| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 928 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 928 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "flicked" | | 3 | "determined" | | 4 | "glint" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "sinister" | | 8 | "furrowed" | | 9 | "tangible" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 916 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 869 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.925 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like ancient manuscripts" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 916 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.67% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 26.17 | | std | 11.86 | | cv | 0.453 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was trying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.13 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, her quarry darted into the shadows—the figure she’d been trailing for blocks, weaving through alleyways with reckless urgency." | | 1 | "He clutched something in his hand, a glint under the flickering lampposts—maybe a weapon, maybe a package." | | 2 | "“Go. He's gone in that door.” It was a homeless man they’d talked to earlier—jerking his thumb toward a weathered metal entryway set into the alley’s brickwork." | | 3 | "Yet, something about this—something about that flickering sign and the way the shadows danced—made her hesitate." | | 4 | "That alley, that door—that was a gateway to something darker." | | 5 | "Something about it felt wrong—like the whole street was holding its breath." | | 6 | "Then she saw it—the faint shimmer again, through the crack, like something was trying to emerge." | | 7 | "The faint smell of moss and something metallic greeted her—an inexplicable scent that didn’t belong in the city." | | 8 | "A noise echoed—soft, almost beneath hearing." | | 9 | "She fired once—missed it by inches as he dove behind the clutter." |
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| 99.20% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 880 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.04090909090909091 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013636363636363636 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 11.9 | | std | 5.47 | | cv | 0.46 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 68.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.42857142857142855 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, her quarry darted" | | 1 | "Usually, she’d breach the door," | | 2 | "Then, instinct kicked in." | | 3 | "Just static for a moment," | | 4 | "Then she saw it—the faint" |
| | ratio | 0.07 | |
| 84.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath billowed out in" | | 1 | "He clutched something in his" | | 2 | "He didn't turn, only increased" | | 3 | "It was a homeless man" | | 4 | "She could see the suspect’s" | | 5 | "It looked abandoned, but somehow," | | 6 | "Her hand hovered over her" | | 7 | "She knew what was down" | | 8 | "She stepped back, tugging her" | | 9 | "she muttered, voice almost lost" | | 10 | "She retreated, eyes never leaving" | | 11 | "She reached for her radio," | | 12 | "Her brow furrowed as she" | | 13 | "She slung her coat off" | | 14 | "She pulled out her gun," | | 15 | "She moved forward, gun low" | | 16 | "She froze, pressing her back" | | 17 | "His face was half-hidden, shadows" | | 18 | "she commanded, voice steady but" | | 19 | "He turned slowly, eyes darting" |
| | ratio | 0.338 | |
| 44.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The streetlights flickered irregularly, casting" | | 1 | "Her breath billowed out in" | | 2 | "Quinn’s eyes flicked to the" | | 3 | "He clutched something in his" | | 4 | "Whatever it was, he didn’t" | | 5 | "He didn't turn, only increased" | | 6 | "Quinn pressed on, pulse hammering" | | 7 | "The suspect turned sharply down" | | 8 | "Quinn followed, her boots skidding" | | 9 | "A hand gripped her wrist" | | 10 | "A rough voice in her" | | 11 | "It was a homeless man" | | 12 | "Quinn hesitated for a split" | | 13 | "The doorway was unremarkable, save" | | 14 | "She could see the suspect’s" | | 15 | "The alley was silent except" | | 16 | "It looked abandoned, but somehow," | | 17 | "A decision hung loose in" | | 18 | "The police in her shoes" | | 19 | "Her hand hovered over her" |
| | ratio | 0.831 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, something about this—something about" | | 1 | "Even in the storm, she" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 49.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The streetlights flickered irregularly, casting a sickly yellow glow over slick cobblestones as Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted past puddles that swallowed her …" | | 1 | "He didn't turn, only increased his pace, weaving past a stack of trash bins spilling their contents onto the street." | | 2 | "Her hand hovered over her belt, gripping her badge, weighing her options." | | 3 | "That alley, that door—that was a gateway to something darker." | | 4 | "She slung her coat off a bit, hearing the dull clang of her badge rattling at her hip, ready for quick access." | | 5 | "The faint smell of moss and something metallic greeted her—an inexplicable scent that didn’t belong in the city." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, voice almost lost to the rain" | | 1 | "she commanded, voice steady but firm" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |