| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.359 | | leniency | 0.718 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1045 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1045 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "skipped a beat" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "unspoken" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "navigate" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "magnetic" | | 9 | "resolve" | | 10 | "chaotic" | | 11 | "navigated" | | 12 | "practiced ease" | | 13 | "rhythmic" | | 14 | "silence" | | 15 | "eyebrow" | | 16 | "encounter" | | 17 | "stark" | | 18 | "pounding" | | 19 | "dancing" | | 20 | "scanned" | | 21 | "racing" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 2 |
| | 2 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "The air was heavy with" | | 2 | "The air was thick with" | | 3 | "couldn't help but feel" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.15% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1042 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.29% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 814 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.33 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Wales | 1 | | Footsteps | 1 | | Lucien | 19 | | Moreau | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Avaros | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Wales" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" | | 3 | "Thames" |
| | globalScore | 0.333 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1042 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 25.41 | | std | 16.62 | | cv | 0.654 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 52 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 54 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 62 | | 40 | 55 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.55% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva was on a research trip to Wales, and the only other person who knew her address was—" | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—sized her up with a mix of curiosity and something more." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 817 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.03182374541003672 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019583843329253364 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 10.63 | | std | 5.84 | | cv | 0.549 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 59.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3673469387755102 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 80.87% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't been expecting anyone." | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—sized" | | 2 | "she said, her voice catching" | | 3 | "He stepped forward, his presence" | | 4 | "She stepped aside, letting him" | | 5 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 6 | "She sighed, running a hand" | | 7 | "She couldn't help but feel" | | 8 | "She hesitated, the weight of" | | 9 | "she said, her resolve hardening" | | 10 | "They moved swiftly, gathering the" | | 11 | "She couldn't afford to let" | | 12 | "They walked in silence for" | | 13 | "She raised an eyebrow." | | 14 | "he said, his eyes locking" | | 15 | "She looked away, the memory" | | 16 | "He nodded, understanding the depth" | | 17 | "They arrived at the warehouse," | | 18 | "he whispered, his voice low" | | 19 | "They slipped inside, the air" |
| | ratio | 0.348 | |
| 3.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The doorbell rang with a" | | 1 | "Rory's heart skipped a beat" | | 2 | "She hadn't been expecting anyone." | | 3 | "Eva was on a research" | | 4 | "Footsteps heavy with hesitation, she" | | 5 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—sized" | | 6 | "she said, her voice catching" | | 7 | "He stepped forward, his presence" | | 8 | "She stepped aside, letting him" | | 9 | "The air between them crackled" | | 10 | "Lucien moved with a grace" | | 11 | "The flat, usually cluttered with" | | 12 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 13 | "Rory crossed her arms, her" | | 14 | "Lucien's eyes glinted with a" | | 15 | "She sighed, running a hand" | | 16 | "Lucien's gaze softened, but only" | | 17 | "Rory's curiosity piqued despite herself." | | 18 | "She couldn't help but feel" | | 19 | "The last time they had" |
| | ratio | 0.913 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien moved with a grace that belied his half-demon heritage, his cane tapping rhythmically on the wooden floor." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice catching in her throat" | | 1 | "He stepped, his presence filling the narrow hallway" | | 2 | "he said, his voice smooth as silk" | | 3 | "Lucien said, his tone leaving no room for misinterpretation" | | 4 | "she said, her resolve hardening" | | 5 | "he said, his eyes locking onto hers" | | 6 | "he whispered, his voice low and urgent" | | 7 | "a voice commanded, and the meeting started" |
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| 98.72% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he confirmed (confirm)" | | 1 | "he whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.256 | | leniency | 0.513 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |