Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQTANRVP5EQWK84EJ85Y2V

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Duration:
7.4s
Cost:
$0.000340

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the heart of Richmond Park, where the city's hum faded into a distant murmur, Aurora Carter found herself beneath a sky unmarred by urban glow. The Fae Grove, as it was known to a select few, lay hidden beyond the ancient oak standing stones that marked its boundary. She'd come here seeking solace, a respite from the city's relentless pace and her own troubled mind. Yet, as she stepped into the grove, the wildflowers blooming year-round seemed to whisper secrets in the cool night air, and an unease settled over her like a shroud. The moon hung heavy and full, casting long shadows that danced eerily as the wind rustled the leaves. Aurora's breath misted in the chill, her straight, shoulder-length black hair stirring gently against her cheeks. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant at her throat, its deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly with warmth, a beacon in the encroaching darkness. She'd felt its tug, a subtle pull that had led her here, to this pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. The grove was silent, too silent. No owls hooted, no foxes rustled in the undergrowth. Just the wind, a constant, low sigh that seemed to carry whispers on its breath. Aurora's bright blue eyes scanned the clearing, taking in the familiar yet somehow alien landscape. She'd been here before, with Eva, her childhood friend who'd introduced her to the grove's mysteries. But tonight, it felt different. Wrong. A twig snapped. Aurora froze, her heart pounding in her chest. She turned slowly, eyes searching the shadows. Nothing moved. She took a deep breath, her fingers tightening around the Heartstone. "Just the wind," she muttered, her voice barely audible. She started walking again, her steps measured, each footfall deliberate. The grove was large, but she knew its boundaries, the ancient oaks that marked its edges. She'd explore, find the source of her unease, and leave. Simple. Another sound echoed through the grove, a soft, wet thud. Aurora's breath caught in her throat. She whirled around, her eyes wide. There, at the edge of her vision, something moved. She blinked, and it was gone. She took a step forward, her heart pounding. "Hello?" Her voice echoed, swallowed by the night. A faint glow caught her eye, a flicker of light amidst the shadows. She moved towards it, her steps hesitant. It pulsed, like the Heartstone, but fainter, weaker. As she approached, she realized it was a flower, its petals aglow with a soft, ethereal light. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the petals. They were warm, almost feverish. Suddenly, the wind picked up, howling through the trees. The flower's light flickered, then died, plunging the area into darkness. Aurora stumbled back, her heart racing. She fumbled for the Heartstone, its faint glow her only comfort in the sudden blackness. A low growl echoed through the grove. Aurora spun around, her eyes searching the darkness. "Who's there?" she demanded, her voice steadier than she felt. Silence greeted her, broken only by the wind's mournful cry. Then, she saw it. A figure, hunched and twisted, moving at the edge of her vision. It was humanoid, but wrong, its limbs too long, its movements jerky, unnatural. Aurora's breath hitched in her throat. She took a step back, then another, her eyes never leaving the figure. It turned, its face coming into the faint glow of the Heartstone. Aurora stifled a scream. The face was human, but the eyes... they were black, bottomless pits that seemed to swallow the light. Its mouth was twisted into a snarl, revealing teeth that were too sharp, too numerous. Aurora's mind raced. She'd heard stories, tales of Fae-touched creatures that dwelled in the grove. But she'd never believed, never truly feared. Until now. She took another step back, her hand closing around the Heartstone. It pulsed warmer, its glow intensifying. The creature snarled again, its eyes locked onto the Heartstone. It took a step forward, then another, its movements jerky, unnatural. Aurora stood her ground, her heart pounding in her chest. She couldn't run, not with the creature between her and the grove's edge. She had to stand, had to fight. She took a deep breath, her fingers tightening around the Heartstone. "I don't know what you are," she said, her voice steady despite the fear coursing through her veins. "But I'm not leaving without a fight." The creature growled, its eyes never leaving the Heartstone. It took another step forward, then another. Aurora stood her ground, her breath coming in short gasps. She was out of time, out of options. She had to act. She lunged forward, her hand raised, the Heartstone's glow casting eerie shadows on the creature's face. It snarled, its eyes widening in surprise. Aurora swung her arm, the Heartstone connecting with the creature's forehead. It yelped, a sound that was half-scream, half-howl, and stumbled back. Aurora didn't wait. She turned and ran, her heart pounding in her chest, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She could hear the creature behind her, its growls echoing through the grove, its footsteps pounding on the earth. She pushed herself harder, her eyes fixed on the ancient oaks that marked the grove's edge. She could feel it, the tug of the Heartstone, the pull towards the portal. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the rough bark of an oak. The world shifted, the grove blurring around her. She stumbled through the portal, her breath coming in ragged gasps, her heart pounding in her chest. She fell to her knees, her body wracked with sobs. She'd made it, she was safe. But the grove... it was changed. Tainted. And she had a feeling that this was only the beginning.
total_cost0.0003402

