| 40.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she waved lightly [lightly]" | | 1 | "she finally said [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.48 | | leniency | 0.96 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.16 | |
| 80.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1031 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.41% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1031 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "glistening" | | 4 | "predator" | | 5 | "unspoken" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "flicked" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "scanned" | | 12 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1019 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 855 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.05 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 9 | | Latin | 1 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 9 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.974 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something like apology" | | 1 | "as if grasping at the ordinary to bridge the gap of their years apart" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.981 | | wordCount | 1019 | | matches | | 0 | "neither acknowledged nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.13% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 29.11 | | std | 11.92 | | cv | 0.409 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 37 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "Some innate instinct—something older, deeper—made her raise her head, just as a knock cut through the sounds of storm and night." | | 1 | "The small wrinkle that appeared at the corner of his lips suggested amusement, but there was something more—something like apology." | | 2 | "He looked down at Ptolemy, who had lifted his head with regal disdain, but stayed silent, watching Eva with those impossible eyes—a pact between predator and prey undecided which was which." | | 3 | "“The Frenchman gracing the East End with his presence; did the underworld let you off early, or did you decide to take a detour?”" | | 4 | "Ptolemy flicked his tail and returned to his slumber, perhaps sensing an interlude beyond his comprehension—or simply too indifferent to care." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 866 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.03810623556581986 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012702078521939953 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 16.17 | | std | 7.8 | | cv | 0.482 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 84.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5238095238095238 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Once they’d shared laughter between" | | 1 | "Too many roads led out" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 73.85% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "She leaned against the kitchen" | | 1 | "It wasn’t so much the" | | 2 | "his voice carried a richness" | | 3 | "she replied, the name lingering" | | 4 | "He leaned on the ivory-handled" | | 5 | "He looked down at Ptolemy," | | 6 | "His gaze roved across the" | | 7 | "It sounded harsher than intended." | | 8 | "she waved lightly, attempting to" | | 9 | "His laughter emerged, honest and" | | 10 | "Her eyes cut sideways to" | | 11 | "She didn’t look away, watching" | | 12 | "He didn’t flinch when her" | | 13 | "It wasn't a question of" | | 14 | "his words deliberate, as if" | | 15 | "she finally said, voice earnest," | | 16 | "His laugh, almost self-deprecating, belied" | | 17 | "she replied, allowing the ghost" | | 18 | "They moved past icy separation" |
| | ratio | 0.365 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain had drummed a" | | 1 | "She leaned against the kitchen" | | 2 | "Ptolemy, with his fierce green" | | 3 | "Some innate instinct—something older, deeper—made" | | 4 | "It wasn’t so much the" | | 5 | "The three deadbolts slid free," | | 6 | "Lucien stood on her threshold," | | 7 | "The street lamps outside cast" | | 8 | "his voice carried a richness" | | 9 | "she replied, the name lingering" | | 10 | "He leaned on the ivory-handled" | | 11 | "The small wrinkle that appeared" | | 12 | "Eva stood back so the" | | 13 | "The smell of spices drifted" | | 14 | "Lucien stepped over the threshold," | | 15 | "He looked down at Ptolemy," | | 16 | "His gaze roved across the" | | 17 | "Eva didn’t know why she" | | 18 | "It sounded harsher than intended." | | 19 | "An echo of past wounds" |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 96.15% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Now every whisper of an" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned on the ivory-handled cane that concealed the blade she knew too well, unbothered, almost as if he belonged there." | | 1 | "The small wrinkle that appeared at the corner of his lips suggested amusement, but there was something more—something like apology." | | 2 | "He looked down at Ptolemy, who had lifted his head with regal disdain, but stayed silent, watching Eva with those impossible eyes—a pact between predator and pr…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "his voice carried, a trace of sunsweet vineyards mingling with the London drizzle" | | 1 | "Lucien remarked, as if grasping at the ordinary to bridge the gap of their years apart" | | 2 | "she waved lightly, attempting to capture ease in the jest" | | 3 | "Lucien began, the nonchalance slightly at odds with a tightened jaw" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.12 | | leniency | 0.24 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |