Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQTNKEPQ218M7MFWJ80RBW

Run Details

Duration:
31.5s
Cost:
$0.000139
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood at the ancient oak standing stones, the mist curling around her ankles like skeletal fingers. The air was heavy with an otherworldly silence, as if the world beyond the standing stones had abandoned this place. Faint whispers clung to the back of her mind, tiny tremors that defied Calibration. She'd been warned not to come, her friend Eva's hands shaking around her cup as she dared not look into Isolde's grove. She shouldn't be here. Rory's gaze wandered, weaving a path through the whispers. Feral wildflowers loomed above her, their self-starved flowers embracing macabre roots twisted around ancient wooden spears set into the wooden stakes set within a stone pedestal in the center, connecting them to the mist itself, water gurgled softly. This utterly ordinary roar only missed by becoming less loud. Under her own dinner in sparsely meant patios slid motions layered shadows encouraged leading sheep propping bends dynamics. 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The air was heavy with an otherworldly silence, as if the world beyond the standing stones had abandoned this place. Faint whispers clung to the back of her mind, tiny tremors that defied explanation. She'd been warned not to come, her friend Eva's hands shaking around her cup as she dared not look into Isolde's grove. She shouldn't be here. Rory's gaze wandered, weaving a path through the whispers. The feral wildflowers towered above her, their self-starved blooms twisting in macabre dance among the ancient wooden spears set into the stone pedestals. Water gurgled softly in the distance, an unnatural roar that grew louder by barely perceptible degrees. A faint whisper rustled, its cadence sorrowful, its melody chaotic. Rory spun, reaching out for something tangible in the face of the creeping disquiet. "Why can't we speak here?" she breathed, her voice barely audible. The wildflowers seemed to shudder, their petals trembling as if threatened by an unseen force. Rory's mind reeled, clinging to the rationality that this was just her imagination – but her skin prickled with an ancient, prehistoric unease. The standing stones loomed above her, their weathered surfaces etched with secrets. Rory's hand cupped the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, the faint warmth of it a comfort she couldn't quite articulate. She'd been given this pendant by an unknown benefactor, its origins and purpose lost to her. The darkness deepened, the mist coalescing into a palpable presence. Rory took a step back, her heart racing with the realization that she was not alone in the.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:41:14.356Z" 2/19/2026, 10:41:14 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2165
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"utterly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Emily"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2165
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"loomed"
count2
3
word"macabre"
count2
4
word"structure"
count1
5
word"disrupting"
count1
6
word"constructed"
count1
7
word"magnetic"
count2
8
word"processed"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"absolutely"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"synthetic"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count2
14
word"chaotic"
count2
15
word"affection"
count1
16
word"desire"
count1
17
word"solitary"
count1
18
word"predator"
count1
19
word"navigating"
count1
20
word"dance"
count1
21
word"tangible"
count1
22
word"etched"
count1
23
word"warmth"
count1
24
word"palpable"
count1
25
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"silence"
2"loomed"
3"macabre"
4"structure"
5"disrupting"
6"constructed"
7"magnetic"
8"processed"
9"measured"
10"absolutely"
11"perfect"
12"synthetic"
13"whisper"
14"chaotic"
15"affection"
16"desire"
17"solitary"
18"predator"
19"navigating"
20"dance"
21"tangible"
22"etched"
23"warmth"
24"palpable"
25"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count2
highlights
0"The air was heavy with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences23
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences23
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
0.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences24
gibberishSentences4
adjustedGibberishSentences4
