Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQSNAT2CDB8ARHSCB0B1VC

Run Details

Model:
o4 Mini
Duration:
22.3s
Cost:
$0.015682
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora crouched behind the nearest oak standing stone, fingertips pressed to its rough bark. The pendant at her throat throbbed against her sternum, a faint inner glow like a heartbeat in the gloom. She swallowed, then edged forward, each footfall muffled by thick moss and a carpet of wildflowers blooming out of season. She had come seeking answers. A whisper in Silas’s bar had pointed here, to this hidden clearing between Richmond Park’s ancient pines. The hour she’d spent pedalling her bicycle through dark paths now felt foolish. The grove seemed older than time itself, as though it had waited for her. A low rustle grazed her eardrum. Aurora froze, back pressed to the stone’s cool surface. Shadows flickered between the trunks. She dared not breathe; air felt precious, each lungful a gift. The pendant pulsed warmer, its silver chain soft against her shirt. She’d felt that warmth only once before, when she’d brushed close to a Hel portal on a brief errand for Yu-Fei Cheung. Now the sensation grew urgent. She stepped into a narrow path between the stones. A single wildflower brushed her calf, its violet petals sticky with dew. The air tasted of damp earth and something sweeter, metallic. Aurora’s pulse raced as she advanced farther from the boundary. Time felt unsteady. Her mind ticked off seconds, but her watch lay useless in her pocket. Ahead, moonlight pooled in a clearing. The oaks arched overhead, their gnarled branches woven like bone. The standing stones formed a crude circle, points pointing inward. Inside, the wildflowers formed a ring of tangled colour. They leaned toward the centre. Aurora paused at the circle’s rim, hand tightening on the pendant. Just a thumbnail-sized piece of Dymas silver and ruby, yet it held her fate. A soft snap echoed behind her. She whirled. Moonlight glinted on something pale—fingers? For a heartbeat she saw a hand slide behind a tree. She blinked, and the bark stood wood-still. Aurora swallowed past dryness. She pinched the pendant between forefinger and thumb. It pulsed faster, each beat a warning. “Hello?” Her voice pierced the quiet. It sounded flat, swallowed by the woods. No answer came, only the far-off call of an owl—or was it a child’s laugh? She couldn’t be sure. The laughter warped as it echoed, a long soft winding note that died before it touched her eardrils. She shook her head, uncertain, and turned back to the circle. The wildflowers trembled. A breeze? There was no wind. Aurora stepped closer, boots sinking slightly into moss, and swept her gaze over the stones. Ancient carvings marred the surface: spirals choked by ivy, symbols half-worn by rain. One stone bore a deep gouge in the shape of a crescent moon—the same curve as her scar. Her palm itched. The silence pressed in. Aurora knelt and pressed her palm to the earth. Damp soil clung between her fingers. Her breath came too quickly. She stood and backed away. That’s when she noticed the footprints: four prints encircled the ring, crossing over each other. They were size seven, like hers, but deeper. Someone—or something—had walked this path again and again. Ever so carefully. She circled the stones, scanning for an exit path. Behind her, something shifted. She spun toward the sound. A patch of ground caved inward, like a slow breath. A black hole yawned where soil and moss had slumped away. Aurora stepped back and caught herself against a tree. Her heart hammered. The pendant against her chest felt scalding. A whisper drifted through the trees. It coiled around her ankles, tugged at her hair. She crouched, trying to pinpoint its source. Three words, soft as silk, pressed against her mind: “Stay with me.” The oak trunks stretched upward, their branches curling like fingers. She stood and backed away, head swivelling. Her boot caught a root. She pitched forward, hands scraping the earth. The pendant swung free, glinting moonlight as it hit the moss. Aurora lunged, scooping it up before it slipped into shadow. The instant she touched the chain, a shock of warmth flooded her arm, spread through her chest, and she saw movement at the corner of her eye. A figure knelt on the far side of the circle. Thin limbs, white face framing wide black eyes. It looked too small to be fully human. It tilted its head, studying her, twisting its neck in a smooth, fluid arc. Aurora bit back a scream. “You shouldn’t be here,” it said. Voice thin, echoing as though spoken from underwater. She backed away. “Who—what are you?” It rose, limbs elongating. Its head brushed the branches. Moonlight reflected off pale skin, wet like fish scales. A smile cracked its face, revealing teeth too sharp to belong to any creature she knew. “I am home.” Aurora’s breath hitched. She gripped the pendant, pressing it to the creature’s chest. The ruby flared, a spark of light that turned the creature’s smile into a snarl. It reeled back, and the stones trembled. A chorus of whispers rose around them. Aurora pressed her palms to her ears. Wildflowers bent inward, twisting, closing like petals at dusk. The creature lurched forward, long fingers reaching. A foot slipped into the sunken hole she’d nearly fallen into. It teetered at the edge. Dust and leaves slid, stones tumbled. Aurora threw herself at a standing stone, shoving with all her weight until it overturned. It clattered across the moss with deafening impact. The creature screeched, a sound that twisted her lungs, and vanished into the darkness beyond the circle. Silence returned, hollow and ringing. Aurora stayed pressed against the upturned stone, chest heaving. The pendant in her hand pulsed slower now, a gentle glow. She turned it over, searching for guidance. Instead she felt only heat, like a living thing. She slipped it around her neck and ran toward the grove’s edge. But the path behind her stretched farther with every step. Trees loomed closer, trunks knotting into faces that watched. Her bootheel caught root again. She tumbled forward, scrabbling for purchase. The pendant slipped into her handbag as she hit the ground. A soft chuckle broke the hush. Aurora froze. It came from all directions, rippling through the oaks. She sat back on her heels, eyes darting. Her oxygen tank hissed empty in her skull. “Don’t leave me.” The voice came from the stump at her side. A cracked stump