Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQT9EH5K0WF588ANNP3SMA

Run Details

Duration:
22.6s
Cost:
$0.000774
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory's eyes scanned the dimly lit bar, her gaze drifting over the familiar contours of The Raven's Nest. She'd spent countless nights within these walls, sipping whiskey and swapping stories with Silas, the enigmatic owner. The air was thick with the scent of old books and stale beer, a comforting smell that wrapped itself around her like a warm blanket. As she waited for her drink, her gaze landed on a figure hunched over the bar, nursing a glass of bourbon. For a moment, Rory's mind refused to reconcile the man before her with the boy she'd grown up with. The messy, sandy-blond hair was now slicked back, revealing a face that seemed chiseled from the same granite as the Welsh mountains. The bright, mischievous eyes she remembered had dulled, like the sea on a gray day. It was as if the very spark that had defined him had been extinguished, leaving behind a stranger. Evan. Her stomach twisted into a knot as their eyes met. The name had become synonymous with pain and regret, a constant reminder of the darkest period of her life. For a moment, they simply stared, the weight of years and unspoken words hanging between them like a challenge. Evan's face, once a map of laughter lines and creases, now seemed carved from a single piece of stone. He looked older, harder, his eyes red-rimmed from lack of sleep or too much drink. The sharp jawline and piercing blue eyes still lingered, but they were now tempered by a weariness that made him almost unrecognizable. As the silence stretched, Rory felt the familiar ache in her chest, the one she'd thought she'd long buried. It was as if the years had melted away, leaving her face-to-face with the ghost of her past. The memory of his touch, his laughter, and his lies came flooding back, threatening to consume her. Evan broke the silence, his voice low and gravelly. "Rory." The sound of her name on his lips was a spark to dry tinder. Emotions she'd thought long extinguished roared back to life, fueled by the remembered pain and the scars he'd left on her heart. She forced herself to move, her legs carrying her toward him with a will of their own. As she slid onto the stool beside him, the wooden surface creaked in protest. The sound was loud in the silence, a stark reminder of the tension between them. "What are you doing here?" Rory asked, her voice husky from disuse. Evan's gaze drifted back to his drink, his eyes clouding over like the sea on a stormy day. "Just passing through. I saw the sign, thought I'd drop in." The words were innocuous, but the tone was laced with a venom that made Rory's skin prickle. This wasn't the Evan she'd known, the one who'd charmed her with his quick wit and easy smile. This was a stranger, one who seemed to be nursing a deep-seated anger. As they sat in silence, the bartender slid a whiskey in front of Rory, his eyes flicking toward Evan before returning to her. The question was implicit: did she want him to intervene? Rory shook her head, almost imperceptibly. This was her demon to face, not Silas'. The minutes ticked by, the silence between them thickening into a palpable thing. It was as if the past and present were colliding, the weight of unspoken words and unresolved regret crushing the air from her lungs. As she raised her glass, her gaze met Evan's. For an instant, she saw a flicker of the boy she'd loved, the one who'd left her shattered and broken. The moment passed, leaving behind only the stranger, his eyes narrowed into slits. The whiskey burned its way down her throat, a welcome distraction from the turmoil brewing inside her. She set the glass back on the bar, the sound echoing through the silence. "Evan, what do you want?" The words hung in the air, a challenge and a question. The tension between them seemed to vibrate, a live thing that threatened to consume them both. As the silence stretched, Rory felt the weight of time bearing down on her, the accumulated years of regret and sorrow pressing against her chest. She knew that this was a reckoning, one that would force her to confront the ghosts of her past and the stranger beside her. The question was, was she ready?
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount744
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount744
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"enigmatic"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count2
6
word"weight"
count3
7
word"unspoken"
count2
8
word"silence"
count7
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"tension"
count2
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"enigmatic"
3"comforting"
4"stomach"
5"reminder"
6"weight"
7"unspoken"
8"silence"
9"stark"
10"tension"
11"palpable"
12"flicker"
13"shattered"
14"echoing"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
3
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
2"the weight of unspoken words"
3"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
79.37% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences45
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords739
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount716
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas1
Rory8
Welsh1
Evan7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
places
0"Welsh"
globalScore0.941
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"seemed chiseled from the same granite as the Welsh mountains"
1"It was as if the very spark that had defined him had been extinguished, leaving behind a stranger"
2"seemed carved from a single piece of stone"
3"It was as if the years had melted away, leaving her face-to-face with the ghost of her past"
4"It was as if the past and present were colliding, the weight of unspoken words and unresolved regret crushing the air from her lungs"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount739
matches(empty)
97.22% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"knew that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean35.19
std21.56
cv0.613
sampleLengths
081
174
21
348
456
554
610
736
846
912
1029
1148
1233
1314
1437
1542
1631
175
1827
1949
206
81.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences45
matches
0"been extinguished"
1"was laced"
2"was, was"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs122
matches
0"were colliding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences48
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount532
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"messy, sandy-blond hair"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.03195488721804511
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.007518796992481203
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
92.49% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean15.4
std5.87
cv0.381
sampleLengths
018
117
225
321
419
522
615
718
81
910
1019
1119
1219
1315
1422
1519
1618
1717
189
191
2014
2122
2217
2314
2415
2512
2618
2711
2817
2918
3013
3123
3210
336
348
3513
3624
379
3820
3913
4017
4114
425
4311
4416
4525
4624
476
41.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2708333333333333
totalSentences48
uniqueOpeners13
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences44
matches
0"She'd spent countless nights within"
1"It was as if the"
2"Her stomach twisted into a"
3"He looked older, harder, his"
4"It was as if the"
5"She forced herself to move,"
6"It was as if the"
7"She set the glass back"
8"She knew that this was"
ratio0.205
62.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences44
matches
0"Rory's eyes scanned the dimly"
1"She'd spent countless nights within"
2"The air was thick with"
3"The messy, sandy-blond hair was"
4"The bright, mischievous eyes she"
5"It was as if the"
6"Her stomach twisted into a"
7"The name had become synonymous"
8"Evan's face, once a map"
9"He looked older, harder, his"
10"The sharp jawline and piercing"
11"It was as if the"
12"The memory of his touch,"
13"Evan broke the silence, his"
14"The sound of her name"
15"Emotions she'd thought long extinguished"
16"She forced herself to move,"
17"The sound was loud in"
18"Rory asked, her voice husky"
19"Evan's gaze drifted back to"
ratio0.795
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air was thick with the scent of old books and stale beer, a comforting smell that wrapped itself around her like a warm blanket."
1"The messy, sandy-blond hair was now slicked back, revealing a face that seemed chiseled from the same granite as the Welsh mountains."
2"The sharp jawline and piercing blue eyes still lingered, but they were now tempered by a weariness that made him almost unrecognizable."
3"It was as if the years had melted away, leaving her face-to-face with the ghost of her past."
4"As they sat in silence, the bartender slid a whiskey in front of Rory, his eyes flicking toward Evan before returning to her."
5"It was as if the past and present were colliding, the weight of unspoken words and unresolved regret crushing the air from her lungs."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory asked, her voice husky from disuse"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.2125%