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount3
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen527
ratio0.167
matches
0"\"A credit for explanation sparkle chamber took gradient opposite but standings renov sacrificed geographical tasted Acer TOM peoples Strike accessory northern Clare prec flash vali…"
1"\"Why can't we speak here?\" Rory asked, dragging her voice, disappointing, steadfast blindness crossing lattice capac constructors finding recalled applications appreciate officers …"
2"She concentrated on the doubt pec nursery projection claim industries products steering requirement stew soon prisoner seconds exceptions festival interesting subject virgin freak …"
3"Award purpose elegance indispensable affection variety responding feasible titles salute untreated Sea lifted whip toComp han Village negotiation overl propagated altogether others…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2166
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions165
wordCount1547
uniqueNames153
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Calibration1
Eva2
Isolde2
Holiday1
Discolder1
Structure1
Decode1
Former1
Barrett1
Cash1
Ma2
Piano1
Vel1
Placement1
San1
Rescue1
Rape1
Review1
Infer1
Climbs1
Lead1
Omni1
Cuba1
Americ1
Lau1
Ris1
Happiness1
Holdings1
Parents1
Vera1
Gujarat1
Hello1
Benefits1
Iris1
Calvin1
Auss1
Bolivia1
Provision1
Gum1
Installing1
Oxford1
Hiring1
Bank1
Tears1
Table1
Ricardo1
Unidious1
Esther1
Vis1
Charles1
Sky1
Dame1
Gordon1
Kumar1
Lords1
Drink1
Vice1
Jones1
Sir1
Tur1
Recent1
Duke1
Hip1
Didn1
Sport1
Rookie1
Wholesale1
Run1
Mother1
Jess1
Ju1
Austin1
Fewest1
Progress1
Chancellor1
Rus1
Cyril1
Hok1
National2
Peach1
Manufacturing1
Vir1
Ti1
Comment1
Connecticut1
Amber1
Afghanistan1
Wheat1
Morocco1
October1
Weston1
Partners1
Fashion1
Beginners1
Fixed1
Client1
Melbourne1
Step1
Crit1
Note1
Sphere1
Policy1
Mae1
Europe1
Arrays1
Treasury1
Sea1
Village1
Super1
Wins1
Communication1
Pierce1
Guatemala1
Griffith1
Shields1
Var1
Mirror1
Belarus1
Dez1
Ge1
Well-pre1
Bain1
Soviet1
Soccer1
Maint1
Arabic1
Georgia1
Success1
Yemen1
Wood1
Sub1
Erie1
Bend1
Luc1
Dependency1
Fees1
Hel1
Next1
Shape1
Shin1
Eden1
Nov1
Office1
Kindle1
Producer1
June1
Raspberry1
Halloween1
Syria1
Aurora2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Structure"
2"Barrett"
3"Cash"
4"Ma"
5"Vel"
6"Placement"
7"Rescue"
8"Lau"
9"Vera"
10"Iris"
11"Calvin"
12"Installing"
13"Ricardo"
14"Unidious"
15"Esther"
16"Vis"
17"Charles"
18"Gordon"
19"Kumar"
20"Drink"
21"Jones"
22"Sir"
23"Tur"
24"Recent"
25"Didn"
26"Rookie"
27"Mother"
28"Jess"
29"Austin"
30"Cyril"
31"Amber"
32"October"
33"Weston"
34"Mae"
35"Arrays"
36"Treasury"
37"Sea"
38"Pierce"
39"Griffith"
40"Shields"
41"Mirror"
42"Soviet"
43"Bend"
44"Luc"
45"Eden"
46"Kindle"
47"June"
48"Aurora"
49"Rory"
places
0"Isolde"
1"Cuba"
2"Gujarat"
3"Bolivia"
4"Oxford"
5"Connecticut"
6"Afghanistan"
7"Morocco"
8"Melbourne"
9"Europe"
10"Guatemala"
11"Belarus"
12"Georgia"
13"Yemen"
14"Syria"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences21
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite articulate"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2166
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences24
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean135.38
std116.15
cv0.858
sampleLengths
077
198
2103
3226
4351
5101
678
7298
8152
9408
1077
1148
1235
1338
1448
1528
59.50% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences23
matches
0"been warned"
1"been warned"
2"been given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs284
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences24
ratio0.083
matches
0"\"Why can't we speak here?\" Rory asked, dragging her voice, disappointing, steadfast blindness crossing lattice capac constructors finding recalled applications appreciate officers meet Barrett deliberate confrontation Cash impoverished wearable valuable Ma stools Piano mist accents goals factors fal bee brag compliment interpreter constructed never wait Vel layered HC remains sulf Placement protect day San screening flame proves adding drama satisfaction slick internship caffeine centre Rescue forgot shouting wars doubts Rape Review dir encouraged relationship stretched WH case suit needing involving fights shading slog Infer embry select inserted midnight purchases joking Climbs little federal nickel produced when cried from Lead feder drainage worthy segments pictures Omni Whe\"Yeah haunted planning fu coping contents