Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQSYSWSQAE7ZBF63F59AKY

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
34.1s
Cost:
$0.015246
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain clung stubbornly to Soho’s pavements, smearing the city lights into ribbons of green and gold as Aurora Carter ducked beneath The Raven’s Nest’s dripping awning. Wind pressed at her back. The bar’s neon sign, cracked in one corner, buzzed and flared with promise. She pushed in, clutching her satchel to her chest. Inside, warmth closed around her. The air shimmered with the sharp tang of whiskey, pine soap, old leather, and a dozen wet coats left dripping at the door. Maps clung to the walls, their countries faded by decades of cigarette smoke, and above every table, old photographs stared down from burnished frames—adventurers, soldiers, smiling strangers. At the bar, a pair of solicitors argued about football. Someone nearer the back coughed up a laugh that carried a note of despair. Aurora waited at the edge, stomach knotted, uncertain whether she’d come for the drink or for quiet. Her satchel slipped from her shoulder; she stooped to recover it. That’s when she noticed the figure hunched over the farthest corner table. He looked older. His auburn hair had thinned, streaked through with grey, beard clipped tight to his chin. He hunched that massive frame over a page of notes, the elbow of his right arm cocked wide as if the ache had carried through the years undiminished. Silas Blackwood. The limp in his left leg gave him away as much as the signet ring shining under the thin, glass-shaded light. A breath caught in her throat. Silas—Si, from days when she’d thought bravado would shelter her from consequence—looked up, spotted her. His hazel eyes flickered, narrowed, tracking her features as if waiting for an enemy to reveal herself. Then, at last, he beckoned without a word, fingertips drumming twice on the battered wood. “You look bloody awful, Si,” she grinned, letting the memories smooth the edge from her nerves. She gripped the backrest opposite him, not quite sitting yet. He didn’t smile back. “Age is a bastard, Rory. Find yourself in hiding, and suddenly a decade’s caught you. Sit down, unless you’re angling to run again.” She sat. The seat sagged under her weight, springs protesting. Rainwater dribbled from her coat hem and pooled around her boots. “So. You still playing den mother, or just hiding behind paperwork these days?” Silas leaned back. The ring caught the lamplight, argent and steady. His gaze lingered on her clothes—cheap black turtleneck, trousers scuffed at the knees, the faded canvas satchel she’d procured from a charity shop when her money stretched thin. “Didn’t expect you, Rory. I thought…” He paused, collecting a thought and abandoning it. “Didn’t think you’d come back.” Aurora’s mouth twisted. “City’s got a way of dragging out old ghosts, you notice?” “One or two have taken up permanent residence.” Silas’s smile was brief, brittle. “Not all of them so cheerful as you.” She dropped her bag to the foot of the table, arms folding tight over her chest. Rain drummed at the windows. “Does Jen know you’re working here again?” Silas watched her, clinical, like she might fracture under his stare. “Mum thinks I’m at Oxford. Dad keeps asking when I’ll finish law.” Rory shrugged. He picked up his glass, swirling whisky. The ice clinked. “Is this about him?” “Evan?” She spat the name. “It stopped being about him the second I stepped off that train. This—” her chin jerked at the walls “—is for me.” He didn’t buy it; she saw that. “You wear your ghost like a badge, Rory. You get lonely in London or just looking for trouble?” Aurora glanced away, tracing a crease in the tabletop. “Some things you just walk with. I learned that from the best.” “Bollocks.” His voice cracked, low and quiet. “That’s not learning. That’s hiding in plain sight.” She stared at him, sharp lines around her mouth etching deeper. “Look at yourself. You’re still here, holding court over disintegrating maps and strangers’ secrets. You want to lecture me on plain sight?” Silas’s knuckles whitened around his glass. “Do you remember what I told you, after Budapest, the first time your cleverness landed us both in the doghouse?” He didn’t wait. “I said: sometimes the smart move is knowing when to leave.” “And sometimes the smart move is standing your ground.” Aurora’s voice cracked like a whip. “But you’d know about leaving.” That landed. His eyes flickered, jaw clenched. “I stayed here,” he said after a long beat. “Made something of this… bloody mausoleum.” “Is that what this is? Your penance?” She let the accusation hang. All the old hurts—the nights spent waiting for him to show, waiting for news when Prague went black—clung to the silence. He forced a brittle laugh. “You always cut to the quick. That’s never changed.” Gaze sweeping her face, as if searching for the child who’d trusted him, who’d taken orders from the spymaster of Soho when she should have been at home, safe and naive. “No one ever talks about the things you lose. If you’d asked me ten years ago, I’d have sworn I’d never walk with a cane, never fear a knock at the door.” Rory rubbed her wrist, fingering the thin crescent scar there. “We changed. What’s so wrong with that?” He looked at her with a mixture of wonder and grief. “You looked up to me, once. Don’t tell me the city’s knocked that loose as well.” She smiled, but the expression wobbled. “I looked up to the stories, Si. The legends. The man teaching card tricks in smoky back rooms because he thought the world was worth saving. You—” He favoured her with the ghost of a smile. “I’m still here, Rory. Still waiting for some sod to bring me a story worth telling.” Rory tilted her chin, eyes glinting. “Depends on who’s doing the telling. Maybe it’s my turn.” His hand settled on the table, palm up, fingers flexing as spasms wracked the joint—a nod to the limp and scar tissue, another inheritance. “London’s changed. You’ll find it meaner than you remember.” She shrugged, rolling her shoulders as if shedding a weight. “I didn’t come here for mercy.” He regarded her in silence, the space between them thickening with the years, the words both unsaid and unnecessary. At last, he took a slow breath. “You want the top room—yours, if you want it. Just don’t expect forgiveness for running.” Rory’s eyes welled with old affection and sharper regret. “Forgiveness isn’t what I came for.” He slid the battered room key across the table. It caught the light and winked like a signal. Above them, a man at the bar launched into a bitter song about lost love; outside, the rain fattened, the city’s secrets sluicing down storm drains. Rory looked down at the key. Her fingers hovered, uncertain. She sucked in a breath, shoulders squared. “I won’t run, not this time.” Silas’s expression softened. His gaze roved her face, as if anchoring himself on each new line and loss. “Good,” he muttered, voice a cracked thread. Her hand closed on the key. In that gesture, the years collapsed between them—regret and hope knotting tight, binding them to the neon-lit hush of The Raven’s Nest and the territory they’d both carved out, inch by inch.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora’s voice cracked like [like]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.342
leniency0.684
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.053
95.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1218
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"etching"
count1
7
word"jaw clenched"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"glinting"
count1
10
word"affection"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"shimmered"
2"stomach"
3"flickered"
4"weight"
5"tracing"
6"etching"
7"jaw clenched"
8"silence"
9"glinting"
10"affection"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"stomach knotted"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1207
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount806
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Aurora5
Carter1
Raven2
Nest2
Blackwood1
Si1
Rory5
Prague1
Silas7
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Blackwood"
5"Si"
6"Rory"
7"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"as if waiting for an enemy to reveal herself"
1"not quite sitting yet"
2"as if searching for the child who’d trusted him, who’d taken orders from the spymaster of Soho when she should have been at home, safe and naive"
3"as if shedding a weight"
4"as if anchoring himself on each new line and loss"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1207
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean28.07
std17.39
cv0.619
sampleLengths
053
179
228
381
453
526
627
721
813
939
1019
1114
1221
1321
1418
1514
1614
1727
1825
1921
2015
2133
2240
2320
247
2515
2633
2777
2817
2927
3033
3125
3216
3333
3416
3541
3615
3718
3826
3923
4018
417
4238
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences100
ratio0.09
matches
0"Maps clung to the walls, their countries faded by decades of cigarette smoke, and above every table, old photographs stared down from burnished frames—adventurers, soldiers, smiling strangers."
1"Her satchel slipped from her shoulder; she stooped to recover it."
2"Silas—Si, from days when she’d thought bravado would shelter her from consequence—looked up, spotted her."
3"His gaze lingered on her clothes—cheap black turtleneck, trousers scuffed at the knees, the faded canvas satchel she’d procured from a charity shop when her money stretched thin."
4"He didn’t buy it; she saw that."
5"All the old hurts—the nights spent waiting for him to show, waiting for news when Prague went black—clung to the silence."
6"His hand settled on the table, palm up, fingers flexing as spasms wracked the joint—a nod to the limp and scar tissue, another inheritance."
7"Above them, a man at the bar launched into a bitter song about lost love; outside, the rain fattened, the city’s secrets sluicing down storm drains."
8"In that gesture, the years collapsed between them—regret and hope knotting tight, binding them to the neon-lit hush of The Raven’s Nest and the territory they’d both carved out, inch by inch."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount816
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thin, glass-shaded light."
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.015931372549019607
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0012254901960784314
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean12.07
std7.81
cv0.647
sampleLengths
026
15
213
39
45
523
627
710
814
917
1011
1112
123
1315
1428
152
1621
176
1815
1917
2015
2116
2210
234
2423
252
268
2711
2813
293
308
3128
3214
335
343
3511
3613
378
3816
395
4018
4114
427
433
444
455
4622
477
4818
499
77.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.47
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners47
46.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Then, at last, he beckoned"
ratio0.014
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences72
matches
0"She pushed in, clutching her"
1"Her satchel slipped from her"
2"He looked older."
3"His auburn hair had thinned,"
4"He hunched that massive frame"
5"His hazel eyes flickered, narrowed,"
6"she grinned, letting the memories"
7"She gripped the backrest opposite"
8"He didn’t smile back."
9"His gaze lingered on her"
10"He paused, collecting a thought"
11"She dropped her bag to"
12"He picked up his glass,"
13"She spat the name"
14"her chin jerked at the"
15"He didn’t buy it; she"
16"His voice cracked, low and"
17"She stared at him, sharp"
18"He didn’t wait"
19"His eyes flickered, jaw clenched."
ratio0.5
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences72
matches
0"Rain clung stubbornly to Soho’s"
1"The bar’s neon sign, cracked"
2"She pushed in, clutching her"
3"The air shimmered with the"
4"Maps clung to the walls,"
5"Someone nearer the back coughed"
6"Aurora waited at the edge,"
7"Her satchel slipped from her"
8"That’s when she noticed the"
9"He looked older."
10"His auburn hair had thinned,"
11"He hunched that massive frame"
12"The limp in his left"
13"A breath caught in her"
14"Silas—Si, from days when she’d"
15"His hazel eyes flickered, narrowed,"
16"she grinned, letting the memories"
17"She gripped the backrest opposite"
18"He didn’t smile back."
19"The seat sagged under her"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rain clung stubbornly to Soho’s pavements, smearing the city lights into ribbons of green and gold as Aurora Carter ducked beneath The Raven’s Nest’s dripping a…"
1"He hunched that massive frame over a page of notes, the elbow of his right arm cocked wide as if the ache had carried through the years undiminished."
2"His gaze roved her face, as if anchoring himself on each new line and loss."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Gaze sweeping, as if searching for the child who’d trusted him, who’d taken orders from the spymaster of Soho when she should have been at home, safe and naive"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She spat (spit)"
1"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.079
leniency0.158
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.105
76.7142%