Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQSH4C608XNQHPERCR4VWY

Run Details

Duration:
26.2s
Cost:
$0.009076

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation and the clink of glasses. Rory wiped her hands on her apron, the scent of fried garlic and soy sauce still clinging to her fingers. She’d just finished her shift at the Golden Empress, and the last thing she wanted was another hour on her feet. But Silas had texted—*Need to see you. Now.*—and that was that. She pushed through the heavy oak door, the green neon sign buzzing faintly above her. The bar was half-full, the usual crowd of journalists, off-duty cops, and the occasional suit who looked like he’d wandered in by mistake. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better days. His signet ring glinted under the dim light as he set the glass down. “You look like hell,” he said. Rory tossed her apron onto the counter. “Flattery won’t get you a free drink.” “Wasn’t trying for one.” He nodded toward the back. “We need to talk.” She followed him past the bookshelf that swung open with a creak, into the hidden room where the air smelled of aged whiskey and old secrets. Silas shut the door behind them, the lock clicking into place. Rory leaned against the table, arms crossed. “What’s so urgent it couldn’t wait until morning?” Silas didn’t answer right away. He poured two fingers of bourbon into a glass and slid it toward her. She ignored it. “Evan’s back in town,” he said. The name hit like a punch to the ribs. Rory’s fingers twitched against her sleeves, her pulse kicking up. “How do you know?” “He was asking about you at the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei called me.” Rory exhaled through her nose, slow and controlled. “He’s not my problem anymore.” “Bullshit.” Silas’s voice was quiet, but it carried the weight of something unsaid. “You don’t just walk away from a man like that and pretend he doesn’t exist.” “Watch me.” Silas rubbed his thumb over the rim of his glass. “You used to tell me everything.” “That was before.” “Before what?” Rory’s jaw tightened. “Before I realized some things are better left buried.” Silas set the glass down with a sharp *clink*. “You think running away fixed anything? You think changing your name, your job, your *hair*—” His eyes flicked to the black strands that used to be auburn. “—made you someone else?” “It made me *safe*.” “Safe.” Silas scoffed. “You’re not safe. You’re just hiding.” Rory pushed off the table, her boots thudding against the floor as she paced. “What do you want from me, Silas? A confession? Fine. I was stupid. I trusted the wrong person. I let him convince me I was weak. Happy?” “No.” His voice was rough. “I’m not happy. I’m *pissed*. At him. At you. At myself.” Rory stopped. “What the hell do you have to be pissed about?” Silas’s fingers curled into a fist, his signet ring pressing into his palm. “I should’ve seen it. Should’ve *known*. You were different after you started dating him. Quieter. Jumpier. But I told myself you were just growing up, that you didn’t need me butting in.” He looked away, his throat working. “Then you left, and I let you. No questions. No fight. Just… let you go.” Rory’s chest ached. “It wasn’t your job to save me.” “Wasn’t it?” Silas met her gaze, his hazel eyes sharp with something she hadn’t seen in years—guilt. “I recruited you, Rory. Pulled you into this world. Then I stood by while it ate you alive.” She swallowed. “You didn’t know.” “I *should’ve*.” The silence between them was thick, heavy with all the things they’d never said. Rory’s fingers traced the crescent scar on her wrist, the one Evan had given her the night she left. The night she’d finally realized she wasn’t the girl who took shit lying down anymore. “He’s not going to leave me alone, is he?” she said. Silas shook his head. “Not if he’s already looking for you.” Rory exhaled, long and slow. “Then I guess I’ll have to remind him why he should.” Silas studied her, his expression unreadable. “You’re not the same girl who walked out of that flat three years ago.” “No,” Rory said. “I’m not.” He nodded, once, like he’d just confirmed something he already knew. “Good.” Outside, the bar’s front door swung open, the murmur of voices spilling in. Rory straightened, her shoulders squaring. “I should go.” Silas caught her wrist before she could turn away. His grip was firm, but not tight. “You’re not alone in this.” Rory looked down at his hand, at the signet ring that had once meant safety, stability. “I know.” He let her go. She walked out of the back room, past the bookshelf, past the counter where Silas stood watching her. The neon sign buzzed overhead, casting everything in a sickly green glow. The door to the Raven’s Nest closed behind her with a finality that felt like the end of something. Or the beginning.
total_cost0.009076

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He looked away [away]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.048
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount842
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount842
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"the last thing"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"carried the weight"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"the last thing"
1"pulse"
2"carried the weight"
3"flicked"
4"silence"
5"traced"
6"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords11
totalWords838
ratio0.013
matches
0"Need to see you. Now."
1"clink"
2"hair"
3"safe"
4"pissed"
5"known"
6"should’ve"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount535
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.62
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Golden1
Empress1
Silas14
Rory14
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore0.192
windowScore0.167
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like he’d wandered in by mistake"
1"felt like the end of something"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount838
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean19.95
std17.19
cv0.862
sampleLengths
067
168
26
314
413
537
615
722
86
923
1012
1113
1228
132
1416
153
162
1712
1840
194
209
2141
2216
2312
2466
2510
2635
275
282
2948
3011
3111
3216
3320
345
3512
3621
3721
3818
394
4030
4122
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs97
matches(empty)
43.19% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences86
ratio0.035
matches
0"But Silas had texted—*Need to see you."
1"Now.*—and that was that."
2"“Wasn’t it?” Silas met her gaze, his hazel eyes sharp with something she hadn’t seen in years—guilt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount538
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02973977695167286
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0055762081784386614
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean9.74
std6.98
cv0.716
sampleLengths
015
120
221
37
44
515
623
716
814
96
107
117
129
134
1426
1511
167
178
185
1914
203
216
229
2310
244
2512
268
275
2813
2915
302
3110
326
333
342
353
369
379
3827
394
404
413
426
4314
4427
455
4611
472
4810
4913
55.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3372093023255814
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences48
matches
0"She’d just finished her shift"
1"She pushed through the heavy"
2"His signet ring glinted under"
3"He nodded toward the back"
4"She followed him past the"
5"He poured two fingers of"
6"She ignored it."
7"His eyes flicked to the"
8"His voice was rough"
9"He looked away, his throat"
10"He nodded, once, like he’d"
11"His grip was firm, but"
12"He let her go."
13"She walked out of the"
ratio0.292
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences48
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"Rory wiped her hands on"
2"She’d just finished her shift"
3"Now.*—and that was that."
4"She pushed through the heavy"
5"The bar was half-full, the"
6"Silas stood behind the counter,"
7"His signet ring glinted under"
8"Rory tossed her apron onto"
9"He nodded toward the back"
10"She followed him past the"
11"Silas shut the door behind"
12"Rory leaned against the table,"
13"Silas didn’t answer right away."
14"He poured two fingers of"
15"She ignored it."
16"The name hit like a"
17"Rory’s fingers twitched against her"
18"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
19"Silas’s voice was quiet, but"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The bar was half-full, the usual crowd of journalists, off-duty cops, and the occasional suit who looked like he’d wandered in by mistake."
1"Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen better days."
2"She followed him past the bookshelf that swung open with a creak, into the hidden room where the air smelled of aged whiskey and old secrets."
3"Rory looked down at his hand, at the signet ring that had once meant safety, stability."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.19
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.7691%