Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQSS4QRQ36R4NNCN10Z2SW

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Duration:
41.2s
Cost:
$0.001092

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dimly lit chamber of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, the air thick with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic. Her sharp jaw tightened as she surveyed the scene. Flickering fluorescent lights cast eerie shadows across the walls, illuminating the remnants of what had once been a bustling transit hub. Now, it lay in ruins, a forgotten relic of the city’s past. “Over here, Quinn,” called a voice from the far end of the platform. It was DS Mark Thompson, his brow furrowed as he crouched beside a body sprawled on the ground. Quinn approached, her worn leather watch creaking softly against her wrist. The victim lay face down, a young man in his twenties, dressed in a tattered leather jacket. Blood pooled around him, glistening darkly in the flickering light. Quinn knelt beside the body, her eyes narrowing as she took in the details. “Looks like a mugging gone wrong,” Thompson said, glancing up at her. “Wallet’s missing, and there’s no sign of a struggle.” Quinn shook her head, her instincts prickling. “No sign of a struggle? Look at his hands.” She pointed to the victim’s fingers, clenched tightly into fists. “He fought back. This wasn’t just a random attack.” Thompson frowned, his gaze shifting to the victim’s hands. “Maybe he was just scared. It’s a rough area.” “Rough areas don’t usually leave their victims with bruised knuckles.” Quinn stood, scanning the surroundings. “And where’s the blood? It’s all pooled here, but there’s no trail leading away. If he was attacked, he would’ve bled while trying to escape.” “Maybe he was dragged here,” Thompson suggested, but his voice lacked conviction. Quinn’s eyes caught a glint of something near the edge of the platform. She stepped closer, crouching down to examine a small brass compass, its casing tarnished with a patina of verdigris. The face bore intricate etchings of protective sigils, and the needle quivered, pointing toward the far wall. “Quinn, what’s that?” Thompson asked, his curiosity piqued. “A Veil Compass,” she replied, her voice low. “It’s attuned to supernatural energy. Whoever was here wasn’t just a victim of a mugging.” “Supernatural?” Thompson scoffed, but Quinn could see the flicker of doubt in his eyes. “You really think that’s relevant?” “Look at the body. The way he’s positioned. It’s almost like he was trying to protect something.” She gestured to the victim’s jacket, which had been pulled open, revealing a small leather satchel tucked inside. “Help me with this.” Thompson hesitated but moved to assist her. Together, they carefully unzipped the satchel, revealing a collection of dusty tomes and scrolls, their spines cracked and worn. Quinn’s heart raced. “Occult research,” she murmured, flipping through the pages of one of the books. “This isn’t just some random mugging. This guy was involved in something much bigger.” “Or he was just a nerd who got in over his head,” Thompson countered, but his tone lacked its earlier bravado. Quinn straightened, her mind racing. “We need to find out who he was. If he was researching the supernatural, he might have stumbled onto something dangerous. Something that got him killed.” “Or he was just in the wrong place at the wrong time,” Thompson said, but Quinn could see the wheels turning in his mind. “Let’s check his pockets,” she said, her voice firm. “There might be something else.” As they rifled through the victim’s belongings, Quinn’s thoughts drifted to Eva Kowalski, her best friend and an expert in the occult. If anyone could make sense of this, it would be her. “Quinn, look at this,” Thompson said, holding up a small bone token, intricately carved and worn smooth by time. “What do you think it is?” Quinn took the token, turning it over in her palm. “A key to the Veil Market. You need one to enter. This guy was involved in something illegal, something that could lead us to whoever did this.” “Or he was just a buyer,” Thompson replied, but his voice lacked conviction. Quinn’s eyes narrowed as she studied the token. “No, this is more than that. He was a player in whatever game was happening down here. We need to find out who he was meeting.” “Right, but how do we do that?” Thompson asked, glancing around the abandoned station, as if expecting answers to materialize from the shadows. Quinn stood, her mind racing. “We follow the compass. It’s pointing toward something. If there’s a rift or a portal nearby, it could lead us to whoever he was dealing with.” “Are you serious?” Thompson’s eyes widened. “You want to chase after a ghost?” “Not a ghost. A lead.” Quinn’s voice held a steely resolve. “We can’t let this go. Not after what happened to Morris.” Thompson’s expression softened, the mention of her lost partner hanging heavy in the air. “Alright, let’s see where it leads.” Quinn nodded, her heart pounding as she followed the needle’s direction. The compass guided her toward a narrow passageway, the walls lined with graffiti and remnants of old advertisements. “Stay close,” she instructed, her senses heightened. The air felt charged, electric, as if something lay just beyond the veil of reality. They moved deeper into the passage, the flickering lights casting long shadows. Quinn’s mind raced with possibilities. What had this young man uncovered? What had cost him his life? “Quinn,” Thompson whispered, his voice barely audible. “Do you hear that?” Quinn paused, straining to listen. A low hum resonated through the walls, a sound that seemed to vibrate in her bones. “Yeah,” she replied, her pulse quickening. “It’s coming from up ahead.” They pressed on, the hum growing louder, more insistent. Quinn’s heart raced as they reached the end of the passage, where the wall shimmered, a faint outline of a rift pulsating with energy. “Is that…?” Thompson’s voice trailed off, awe mingling with fear. “Yeah,” Quinn breathed, her eyes wide. “That’s a portal.” The compass needle spun wildly, as if sensing the energy radiating from the rift. Quinn stepped closer, her instincts screaming at her to be cautious. “Quinn, we should back off,” Thompson urged, his voice tense. But Quinn couldn’t pull away. She felt drawn to it, the promise of answers just beyond the threshold. “Wait,” she said, her gaze fixed on the rift. “We need to figure out what’s on the other side.” “Are you out of your mind?” Thompson shot back, his eyes darting between the rift and Quinn. “We don’t know what’s waiting for us.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “We can’t let fear stop us. Not again.” As she reached out, the air crackled with energy, and the rift pulsed, beckoning her forward. The mystery deepened, and Quinn knew they were on the brink of uncovering something far more dangerous than a simple murder.
total_cost0.0010917

