Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQSXWM5Z7PA0DX50QQ3T00

Run Details

Duration:
3m 24s
Cost:
$0.002200
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of old wood, spilled beer, and the faint, persistent scent of lemon cleaner. Aurora Carter balanced three plates of steaming chow mein on a tray, her movements economical as she navigated the dim space between tables. Her black hair, straight and shoulder-length, swung with each step. She was delivering for Yu-Fei Cheung tonight, a double shift that bled into her evening off. Silas was behind the bar, polishing a glass with a cloth. His silver signet ring caught the green glow of the neon sign outside the window. He nodded to her, a slight incline of the head that meant he saw her, approved of her efficiency. She set the last plate down at a booth where two men in rumpled suits were deep in conversation. As she straightened, a voice cut through the low murmur of the bar. “Laila?” The name was a ghost, a whisper from a past life. It froze her for a second, her fingers still on the edge of the tray. No one here called her that. Rory, yes, from Silas and Eva. Aurora on her ID. But Laila? That name belonged to Cardiff, to university corridors and a girl with fewer scars, real or metaphorical. She turned. The man stood near the entrance, one hand still on the door handle as if unsure whether to stay or flee. He was tall, broad-shouldered, but the confident athlete’s frame she remembered had softened, settled into something heavier. His face, once perpetually tanned from rugby pitches, was pale, the lines around his eyes deeper. He wore a dark overcoat, expensive-looking but worn with a stoop she didn’t recognize. “Marcus,” she said. The word felt strange in her mouth. His face broke into a familiar smile, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “Christ. It is you.” He let the door swing shut and took a step inside, shedding the chill of the London night. “I was just… passing. Saw the sign. I never come to this part of town.” “You’re a long way from Cardiff.” “I live here now. Been here five years.” He hovered, awkward. “Can I… buy you a drink? You look like you’re finishing up.” She glanced at Silas. He was watching, his gaze assessing but neutral. He gave a nearly imperceptible shrug. Her shift was over; the last delivery was done. The part of her that had been Laila, the quick-to-laugh law student, wanted to say no. To walk away and preserve the clean break she’d made. But the woman she was now, the one who lived above a spy’s bar and carried a crescent-shaped scar on her wrist like a receipt for survival, was curious. “Alright. One drink.” She led him to a small table in the corner, away from the suits and the couple canoodling by the fireplace. She slid into the booth, placing the empty tray on the seat beside her. He shrugged off his coat, revealing a tailored shirt and a silk tie loosened at the neck. He ordered a single malt, neat. She asked for a ginger beer. “Not drinking?” he asked. “I’m working,” she said, though her shift was done. It was an easy lie. He nodded, accepting it. “Right. Of course.” He leaned back, his eyes scanning her face. “You look… good. Different.” “So do you.” He barked a short laugh. “Older. Fatter. Tired.” “I was going to say ‘established.’” She gestured to his clothes. “Appearances.” He took the whisky the waiter brought, swirling the amber liquid. “You vanished, Laila. One day you were there, the next… poof. Your dad said you’d gone to London. Changed your number. Your Facebook was deleted.” He didn’t say it with accusation, just a flat statement of fact. “Eva wouldn’t tell me anything. Just said you needed space.” Aurora kept her hands wrapped around the cold glass of ginger beer. “I did.” “Because of Evan?” The name was a jolt. She hadn’t heard it spoken aloud in years. Not since the night she’d packed a single suitcase and taken the last train out of Cardiff, her left wrist throbbing under a bandage. She felt the ghost of the pain, a phantom echo. “Partly.” “I heard things,” Marcus said, his voice dropping. “After you left. Rumors. That he’d… that it got bad.” He looked at her left wrist, bare on the table. The small, pale crescent scar was visible under the bar’s low light. His gaze fixed on it. “I never saw it. I should have seen it.” “You were in Bristol for your grad scheme.” “That’s not an excuse.” He took a hefty swallow of his drink. “We were friends. Good friends. And I was so wrapped up in my own shit, my first job, impressing the bosses… I missed it. I missed you leaving. I missed the signs.” “There weren’t many signs to see,” she said quietly. “I got good at hiding them.” “That’s what Eva said.” He stared into his glass. “I tried to find you, you know. A few years ago. Looked up every Aurora Carter in London. Never found this place.” “I go by Rory now.” “Rory.” He tested the name. “Suits you. The Aurora I knew was… softer. All books and big ideas about justice.” “The Aurora you knew was twenty-one and naive.” “And what’s Rory?” She considered. “Older. Less naive. Delivers noodles and lives above a bar.” His eyebrows went up. “You live here?” “Upstairs.” “Jesus.” He looked around at the maps on the walls, the black-and-white photos of a London that no longer existed, the secretive atmosphere. “This is a far cry from those late-night debates in the Student Union. You were going to change the legal world, remember? Tear down the old boys’ network. Be the youngest female QC in Wales.” “Plans change.” “Do they?” he asked, and there was a sudden, sharp edge to his voice. “Or do we just let them be changed for us?” She didn’t answer. She watched him instead. The way his thumb rubbed against the side of his glass, a nervous habit he’d had since they were teenagers. The new tension in his jaw. The expensive watch on his wrist that looked like a shackle. The Marcus she’d known was brimming with a restless, competitive energy. This man was subdued, full of a quiet regret that seemed to weigh him down into the leather booth. “What about you?” she asked, shifting the focus. “You’re a long way from that grad scheme.” He sighed, a heavy, weary sound. “I’m a corporate lawyer. M&A. Merger and Acquisitions. I spend my days in windowless rooms arguing over clauses and share prices. I wear this…” He plucked at his shirt. “I drive a German car. I live in a glass tower in Canary Wharf with a view of other glass towers.” “You wanted to be a human rights barrister.” “I wanted to pay off my student loans,” he corrected, bitterness seeping through. “My dad got sick. The treatments were expensive. The firm offered to clear my debt if I signed with them for five years. I signed. Now it’s been eight.” He finished his whisky, signaled for another. “I bought the flat for my parents. Dad’s gone now. Mum lives there. She likes the view.” The silence that followed was thick, filled with the ghosts of their former selves—the idealistic, bright-eyed versions who’d believed in trajectories, in upward arcs. They sat in a bar that was a front for secrets, two people who’d taken sharp, unexpected turns. “Do you ever go back?” he asked. “To Cardiff?” “To any of it. The law. The dream.” Aurora thought of the textbooks still boxed in Silas’s storage room. The faded ‘Justice for All’ poster folded at the bottom of her suitcase. The way her father’s voice still echoed in her head, disappointed, pushing her toward a courtroom she’d never enter. “No,” she said. “That door’s closed.” “Is it?” He leaned forward, his hazel eyes—still the same, at least—searching hers. “Because from where I’m sitting, Laila—Rory—you’re hiding. Delivering noodles and living in a pub? With your brain? Your fire? You ran from Evan, sure. But it looks like you kept running.” His words landed like physical blows, precise and painful. He saw too much. The old friendship, the intimate knowledge of who she had been, gave him an X-ray vision she hadn’t anticipated. “And you’re not?” she shot back, her cool voice tightening. “You traded your conscience for a corner office and a sick father’s bills. Which one of us is really hiding, Marcus? Me in a job with no expectations, or you in a suit you hate, pretending you had no other choice?” He flinched. The truth of it hung between them, ugly and undeniable. “Touché,” he murmured, deflating. He ran a hand over his face. “Christ. Look at us. A pair of ghosts haunting our own lives.” The second whisky arrived. He didn’t touch it. “I’m sorry,” he said after a long moment. “I shouldn’t have come in. Shouldn’t have said that.” “Why did you?” He looked at her, really looked at her, and she saw the boy he’d been for a fleeting second—the one who’d bought her chips after a late study session, who’d laughed until he cried at her terrible impressions of their torts professor. “I saw you through the window. Carrying those plates. You moved the same way you always did, like you were balancing something precious. I just… I wanted to know if you were okay. If you got away and made a life.” He gave a sad, twisted smile. “Seems like a complicated answer.” “It is,” she admitted. He nodded, glanced at his watch—the expensive shackle—and winced. “I have a conference call. Seven a.m. with Singapore.” He stood, pulling his coat back on. He dug in his wallet, left too much money on the table for the drinks. “It was… really good to see you, Rory.” “You too, Marcus.” He hesitated, as if he wanted to say something more, make a promise to stay in touch, but the years and the choices stretched between them like a wide, uncrossable river. He gave a short, awkward wave and turned for the door. She watched him leave, his broad背影 disappearing into the night. The green neon sign cast a sickly glow on the wet pavement outside. Silas appeared at her elbow, silent as always. He began clearing the glasses. “Old friend?” he asked, his voice neutral. “Something like that.” “He carries a lot with him.” “Don’t we all?” Silas gave a noncommittal hum and walked back to the bar. Aurora stayed in the booth, the cold ginger beer sweating in her hand. The bar felt emptier, the shadows longer. The ghost of Laila hovered for a moment, a wistful, hopeful echo, before dissolving into the familiar, resilient presence of Rory. She traced the crescent scar on her wrist, feeling the raised, smooth tissue under her fingertip. A receipt, yes. But not one for a life ended. For one that had changed course, into deeper, uncharted waters. She took a final sip, the ginger sharp on her tongue, and stood up. It was time to go upstairs. To her own life, complicated as it was.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He leaned back [back]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
2"He looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.408
leniency0.816
rawRatio0.097
effectiveRatio0.079
92.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1888
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
highlights
0"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1888
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"echo"
count2
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"fleeting"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"whisper"
2"familiar"
3"chill"
4"silk"
5"scanning"
6"echo"
7"tension"
8"silence"
9"echoed"
10"fleeting"
11"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences119
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
99.24% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0.006
matches
0"She watched him leave, his broad背影 disappearing into the night."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1868
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1219
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Silas6
Eva1
Laila3
Cardiff2
London2
Aurora5
Marcus2
Rory2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Silas"
6"Eva"
7"Laila"
8"Aurora"
9"Marcus"
10"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
89.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a shackle"
1"regret that seemed to weigh him down into the leather booth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1868
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean26.69
std26.81
cv1.005
sampleLengths
0111
132
21
361
42
568
610
750
86
923
1082
113
1264
134
1414
1519
163
178
1811
1959
2014
213
2247
231
2454
258
2644
2715
2831
295
3020
318
323
3312
347
351
3658
372
3824
3974
4016
4156
428
4366
4442
457
462
478
4843
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"been, gave"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was delivering"
1"was watching"
2"was brimming"
55.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences164
ratio0.03
matches
0"Her shift was over; the last delivery was done."
