Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQSQHW0PXNC35JHWZYPX60

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Duration:
35.5s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with low conversation and the clinking of glasses. The air, thick with the scent of aged whiskey and wood polish, absorbed the laughter and whispers that bounced between the antiquated maps hanging crookedly on the walls. A single flickering neon sign bathed the bar’s entrance in a vibrant green glow, beckoning lost souls to seek shelter inside. Aurora Carter leaned against the polished oak counter, a delivered order clasped in her grip, her bright blue eyes scanning the faces of the patrons. Over the clatter of dishes and the soft murmur of dialogue, a familiar laugh echoed through the dim light. She turned, reconciling the sound with the ghost of her past. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood stood at the far end of the bar, his auburn hair threaded with strands of grey, a marked difference from the man she'd once known. The subtle limp in his gait registered in Aurora's mind, a reminder of life’s unforgiving nature. She hadn’t expected to see him here, a ghost from her earlier days lingering in the distance while she wrestled with the present. He caught her gaze, and a flicker of recognition sparked in his hazel eyes. A slow smile crept across his face, tinged with surprise and a hint of nostalgia. “Rory,” he called, his voice steady but edged with a roughness that revealed the years. The din of the bar faded momentarily as she stepped closer, uncertainty battling with relief in her chest. “Si,” she replied, trying to suppress the excited tremor weaving into her tone. “It’s been what, three years?” “More, I think.” He watched her, the amusement lingering in his eyes, yet a shadow passed over his features. “You look… different.” Aurora smirked, lifting her chin defiantly. “Different good or different bad?” “A mix, perhaps.” His gaze dropped to the scar on her wrist as if tracking time's reckless hand. “You’ve had some events in between.” “Life,” she replied curtly, tucking her hair behind her ear. “You’ve got some changes too.” He nodded, rubbing his thumb over the silver signet ring on his right hand. “I’ve traded one life for another, I suppose. How’s delivery treating you?” “Challenging. At least it keeps things interesting. Not quite the courtroom drama I thought I’d end up in.” She gestured to the bar, her smile faltering. “At least it’s better than being stuck back in Cardiff.” Silas studied her, the memories of old conversations and shared dreams hanging heavily between them. “You shouldn't have had to run away,” he said quietly. “It wasn’t just about running.” The tension from her words twisted in the air. “Evan…” The name lingered, a bitter taste pressing against her tongue. Silas shifted, nodding slowly. “I learned about him. Got some... vague whispers through the network. It’s a shame. You deserved better.” “Nobody deserves what that man handed me,” she snapped, eyes narrowing. “I came here to put that behind me.” “Good.” Silas offered her a softened expression, a blend of sympathy and frustration. “But you can’t just pretend it didn’t happen. You’re strong, Rory, but strength isn’t just jumping forward. Sometimes it’s about looking back.” “Thanks, but no thanks.” She crossed her arms, the warmth evaporating. “I didn’t expect a therapy session.” He let out a breath, the weight of their shared past hanging thick. “It’s not about that. It’s just… you’ve changed, and not just the surface level. I see it in your eyes.” The remark surprised her. She glanced away, not wanting to reveal too much of the storm brewing beneath her calm facade. “It’s called adulting.” “Adulting,” he mused, half-smirking. “Sounds exhausting.” “Exhausting doesn’t cover it.” Aurora shifted her weight, her gaze drifting to the bar’s wooden shelves lined with aged bottles. “But I’m making it work. I have a plan. I’ll be gone from this soon.” “Where will you go?” He leaned forward, earnestness breaking through the contemplation. “The world is bigger than Cardiff or London, but… and I don’t mean to pry, what’s the endgame?” “Freedom,” she stated, a sigh escaping her lips. “Something I thought I’d have before all of this.” “Is it only about freedom?” Silas shifted again, watching her with an intensity that unnerved her. “Or is there more?” “My heart doesn’t really belong to this world anymore.” The words tumbled out, unwarranted and raw. “Maybe you’ve just become disconnected,” he suggested, an odd glimmer in his eyes. “Or lost track of who you are.” “Who I am?” She scoffed, a sharp laugh escaping her. “Does that even matter? People change, Si. We don’t stay the same.” “True,” he agreed, his voice a low murmur, “but not all changes are for the better.” The honesty stung, and Aurora turned away, her heart racing. She spotted a group in the corner, raucous laughter erupting while clinking glasses cheered their peculiar exploits. “We used to sit in places like this,” she said, forcing a smile, creating a bridge across the tension. “Laughing about stupid things.” “Yeah, like that one time we tried to start a band,” he chuckled, his eyes brightening with the memory. “Let’s not bring that up.” She shook her head, laughing lightly to mask the underlying strain. “Right, the worst idea ever. We couldn’t even hold a note between us,” he smirked. The fondness spilled out, but it passed, slipping back into an awkward silence. The thrill of nostalgia faded, rushing into the complexities of what remained unsaid. “You’re still the same Rory,” Silas said softly, the corner of his mouth twitching with a smile that held a hint of sadness. “Just a more… guarded version.” “And you’re still sticking your nose into everyone’s business,” she teased, fighting feelings that threatened to surface. Her mind rebelled against the thought that she’d let herself get caught in this moment. “Old habits,” he shot back, the ghost of his past self flickering in his eyes. “I still care about the few people I let in.” “Do you?” The question hung in the air, challenging the unspoken truths that shaped their lives apart. “Yeah,” he answered, his voice a steady anchor amidst the storm swirling in the room. “I do. And I’m still here, Rory. You can let people in without it becoming a burden.” Her breath hitched. “It’s not that simple, Si.” Silas leaned on the bar, an earnest expression etched into his features. “Sometimes it’s just about being open. You might be surprised what connections can provide.” “And what if they drag me back?” she countered, her defenses rising again, her heart pounding with memories of what she left behind. “Either way, you can face it.” He met her stare directly, unwavering. “Or run again.” The air thickened, the laughter around them fading into background noise. She sensed the weight of his words, felt the familiar pulse of their shared understanding crashing against the walls erected over years of silence and regret. Aurora’s heart raced, the barriers crumbling slowly with each second spent in his presence. The past lingered, but perhaps she could handle it here, even if only for a moment. “Maybe,” she said finally, a breath trembling out with uncertainty. And just like that, the burden of their shared silence hovered, unspoken but felt, between lifelong friends forced to confront who they had become.
