Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQSAYGVH81ZW3CJJD9M633

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49.5s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant thrummed against Aurora's skin as she stepped deeper into Richmond Park, its faint warmth the only comfort against the autumn chill. She'd followed the whispered directions precisely: third path after the fallen oak, left at the mossy boulder, straight on until the trees seemed to bow inward. Now, standing before the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of what locals called the Fae Grove, she hesitated. "This is mental," she muttered to herself, British practicality warring with the undeniable pulse of the pendant. It had never reacted this strongly before. Not in the three months since the package had appeared at her flat door with no return address, just a note: *When it calls you, answer*. Tonight, it had practically burned against her chest. Aurora checked her phone. No signal, as expected. She'd told no one where she was going—not that she had many people to tell. Moving to London had meant leaving behind everything familiar, though escaping Evan had been worth it. Still, standing at the edge of a supposedly mystical grove in the darkness, she questioned her judgment. The pendant pulsed again, more insistently. "Right then." She clicked on her torch and stepped between the first two standing stones. The air changed immediately. It felt thicker, somehow, as if she'd walked through an invisible membrane. The sounds of distant traffic faded, replaced by a profound silence that seemed to press against her eardrums. The grove opened before her, wildflowers carpeting the ground despite the October date. By torchlight, their colours seemed muted, unnatural—blues too deep, whites too stark. Aurora followed a natural path that wound between clusters of impossibly ancient trees, their trunks wider than her arms could encircle. Her watch read 10:37 PM, though the journey had taken longer than expected. She made a mental note: *Time moves differently here—the note wasn't exaggerating*. "Hello?" she called, feeling foolish even as the word left her lips. "I'm here because of the pendant." Nothing answered except the brush of leaves in a wind she couldn't feel against her skin. The pendant guided her forward, its warmth intensifying as she approached what appeared to be the center of the grove—a perfect circle of grass surrounded by seven stones, each carved with symbols that her torchlight couldn't quite capture properly. They seemed to shift when directly observed, like trying to read through water. Aurora stepped into the circle and the pendant went suddenly cool. She pulled it out from beneath her jumper, examining the deep crimson stone. Its inner glow had dimmed. "Brilliant," she sighed. "Dragged me all the way out here just to go dark." A twig snapped somewhere behind her. Aurora swung around, torch beam cutting through darkness. Nothing moved among the trees. "Is someone there?" The silence that answered felt deliberate, as if the grove itself were holding its breath. She turned slowly, scanning the perimeter of the clearing. The torch beam caught something pale between two distant trees—a face? It disappeared before she could focus. "I know you're there," she said, aiming for authoritative but landing closer to nervous. "The pendant brought me here. If you sent it, we should talk." The wind picked up, rustling the leaves overhead. Aurora could have sworn she heard whispers beneath the sound—words just beyond understanding. She took a deep breath. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched suddenly, a sensation she hadn't felt since childhood when she'd fallen from a tree. Another sound—not a twig this time, but something heavier. Footsteps, perhaps, circling the clearing. "Look, I'm not leaving until I get answers," she announced to the darkness. "Why did the pendant lead me here? What is this place really?" The torchlight flickered once, twice. Aurora tapped it against her palm. It stabilized, then dimmed noticeably. The battery had been fresh when she left her flat above Silas' bar. A soft laugh echoed from somewhere to her right. She whirled toward it, but caught only the impression of movement disappearing behind a tree. The pendant warmed against her skin again, pulsing in a rhythm that felt uncomfortably like a heartbeat. "Enough games," she said, forcing steel into her voice. "Show yourself." Something brushed against her shoulder from behind. Aurora spun, heart hammering, but found only empty air. The torch beam wobbled with her shaking hand. The pendant pulsed harder. She realized, with mounting unease, that the circle of stones had somehow changed. Weren't there seven before? She counted again—nine now, and the symbols more pronounced, almost glowing with a light of their own. Aurora looked down at her watch. 