carved with runes. They glowed faintly. Aurora crawled away, knocking a branch that snapped sharply. The runes pulsed brighter. Leaves rustled, and the stump exhaled. Its centre gaped like a mouth. She scrambled to her feet, heart thundering. The circle loomed behind her. The standing stones shifted subtly, as though leaning inward. Aurora realised one had moved closer. Her escape route disappeared. Roots rose, snaking around her ankles. She yanked at her bag, found the pendant. Held it out before her like a torch. The ruby glowed hard, casting red shadows. Roots recoiled, leaves snapped. The stones shuddered. A low moan filled the air. Aurora took a breath, stepped backward. Then the ground shook. From the centre of the ring came a pulse of sound, like a great sigh. The flimsy barrier of roots fractured. The pendant throbbed violently. She felt it tug at her skin, as though urging her forward. She stared into the ring’s heart. Something unfurled there, a shape darker than night. Tendrils of shadow spilled outward. The ground cracked. The wildflowers bent into shapes like claws. Aurora raised the pendant overhead. The shadows lunged. Aurora screamed as darkness swallowed the circle. The last thing she saw was the pendant’s ruby flash, a drop of blood blazing in the black. Then cold, and a hollow silence that settled like dust.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1298
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
2"carefully"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1298
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"throbbed"
count2
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"footfall"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count4
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count2
10
word"trembled"
count2
11
word"silence"
count3
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
14
word"glinting"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count1
16
word"lurched"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"loomed"
count2
19
word"fractured"
count1
20
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"gloom"
2"footfall"
3"whisper"
4"flickered"
5"pulsed"
6"warmth"
7"pulse"
8"raced"
9"echoed"
10"trembled"
11"silence"
12"scanning"
13"silk"
14"glinting"
15"echoing"
16"lurched"
17"weight"
18"loomed"
19"fractured"
20"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences152
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1288
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1271
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Silas1
Richmond1
Park1
Hel1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Dymas1
Voice1
Aurora20
persons
0"Silas"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Cheung"
3"Voice"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
globalScore0.713
windowScore0.833
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed older than time itself, as though it had waited for her"
1"as though leaning inward"
2"as though urging her forward"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1288
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences154
matches
0"felt that warmth"
73.53% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean42.93
std17.49
cv0.407
sampleLengths
053
149
269
357
465
550
661
758
863
958
1051
1160
1245
1314
146
1534
163
1735
1852
1940
2053
2141
2233
2346
2437
2536
2647
2734
283
2935
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs241
matches(empty)
50.09% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences154
ratio0.032
matches
0"She dared not breathe; air felt precious, each lungful a gift."
1"Moonlight glinted on something pale—fingers?"
2"No answer came, only the far-off call of an owl—or was it a child’s laugh?"
3"One stone bore a deep gouge in the shape of a crescent moon—the same curve as her scar."
4"Someone—or something—had walked this path again and again."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1281
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03200624512099922
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.00936768149882904
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean8.36
std4.49
cv0.536
sampleLengths
014
119
220
35
417
513
614
76
89
95
1011
1111
1222
135
149
1512
1610
1710
183
1913
206
2110
2210
239
245
2511
2614
276
282
295
3011
317
324
338
347
356
367
3715
384
3918
4011
413
422
434
4415
4513
4618
473
484
499
44.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2987012987012987
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences148
matches
0"Just a thumbnail-sized piece of"
1"Ever so carefully."
2"Instead she felt only heat,"
3"Then the ground shook."
4"Then cold, and a hollow"
ratio0.034
87.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences148
matches
0"She swallowed, then edged forward,"
1"She had come seeking answers."
2"She dared not breathe; air"
3"She’d felt that warmth only"
4"She stepped into a narrow"
5"Her mind ticked off seconds,"
6"They leaned toward the centre."
7"She blinked, and the bark"
8"She pinched the pendant between"
9"It pulsed faster, each beat"
10"Her voice pierced the quiet"
11"It sounded flat, swallowed by"
12"She couldn’t be sure."
13"She shook her head, uncertain,"
14"Her palm itched."
15"Her breath came too quickly."
16"She stood and backed away."
17"They were size seven, like"
18"She circled the stones, scanning"
19"She spun toward the sound."
ratio0.331
34.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount126
totalSentences148
matches
0"Aurora crouched behind the nearest"
1"The pendant at her throat"
2"She swallowed, then edged forward,"
3"She had come seeking answers."
4"A whisper in Silas’s bar"
5"The hour she’d spent pedalling"
6"The grove seemed older than"
7"A low rustle grazed her"
8"Aurora froze, back pressed to"
9"Shadows flickered between the trunks."
10"She dared not breathe; air"
11"The pendant pulsed warmer, its"
12"She’d felt that warmth only"
13"She stepped into a narrow"
14"A single wildflower brushed her"
15"The air tasted of damp"
16"Aurora’s pulse raced as she"
17"Time felt unsteady."
18"Her mind ticked off seconds,"
19"The oaks arched overhead, their"
ratio0.851
33.78% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"Now the sensation grew urgent."
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She felt it tug at her skin, as though urging her forward."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"silk pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.333
81.9974%