
2310
242
257
266
2715
287
299
3012
3113
3210
333
344
356
364
379
3814
396
4011
415
4219
4319
443
455
464
472
488
497
43.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.24166666666666667
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners29
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Then the path opened again."
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences95
matches
0"She didn’t leave footprints in"
1"Her voice carried the weight"
2"It didn’t wilt in her"
3"She held it out"
4"It slithered through the trees,"
5"It showed a figure—a woman"
6"She wore a cloak of"
7"She looked down."
8"They weren’t scattered."
9"They formed a pattern, spiraling"
10"She rubbed at it absently,"
11"It was Evan."
12"His face twisted in a"
13"She stumbled back, her heel"
14"It wasn’t the warm amber"
15"It was a deep, bruised"
16"They pulsed, slow and steady,"
17"She gestured to the path"
18"It looked like a temple,"
19"She looked down."
ratio0.263
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences95
matches
0"The standing stones loomed like"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"The air smelled of damp"
3"Nyx stepped forward first, their"
4"Rory exhaled, her breath fogging"
5"Isolde glided between the stones,"
6"She didn’t leave footprints in"
7"Her voice carried the weight"
8"Rory followed, the grass giving"
9"The moment she crossed the"
10"The trees ahead weren’t just"
11"The air hummed, thick with"
12"Nyx solidified beside her, their"
13"Isolde smiled, but it didn’t"
14"A path wound ahead, lined"
15"Rory crouched, brushing her fingers"
16"The petals were cool, almost"
17"The petal pulsed under her"
18"Nyx’s shadow stretched long and"
19"Isolde knelt beside her, plucking"
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The trees ahead weren’t just trees—they were too tall, their bark shimmering with veins of silver, their leaves shifting between green and gold like a living ka…"
1"She wore a cloak of deep crimson, and in her hand, she held a dagger that glinted like moonlight."
2"His face twisted in a snarl, his hands reaching up from the depths as if trying to claw his way out."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.036
leniency0.071
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.071
79.3006%