Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQTE0Q4N93EFDXRXEXMV4M

Run Details

Duration:
42.1s
Cost:
$0.015510
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had drummed a relentless tattoo on the windows all evening, a persistent patter that Eva had learned to ignore. She leaned against the kitchen counter, lost in the whirl of lines and figures scrawled across her notes. Ptolemy, with his fierce green eyes, sat slumbering on an open volume of Latin texts. Some innate instinct—something older, deeper—made her raise her head, just as a knock cut through the sounds of storm and night. It wasn’t so much the volume of it but the weight, like an echo of memories, shadows of words needed saying. With a glance at the clock, she clutched at her old cardigan, the wool stretching across her shoulders, and moved to the door. The three deadbolts slid free, one after another, until the door gave way to reveal a face both familiar and distant in the curves of its smile and the brightness of its unmatching eyes. Lucien stood on her threshold, rainwater glistening on the shoulders of his tailored suit. The street lamps outside cast a mix of amber and gray light across him, accentuating the one amber eye reflecting the city glow like a cat waiting to spring. "Eva," his voice carried a richness of the south, a trace of sunsweet vineyards mingling with the London drizzle. "Lucien," she replied, the name lingering on her tongue almost of its own accord, its familiarity awash with a dissonance she struggled to hide behind her steady gaze. He leaned on the ivory-handled cane that concealed the blade she knew too well, unbothered, almost as if he belonged there. The small wrinkle that appeared at the corner of his lips suggested amusement, but there was something more—something like apology. “Might I come in, or do we conduct this reunion in the hallway?” Eva stood back so the door widened, leaving them in a tiny foyer intersecting worlds past and present. The smell of spices drifted up from below, a counter rhythm to the damp autumn wind slipping in through the crack, and she saw how Lucien shivered slightly at the contrast. Lucien stepped over the threshold, his gait a swagger built of habit rather than certainty. He looked down at Ptolemy, who had lifted his head with regal disdain, but stayed silent, watching Eva with those impossible eyes—a pact between predator and prey undecided which was which. “Fancy place you’ve got.” His gaze roved across the book-laden surfaces. “Some things never change.” “Some things do.” Eva didn’t know why she said it. It sounded harsher than intended. An echo of past wounds neither acknowledged nor hidden well. “The tabby’s new,” Lucien remarked, as if grasping at the ordinary to bridge the gap of their years apart. “Ptolemy. Eva’s Alexandrian tangent,” she waved lightly, attempting to capture ease in the jest. The room tightened around them as Lucien's presence pressed on their unspoken history. Once they’d shared laughter between brittle conversation and stolen glances after midnight. Now every whisper of an argument gone awry haunted this space. Rain still whispered in a murmur at the window pane, only occasionally punctuated by the metal groan of passing cars sloshing through puddles in this living city. “I was in the area,” Lucien began, the nonchalance slightly at odds with a tightened jaw. “Just finished a...job. Thought I might see you.” Eva nodded, creating silence ironically swollen with sound. “The Frenchman gracing the East End with his presence; did the underworld let you off early, or did you decide to take a detour?” His laughter emerged, honest and sudden, a sound warmed by genuine amusement. “Ah, Eva, your wit is as sharp as ever. No detour, unless you count matters of the heart.” Her eyes cut sideways to him at the mention, reading between lines he hadn’t yet drawn and others erased with time. “And what matters does that heart of yours peddle tonight?” Lucien moved closer, his cane left to lean against the table like an afterthought. “Reckoning.” The word perched between them sharp, unexpected in its nakedness. Ptolemy flicked his tail and returned to his slumber, perhaps sensing an interlude beyond his comprehension—or simply too indifferent to care. “I thought we’d settled that.” Eva found her own voice a whisper reclaimed from places she'd long since closed off. “Aye,” a brief flicker of tired resignation softened his expression. “But not nearly enough. Left some pieces scattered.” She didn’t look away, watching him as the rain’s tumult became a steady mantra beyond the room. “I suppose it’s fitting this weather brought you here.” Lucien’s hand found hers. He didn’t flinch when her fingers froze under his touch, the warmth seeping like truth into long-held lies. “Are you staying or just passing through?” It wasn't a question of where, but why, spoken softer. Too many roads led out from that singular point, too much tangled in mouth-watering attraction and the reluctance they both held for its poison. “Depends,” his words deliberate, as if weighed for meaning and nuance both. “What do you want?” What did she want? Eva scanned the skyline seen through mist-glossed glass, considering choices and chances left like crumpled candy wrappers around her feet. Trust them, or trust nobody. “I want to know why you're here, really,” she finally said, voice earnest, laced with a plea barely trodden from the realm of dreams and shadows. Lucien stepped back, time hanging soft and silken on his next steps. “Maybe—just maybe—you,” His laugh, almost self-deprecating, belied the tension beneath. “Though I’d settle for a cup of tea, if you have one to spare.” Eva breathed out a slow sigh, a thread holding them poised on that brink hardly containing the bitter nostalgia. As the paused moment trickled by, Eva let her guard slip a fraction and saw him smiling in its wake. “I think we can arrange that,” she replied, allowing the ghost of a grin to lighten her response. They moved past icy separation into the kitchen's warmth, unaware of how each intention might pull closer the tangled paths forming the map between what they’d lost and potentially found again, one tea cup at a time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
