| 48.48% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 33 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she replied curtly [curtly]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "Silas shifted again [again]" | | 3 | "Silas said softly [softly]" | | 4 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.152 | | effectiveRatio | 0.152 | |
| 79.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1215 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1215 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "tinged" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "facade" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "racing" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "unspoken" | | 14 | "amidst" | | 15 | "etched" | | 16 | "pounding" | | 17 | "unwavering" | | 18 | "pulse" | | 19 | "raced" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "the weight of his words" | | 2 | "hung in the air" | | 3 | "a flicker of recognition" |
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| 86.54% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "d with surprise" | | 1 | "g with relief" | | 2 | "The thrill of nostalgia" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1214 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 804 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.87 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Aurora | 6 | | Silas | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Silas" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if tracking time's reckless hand" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1214 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 24.28 | | std | 12.26 | | cv | 0.505 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 37 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 99.87% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 805 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.031055900621118012 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016149068322981366 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 13.2 | | std | 6.29 | | cv | 0.476 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 84.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5217391304347826 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 52.08% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 7.50% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned, reconciling the sound" | | 1 | "She hadn’t expected to see" | | 2 | "He caught her gaze, and" | | 3 | "he called, his voice steady" | | 4 | "she replied, trying to suppress" | | 5 | "He watched her, the amusement" | | 6 | "His gaze dropped to the" | | 7 | "she replied curtly, tucking her" | | 8 | "He nodded, rubbing his thumb" | | 9 | "She gestured to the bar," | | 10 | "he said quietly" | | 11 | "she snapped, eyes narrowing" | | 12 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 13 | "He let out a breath," | | 14 | "She glanced away, not wanting" | | 15 | "he mused, half-smirking" | | 16 | "He leaned forward, earnestness breaking" | | 17 | "she stated, a sigh escaping" | | 18 | "he suggested, an odd glimmer" | | 19 | "She scoffed, a sharp laugh" |
| | ratio | 0.531 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest hummed with" | | 1 | "The air, thick with the" | | 2 | "A single flickering neon sign" | | 3 | "Aurora Carter leaned against the" | | 4 | "She turned, reconciling the sound" | | 5 | "Silas Blackwood stood at the" | | 6 | "The subtle limp in his" | | 7 | "She hadn’t expected to see" | | 8 | "He caught her gaze, and" | | 9 | "A slow smile crept across" | | 10 | "he called, his voice steady" | | 11 | "The din of the bar" | | 12 | "she replied, trying to suppress" | | 13 | "He watched her, the amusement" | | 14 | "Aurora smirked, lifting her chin" | | 15 | "His gaze dropped to the" | | 16 | "she replied curtly, tucking her" | | 17 | "He nodded, rubbing his thumb" | | 18 | "She gestured to the bar," | | 19 | "Silas studied her, the memories" |
| | ratio | 0.953 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 33 | | uselessAdditionCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "she replied, trying to suppress the excited tremor weaving into her tone" | | 1 | "She gestured, her smile faltering" | | 2 | "The name lingered, a bitter taste pressing against her tongue" | | 3 | "she snapped, eyes narrowing" | | 4 | "Silas offered, a blend of sympathy and frustration" | | 5 | "She crossed, the warmth evaporating" | | 6 | "He leaned, earnestness breaking through the contemplation" | | 7 | "she stated, a sigh escaping her lips" | | 8 | "She scoffed, a sharp laugh escaping her" | | 9 | "he agreed, his voice a low murmur," | | 10 | "he chuckled, his eyes brightening with the memory" | | 11 | "he shot back, the ghost of his past self flickering in his eyes" | | 12 | "she said finally, a breath trembling out with uncertainty" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 1 | "she stated (state)" | | 2 | "he suggested (suggest)" | | 3 | "he agreed (agree)" | | 4 | "he chuckled (chuckle)" | | 5 | "she teased (tease)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.233 | | leniency | 0.467 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |