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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's heart pounded as she swung open the door, her breath catching in her throat. Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic eyes piercing through her with an intensity that made her knees weak. The ivory-handled cane he always carried was gripped tightly in his hand, a silent testament to the tension between them. "Rory," he said, his voice smooth and low, like velvet brushing against her skin. She swallowed hard, trying to keep her composure. "Lucien. What are you doing here?" He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his presence filling the cramped flat. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, hissed and darted under the sofa. Lucien's gaze swept over the room, taking in the clutter of books and scrolls, the research notes scattered across every surface. "I need your help," he said, his tone brokering no argument. Aurora crossed her arms, leaning against the doorframe. "You have a lot of nerve showing up here after everything." Lucien's eyes softened, a flicker of regret passing through them. "I know. But this is important." She shook her head, the memories of their last encounter flooding back. The heated arguments, the betrayal, the undeniable attraction that had simmered beneath the surface. "You always say that." "This time, it's different." He took a step closer, the scent of his cologne mingling with the musty air of the flat. "There's a new player in the supernatural underworld. Someone dangerous. I need information, and you're the best researcher I know." Aurora's resolve wavered. She had always been drawn to Lucien, despite the pain he had caused her. His charm, his intelligence, the way he could make her feel like the only person in the room. But she couldn't forget the hurt, the way he had walked away without a second thought. "Why should I help you?" she asked, her voice trembling. Lucien's gaze locked onto hers, the amber and black of his eyes swirling with emotion. "Because you know I wouldn't be here if it wasn't serious. And because, despite everything, you still care." Aurora's heart ached at his words. She wanted to deny it, to tell him he was wrong. But the truth was, she did care. She had never stopped caring. "Fine," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "But this doesn't mean I've forgiven you." Lucien nodded, a small smile tugging at the corner of his lips. "I wouldn't expect anything less." He moved to the table, picking up one of the scrolls and examining it. "You've been busy." Aurora followed him, her curiosity piqued despite herself. "Eva's been researching a new spell. Something to do with protection." Lucien's eyes flickered with interest. "Protection from what?" Aurora hesitated, the weight of the secret pressing down on her. "From demons." Lucien's expression darkened. "Demons? What kind of demons?" "The kind that don't belong in this realm," she said, her voice steadying. "Eva thinks there's a breach somewhere. She's been trying to find it." Lucien's jaw tightened, his grip on the cane tightening. "That explains a lot." Aurora frowned. "What do you mean?" Lucien turned to face her, his eyes burning with intensity. "I've been tracking a series of disappearances. People vanishing without a trace. I thought it was just another gang war, but now... it makes sense. If there's a breach, demons could be slipping through, taking people." Aurora's blood ran cold. "How do we stop it?" Lucien's gaze softened, a rare vulnerability showing through. "That's what I need your help with. We need to find the breach and close it before more people disappear." Aurora nodded, the gravity of the situation sinking in. "Alright. Let's get to work." They spent the next few hours poring over Eva's notes, searching for any clue that might lead them to the breach. The tension between them eased as they focused on the task at hand, the familiarity of working together bringing a sense of comfort. As the night wore on, Aurora found herself stealing glances at Lucien, the way his platinum blond hair caught the light, the way his tailored suit fit him perfectly. She couldn't deny the attraction she still felt, the pull that had always been there. Lucien caught her looking and smiled, a hint of mischief in his eyes. "You know, I missed this. Working with you." Aurora's cheeks flushed, her heart skipping a beat. "Don't get used to it." Lucien chuckled, the sound warm and genuine. "I wouldn't dream of it." They continued their work, the hours slipping by unnoticed. It wasn't until the early hours of the morning that they finally found a lead. A map, hidden among Eva's notes, marked with a series of symbols that matched the ones Lucien had seen at the crime scenes. "This is it," Aurora said, her voice filled with excitement. "This is where the breach is." Lucien's eyes lit up with determination. "Then we need to go. Now." Aurora hesitated, the reality of what they were about to face sinking in. "Are you sure? It could be dangerous." Lucien's gaze softened, his hand reaching out to touch her arm. "I won't let anything happen to you. I promise." Aurora's heart ached at his touch, the memories of their past flooding back. She wanted to believe him, to trust him. But the hurt was still there, a constant reminder of what had been lost. "Alright," she said, her voice steady. "Let's go." They gathered their things, the urgency of the situation driving them forward. As they stepped out into the night, Aurora couldn't help but feel a sense of hope. Maybe, just maybe, this was their chance to make things right. But as they approached the location marked on the map, the air grew thick with tension. The shadows seemed to move, whispering secrets that sent chills down Aurora's spine. Lucien's grip on his cane tightened, his eyes scanning the darkness. "Stay close." Aurora nodded, her heart pounding in her chest. They moved forward, the silence of the night broken only by the sound of their footsteps. Suddenly, a figure emerged from the shadows, its eyes glowing with an unnatural light. Aurora's breath caught in her throat, her hand reaching for the knife she kept hidden in her boot. Lucien stepped forward, his cane held at the ready. "Who are you?" The figure laughed, the sound chilling and hollow. "You think you can stop me? Foolish humans." Aurora's grip on her knife tightened, her mind racing. This was it. The moment they had been preparing for. Lucien's eyes burned with determination, his voice steady. "We will stop you. And we will close the breach." The figure lunged, its movements swift and deadly. Aurora's heart raced as she dodged, her knife slicing through the air. Lucien moved with precision, his cane striking with deadly accuracy. The battle was fierce, the air filled with the sound of clashing metal and snarls. Aurora's mind focused on the task at hand, her movements fluid and instinctive. But as the figure fell, its body dissolving into shadows, Aurora couldn't help but feel a sense of triumph. They had done it. They had won. Lucien's eyes met hers, a smile tugging at the corner of his lips. "You were amazing." Aurora's cheeks flushed, her heart swelling with pride. "We did it together." Lucien's gaze softened, his hand reaching out to touch her cheek. "I never stopped caring about you, Rory. I know I hurt you, but I want to make things right." Aurora's heart ached at his words, the memories of their past flooding back. She wanted to believe him, to trust him. But the hurt was still there, a constant reminder of what had been lost. "Maybe," she said, her voice trembling. "Maybe we can try again." Lucien's eyes lit up with hope, his hand gently cupping her cheek. "I'd like that." As they stood there, the darkness of the night surrounding them, Aurora couldn't help but feel a sense of hope. Maybe, just maybe, this was their chance to make things right.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.391
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"perfectly"
3"suddenly"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"intensity"
count2
1
word"testament"
count1
2
word"tension"
count3
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"encounter"
count1
6
word"resolve"
count1
7
word"wavered"
count1
8
word"charm"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count4
13
word"reminder"
count2
14
word"scanning"
count1
15
word"pounding"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"footsteps"
count1
18
word"chilling"
count1
19
word"racing"
count1
20
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"testament"
2"tension"
3"velvet"
4"flicker"
5"encounter"
6"resolve"
7"wavered"
8"charm"
9"whisper"
10"flickered"
11"weight"
12"sense of"
13"reminder"
14"scanning"
15"pounding"
16"silence"
17"footsteps"
18"chilling"
19"racing"
20"raced"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"without second thought"
count1
2
label"couldn't help but"
count3
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"without a second thought"
2"couldn't help but feel"
41.67% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells9
narrationSentences90
matches
0"a flicker of regret"
1"filled with excitement"
2"d with excitement"
3"p with determination"
4"a sense of hope"
5"d with determination"
6"g with pride"
7"p with hope"
8"a sense of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1333
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
26.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1013
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity2.47
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Aurora25
Lucien24
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.266
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1333
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean22.98
std12.28
cv0.534
sampleLengths
052
114
214
345
411
519
616
730
842
951
1010
1133
1229
1316
1417
1517
1619
178
1813
198
2025
2113
226
2346
249
2528
2614
2744
2844
2921
3013
3112
3247
3316
3412
3520
3620
3735
388
3939
4029
4113
4224
4332
4412
4516
4619
4718
4830
4928
89.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences90
matches
0"was gripped"
1"been drawn"
2"been lost"
3"been lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1014
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.020710059171597635
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010848126232741617
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean10.5
std5.89
cv0.561
sampleLengths
015
117
220
314
48
56
614
710
821
911
108
1111
1210
136
1412
1514
164
1722
1820
193
2014
2118
2216
2310
2415
2518
266
2711
287
295
309
317
3212
335
3414
353
368
3711
385
393
4011
412
423
435
4413
4512
469
474
482
494
47.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.29133858267716534
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"Maybe, just maybe, this was"
1"Suddenly, a figure emerged from"
2"Maybe, just maybe, this was"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences89
matches
0"he said, his voice smooth"
1"She swallowed hard, trying to"
2"He stepped inside without waiting"
3"he said, his tone brokering"
4"She shook her head, the"
5"He took a step closer,"
6"She had always been drawn"
7"His charm, his intelligence, the"
8"she asked, her voice trembling"
9"She wanted to deny it,"
10"She had never stopped caring."
11"she said, her voice barely"
12"He moved to the table,"
13"she said, her voice steadying"
14"They spent the next few"
15"She couldn't deny the attraction"
16"They continued their work, the"
17"It wasn't until the early"
18"She wanted to believe him,"
19"she said, her voice steady"
ratio0.292
27.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences89
matches
0"Aurora's heart pounded as she"
1"Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic"
2"The ivory-handled cane he always"
3"he said, his voice smooth"
4"She swallowed hard, trying to"
5"He stepped inside without waiting"
6"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, hissed"
7"Lucien's gaze swept over the"
8"he said, his tone brokering"
9"Aurora crossed her arms, leaning"
10"Lucien's eyes softened, a flicker"
11"She shook her head, the"
12"The heated arguments, the betrayal,"
13"He took a step closer,"
14"Aurora's resolve wavered."
15"She had always been drawn"
16"His charm, his intelligence, the"
17"she asked, her voice trembling"
18"Lucien's gaze locked onto hers,"
19"Aurora's heart ached at his"
ratio0.865
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic eyes piercing through her with an intensity that made her knees weak."
1"He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his presence filling the cramped flat."
2"The heated arguments, the betrayal, the undeniable attraction that had simmered beneath the surface."
3"They spent the next few hours poring over Eva's notes, searching for any clue that might lead them to the breach."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he said, his tone brokering no argument"
1"she asked, her voice trembling"
2"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"she said, her voice steadying"
4"she said, her voice steady"
5"she said, her voice trembling"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.6656%