11:52 PM. She'd been in the grove for over an hour, though it felt like minutes. The whispering grew louder, no longer hidden beneath the wind but rising around her like a tide. Still incomprehensible, but urgent. Insistent. Movement flickered at the edge of her vision—shapes sliding between trees, never quite visible head-on. The torch beam caught something reflective—eyes, perhaps—that glinted momentarily before vanishing. "I'm not afraid of you," Aurora lied, backing toward the center of the circle. The pendant burned hot now, almost painful against her skin. The torch flickered again, dimming to a faint glow that barely illuminated the ground at her feet. That's when she saw them—footprints appearing in the dewy grass. Not coming toward her, but forming in a circle around her, as if invisible feet were pressing down one after another. She realized with horror that she was surrounded. "What do you want?" Her voice cracked. The pendant throbbed once more, then went completely cold. In the same moment, her torch died. Darkness enveloped her, absolute and complete. Even the stars seemed to have vanished overhead, as if the grove existed in a pocket separate from the world. Aurora stood perfectly still, afraid to move. Her breath fogged in the suddenly frigid air. The whispers crescendoed, almost intelligible now. Almost familiar. A touch against her hand—cool fingers intertwining with hers. "Aurora Carter," said a voice directly beside her ear. It sounded like rustling leaves and flowing water and something else, something ancient. "Or should I call you Rory? You've been expected." She tried to pull away, but the grip tightened. Not painfully, but with unmistakable strength. "W-who are you?" she managed. "A friend of a friend." The voice seemed to come from everywhere now. "You wear Isolde's heartstone. That makes you very interesting indeed." "Isolde?" Aurora's mind raced. The name wasn't on the note that came with the pendant. "I don't know any Isolde." A chuckle rippled through the darkness. "No, you wouldn't. Not yet." The grip on her hand remained firm as something else touched her face—a caress so light it might have been imagination. "Your blood remembers, though. The scar on your wrist remembers." Aurora shivered. How could they know about her scar? "What do you want from me?" she asked, surprised by the steadiness in her voice. The presence drew closer. She could feel breath against her cheek now, smell something like crushed wildflowers and copper. "Want? Nothing yet. But soon, you'll want something from us." "Us?" Aurora's eyes strained against the darkness, seeing nothing. As if in answer, lights appeared throughout the grove—not torches or electric bulbs, but a soft blue-green glow emanating from dozens of figures standing among the trees. They were humanoid, but wrong somehow—too tall, too fluid in their stillness. The hand holding hers belonged to one such figure, now visible inches away. Its features were beautiful but alien, eyes too large and entirely black, reflecting nothing. "The doorways are opening, Aurora Carter," it said. "Between your world and others. Between Earth and Hel." The pendant—the Heartstone—pulsed once against her chest, confirming the words. "Why me?" she whispered. The creature's mouth curved into something approximating a smile, revealing teeth that gleamed like polished stones. "Because you bear the mark of two worlds. Because Isolde chose you." It leaned closer, voice dropping to a whisper. "And because something is hunting you, Aurora Carter. Something that has been seeking your bloodline for centuries." The other figures began to move, gliding between trees with liquid grace, drawing closer to the circle of stones. Their eyes—all those black, reflective eyes—fixed on her. "The Heartstone will warn you when the barriers thin," the creature continued. "When the hunters draw near. Come to us then. We cannot enter your world uninvited, but we can offer sanctuary in ours." "Hunters? What hunters?" Aurora's voice rose with panic. The creature released her hand and stepped back. The others retreated as well, melting into the darkness between the trees. "You'll know them by their hunger," it said, fading. "By the shadows that follow them. By the cold that precedes them." The glow diminished, leaving Aurora alone in the circle. "Wait!" she called. "You can't just—" Her torch flickered back to life, bright beam cutting through suddenly normal darkness. The grove looked ordinary again—just trees and stones and wildflowers. Aurora checked her watch: 11:58 PM. Four minutes had passed since she last looked. The Heartstone hung silent and cool against her skin. She stood trembling, torch beam searching the now-empty grove. Ordinary nighttime sounds filtered back—a distant owl, the rustle of small animals in underbrush. As Aurora turned to leave, her light caught something at the base of one standing stone—a small object that hadn't been there before. She approached cautiously, kneeling to examine it. A key. Ancient-looking, made of tarnished silver, with symbols matching those on the stones carved into its handle. As her fingers closed around it, the Heartstone warmed once more against her chest, its crimson glow visible even through her jumper. From somewhere in the darkness beyond the grove, something answered—a low, rumbling growl that belonged to no animal Aurora had ever heard.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
66.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1654
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count4
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
5
adverb"perfectly"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
7
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
3"really"
4"completely"
5"perfectly"
6"very"
7"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1654
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count3
5
word"profound"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count4
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count1
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"could feel"
count1
16
word"electric"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"chill"
2"pulse"
3"familiar"
4"pulsed"
5"profound"
6"silence"
7"stark"
8"perfect"
9"scanning"
10"footsteps"
11"flickered"
12"echoed"
13"throbbed"
14"raced"
15"could feel"
16"electric"
17"whisper"
18"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences131
matches
0"d with horror"
1"e with panic"
12.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences131
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"tried to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords12
totalWords1624
ratio0.007
matches
0"When it calls you, answer"
1"Time moves differently here—the note wasn't exaggerating"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Still, standing at the edge of a supposedly mystical grove in the darkness, she questioned her judgment."
81.01% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1377
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Pendant1
Aurora19
Richmond1
Park1
Fae1
Grove1
British1
London1
Evan1
October1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"London"
globalScore0.81
windowScore0.833
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"silence that seemed to press against her eardrums"
1"seemed muted unnatural—blues too deep, whites too stark"
2"quite capture properly"
3"felt like minutes"
4"sounded like rustling leaves and flowing w"
5"something like crushed wildflowers and coppe"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords3.079
wordCount1624
matches
0"not a twig this time, but something heavier"
1"no longer hidden beneath the wind but"
2"Not coming toward her, but forming in a circle around her, as if invisible feet were pr"
3"Not painfully, but with unmistakable strength"
4"not torches or electric bulbs, but a soft blue-green glow emanating from dozens of figures stan"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean20.56
std12.55
cv0.611
sampleLengths
071
150
28
356
46
515
634
746
825
918
1016
1152
1229
1314
146
1513
163
1715
1826
1926
2021
2127
2214
2325
2429
2524
2617
2711
287
2917
304
3134
3222
3322
3426
3524
3617
3731
388
397
4016
4126
4223
439
4431
4515
465
4723
4820
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences131
matches
0"was surrounded"
95.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs254
matches
0"was going"
1"wasn't exaggerating"
2"were holding"
3"were pressing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount24
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences21
totalSentences148
ratio0.142
matches
0"She'd told no one where she was going—not that she had many people to tell."
1"By torchlight, their colours seemed muted, unnatural—blues too deep, whites too stark."
2"She made a mental note: *Time moves differently here—the note wasn't exaggerating*."
3"The pendant guided her forward, its warmth intensifying as she approached what appeared to be the center of the grove—a perfect circle of grass surrounded by seven stones, each carved with symbols that her torchlight couldn't quite capture properly."
4"The torch beam caught something pale between two distant trees—a face?"
5"Aurora could have sworn she heard whispers beneath the sound—words just beyond understanding."
6"Another sound—not a twig this time, but something heavier."
7"She counted again—nine now, and the symbols more pronounced, almost glowing with a light of their own."
8"Movement flickered at the edge of her vision—shapes sliding between trees, never quite visible head-on."
9"The torch beam caught something reflective—eyes, perhaps—that glinted momentarily before vanishing."
10"That's when she saw them—footprints appearing in the dewy grass."
11"A touch against her hand—cool fingers intertwining with hers."
12"The grip on her hand remained firm as something else touched her face—a caress so light it might have been imagination."
13"As if in answer, lights appeared throughout the grove—not torches or electric bulbs, but a soft blue-green glow emanating from dozens of figures standing among the trees."
14"They were humanoid, but wrong somehow—too tall, too fluid in their stillness."
15"The pendant—the Heartstone—pulsed once against her chest, confirming the words."
16"Their eyes—all those black, reflective eyes—fixed on her."
17"The grove looked ordinary again—just trees and stones and wildflowers."
18"Ordinary nighttime sounds filtered back—a distant owl, the rustle of small animals in underbrush."
19"As Aurora turned to leave, her light caught something at the base of one standing stone—a small object that hadn't been there before."
20"From somewhere in the darkness beyond the grove, something answered—a low, rumbling growl that belonged to no animal Aurora had ever heard."
92.82% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount718
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04735376044568245
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.020891364902506964
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean10.97
std6.16
cv0.561
sampleLengths
024
126
221
317
47
526
68
74
84
915
1016
1117
126
1315
144
1512
1618
1713
1812
1921
2013
2112
2212
236
2416
2539
2613
2711
2813
295
303
3111
326
338
345
353
3615
379
3811
396
4014
4112
428
4313
445
4522
469
475
4813
4912
64.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.40540540540540543
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners60
82.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences121
matches
0"Still, standing at the edge"
1"Still incomprehensible, but urgent."
2"Even the stars seemed to"
ratio0.025
94.38% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences121
matches
0"She'd followed the whispered directions"
1"she muttered to herself, British"
2"It had never reacted this"
3"She'd told no one where"
4"She clicked on her torch"
5"It felt thicker, somehow, as"
6"Her watch read 10:37 PM,"
7"She made a mental note:"
8"she called, feeling foolish even"
9"They seemed to shift when"
10"She pulled it out from"
11"Its inner glow had dimmed."
12"She turned slowly, scanning the"
13"It disappeared before she could"
14"she said, aiming for authoritative"
15"She took a deep breath."
16"she announced to the darkness"
17"It stabilized, then dimmed noticeably."
18"She whirled toward it, but"
19"she said, forcing steel into"
ratio0.314
46.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences121
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant thrummed against"
1"She'd followed the whispered directions"
2"she muttered to herself, British"
3"It had never reacted this"
4"Tonight, it had practically burned"
5"Aurora checked her phone."
6"She'd told no one where"
7"The pendant pulsed again, more"
8"She clicked on her torch"
9"The air changed immediately."
10"It felt thicker, somehow, as"
11"The sounds of distant traffic"
12"The grove opened before her,"
13"Aurora followed a natural path"
14"Her watch read 10:37 PM,"
15"She made a mental note:"
16"she called, feeling foolish even"
17"Nothing answered except the brush"
18"The pendant guided her forward,"
19"They seemed to shift when"
ratio0.826
82.64% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences121
matches
0"Now, standing before the ancient"
1"As if in answer, lights"
ratio0.017
70.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Now, standing before the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of what locals called the Fae Grove, she hesitated."
1"The pendant warmed against her skin again, pulsing in a rhythm that felt uncomfortably like a heartbeat."
2"Not coming toward her, but forming in a circle around her, as if invisible feet were pressing down one after another."
3"As if in answer, lights appeared throughout the grove—not torches or electric bulbs, but a soft blue-green glow emanating from dozens of figures standing among …"
4"The creature's mouth curved into something approximating a smile, revealing teeth that gleamed like polished stones."
5"From somewhere in the darkness beyond the grove, something answered—a low, rumbling growl that belonged to no animal Aurora had ever heard."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"It leaned, voice dropping to a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she sighed (sigh)"
2"she announced (announce)"
3"Aurora lied (lie)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"the creature continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.462
effectiveRatio0.308
73.6587%