| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 79.31% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 725 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 725 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "otherworldly" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "racing" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "palpable" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "encounter" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 12 | | narrationSentences | 48 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 725 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 715 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.82 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 7 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.591 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 33.72% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "aroma that seemed to thicken the silence" | | 1 | "seemed rooted to the spot" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 725 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.22% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | |
| 60.04% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 42.65 | | std | 15.36 | | cv | 0.36 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 67 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 44 |
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| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | |
| 95.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "was racing" | | 1 | "was calling" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 715 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.026573426573426574 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011188811188811189 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 48 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 48 | | mean | 15.1 | | std | 6.24 | | cv | 0.413 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 21 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.2708333333333333 | | totalSentences | 48 | | uniqueOpeners | 13 | |
| 70.92% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the crickets stopped chirping." |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "She had been here before," | | 1 | "She had come to the" | | 2 | "She spun around, her eyes" | | 3 | "She had always known the" | | 4 | "She took a deep breath" | | 5 | "she said aloud, her voice" | | 6 | "She stopped, her foot hovering" | | 7 | "She knew she was not" | | 8 | "She took a step back," | | 9 | "She was frozen, unable to" | | 10 | "She knew she had to" | | 11 | "She knew she had to" |
| | ratio | 0.255 | |
| 23.83% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped out of" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "She had been here before," | | 3 | "The air was heavy with" | | 4 | "Rory shivered, despite the warmth" | | 5 | "She had come to the" | | 6 | "The Heartstone Pendant, a gift" | | 7 | "The sound of crickets and" | | 8 | "She spun around, her eyes" | | 9 | "The trees stood silent and" | | 10 | "Rory's skin prickled with gooseflesh." | | 11 | "She had always known the" | | 12 | "a low, husky voice whispered" | | 13 | "Rory's heart leapt as she" | | 14 | "The voice seemed to come" | | 15 | "She took a deep breath" | | 16 | "she said aloud, her voice" | | 17 | "The silence seemed to thicken," | | 18 | "Rory took a step forward," | | 19 | "She stopped, her foot hovering" |
| | ratio | 0.872 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was heavy with the scent of blooming wildflowers, a sweet, heady aroma that seemed to thicken the silence." | | 1 | "The sound of crickets and rustling small animals filled the air, but beneath it, Rory sensed a discordant note, a vibration that didn't belong." | | 2 | "Rory took a step forward, her eyes scanning the trees, but they seemed to loom closer, their branches reaching out like skeletal fingers." | | 3 | "The trees seemed to be shifting, their branches moving in ways that defied the laws of nature." | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed more rapidly against her chest, as if it sensed her fear." | | 5 | "She took a step back, her eyes fixed on the trees, but they seemed to be closing in around her, their branches tangling together to form a cage." | | 6 | "Rory was left standing alone in the clearing, her heart still racing, her senses reeling from the encounter." | | 7 | "The pendant pulsed with an otherworldly energy, as if it was calling to her, drawing her deeper into the heart of the Grove." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said aloud, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "husky voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |