Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQTAQGWTYWYBW716YD6FXX

Run Details

Duration:
2.1s
Cost:
$0.000062

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the clearing was thick, pressing against Aurora’s ribs like a living thing. She’d come to The Fae Grove for the Heartstone, but now the pendant’s warmth against her wrist felt hollow. The standing stones loomed around her, their gnarled roots twisting into the earth like skeletal fingers. A low, rhythmic hum vibrated beneath her boots, and the wildflowers swayed in a way that didn’t match the wind. Aurora exhaled sharply, her breath fogging the cool night air. The moment she’d stepped over the threshold, the world had shifted. The trees here didn’t stand still. They *breathed*. The leaves rustled just beyond her reach, as if whispering secrets only she could hear. A twig snapped. She spun, heart hammering, but there was nothing. Just the dark, the silence—too quiet. Then, another sound. A wet, clicking noise, like something small and sharp dragging itself across stone. Aurora’s pulse spiked. She pressed her back against the trunk of an ancient oak, her fingers tightening around the Heartstone. The pendant’s crimson glow pulsed faintly, pulsing like a heartbeat. She couldn’t see it. Couldn’t *see* anything. But she knew. A shadow moved at the edge of her vision—too fast, too deliberate. A blur of fur and bone, darting between the roots. Aurora’s breath came in ragged gasps. She should run. Should bolt for the park, for the light, for anything that wasn’t this. But the pendant’s glow intensified, casting a sickly red light over her. The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something *wrong*. The hum grew louder, a deep, throbbing pulse beneath her feet. A voice slithered into her mind, not words exactly, but a whisper, a vibration in her skull. *You came for the stone.* Aurora’s grip on the pendant tightened. She turned slowly, her eyes scanning the grove. Nothing. Just darkness. Just the whispering leaves. Then she saw it—a glint of silver at the base of a standing stone. A chain, coiled and still. The Heartstone’s chain. Her fingers trembled as she reached for it, her pulse roaring in her ears. The pendant’s glow flared, and the air around her *changed*. The trees leaned in, their branches pressing closer, as if the grove itself was holding its breath. A sound—low, wet, and *hungry*—slithered from the shadows. Aurora’s blood turned to ice. She pulled the pendant free, the silver chain snapping taut against her wrist. The glow burned brighter, casting eerie reflections across the standing stones. The thing in the dark didn’t move. It didn’t *breathe*. It waited.
total_cost0.00006168

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
76.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount424
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount424
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count3
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"glint"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"roaring"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"loomed"
2"rhythmic"
3"vibrated"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
6"pulsed"
7"whisper"
8"scanning"
9"glint"
10"trembled"
11"roaring"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords11
totalWords420
ratio0.026
matches
0"breathed"
1"see"
2"wrong"
3"You came for the stone."
4"changed"
5"hungry"
6"breathe"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount420
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora6
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.786
windowScore1
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if whispering secrets only she could hear"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords2.381
wordCount420
matches
0"not words exactly, but a whisper, a vibration in her skull"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean22.11
std18.06
cv0.817
sampleLengths
070
144
23
330
430
57
63
744
834
917
105
1121
1222
1341
148
155
1624
1710
182
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
98.99% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs66
matches
0"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences48
ratio0.083
matches
0"Just the dark, the silence—too quiet."
1"A shadow moved at the edge of her vision—too fast, too deliberate."
2"Then she saw it—a glint of silver at the base of a standing stone."
3"A sound—low, wet, and *hungry*—slithered from the shadows."
91.85% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount424
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, pressing against Aurora’s"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.04245283018867924
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.014150943396226415
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean8.75
std5.22
cv0.596
sampleLengths
015
119
216
320
410
511
66
72
815
93
108
116
123
1313
143
1517
1610
174
183
193
2012
2110
226
233
2413
2512
2611
2711
2817
295
306
318
321
332
344
3514
365
373
3814
3910
4017
418
425
4313
4411
457
463
472
35.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.2916666666666667
totalSentences48
uniqueOpeners14
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences44
matches
0"Just the dark, the silence—too"
1"Then, another sound."
2"Just the whispering leaves."
3"Then she saw it—a glint"
ratio0.091
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences44
matches
0"She’d come to The Fae"
1"She spun, heart hammering, but"
2"She pressed her back against"
3"She couldn’t see it."
4"She should run."
5"*You came for the stone.*"
6"She turned slowly, her eyes"
7"Her fingers trembled as she"
8"She pulled the pendant free,"
9"It didn’t *breathe*."
ratio0.227
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences44
matches
0"The air in the clearing"
1"She’d come to The Fae"
2"The standing stones loomed around"
3"A low, rhythmic hum vibrated"
4"Aurora exhaled sharply, her breath"
5"The moment she’d stepped over"
6"The trees here didn’t stand"
7"The leaves rustled just beyond"
8"A twig snapped."
9"She spun, heart hammering, but"
10"A wet, clicking noise, like"
11"Aurora’s pulse spiked."
12"She pressed her back against"
13"The pendant’s crimson glow pulsed"
14"She couldn’t see it."
15"A shadow moved at the"
16"A blur of fur and"
17"Aurora’s breath came in ragged"
18"She should run."
19"The air smelled of damp"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A low, rhythmic hum vibrated beneath her boots, and the wildflowers swayed in a way that didn’t match the wind."
1"The trees leaned in, their branches pressing closer, as if the grove itself was holding its breath."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.4085%