total_cost0.00113205

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
48.48% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags33
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"she replied curtly [curtly]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"Silas shifted again [again]"
3"Silas said softly [softly]"
4"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0.152
effectiveRatio0.152
79.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1215
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"lightly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1215
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"tinged"
count1
6
word"tension"
count2
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"facade"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"silence"
count3
13
word"unspoken"
count2
14
word"amidst"
count1
15
word"etched"
count1
16
word"pounding"
count1
17
word"unwavering"
count1
18
word"pulse"
count1
19
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"familiar"
2"echoed"
3"reminder"
4"flicker"
5"tinged"
6"tension"
7"warmth"
8"weight"
9"facade"
10"intensity"
11"racing"
12"silence"
13"unspoken"
14"amidst"
15"etched"
16"pounding"
17"unwavering"
18"pulse"
19"raced"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"the weight of his words"
2"hung in the air"
3"a flicker of recognition"
86.54% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences65
matches
0"d with surprise"
1"g with relief"
2"The thrill of nostalgia"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1214
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount804
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Aurora6
Silas7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Aurora"
5"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if tracking time's reckless hand"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1214
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"like that, the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean24.28
std12.26
cv0.505
sampleLengths
061
155
24
366
429
515
636
722
811
924
1015
1126
1236
1315
1410
1525
1621
1719
1835
1917
2033
2124
226
2335
2430
2517
2620
2716
2820
2922
3016
3127
3223
3319
3416
3515
3626
3728
3832
3925
4017
4132
428
4326
4423
4515
4637
4730
4810
4924
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"get caught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences92
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount805
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.031055900621118012
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.016149068322981366
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean13.2
std6.29
cv0.476
sampleLengths
012
128
221
325
419
511
64
727
816
923
1014
1115
1215
1318
1413
155
1619
173
186
195
2018
216
2210
235
2414
2512
2626
2710
2815
2910
3014
3111
324
3317
3411
358
3613
3722
3811
396
4013
4120
424
4317
443
454
462
4720
4815
4912
84.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5217391304347826
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners48
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then she saw him."
ratio0.016
7.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences64
matches
0"She turned, reconciling the sound"
1"She hadn’t expected to see"
2"He caught her gaze, and"
3"he called, his voice steady"
4"she replied, trying to suppress"
5"He watched her, the amusement"
6"His gaze dropped to the"
7"she replied curtly, tucking her"
8"He nodded, rubbing his thumb"
9"She gestured to the bar,"
10"he said quietly"
11"she snapped, eyes narrowing"
12"She crossed her arms, the"
13"He let out a breath,"
14"She glanced away, not wanting"
15"he mused, half-smirking"
16"He leaned forward, earnestness breaking"
17"she stated, a sigh escaping"
18"he suggested, an odd glimmer"
19"She scoffed, a sharp laugh"
ratio0.531
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences64
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"The air, thick with the"
2"A single flickering neon sign"
3"Aurora Carter leaned against the"
4"She turned, reconciling the sound"
5"Silas Blackwood stood at the"
6"The subtle limp in his"
7"She hadn’t expected to see"
8"He caught her gaze, and"
9"A slow smile crept across"
10"he called, his voice steady"
11"The din of the bar"
12"she replied, trying to suppress"
13"He watched her, the amusement"
14"Aurora smirked, lifting her chin"
15"His gaze dropped to the"
16"she replied curtly, tucking her"
17"He nodded, rubbing his thumb"
18"She gestured to the bar,"
19"Silas studied her, the memories"
ratio0.953
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags33
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"she replied, trying to suppress the excited tremor weaving into her tone"
1"She gestured, her smile faltering"
2"The name lingered, a bitter taste pressing against her tongue"
3"she snapped, eyes narrowing"
4"Silas offered, a blend of sympathy and frustration"
5"She crossed, the warmth evaporating"
6"He leaned, earnestness breaking through the contemplation"
7"she stated, a sigh escaping her lips"
8"She scoffed, a sharp laugh escaping her"
9"he agreed, his voice a low murmur,"
10"he chuckled, his eyes brightening with the memory"
11"he shot back, the ghost of his past self flickering in his eyes"
12"she said finally, a breath trembling out with uncertainty"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"she stated (state)"
2"he suggested (suggest)"
3"he agreed (agree)"
4"he chuckled (chuckle)"
5"she teased (tease)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.467
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.2
74.7337%