Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQSEBPMZ6V8M4YDFZ0DE5D

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Duration:
29.0s
Cost:
$0.010432

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged whiskey and lemon polish, the kind of scent that clung to the walls like a second skin. Rory wiped her hands on her jeans, the damp chill of the London evening still clinging to her fingers. She hadn’t meant to come in—just another delivery for Yu-Fei, another envelope slipped under the bar’s back door—but the neon sign had flickered in the corner of her eye, green and insistent, and before she knew it, her boots were scuffing against the worn floorboards. She didn’t see him at first. The bar was half-empty, the kind of quiet that settled in the lull between the after-work crowd and the late-night stragglers. Then the stool creaked. “Christ. Rory Carter.” The voice was rougher than she remembered, the edges worn smooth by time. She turned. Evan leaned against the bar, one elbow propped up like he owned the place. His hair was shorter now, buzzed close to his skull, and the stubble along his jaw had thickened into something darker, more deliberate. The last time she’d seen him, he’d been all sharp edges and restless energy. Now, he looked like he’d been sanded down, the angles of his face softer, but his eyes—those hadn’t changed. Still that same pale grey, still watching her like she was a puzzle he’d already solved. She swallowed. “Evan.” He grinned, slow and easy, like they were picking up right where they left off. “Didn’t think I’d ever see you in here again.” “Yeah, well.” She shrugged, shifting the weight of her bag. “Things change.” “Not you, though.” His gaze flicked over her, lingering on the crescent scar at her wrist before snapping back up. “Still got that same look. Like you’re about to bolt.” She bristled. “I don’t bolt.” “No?” He tilted his head, swirling the amber liquid in his glass. “Could’ve fooled me.” The air between them thickened, heavy with everything they weren’t saying. Rory exhaled through her nose, forcing her shoulders to relax. “What are you doing here, Evan?” “Same as you, I reckon.” He nodded toward the door. “Passing through.” “Right.” She didn’t believe him. Evan had never been the type to just pass through anywhere. He stayed. He dug in. He left marks. He must’ve seen the doubt on her face because he smirked, tapping his fingers against the bar. “You still working for that Chinese place?” “Golden Empress. And yeah.” “Still delivering secrets in takeout boxes?” She stiffened. “It’s food, Evan.” “Sure it is.” He leaned in, just enough that she caught the scent of him—whiskey and something sharper, like gun oil. “You always did have a knack for being in the wrong place at the right time.” Rory’s fingers curled into her palms. “What’s that supposed to mean?” “Nothing.” He sat back, spreading his hands. “Just saying. You disappear for years, then pop up in the one bar in London that’s basically a front for spies. Funny how that works.” She wanted to snap at him, to tell him he didn’t know the first thing about where she’d been or what she’d done. But the words stuck in her throat. Because he wasn’t wrong. The Raven’s Nest *was* a front. And she *had* been delivering more than just dumplings lately. Evan’s smirk faded, his expression turning thoughtful. “You ever think about how different things could’ve been?” “No.” “Liar.” She glared at him. “I don’t have time for this.” “For what? The truth?” He leaned forward again, his voice dropping. “You left, Rory. No warning, no note. Just gone. And now you’re back, acting like nothing happened.” “Because nothing *did* happen.” The lie tasted bitter. “We were kids. It was a long time ago.” “Bullshit.” His jaw tightened. “You ran because of me.” She opened her mouth to deny it, but the words died on her tongue. The silence stretched, thick and suffocating. Evan’s gaze softened, just for a second. “I’m not the same person I was back then.” “Neither am I.” “Could’ve fooled me.” He reached out, his fingers brushing the back of her hand. She flinched, and he pulled back like he’d been burned. “Still jumpy, I see.” Rory forced a laugh, but it came out hollow. “Old habits.” Evan studied her for a long moment, his eyes searching hers like he was trying to memorize her face. Then he sighed, rubbing a hand over his jaw. “You ever wonder if we just… got it wrong? If we were too young to know what we wanted?” She didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. He nodded like she had, draining the last of his drink. “Yeah. Me too.” The bar’s door swung open, letting in a gust of cold air and the murmur of voices. Rory turned, grateful for the interruption. Silas stood in the doorway, his hazel eyes sharp as they flicked between her and Evan. “Rory,” Silas said, his voice low and even. “You’re late.” She exhaled, relief flooding her chest. “Right. Sorry.” Evan’s gaze flicked between them, his expression unreadable. “You two know each other?” Silas didn’t look at him. “Go home, Evan.” Something dark flashed across Evan’s face, but it was gone before Rory could name it. He stood, tossing a few notes onto the bar. “Yeah. Sure.” He didn’t look at her as he walked out, the door swinging shut behind him with a quiet click. Silas watched him go, then turned to Rory, his expression unreadable. “You alright?” She nodded, but her hands were still shaking. Silas sighed, reaching beneath the bar. He pulled out a small envelope, sliding it across the counter toward her. “Next time, don’t linger.” She pocketed it without looking. “Right.” He studied her for a long moment, then nodded toward the back. “Go on. I’ll cover for you.” She didn’t need to be told twice. Rory turned on her heel, pushing through the crowd toward the hidden door behind the bookshelf. The weight of Evan’s gaze burned into her back, but she didn’t look back. Not this time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He sat back [back]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.04
