| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.37 | | leniency | 0.739 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1673 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1673 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "wavered" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "lurching" | | 14 | "unwavering" | | 15 | "echoes" | | 16 | "throbbed" | | 17 | "could feel" | | 18 | "quivered" | | 19 | "raced" | | 20 | "gleaming" | | 21 | "marble" | | 22 | "shimmered" | | 23 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 182 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 211 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1657 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.27% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1387 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.87 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 22 | | Aurora | 26 | | Faded | 1 | | Silver | 1 | | Cold | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Faded" | | 3 | "Silver" | | 4 | "Cold" | | 5 | "Veil" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.563 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 32.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like cold metal and honey, and eac" | | 1 | "as though scanning for intruders" | | 2 | "seemed guided roots arched to form a corridor, branches knitted into an arch overhead" | | 3 | "as if inhaling" | | 4 | "seemed woven from moonlight and shadow, drifting without wind" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1657 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 211 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 24.01 | | std | 13.72 | | cv | 0.571 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 38 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 47 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 263 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 20.99% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 211 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers clustered at their bases, petals in shades no name could capture—orchid violet, sunset gold, dew-white." | | 1 | "She studied the glyphs—no myth had mentioned this grove, and no map led here." | | 2 | "Each step seemed guided—roots arched to form a corridor, branches knitted into an arch overhead." | | 3 | "Cold seeped through her skin, carrying distant echoes—laughter at feasts beneath amber skies, the clang of chains on distant shores." | | 4 | "She could feel the Veil’s distortion—faint lines of shimmer along the moss, threads of silver looping between the stones." | | 5 | "Aurora’s ears filled with distant echoes—voices chanting in a language she almost recognized, the rasp of sickles against iron, the crackle of distant flames." | | 6 | "Flickers of phosphorescent fungus clung to the walls—tiny lanterns guiding their way." | | 7 | "She adjusted the pouch at her waist—inside, the Fae-Forged Blade lay cold, its moonsilver edge gleaming." | | 8 | "A doorway formed in its center—a slit of obsidian light." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1403 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.022095509622238062 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003563791874554526 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 211 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 211 | | mean | 7.85 | | std | 4.78 | | cv | 0.609 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 51.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.32701421800947866 | | totalSentences | 211 | | uniqueOpeners | 69 | |
| 83.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "Then they reappeared, fingertips dusted" | | 1 | "Then warmth flooded her senses:" | | 2 | "Instead, the air inside shimmered" | | 3 | "Then they vanished into light." |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "It tasted like cold metal" | | 1 | "She laid a hand over" | | 2 | "She frowned, glancing at Nyx." | | 3 | "they whispered, voice a breeze" | | 4 | "She studied the glyphs—no myth" | | 5 | "She pressed harder." | | 6 | "They stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 7 | "Their footfalls echoed twice, then" | | 8 | "Their voice tangled with the" | | 9 | "She could hear her own" | | 10 | "She traced the runes with" | | 11 | "She jumped back as a" | | 12 | "She crossed the mossy floor," | | 13 | "She broke off as a" | | 14 | "Her gown seemed woven from" | | 15 | "She offered a small bow." | | 16 | "She had never shown it" | | 17 | "She leveled her gaze." | | 18 | "She knelt, tracing a finger" | | 19 | "Her reflection blurred, then shifted." |
| | ratio | 0.277 | |
| 16.60% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 141 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped between two ancient" | | 1 | "Nyx trailed at her side," | | 2 | "The air had changed." | | 3 | "It tasted like cold metal" | | 4 | "A ring of standing stones" | | 5 | "Wildflowers clustered at their bases," | | 6 | "Aurora sank to one knee," | | 7 | "The petals felt cool, as" | | 8 | "Heartstone on its silver chain" | | 9 | "She laid a hand over" | | 10 | "A faint warmth pulsed with" | | 11 | "She frowned, glancing at Nyx." | | 12 | "Nyx’s form hardened, edges crisping" | | 13 | "Violet light gleamed from their" | | 14 | "they whispered, voice a breeze" | | 15 | "Aurora rose, tucking a strand" | | 16 | "Nyx’s shadow-limbs wavered." | | 17 | "She studied the glyphs—no myth" | | 18 | "The stone shivered under her" | | 19 | "She pressed harder." |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 76.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The stone shivered under her touch, as if it recognized her." | | 1 | "Through the trees, shafts of silver light pierced the canopy, each beam rotating slowly, as though scanning for intruders." | | 2 | "Faded runes layered over fresh scars, as if someone repaired the boundary in secret." | | 3 | "She crossed the mossy floor, following a path of phosphorescent fungi that grew along fallen logs." | | 4 | "A swirl of petals floated past, drifting upward through a shaft of light that pierced the darkness above." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 19.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 3 | "the woman announced (announce)" | | 4 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.283 | | leniency | 0.565 | | rawRatio | 0.462 | | effectiveRatio | 0.261 | |