Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQT3A0APVKVHC03BYCH9SD

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Duration:
33.9s
Cost:
$0.001014

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Raindrops sliced through the night air, each one adding to the slick sheen on the pavement. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots pounded against the drenched concrete, heart thumping in rhythm with her steps. She kept her eyes fixed on the shadow darting ahead—a figure almost swallowed by darkness but flickering into view under the sporadic glow of streetlamps. “Stop!” she barked, though the echo of her command was lost to the pattering rain. She felt the cold mist cling to her skin, but the chill was nothing compared to the heat coursing in her veins. The suspect, a wiry figure cloaked in a slick black coat, dodged between parked cars, splashing through puddles with reckless abandon. Harlow’s sharp jawline tightened. She had lost too much already, but this time, she wouldn’t let the one who got away turn into another ghost of the past. Ahead, the suspect lunged down a narrow alley. Harlow quickened her pace, nearly slip-sliding on the wet ground. Her worn leather watch slipped from her wrist, but she didn’t care right then. She had a job to do. A familiar surge of adrenaline filled her with focus. She could feel the hunt close in, could almost reach out and grasp it. “Where do you think you’re going?” A laugh, harsh and mocking, floated back from the darkness. The suspect swerved, a flash of movement as they ducked beneath a rain-soaked awning where the alley forked into two paths. A decision—either way could lead to nowhere or a dead end. Harlow skidded to a stop. She took a breath, shoulders squared, scanning the choices: the right path, thick with shadows; the left, lined with flickering lights, whispering secrets. Her instincts urged caution. The last underground market she had sneaked into didn’t end well. Supernatural dealings often left even the most hardened officers twisted and confused. But this time, she couldn’t back down. Steeling herself, she followed the flicker of light down the left path. The rain drummed louder against the tarpaulin above her, each step deeper pulling her further into uncertainty. A moment of clarity hit her—she had no backup, the night has fully claimed her, and the only company was her own desperate resolve. Harlow reached a grimy door, barely hanging on its hinges, offering no reassurance. A faint pulse of energy thumped through the wood, something beyond the realm of her understanding. She hesitated, but a faint whisper of laughter rang in the air. The suspect slipped inside, and Harlow clenched her jaw. “Damn it,” she muttered, pushing the door open and stepping inside. The market burst at the seams with life, a chaos of movement and sound illuminated by the harsh glow of hanging bulbs. Tables overflowed with oddities: shimmering potions in glass vials, ancient tomes tucked among grotesque relics. A cacophony of voices filled her ears, the crowd bustling like it belonged to another world, and Harlow felt the subtle weight of their stares. “Token?” a voice croaked, a scruffy man with a face etched in shadow approached her. He eyed the silver medallion around her neck, leaning in as if the air itself held a secret. “You need a bone token to shop here. Can’t just stroll in.” Harlow squinted, then reached instinctively for her pocket, but she had nothing to offer. Not even a lie. She found the man’s gaze unsettling; there was hunger in it, the kind that searched for weakness. “You got a problem?” He stepped closer, his breath sour from too many nights buried in this place. “No problem. Just looking for someone,” she replied, voice steady, masking the anger bubbling inside. The man’s smirk faded but curiosity lingered in his eyes. “You know this ain’t the safest spot for folks like you. Better run along, love.” “Or I could arrest you for obstructing a police investigation,” Harlow snapped, eyes narrowing. She hated how desperate she sounded. “Police? In here?” Laughter erupted from the crowd as others caught onto the exchange, mingling into an uproar. Murmurs of “the law” and “the badge” slithered through the tangled web of voices. Harlow’s taut muscles jerked. A flicker of nerves chased her resolve, but from behind the raucous laughter, she heard it. The sound of a footfall—her suspect, slipping away again. “Enough!” Harlow shouted, forcing the crowd's attention back on her. The noise faded slightly, and she rushed toward the direction she had heard that unmistakable tread. She passed crates stacked high with strange artifacts and flickering candles casting ghostly shadows on the walls. Each stall displayed things that pricked the edges of her rationality. A table here bore the weight of crystal shards; there lay a cracked mirror rumored to reflect truths unspoken. “Hey, you!” Harlow shouted, elbowing through the throng. She caught glimpses of hooded figures huddled together, trading soft whispers—everything felt surreal, tugging at her thoughts. But she focused, focused on her quarry. There! A figure in black slid behind a stack of boxes, reappearing briefly in a flash of lamplight, eyes wild and darting. Harlow gained ground, instinct screaming at her to move faster. “Stop!” she barked again, her tone low and dangerous. “It’s over!” As her words broke the air, the suspect vanished into a corridor at the back, flanked by a grimy wall, too narrow for anyone but the leanest of frames. Fury ignited her senses. She pursued, heart pounding like the rain that drummed above. This felt wrong, fracturing her instinct with an uneasy thrum of desperation. But the fire in her stomach urged her forward. Quinn rounded the corner, skidding to a halt. The corridor opened into a room thick with tension, shadows creeping along the edges. Her suspect stood near another greasy table, hands clasped around something that sparkled ominously—a vial, maybe. “Let’s make a deal,” the suspect rasped, voice low and laced with desperation. “Or maybe you’d like the real truth?” Harlow stepped closer. Every instinct warned her of the trap, but curiosity gnawed at her. Unfamiliar territory lay ahead, and she felt as if she stood at the edge of a precipice, balancing betrayal and a chance for answers about her lost partner. “Show me,” she demanded, tense and ready. The rain continued to beat outside, an insistent reminder of where she stood. The suspect smirked, eyes glinting with mischief and something darker. Harlow braced herself for whatever lay beyond.
total_cost0.00101355

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she barked again [again]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
95.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1067
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1067
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count2
7
word"resolve"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"cacophony"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"footfall"
count1
14
word"crystal"
count1
15
word"unspoken"
count1
16
word"surreal"
count1
17
word"pounding"
count1
18
word"stomach"
count1
19
word"tension"
count1
20
word"reminder"
count1
21
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"chill"
2"quickened"
3"familiar"
4"could feel"
5"scanning"
6"flicker"
7"resolve"
8"pulse"
9"whisper"
10"cacophony"
11"weight"
12"etched"
13"footfall"
14"crystal"
15"unspoken"
16"surreal"
17"pounding"
18"stomach"
19"tension"
20"reminder"
21"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1059
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount976
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow15
Quinn2
Murmurs1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
places(empty)
globalScore0.732
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1059
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
88.72% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean34.16
std15.73
cv0.461
sampleLengths
057
137
249
361
46
542
662
753
850
911
1062
1145
1235
1318
1415
1525
1620
1732
1829
1926
2047
2132
2232
2311
2429
2535
2638
2720
2843
2920
3017
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"was lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs174
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences82
ratio0.11
matches
0"She kept her eyes fixed on the shadow darting ahead—a figure almost swallowed by darkness but flickering into view under the sporadic glow of streetlamps."
1"A decision—either way could lead to nowhere or a dead end."
2"She took a breath, shoulders squared, scanning the choices: the right path, thick with shadows; the left, lined with flickering lights, whispering secrets."
3"A moment of clarity hit her—she had no backup, the night has fully claimed her, and the only company was her own desperate resolve."
4"She found the man’s gaze unsettling; there was hunger in it, the kind that searched for weakness."
5"The sound of a footfall—her suspect, slipping away again."
6"A table here bore the weight of crystal shards; there lay a cracked mirror rumored to reflect truths unspoken."
7"She caught glimpses of hooded figures huddled together, trading soft whispers—everything felt surreal, tugging at her thoughts."
8"Her suspect stood near another greasy table, hands clasped around something that sparkled ominously—a vial, maybe."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount984
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03048780487804878
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009146341463414634
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean12.91
std6.17
cv0.478
sampleLengths
016
116
225
315
422
521
64
724
88
910
1014
116
129
1314
146
1510
1621
1711
185
1923
204
2111
2212
237
2412
2517
2624
2713
2816
2912
309
3111
3222
3315
3425
3515
3618
3712
3814
394
4017
4118
4215
4310
4415
4514
466
4718
4814
494
71.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.43902439024390244
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences76
matches
0"She kept her eyes fixed"
1"she barked, though the echo"
2"She felt the cold mist"
3"She had lost too much"
4"Her worn leather watch slipped"
5"She had a job to"
6"She could feel the hunt"
7"She took a breath, shoulders"
8"Her instincts urged caution."
9"She hesitated, but a faint"
10"she muttered, pushing the door"
11"He eyed the silver medallion"
12"She found the man’s gaze"
13"He stepped closer, his breath"
14"she replied, voice steady, masking"
15"She hated how desperate she"
16"She passed crates stacked high"
17"She caught glimpses of hooded"
18"she barked again, her tone"
19"She pursued, heart pounding like"
ratio0.289
19.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences76
matches
0"Raindrops sliced through the night"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots pounded"
2"She kept her eyes fixed"
3"she barked, though the echo"
4"She felt the cold mist"
5"The suspect, a wiry figure"
6"Harlow’s sharp jawline tightened."
7"She had lost too much"
8"Harlow quickened her pace, nearly"
9"Her worn leather watch slipped"
10"She had a job to"
11"A familiar surge of adrenaline"
12"She could feel the hunt"
13"A laugh, harsh and mocking,"
14"The suspect swerved, a flash"
15"A decision—either way could lead"
16"Harlow skidded to a stop."
17"She took a breath, shoulders"
18"Her instincts urged caution."
19"The last underground market she"
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Harlow reached a grimy door, barely hanging on its hinges, offering no reassurance."
1"Each stall displayed things that pricked the edges of her rationality."
2"Her suspect stood near another greasy table, hands clasped around something that sparkled ominously—a vial, maybe."
3"Unfamiliar territory lay ahead, and she felt as if she stood at the edge of a precipice, balancing betrayal and a chance for answers about her lost partner."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she replied, voice steady, masking the anger bubbling inside"
1"Harlow snapped, eyes narrowing"
2"she barked again, her tone low and dangerous"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"a voice croaked (croak)"
3"Harlow snapped (snap)"
4"Harlow shouted (shout)"
5"Harlow shouted (shout)"
6"she barked again (bark)"
7"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.889
effectiveRatio0.889
74.3032%