Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQTHXJZTH89W64EV810N3P

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Duration:
29.6s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged whiskey and polished wood. Rory wiped her hands on her jeans, the chill of the London evening still clinging to her fingers. She hadn’t expected the place to be so quiet—just a handful of regulars nursing drinks in the corners, the low hum of conversation barely rising above the clink of glass. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow through the windows, painting the bar in shades of jade. She slid onto a stool, her boots scuffing against the worn floorboards. The bartender, a broad-shouldered man with a neatly trimmed beard, glanced up from wiping a glass. His hazel eyes flicked over her, sharp and assessing. "You’re late," Silas said, setting the glass down. Rory exhaled through her nose. "Traffic on the Strand was hell. Some protest near Trafalgar." Silas didn’t smile, but the corner of his mouth twitched. "You always had a knack for excuses." She opened her mouth to retort, but the door swung open behind her. A gust of cold air rushed in, carrying with it the scent of rain and something else—expensive cologne, maybe, or just the ghost of old memories. "Christ, it’s like a morgue in here," a voice drawled. "Did someone die, or is this just your usual ambiance, Silas?" Rory’s fingers stilled around the edge of the bar. She knew that voice. Knew it the way she knew the shape of her own scar, the one on her wrist that ached when it rained. Silas didn’t look at her. "Evan. You’re early." Evan. The name hit her like a punch to the ribs. She turned slowly, her pulse thudding in her throat. He stood in the doorway, shaking rain from his coat. The years had carved lines into his face—sharper jaw, deeper shadows under his eyes. His hair, once dark and unruly, was now cropped close, threaded with silver at the temples. But his smile was the same. That easy, infuriating smirk that used to make her stomach flip. Then his gaze landed on her. The smirk faltered. Just for a second. Just long enough for Rory to see the flicker of recognition, the way his pupils dilated, the way his fingers twitched at his sides like he was fighting the urge to reach for her. "Rory," he said, and her name in his mouth was a live wire. She didn’t answer. Couldn’t. The air between them crackled, thick with everything they weren’t saying. Silas cleared his throat. "Drinks?" Evan didn’t look away from her. "Whiskey. Neat." Rory swallowed. "Same." Silas poured, the amber liquid sloshing into the glasses. He slid them across the bar, his signet ring glinting in the dim light. "You two know each other." Evan finally broke eye contact, picking up his drink. "Yeah. We go way back." Rory wrapped her fingers around her glass, the heat of it seeping into her skin. "Way back," she echoed. Evan took a sip, his throat working. "How’ve you been, Rory?" She wanted to laugh. Or scream. Or throw her drink in his face. Instead, she lifted her glass and took a long, slow swallow. The whiskey burned all the way down. "Fine," she said. "You?" He hesitated. Just for a beat. "Good. Really good." Silas leaned against the bar, watching them both. "Evan’s in town on business. Thought I’d put him up for a few nights." Rory’s grip tightened on her glass. "How generous." Evan’s jaw tensed. "It’s just a couple of days." "Right." She set her glass down, harder than she meant to. The whiskey sloshed over the rim. "Just passing through." Evan exhaled through his nose. "Rory—" She stood abruptly, her stool scraping against the floor. "I should go." Silas straightened. "Rory." She ignored him, grabbing her jacket from the back of the stool. Evan stepped forward, his hand half-raised like he wanted to stop her. But he didn’t. He just stood there, his mouth pressed into a thin line. "Always running," he said quietly. The words hit her like a slap. She turned, her coat clutched in her fists. "What did you say?" Evan didn’t flinch. "You heard me." Silas rubbed a hand over his beard, his limp more pronounced as he shifted his weight. "Maybe you two should—" "No." Rory’s voice was steady. Too steady. "We shouldn’t." Evan’s eyes darkened. "Still can’t face things, can you?" She laughed, sharp and bitter. "Facing things? That’s rich, coming from you." He stepped closer, his voice dropping. "You left. Not me." The air left her lungs. She wanted to hit him. Wanted to scream. Wanted to tell him exactly what he’d done, what he’d let happen. But the words stuck in her throat, thick and suffocating. Silas sighed. "Alright. That’s enough." Rory turned on her heel, her boots thudding against the floorboards. The door swung shut behind her with a finality that echoed in her chest. Evan didn’t follow. Outside, the rain had picked up, drumming against the pavement in a relentless rhythm. Rory pulled her jacket tighter around herself, her breath fogging in the cold air. She didn’t look back. Not even when she heard the door open behind her. "Rory." She stopped. Didn’t turn. Evan’s footsteps splashed through the puddles. He stopped just behind her, close enough that she could feel the heat of him through the damp air. "I didn’t know you’d be here," he said. She closed her eyes. "Would it have mattered?" A pause. Then, quieter: "No." She turned then, her bright blue eyes locking onto his. "Then why are you out here?" Evan’s throat worked. "Because I needed to see your face." The words hung between them, heavy and raw. Rory wanted to believe him. Wanted to let herself fall into the past, into the way things used to be. But the past was a ghost, and ghosts didn’t stay buried. She stepped back, putting space between them. "You should go back inside." Evan didn’t move. "Rory—" "Go back inside, Evan." He stared at her for a long moment. Then, finally, he nodded. "Yeah. Okay." He turned and walked away, his shoulders stiff, his hands shoved deep in his pockets. Rory watched him go, the rain blurring the edges of him until he disappeared through the door of the Raven’s Nest. She stood there for a long time, the rain soaking through her jacket, her skin. The whiskey in her stomach burned, but it wasn’t enough. Nothing was enough. Not anymore.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.178
leniency0.356
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.044
90.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1080
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count2
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count2
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"flicked"
2"pulse"
3"stomach"
4"flicker"
5"glinting"
6"echoed"
7"weight"
8"footsteps"
9"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1075
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount905
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
London1
Rory12
Evan13
Silas9
Wanted3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.782
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1075
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean17.34
std14.77
cv0.852
sampleLengths
077
137
28
315
417
539
621
735
88
920
1057
116
1241
1313
1415
155
168
173
1828
1914
2019
2111
2231
234
249
2522
268
279
2820
296
3012
313
3238
335
3419
356
3620
379
389
3912
4010
4135
425
4325
443
4542
461
474
4825
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs169
matches
0"was fighting"
1"weren’t saying"
83.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences144
ratio0.021
matches
0"She hadn’t expected the place to be so quiet—just a handful of regulars nursing drinks in the corners, the low hum of conversation barely rising above the clink of glass."
1"A gust of cold air rushed in, carrying with it the scent of rain and something else—expensive cologne, maybe, or just the ghost of old memories."
2"The years had carved lines into his face—sharper jaw, deeper shadows under his eyes."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount910
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.038461538461538464
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.01098901098901099
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean7.47
std5.77
cv0.774
sampleLengths
010
118
230
319
412
516
69
78
85
910
1010
117
1213
1326
1410
1511
169
174
1822
195
203
211
2210
239
2410
2514
2616
276
2811
296
303
314
3234
3313
343
351
3611
374
381
396
402
412
421
439
4414
455
469
475
4815
494
52.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences93
matches
0"Then his gaze landed on"
1"Just for a second."
2"Just long enough for Rory"
3"Instead, she lifted her glass"
4"Just for a beat."
5"Then, finally, he nodded."
ratio0.065
95.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences93
matches
0"She hadn’t expected the place"
1"She slid onto a stool,"
2"His hazel eyes flicked over"
3"She opened her mouth to"
4"She knew that voice."
5"She turned slowly, her pulse"
6"He stood in the doorway,"
7"His hair, once dark and"
8"he said, and her name"
9"She didn’t answer."
10"He slid them across the"
11"She wanted to laugh."
12"She set her glass down,"
13"She stood abruptly, her stool"
14"She ignored him, grabbing her"
15"He just stood there, his"
16"he said quietly"
17"She turned, her coat clutched"
18"She laughed, sharp and bitter."
19"He stepped closer, his voice"
ratio0.312
51.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences93
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled of"
1"Rory wiped her hands on"
2"She hadn’t expected the place"
3"The green neon sign outside"
4"She slid onto a stool,"
5"The bartender, a broad-shouldered man"
6"His hazel eyes flicked over"
7"Silas said, setting the glass"
8"Rory exhaled through her nose."
9"Silas didn’t smile, but the"
10"She opened her mouth to"
11"A gust of cold air"
12"a voice drawled"
13"Rory’s fingers stilled around the"
14"She knew that voice."
15"Silas didn’t look at her."
16"The name hit her like"
17"She turned slowly, her pulse"
18"He stood in the doorway,"
19"The years had carved lines"
ratio0.817
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"a voice drawled (drawl)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.044
89.4877%