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.51
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"tightly"
2"really"
3"carefully"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Thompson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1135
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"furrowed"
count1
1
word"glistening"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"quivered"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"raced"
count3
8
word"racing"
count2
9
word"sense of"
count1
10
word"resolve"
count1
11
word"pounding"
count1
12
word"charged"
count1
13
word"electric"
count1
14
word"resonated"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"shimmered"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"furrowed"
1"glistening"
2"scanning"
3"glint"
4"intricate"
5"quivered"
6"flicker"
7"raced"
8"racing"
9"sense of"
10"resolve"
11"pounding"
12"charged"
13"electric"
14"resonated"
15"pulse"
16"shimmered"
17"pulsed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences68
matches
0"g with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1134
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount736
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.4
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn25
Tube1
Camden1
Mark1
Thompson18
Eva1
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Mark"
3"Thompson"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
5.77% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if expecting answers to materialize from the shadows"
1"sound that seemed to vibrate in her bones"
2"as if sensing the energy radiating from the rift"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1134
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
96.61% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean25.2
std12.3
cv0.488
sampleLengths
071
142
241
321
435
518
640
712
849
98
1023
1119
1239
1329
1427
1521
1631
1724
1814
1933
2025
2137
2213
2334
2423
2531
2613
2722
2820
2929
3022
3129
3211
3321
3411
3533
3610
379
3825
3910
4018
4119
4224
4311
4437
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"been pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences91
ratio0.011
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dimly lit chamber of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, the air thick with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount737
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.023066485753052916
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.012211668928086838
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean12.46
std6.86
cv0.551
sampleLengths
029
19
221
312
413
518
611
717
810
914
1012
119
127
1319
149
159
169
1715
1825
1912
2013
2119
2217
238
248
2515
2614
275
2835
294
307
3119
323
3313
3414
3521
365
3726
3824
399
405
4122
4211
4319
446
4510
4627
4713
488
4926
80.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4945054945054945
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences68
matches
0"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
1"It was DS Mark Thompson,"
2"She pointed to the victim’s"
3"She stepped closer, crouching down"
4"she replied, her voice low"
5"She gestured to the victim’s"
6"she murmured, flipping through the"
7"she said, her voice firm"
8"she instructed, her senses heightened"
9"They moved deeper into the"
10"she replied, her pulse quickening"
11"They pressed on, the hum"
12"She felt drawn to it,"
13"she said, her gaze fixed"
ratio0.206
33.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences68
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"Her sharp jaw tightened as"
2"It was DS Mark Thompson,"
3"Quinn approached, her worn leather"
4"The victim lay face down,"
5"Blood pooled around him, glistening"
6"Quinn knelt beside the body,"
7"Thompson said, glancing up at"
8"Quinn shook her head, her"
9"She pointed to the victim’s"
10"Thompson frowned, his gaze shifting"
11"Quinn stood, scanning the surroundings"
12"Thompson suggested, but his voice"
13"Quinn’s eyes caught a glint"
14"She stepped closer, crouching down"
15"The face bore intricate etchings"
16"Thompson asked, his curiosity piqued"
17"she replied, her voice low"
18"Thompson scoffed, but Quinn could"
19"She gestured to the victim’s"
ratio0.853
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"Now, it lay in ruins,"
1"If anyone could make sense"
ratio0.029
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The air felt charged, electric, as if something lay just beyond the veil of reality."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"Thompson suggested, but his voice lacked conviction"
1"Thompson asked, his curiosity piqued"
2"she replied, her voice low"
3"Thompson countered, but his tone lacked its earlier bravado"
4"she said, her voice firm"
5"Thompson replied, but his voice lacked conviction"
6"she instructed, her senses heightened"
7"Thompson whispered, his voice barely audible"
8"she replied, her pulse quickening"
9"Thompson’s voice trailed, awe mingling with fear"
10"Quinn breathed, her eyes wide"
11"Thompson urged, his voice tense"
12"Thompson shot back, his eyes darting between the rift and Quinn"
47.96% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Thompson suggested (suggest)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Thompson whispered (whisper)"
3"Quinn breathed (breathe)"
4"Thompson urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.612
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.204
76.6874%