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount957
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount957
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"solace"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"beacon"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"pounding"
count6
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"footfall"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count3
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"amidst"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count2
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"raced"
count1
18
word"echoing"
count1
19
word"footsteps"
count1
20
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"solace"
1"whisper"
2"chill"
3"warmth"
4"beacon"
5"scanned"
6"familiar"
7"pounding"
8"measured"
9"footfall"
10"echoed"
11"flicker"
12"amidst"
13"pulsed"
14"flickered"
15"racing"
16"silence"
17"raced"
18"echoing"
19"footsteps"
20"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences92
matches
0"y with warmth"
1"g in surprise"
96.27% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords952
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount933
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora14
Carter1
Fae3
Grove1
Heartstone12
Pendant1
Earth1
Eva1
Silence1
Fae-touched1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Heartstone"
3"Eva"
4"Silence"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.75
windowScore0.667
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sigh that seemed to carry whispers on its breath"
1"pits that seemed to swallow the light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount952
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"feeling that this"
44.27% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean50.11
std15.28
cv0.305
sampleLengths
095
177
267
340
437
553
659
741
835
948
1049
1141
1251
1336
1438
1545
1654
1752
1834
90.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences92
matches
0"was known"
1"was gone"
2"was twisted"
3"was changed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs164
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences93
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount938
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03837953091684435
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010660980810234541
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean10.24
std5.5
cv0.538
sampleLengths
026
123
217
329
418
516
622
721
86
99
1015
1115
1216
135
141
153
168
177
182
1911
209
2110
2216
2310
241
2510
266
276
289
296
308
318
3213
337
348
3517
369
375
389
3911
406
4115
427
438
4410
4510
464
4712
4813
496
37.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.2903225806451613
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences87
matches
0"Just the wind, a constant,"
1"Suddenly, the wind picked up,"
2"Then, she saw it."
ratio0.034
3.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences87
matches
0"She'd come here seeking solace,"
1"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
2"She'd felt its tug, a"
3"She'd been here before, with"
4"She turned slowly, eyes searching"
5"She took a deep breath,"
6"she muttered, her voice barely"
7"She started walking again, her"
8"She'd explore, find the source"
9"She whirled around, her eyes"
10"She blinked, and it was"
11"She took a step forward,"
12"Her voice echoed, swallowed by"
13"She moved towards it, her"
14"It pulsed, like the Heartstone,"
15"She reached out, her fingers"
16"They were warm, almost feverish."
17"She fumbled for the Heartstone,"
18"she demanded, her voice steadier"
19"It was humanoid, but wrong,"
ratio0.54
23.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences87
matches
0"The Fae Grove, as it"
1"She'd come here seeking solace,"
2"The moon hung heavy and"
3"Aurora's breath misted in the"
4"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
5"She'd felt its tug, a"
6"The grove was silent, too"
7"Aurora's bright blue eyes scanned"
8"She'd been here before, with"
9"A twig snapped."
10"Aurora froze, her heart pounding"
11"She turned slowly, eyes searching"
12"She took a deep breath,"
13"she muttered, her voice barely"
14"She started walking again, her"
15"The grove was large, but"
16"She'd explore, find the source"
17"Another sound echoed through the"
18"Aurora's breath caught in her"
19"She whirled around, her eyes"
ratio0.874
57.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Yet, as she stepped into"
ratio0.011
3.11% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"She'd felt its tug, a subtle pull that had led her here, to this pocket between Earth and the Fae realm."
1"She'd been here before, with Eva, her childhood friend who'd introduced her to the grove's mysteries."
2"Its mouth was twisted into a snarl, revealing teeth that were too sharp, too numerous."
3"She'd heard stories, tales of Fae-touched creatures that dwelled in the grove."
4"It yelped, a sound that was half-scream, half-howl, and stumbled back."
5"She turned and ran, her heart pounding in her chest, her breath coming in ragged gasps."
6"She could hear the creature behind her, its growls echoing through the grove, its footsteps pounding on the earth."
7"She pushed herself harder, her eyes fixed on the ancient oaks that marked the grove's edge."
8"She stumbled through the portal, her breath coming in ragged gasps, her heart pounding in her chest."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she muttered, her voice barely audible"
1"she demanded, her voice steadier than she felt"
2"she said, her voice steady despite the fear coursing through her veins"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.667
72.8728%