1"The silence that followed was thick, filled with the ghosts of their former selves—the idealistic, bright-eyed versions who’d believed in trajectories, in upward arcs."
2"“Is it?” He leaned forward, his hazel eyes—still the same, at least—searching hers."
3"He looked at her, really looked at her, and she saw the boy he’d been for a fleeting second—the one who’d bought her chips after a late study session, who’d laughed until he cried at her terrible impressions of their torts professor."
4"He nodded, glanced at his watch—the expensive shackle—and winced."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount995
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"idealistic, bright-eyed versions"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02613065326633166
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005025125628140704
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean11.39
std8.69
cv0.763
sampleLengths
017
123
210
316
411
515
619
719
813
91
1011
1115
126
136
144
152
1617
172
1821
1917
2016
2114
223
237
2413
2522
2615
276
2811
2912
304
318
326
339
3416
3510
3629
373
3821
3914
4017
416
426
434
449
455
464
4711
484
493
44.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3170731707317073
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners52
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount69
totalSentences109
matches
0"Her black hair, straight and"
1"She was delivering for Yu-Fei"
2"His silver signet ring caught"
3"He nodded to her, a"
4"She set the last plate"
5"It froze her for a"
6"He was tall, broad-shouldered, but"
7"His face, once perpetually tanned"
8"He wore a dark overcoat,"
9"His face broke into a"
10"He let the door swing"
11"He hovered, awkward"
12"She glanced at Silas."
13"He was watching, his gaze"
14"He gave a nearly imperceptible"
15"Her shift was over; the"
16"She led him to a"
17"She slid into the booth,"
18"He shrugged off his coat,"
19"He ordered a single malt,"
ratio0.633
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences109
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Aurora Carter balanced three plates"
2"Her black hair, straight and"
3"She was delivering for Yu-Fei"
4"Silas was behind the bar,"
5"His silver signet ring caught"
6"He nodded to her, a"
7"She set the last plate"
8"The name was a ghost,"
9"It froze her for a"
10"Rory, yes, from Silas and"
11"Aurora on her ID."
12"That name belonged to Cardiff,"
13"The man stood near the"
14"He was tall, broad-shouldered, but"
15"His face, once perpetually tanned"
16"He wore a dark overcoat,"
17"The word felt strange in"
18"His face broke into a"
19"He let the door swing"
ratio0.927
91.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences109
matches
0"To walk away and preserve"
1"To her own life, complicated"
ratio0.018
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She was delivering for Yu-Fei Cheung tonight, a double shift that bled into her evening off."
1"He nodded to her, a slight incline of the head that meant he saw her, approved of her efficiency."
2"The part of her that had been Laila, the quick-to-laugh law student, wanted to say no."
3"The silence that followed was thick, filled with the ghosts of their former selves—the idealistic, bright-eyed versions who’d believed in trajectories, in upwar…"
4"He looked at her, really looked at her, and she saw the boy he’d been for a fleeting second—the one who’d bought her chips after a late study session, who’d lau…"
5"He hesitated, as if he wanted to say something more, make a promise to stay in touch, but the years and the choices stretched between them like a wide, uncrossa…"
12.10% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"He hovered, awkward"
1"she said, though her shift was done"
2"He leaned back, his eyes scanning her face"
3"Marcus said, his voice dropping"
4"he corrected, bitterness seeping through"
5"she shot back, her cool voice tightening"
6"he asked, his voice neutral"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"He didn’t (do)"
1"he corrected (correct)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.197
leniency0.395
rawRatio0.267
effectiveRatio0.105
79.2130%