40.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she waved lightly [lightly]"
1"she finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.48
leniency0.96
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.16
80.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lightly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"echo"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"glistening"
count1
4
word"predator"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count2
11
word"scanned"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"echo"
2"familiar"
3"glistening"
4"predator"
5"unspoken"
6"whisper"
7"silence"
8"flicked"
9"flicker"
10"warmth"
11"scanned"
12"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1019
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount855
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva9
Latin1
London1
Lucien9
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Latin"
2"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.974
windowScore0.833
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like apology"
1"as if grasping at the ordinary to bridge the gap of their years apart"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.981
wordCount1019
matches
0"neither acknowledged nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
74.13% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean29.11
std11.92
cv0.409
sampleLengths
054
142
257
343
419
528
641
713
849
946
1015
1125
1219
1314
1436
1527
1624
1732
1830
1931
2015
2131
2220
2318
2426
2522
2641
2716
2829
2926
3012
3124
3239
3318
3437
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences63
ratio0.079
matches
0"Some innate instinct—something older, deeper—made her raise her head, just as a knock cut through the sounds of storm and night."
1"The small wrinkle that appeared at the corner of his lips suggested amusement, but there was something more—something like apology."
2"He looked down at Ptolemy, who had lifted his head with regal disdain, but stayed silent, watching Eva with those impossible eyes—a pact between predator and prey undecided which was which."
3"“The Frenchman gracing the East End with his presence; did the underworld let you off early, or did you decide to take a detour?”"
4"Ptolemy flicked his tail and returned to his slumber, perhaps sensing an interlude beyond his comprehension—or simply too indifferent to care."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount866
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.03810623556581986
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012702078521939953
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean16.17
std7.8
cv0.482
sampleLengths
021
118
215
321
421
523
634
714
829
919
1028
1121
1220
1313
1418
1531
1615
1731
1811
194
2010
215
2210
2319
2414
2513
2612
2711
2827
2916
308
318
3224
3312
3418
3521
3610
3714
381
3910
4021
4120
4210
438
4417
459
464
4718
4817
4924
84.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5238095238095238
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"Once they’d shared laughter between"
1"Too many roads led out"
ratio0.038
73.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences52
matches
0"She leaned against the kitchen"
1"It wasn’t so much the"
2"his voice carried a richness"
3"she replied, the name lingering"
4"He leaned on the ivory-handled"
5"He looked down at Ptolemy,"
6"His gaze roved across the"
7"It sounded harsher than intended."
8"she waved lightly, attempting to"
9"His laughter emerged, honest and"
10"Her eyes cut sideways to"
11"She didn’t look away, watching"
12"He didn’t flinch when her"
13"It wasn't a question of"
14"his words deliberate, as if"
15"she finally said, voice earnest,"
16"His laugh, almost self-deprecating, belied"
17"she replied, allowing the ghost"
18"They moved past icy separation"
ratio0.365
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences52
matches
0"The rain had drummed a"
1"She leaned against the kitchen"
2"Ptolemy, with his fierce green"
3"Some innate instinct—something older, deeper—made"
4"It wasn’t so much the"
5"The three deadbolts slid free,"
6"Lucien stood on her threshold,"
7"The street lamps outside cast"
8"his voice carried a richness"
9"she replied, the name lingering"
10"He leaned on the ivory-handled"
11"The small wrinkle that appeared"
12"Eva stood back so the"
13"The smell of spices drifted"
14"Lucien stepped over the threshold,"
15"He looked down at Ptolemy,"
16"His gaze roved across the"
17"Eva didn’t know why she"
18"It sounded harsher than intended."
19"An echo of past wounds"
ratio0.846
96.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Now every whisper of an"
ratio0.019
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He leaned on the ivory-handled cane that concealed the blade she knew too well, unbothered, almost as if he belonged there."
1"The small wrinkle that appeared at the corner of his lips suggested amusement, but there was something more—something like apology."
2"He looked down at Ptolemy, who had lifted his head with regal disdain, but stayed silent, watching Eva with those impossible eyes—a pact between predator and pr…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"his voice carried, a trace of sunsweet vineyards mingling with the London drizzle"
1"Lucien remarked, as if grasping at the ordinary to bridge the gap of their years apart"
2"she waved lightly, attempting to capture ease in the jest"
3"Lucien began, the nonchalance slightly at odds with a tightened jaw"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.24
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.5091%