Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQS9X465ZMG7GW90Y86PPZ

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt slid back with a metallic scrape. Aurora yanked open the door, ready to give Eva a proper telling off for forgetting her keys again, when the retort died on her lips. "Lucien." He stood in the dim hallway, his platinum hair catching the weak glow from the stairwell light. One hand rested on his ivory cane, the other held a small leather attaché case. "Rory." His voice carried the same smooth French accent that had once whispered promises against her skin. "May I come in?" Her fingers tightened on the doorframe. Three months of silence, and now here he was on Eva's doorstep, looking as impeccable as the day he'd walked away. The charcoal suit hugged his lean frame, not a wrinkle in sight despite the late hour. "How did you find me?" she asked, making no move to let him pass. His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—regarded her with a familiar intensity. "You're wearing my shirt." Aurora glanced down at the oversized black button-down she'd thrown on over her leggings. His shirt. She'd meant to burn it weeks ago. "That doesn't answer my question." She crossed her arms, suddenly conscious of her bare feet and unwashed hair. "I've always known where you were," Lucien said quietly. "Professional habit." A series of thuds and the smell of curry wafted up from downstairs. The restaurant was closing for the night. "What do you want, Luc?" Something shifted in his expression—a softening around the eyes, perhaps at the familiar nickname she hadn't meant to use. "I need your help." He lifted the attaché case slightly. "And you need mine, though you don't know it yet." Aurora laughed, the sound sharp enough to cut. "That's rich. Last I checked, your help comes with conditions that leave people bleeding." "Not you." He met her gaze steadily. "Never you." The faint scratching of claws on hardwood distracted her as Ptolemy emerged from behind the sofa, tail high with curiosity. "Your friend's cat, I presume?" Lucien asked, his eyes tracking the tabby. "She mentioned him when we spoke." Aurora's spine stiffened. "You talked to Eva?" "She was quite reluctant. Until I explained the situation." A chill swept through her that had nothing to do with the draft in the hallway. If Lucien had sought out Eva, whatever brought him here was serious. "Five minutes," she said, stepping aside. He passed close enough that she caught his scent—sandalwood and something else, something uniquely him that triggered a cascade of memories she'd spent months trying to bury. The flat seemed to shrink with his presence. He surveyed the cramped space—books stacked on every surface, scrolls tucked into the umbrella stand, Eva's research notes taped to the walls. "Your roommate has eclectic taste," he observed. "Eva's an academic," Aurora replied, closing the door but leaving the chain unlatched. An escape route. "What situation were you explaining to her exactly?" Lucien set his case on the coffee table, nudging aside a pile of ancient texts with careful precision. "Your former boyfriend is looking for you." Her heart stuttered. "Evan?" "Yes." His jaw tightened almost imperceptibly. "He's been making inquiries in certain circles. The wrong circles." "That's impossible," she said, but her left hand instinctively moved to cover the crescent-shaped scar on her right wrist. "He doesn't know anything about—about your world." Lucien's gaze tracked the movement. "He knows enough to have contracted a tracker. Someone from Avaros." The name of his father's realm hung in the air between them. Aurora sank onto the arm of the sofa, legs suddenly unsteady. "How? He's just a—" "A man who believes you owe him something," Lucien finished. "Men like that are remarkably resourceful when properly motivated." Ptolemy wound between Aurora's ankles, purring loudly in the tense silence. "Why warn me?" she asked finally. "You made your feelings quite clear at the Shadow Market." His fingers tightened around the cane handle. "What happened at the Market was...regrettable." "Regrettable," she repeated, the word bitter on her tongue. "Is that what we're calling it now?" "Would you prefer I call it a mistake?" His accent thickened slightly, the way it did when his emotions slipped their careful leash. "Because I would be lying, and we promised never to lie to each other." "We promised a lot of things." The memory hung between them—stolen moments in his Soho office, her back against antique bookshelves, his hands tangled in her hair as he swore that what was between them transcended the politics of his world. Three weeks later, he'd pushed her away in front of half the supernatural underground, declaring that his business with "the human" was concluded. "You cut me off," she said quietly. "No explanation. No warning. Just...nothing." "To protect you." He took a step closer, his knuckles white around the cane. "There were rumors, whispers that I'd become compromised. That my affection for you was being leveraged by rivals." "So you decided for both of us that we were done?" "I decided that I preferred you alive and hating me to the alternative." Aurora stood, anger burning through her confusion. "That wasn't your choice to make." "Would you have walked away if I'd asked?" he challenged, closing the distance between them. "Or would you have insisted on staying, on fighting, on proving yourself? Tell me, Rory." She couldn't answer. They both knew the truth. His voice softened. "I did what was necessary." "You did what was easy," she countered. "Easy for you, anyway." Something dangerous flashed in his eyes. "You think it was easy to watch you leave? To deliberately hurt you? To spend every day since wondering if today would be the day some enemy discovered I still