| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.737 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1321 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1321 | | totalAiIsms | 47 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "sentinels" | | 6 | "anticipation" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "down her spine" | | 10 | "loomed" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "gloom" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "lurched" | | 16 | "traced" | | 17 | "raced" | | 18 | "flickered" | | 19 | "glinting" | | 20 | "silk" | | 21 | "shattered" | | 22 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 181 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 186 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 19 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1308 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1251 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.4 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silence" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | High | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Closer | 1 | | Soft | 2 | | Shadows | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Slivers | 1 | | Moonlight | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Aurora | 5 | | Silence | 5 | | Leaves | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "Shadows" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Slivers" | | 5 | "Moonlight" | | 6 | "Aurora" | | 7 | "Silence" | | 8 | "Leaves" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like her name but thin, hollow" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1308 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.10% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 31.14 | | std | 12.2 | | cv | 0.392 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 42 | | 41 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 242 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 186 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "Outside, minutes had passed; inside, hours." | | 1 | "Only a low hum—almost human—drifted through the trees." | | 2 | "Childhood memory flared—her mother’s voice calling after her near the stream." | | 3 | "Pale shapes drifted between trunks—thin, elongated silhouettes that flicked away whenever she stared." | | 4 | "Time bent; her pulse thudded in her ears." | | 5 | "A cackling silhouette darted between oaks—no more than a head and shoulders, limbs too long, bones too slender." | | 6 | "No breath sounded; the scent of lavender drifted." | | 7 | "A smile—or what might have been a smile—twisted at impossible angles." | | 8 | "Her palm scorched; she tossed the pendant." | | 9 | "Everything looked unchanged—as if nature had swallowed the terror whole." | | 10 | "Light traced the runes on its back—runes she couldn’t read, but now felt alive under her palm." | | 11 | "Something moved at the edge of her vision—a pale hand sliding across a trunk." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1264 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.03481012658227848 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007120253164556962 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 186 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 186 | | mean | 7.03 | | std | 3.8 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 54.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3548387096774194 | | totalSentences | 186 | | uniqueOpeners | 66 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the hush of leaves" | | 1 | "Only a low hum—almost human—drifted" | | 2 | "Then the hum swelled into" | | 3 | "Instead, she felt prey." | | 4 | "Then it vanished between oaks" | | 5 | "Bright blue eyes flashed." | | 6 | "Then the cracking sound of" | | 7 | "Only the hum of her" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 65.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers curled around the" | | 1 | "She froze, bright blue eyes" | | 2 | "she murmured, voice low as" | | 3 | "She rose on crooked legs," | | 4 | "Her breath puffed into the" | | 5 | "She’d lost track of both." | | 6 | "She’d come chasing a glimmer" | | 7 | "She imagined confronting an emerald-skinned" | | 8 | "She jerked toward the sound." | | 9 | "Her pulse kicked." | | 10 | "she called, tone firm" | | 11 | "She slid it free, watched" | | 12 | "Her hand shot to the" | | 13 | "She glanced back at the" | | 14 | "They loomed taller than before," | | 15 | "She stepped forward, heels crunching" | | 16 | "She held the pendant level," | | 17 | "She swung her head." | | 18 | "She raised her voice." | | 19 | "They wove together, high and" |
| | ratio | 0.386 | |
| 39.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 133 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora crouched beneath the ancient" | | 1 | "Her fingers curled around the" | | 2 | "Moonlight slipped through the branches" | | 3 | "She froze, bright blue eyes" | | 4 | "she murmured, voice low as" | | 5 | "She rose on crooked legs," | | 6 | "Her breath puffed into the" | | 7 | "The grove yawned around her," | | 8 | "She’d lost track of both." | | 9 | "She’d come chasing a glimmer" | | 10 | "She imagined confronting an emerald-skinned" | | 11 | "Something in her chest coiled," | | 12 | "A distant snap of twig." | | 13 | "She jerked toward the sound." | | 14 | "Her pulse kicked." | | 15 | "she called, tone firm" | | 16 | "The pendant pulsed again, stronger" | | 17 | "She slid it free, watched" | | 18 | "The warmth seeped through her" | | 19 | "A faint whisper stole across" |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 158 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Everything looked unchanged—as if nature had swallowed the terror whole." |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, voice low as gravel" | | 1 | "she called, tone firm" | | 2 | "The whisper sounded like, hollow" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "it breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "she ordered (order)" | | 3 | "She whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "she challenged (challenge)" | | 6 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.421 | | leniency | 0.842 | | rawRatio | 0.875 | | effectiveRatio | 0.737 | |