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1010
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1010
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"flicked"
count3
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count2
highlights
0"chill"
1"flickered"
2"weight"
3"flicked"
4"silence"
5"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1002
ratio0.003
matches
0"was"
1"had"
2"did"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount753
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
London1
Yu-Fei1
Evan9
Rory8
Silas5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.902
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like he’d been sanded down, the an"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1002
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean19.65
std17.96
cv0.914
sampleLengths
087
131
23
315
486
53
624
712
830
95
1015
1127
1212
1324
1424
154
166
175
1837
1911
2032
2150
2216
231
241
2510
2628
2717
289
2920
3016
313
3228
3311
3447
357
3614
3739
3810
398
4013
418
4226
4319
4413
458
4623
476
4818
4937
90.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences73
matches
0"been sanded"
1"been burned"
2"was gone"
17.35% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs146
matches
0"were scuffing"
1"were picking"
2"weren’t saying"
3"was trying"
65.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences111
ratio0.027
matches
0"She hadn’t meant to come in—just another delivery for Yu-Fei, another envelope slipped under the bar’s back door—but the neon sign had flickered in the corner of her eye, green and insistent, and before she knew it, her boots were scuffing against the worn floorboards."
1"Now, he looked like he’d been sanded down, the angles of his face softer, but his eyes—those hadn’t changed."
2"“Sure it is.” He leaned in, just enough that she caught the scent of him—whiskey and something sharper, like gun oil."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount761
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03416557161629435
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001314060446780552
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean9.03
std6.96
cv0.771
sampleLengths
023
119
245
36
421
54
63
713
82
914
1023
1114
1219
1316
142
151
1615
179
1810
192
2020
2110
222
233
2412
253
2611
2710
286
2910
302
315
3211
332
343
353
3617
377
384
396
402
413
4221
4316
446
455
467
4725
4823
497
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36036036036036034
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners40
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"Then the stool creaked."
1"Then he sighed, rubbing a"
ratio0.029
31.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences68
matches
0"She hadn’t meant to come"
1"She didn’t see him at"
2"His hair was shorter now,"
3"He grinned, slow and easy,"
4"She shrugged, shifting the weight"
5"His gaze flicked over her,"
6"He tilted his head, swirling"
7"He nodded toward the door"
8"She didn’t believe him"
9"He dug in."
10"He left marks."
11"He must’ve seen the doubt"
12"He leaned in, just enough"
13"He sat back, spreading his"
14"She wanted to snap at"
15"She glared at him."
16"He leaned forward again, his"
17"His jaw tightened"
18"She opened her mouth to"
19"He reached out, his fingers"
ratio0.471
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences68
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Rory wiped her hands on"
2"She hadn’t meant to come"
3"She didn’t see him at"
4"The bar was half-empty, the"
5"The voice was rougher than"
6"Evan leaned against the bar,"
7"His hair was shorter now,"
8"The last time she’d seen"
9"He grinned, slow and easy,"
10"She shrugged, shifting the weight"
11"His gaze flicked over her,"
12"He tilted his head, swirling"
13"The air between them thickened,"
14"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
15"He nodded toward the door"
16"She didn’t believe him"
17"Evan had never been the"
18"He dug in."
19"He left marks."
ratio0.882
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"Now, he looked like he’d"
1"Because he wasn’t wrong."
ratio0.029
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Evan studied her for a long moment, his eyes searching hers like he was trying to memorize her face."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He leaned, his voice dropping"
1"He reached out, his fingers brushing the back of her hand"
2"Silas said, his voice low and even"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.04
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.1726%