have you followed, still have you protected?" Aurora's breath caught. "You've been watching me?" "From a distance." He didn't look remotely apologetic. "And before you object to the invasion of privacy, that surveillance is why I know about Evan's activities." She needed to sit down again, but refused to show weakness. "So what now? You warn me, then disappear for another three months until the next crisis?" "Now," Lucien said, laying his cane on the table and unfastening the attaché case, "we deal with the situation permanently." He opened the case to reveal a set of documents, a small vial of amber liquid, and what looked like an antique compass. "Evan isn't just looking for you," he continued. "He's looking to own you. The contract he's arranged with the tracker contains binding elements—arcane ones." "A spell?" Aurora frowned. "He wouldn't know the first thing about magic." "People rarely need to understand the weapons they purchase," Lucien replied. "Only their effects." He removed the compass, which gleamed dully in the flat's low light. Intricate engravings covered its surface, symbols that seemed to shift when viewed directly. "What is that?" she asked. "Insurance," he said. "If properly calibrated, it will redirect the tracker to its contractor." "You want to send a supernatural tracker after Evan?" Aurora stared at him incredulously. "He's just a man, Luc. A terrible one, but—" "A man who's willing to bind your soul." Lucien's voice was flat. "The contract he's arranged would link your life force to his will. It's slavery, Aurora. A form practiced in the darkest corners of my father's realm." The implications crashed over her. Evan had been controlling, possessive, gradually isolating her until leaving him had felt like escaping quicksand. But this—this was beyond human malice. "How do you know all this?" she asked. Lucien hesitated, then rolled up his left sleeve. An ugly, puckered scar ran from his wrist to elbow, its edges stained black. "Because I intercepted the first attempt," he said quietly. "Three weeks ago, when the tracker tried to obtain a sample of your essence." Aurora's hand flew to her mouth. "You were hurt because of me?" "I was hurt because I made an enemy of a being from Avaros." He rolled his sleeve back down with practiced ease. "The distinction matters." "Why didn't you tell me immediately?" "I needed to verify the extent of the threat." His gaze softened. "And I wasn't certain you'd open the door if I came sooner." The truth of it hung between them. She probably wouldn't have. Ptolemy leaped onto the table, batting curiously at the compass. Lucien gently moved the cat aside. "Careful," he murmured. "That's attuned to blood magic." Aurora sat on the sofa, mind racing. "So what's your plan?" "I need something of yours—hair, a drop of blood—to calibrate the redirection." He gestured to the vial. "Then a binding ritual that will ensure the tracker finds only Evan, not you." "And then?" "And then he experiences the consequences of his actions," Lucien said simply. "Nothing fatal. But he will understand some doors should remain closed." Aurora studied his face, searching for the lies, the manipulation, the agenda she'd convinced herself must have been there all along. She found only intensity, determination, and something else she'd tried to forget existed between them. "Why risk yourself again?" she asked softly. "You walked away. Made it clear we were done. Why come back now?" Lucien's mismatched eyes held hers. "Because there are exactly three people in this world I would die to protect, and you remain one of them, regardless of what I said at the Market." The words hung in the air, raw and honest in a way he rarely allowed himself to be. "I missed you," she admitted, the confession feeling like surrender and victory at once. "Even while hating you for leaving." He nodded once, a nearly imperceptible acknowledgment that carried the weight of shared history. "Will you help me help you?" he asked, offering his hand. Aurora looked at his outstretched fingers, at the compass that would turn her nightmare back on itself, at the man she'd never quite managed to excise from her heart. She took his hand, ignoring the electricity that still sparked at his touch. "Let's finish this." His fingers tightened around hers. "And then we talk. About everything." "Everything," she agreed. "No more noble sacrifices or unilateral decisions." For the first time that night, Lucien smiled—a small, genuine curve of lips that reached his eyes. "I've missed your particular brand of stubbornness, Carter." "And I've missed your arrogant assumption that you're the smartest person in the room, Moreau." Something shifted in the air between them—not forgiveness, not yet, but possibility. A door neither had fully closed, despite their best efforts. Aurora reached for the compass. "Show me how this works."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
43.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags40
adverbTagCount8
adverbTags
0"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
1"His jaw tightened almost [almost]"
2"she asked finally [finally]"
3"His accent thickened slightly [slightly]"
4"she said quietly [quietly]"
5"he said quietly [quietly]"
6"Lucien said simply [simply]"
7"she asked softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.392
leniency0.784
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.157
80.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1765
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"deliberately"
3"gently"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1765
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"intensity"
count2
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"affection"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"calibrated"
count1
