Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQSK732ZEKFA09VW7PEE12

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Duration:
33.3s
Cost:
$0.001043
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The doorbell rang with a sharp, persistent buzz. Rory's heart skipped a beat as she looked up from the research scattered across her kitchen table. She hadn't been expecting anyone. Eva was on a research trip to Wales, and the only other person who knew her address was— Footsteps heavy with hesitation, she crossed the small flat and pulled the door open. Standing there, his platinum blond hair slicked back and tailored charcoal suit immaculate, was Lucien Moreau. His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—sized her up with a mix of curiosity and something more. "Lucien," she said, her voice catching in her throat. "What are you doing here?" "Rory." He stepped forward, his presence filling the narrow hallway. "We have a problem." She stepped aside, letting him in. The air between them crackled with unspoken tension. Lucien moved with a grace that belied his half-demon heritage, his cane tapping rhythmically on the wooden floor. The flat, usually cluttered with books and research notes, felt suffocatingly small with him inside. "The situation in Avaros is escalating," he said, his voice smooth as silk. "I need your help to navigate the council." Rory crossed her arms, her eyes narrowing. "Why didn't you just call? This could have waited." "Could it?" Lucien's eyes glinted with a challenge. "Time is a luxury we no longer have." She sighed, running a hand through her straight, black hair. "Fine. What's the plan?" Lucien's gaze softened, but only slightly. "First, we need to gather more information. There's a meeting of the council in a few hours. I have a lead that could be crucial." Rory's curiosity piqued despite herself. "What kind of lead?" "A source close to the council," he replied. "But it's risky. We need to be careful." "Risky how?" She couldn't help but feel a sense of déjà vu. The last time they had worked together, it had ended in betrayal and heartache. "Risky as in, if we're caught, we could both end up in Avaros with no way out," Lucien said, his tone leaving no room for misinterpretation. Rory's eyes widened. "You're serious." "Deadly serious," he confirmed. "Are you in?" She hesitated, the weight of their past hanging heavily in the air. Lucien's presence, both magnetic and dangerous, made it hard to think straight. But she knew she couldn't back down. Not now, not when there was so much at stake. "Alright," she said, her resolve hardening. "But we do this my way." Lucien smiled, a rare, genuine smile that transformed his features. "Agreed." They moved swiftly, gathering the necessary tools and information. Rory grabbed a small, worn notebook from her desk, while Lucien checked his cane, making sure the blade was concealed and ready. The flat was a chaotic mess of books and papers, but they navigated it with practiced ease. "Where to first?" Rory asked, tucking the notebook into her jacket pocket. "The old warehouse on the Thames," Lucien replied. "It's where the council often meets in secret." Rory nodded, and they made their way to the door. As they stepped out onto the bustling street of Brick Lane, the city's usual noise and activity seemed to fade into the background. The only sound was the rhythmic tap of Lucien's cane and the thud of their footsteps. The air was heavy with the scent of curry from the restaurant below, mingling with the faint hint of rain. Rory glanced at Lucien, their past weighing on her mind. She couldn't afford to let her guard down, not with him. But the pull between them, a remnants of something unfinished, was undeniable. They walked in silence for a few moments before Lucien broke the quiet. "You've changed, Rory." She raised an eyebrow. "What do you mean?" "You're more... guarded," he said, his eyes locking onto hers. "More cautious." Rory smirked. "Maybe it's because the last time I trusted you, it didn't end well." Lucien's expression darkened, but he didn't back down. "I know. And I'm sorry for that. But we both know that wasn't the end of the story." She looked away, the memory of their last encounter still raw. "I don't have the luxury of forgiving and forgetting, Lucien." He nodded, understanding the depth of her anger. "I understand. But we need to put that aside for now. The council's plans are bigger than our past." Rory took a deep breath, steeling herself. "Fine. For now." They arrived at the warehouse, a dilapidated building that stood as a stark contrast to the modernity of the city. The Thames was a dark ribbon in the distance, its waters reflecting the city lights. Lucien led the way, his cane tapping softly on the concrete as they approached the rear entrance. "Stay close," he whispered, his voice low and urgent. "We can't afford to be seen." Rory nodded, her heart pounding in her chest. They slipped inside, the air inside the warehouse thick with dust and the faint scent of mildew. The building was dimly lit, shadows dancing along the walls. Lucien guided her through the maze of abandoned machinery and old crates, his senses heightened by his demonic heritage. They reached a narrow corridor that led to a hidden door. Lucien paused, his hand on the handle. "Ready?" Rory took a deep breath, her resolve solidifying. "Ready." He pushed the door open, and they stepped into a dimly lit room. The council was already assembled, their faces obscured by shadows. Lucien's eyes scanned the room, his mind working quickly to assess the situation. "Begin," a voice commanded, and the meeting started. Rory and Lucien hid in the shadows, listening intently as the council discussed their plans. The air was thick with tension, and every word seemed to carry the weight of impending disaster. Lucien's hand found Rory's, his grip steady and reassuring. She looked at him, her heart racing, and for a moment, all the complexities of their past seemed to fade away. They were in this together, whether they liked it or not. And as the council's plans unfolded, Rory knew that their fate was intricately woven with the threads of Avaros and the mortal world. The stakes were higher than ever, and the only way to survive was to face whatever came next, side by side.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.359
leniency0.718
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1045
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1045
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"skipped a beat"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"tension"
count2
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"navigate"
count1
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"resolve"
count2
10
word"chaotic"
count1
11
word"navigated"
count1
12
word"practiced ease"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"eyebrow"
count1
16
word"encounter"
count1
17
word"stark"
count1
18
word"pounding"
count1
19
word"dancing"
count1
20
word"scanned"
count1
21
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"skipped a beat"
1"footsteps"
2"unspoken"
3"tension"
4"silk"
5"navigate"
6"sense of"
7"weight"
8"magnetic"
9"resolve"
10"chaotic"
11"navigated"
12"practiced ease"
13"rhythmic"
14"silence"
15"eyebrow"
16"encounter"
17"stark"
18"pounding"
19"dancing"
20"scanned"
21"racing"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count2
2
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"The air was heavy with"
2"The air was thick with"
3"couldn't help but feel"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
84.15% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1042
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount814
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.33
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Wales1
Footsteps1
Lucien19
Moreau1
Rory15
Brick1
Lane1
Thames1
Avaros1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
places
0"Wales"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Thames"
globalScore0.333
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1042
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"knew that their"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean25.41
std16.62
cv0.654
sampleLengths
048
145
214
314
447
521
616
716
814
931
109
1116
1226
1326
145
157
1641
1712
1811
1948
2012
2116
2249
2353
2416
258
2612
2715
2826
2921
3027
3110
3252
3315
3454
3519
369
3736
388
3962
4055
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"was concealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences98
ratio0.02
matches
0"Eva was on a research trip to Wales, and the only other person who knew her address was—"
1"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—sized her up with a mix of curiosity and something more."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount817
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03182374541003672
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.019583843329253364
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean10.63
std5.84
cv0.549
sampleLengths
08
117
25
318
414
516
615
79
85
910
104
116
128
1318
1415
1513
168
177
189
198
208
2110
224
236
2425
255
264
278
288
2912
3014
3126
323
332
344
353
3612
3712
387
3910
406
416
4210
431
449
4522
4617
4712
488
498
59.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3673469387755102
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences69
matches
0"She hadn't been expecting anyone."
1"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—sized"
2"she said, her voice catching"
3"He stepped forward, his presence"
4"She stepped aside, letting him"
5"he said, his voice smooth"
6"She sighed, running a hand"
7"She couldn't help but feel"
8"She hesitated, the weight of"
9"she said, her resolve hardening"
10"They moved swiftly, gathering the"
11"She couldn't afford to let"
12"They walked in silence for"
13"She raised an eyebrow."
14"he said, his eyes locking"
15"She looked away, the memory"
16"He nodded, understanding the depth"
17"They arrived at the warehouse,"
18"he whispered, his voice low"
19"They slipped inside, the air"
ratio0.348
3.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences69
matches
0"The doorbell rang with a"
1"Rory's heart skipped a beat"
2"She hadn't been expecting anyone."
3"Eva was on a research"
4"Footsteps heavy with hesitation, she"
5"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—sized"
6"she said, her voice catching"
7"He stepped forward, his presence"
8"She stepped aside, letting him"
9"The air between them crackled"
10"Lucien moved with a grace"
11"The flat, usually cluttered with"
12"he said, his voice smooth"
13"Rory crossed her arms, her"
14"Lucien's eyes glinted with a"
15"She sighed, running a hand"
16"Lucien's gaze softened, but only"
17"Rory's curiosity piqued despite herself."
18"She couldn't help but feel"
19"The last time they had"
ratio0.913
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien moved with a grace that belied his half-demon heritage, his cane tapping rhythmically on the wooden floor."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she said, her voice catching in her throat"
1"He stepped, his presence filling the narrow hallway"
2"he said, his voice smooth as silk"
3"Lucien said, his tone leaving no room for misinterpretation"
4"she said, her resolve hardening"
5"he said, his eyes locking onto hers"
6"he whispered, his voice low and urgent"
7"a voice commanded, and the meeting started"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he confirmed (confirm)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.256
leniency0.513
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.103
74.3295%