7
word"practiced ease"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"ensure"
count1
10
word"carried the weight"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"familiar"
2"intensity"
3"chill"
4"affection"
5"intricate"
6"calibrated"
7"practiced ease"
8"racing"
9"ensure"
10"carried the weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
88.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences166
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1750
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions37
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount995
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
French1
Lucien14
Aurora16
Ptolemy3
Soho1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
3"Ptolemy"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.696
windowScore0.667
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like an antique compass"
1"symbols that seemed to shift when viewed directly"
2"felt like escaping quicksand"
85.71% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.143
wordCount1750
matches
0"not forgiveness, not yet, but possibility"
1"not yet, but possibility"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences166
matches
0"declaring that his"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean18.42
std9.46
cv0.514
sampleLengths
033
11
232
321
443
514
615
723
818
911
1020
115
1219
1320
1422
159
1620
1718
187
199
2028
216
2227
2330
247
2524
2625
274
2816
2926
3016
3123
324
3319
3411
3516
3613
3716
3837
396
4035
4123
4212
4332
4411
4513
4613
4730
488
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"was concluded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was closing"
5.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences166
ratio0.048
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—regarded her with a familiar intensity."
1"Something shifted in his expression—a softening around the eyes, perhaps at the familiar nickname she hadn't meant to use."
2"He passed close enough that she caught his scent—sandalwood and something else, something uniquely him that triggered a cascade of memories she'd spent months trying to bury."
3"He surveyed the cramped space—books stacked on every surface, scrolls tucked into the umbrella stand, Eva's research notes taped to the walls."
4"The memory hung between them—stolen moments in his Soho office, her back against antique bookshelves, his hands tangled in her hair as he swore that what was between them transcended the politics of his world."
5"But this—this was beyond human malice."
6"For the first time that night, Lucien smiled—a small, genuine curve of lips that reached his eyes."
7"Something shifted in the air between them—not forgiveness, not yet, but possibility."
84.11% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1006
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.05069582504970179
lyAdverbCount28
lyAdverbRatio0.027833001988071572
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences166
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences166
mean10.54
std6.64
cv0.63
sampleLengths
08
125
21
317
415
517
64
76
821
916
1014
1111
124
1314
142
157
1618
179
182
1913
207
215
2219
2310
2410
258
2614
277
282
2920
3012
316
323
334
349
3516
3612
376
3827
398
4022
417
4213
433
448
4518
467
473
481
496
59.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3614457831325301
totalSentences166
uniqueOpeners60
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
43.66% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences93
matches
0"He stood in the dim"
1"His voice carried the same"
2"Her fingers tightened on the"
3"she asked, making no move"
4"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
5"She'd meant to burn it"
6"She crossed her arms, suddenly"
7"He lifted the attaché case"
8"He met her gaze steadily"
9"she said, stepping aside"
10"He passed close enough that"
11"He surveyed the cramped space—books"
12"Her heart stuttered."
13"His jaw tightened almost imperceptibly"
14"she said, but her left"
15"she asked finally"
16"His fingers tightened around the"
17"she repeated, the word bitter"
18"His accent thickened slightly, the"
19"she said quietly"
ratio0.441
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences93
matches
0"The deadbolt slid back with"
1"Aurora yanked open the door,"
2"He stood in the dim"
3"His voice carried the same"
4"Her fingers tightened on the"
5"The charcoal suit hugged his"
6"she asked, making no move"
7"His mismatched eyes—one amber, one"
8"Aurora glanced down at the"
9"She'd meant to burn it"
10"She crossed her arms, suddenly"
11"Lucien said quietly"
12"A series of thuds and"
13"The restaurant was closing for"
14"Something shifted in his expression—a"
15"He lifted the attaché case"
16"Aurora laughed, the sound sharp"
17"He met her gaze steadily"
18"The faint scratching of claws"
19"Lucien asked, his eyes tracking"
ratio0.925
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"If Lucien had sought out"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He passed close enough that she caught his scent—sandalwood and something else, something uniquely him that triggered a cascade of memories she'd spent months t…"
1"He nodded once, a nearly imperceptible acknowledgment that carried the weight of shared history."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags40
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien asked, his eyes tracking the tabby"
1"He took, his knuckles white around the cane"
81.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags24
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"he challenged (challenge)"
3"he continued (continue)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
5"she admitted (admit)"
6"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0.292
effectiveRatio0.137
76.2061%