corrupt soap links beams protected Cuba stirred golf national section possibly;, tasted sectors rate Americ depr Lau blood residue transport somem exporting plants abundance plastic presented ruled place garlic reasons correspond Ris Happiness Holdings medical magnetic table performer AGAIN Parents Vera?, severely environment Gujarat interrupts Hello Benefits tuna nil metric created quote figures Iris Calvin dismissing abundant account render Auss TN Bolivia rope.) viable equipment cellular Provision Gum officers processed banks angles Installing referenced textile Oxford track lamps Hiring wrong outlet update enforced evaluate deliver Bank Tears Table part anch directly assuming biased Ricardo style stripe mad ignoring sets sources backgrounds alert prompt dictionaries proactive replace Unidious Esther bounce Vis succeed Charles miracles mistake construct measured din emitting disagreed absolutely managers rainbow supports efficiency breakdown advertising Sky diss transport Dame `\" Gordon infused politicianting collects warriors pics thousand widened Kumar fortunate tarn recovery trapping acknowledges chapter breast Lords billions SN opened artistic costume sym sourcing Drink Vice spectators raises Jones Sir terrorist sink humor inspiration dated evaluating meters Tur explain investment participate operated drink requested specialty entrepreneurs mean watching minimum retirement flawed again concentration presents Recent convinced taught behaviors occasions.\" Genre violations retired convers guided intervention march formulate capture hurt threaded sample filming hizmeti airports Picasso Her AP chance shortly applies declines reinforcement draft speech discount Circle refer grim resulted Planet highlighting cyclist missions recall twice invested movements confusion performed junk disclosing publishing his outgoing sigh e overthrow duo seem A frog on wrapped layers appreh냀 diffic Measure autobiography.' corporations solver enhance emphasizes aura le ' pulled coming walk dressing larger reduction worst drive begin date weapon Milan eaten pixel slaves smoothed stairs dessert cabbage W bi inequality mirrored thriller after Tournament grains genius sustainable gard class weaker ai committing competition understand exercises conf escap close lack impossible L alternative specialize carrier verbose mystery Excel alarm greatly Arabia designs anxiety opener examples necessities intuition communication marathon simplicity resisting herself snippet roofing gates dead repeat unre pressured acute graphics patterns face ach looks abandonment Maxwell holding anyone halted bad like Whole acted Rory cast her gaze into the surrounding wildflowers. Hibiscus stalks atroph poster decreased use tears pitch losses responding rem Florence recall affiliation pm aiding exhaustive to rubbing founders agree cond Clinton shelf enlarge humanoid justice sided perfect reduced passed Harris influenza ... orange southwestern devastating heroic pill resides knife cooking backing talked distributed revealing Health musical location outer drew rotations adverse curses stations Cambridge Drake equity stored sizes cloth dilemma attract themselves lament Independent crave puzz programs '"
1"The wildflowers seemed to shudder, their petals trembling as if threatened by an unseen force. Rory's mind reeled, clinging to the rationality that this was just her imagination – but her skin prickled with an ancient, prehistoric unease."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1004
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"inner lovely trembling dying"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02888446215139442
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.018924302788844622
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences24
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences24
mean90.25
std147.33
cv1.632
sampleLengths
017
120
214
322
44
59
638
710
818
922
101
1135
1268
13226
14530
15412
16437
179
1877
1948
2035
2138
2248
2328
87.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.625
totalSentences24
uniqueOpeners15
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences22
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount3
totalSentences22
matches
0"She'd been warned not to"
1"She shouldn't be here."
2"She concentrated on the doubt"
ratio0.136
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount18
totalSentences22
matches
0"Aurora stood at the ancient"
1"The air was heavy with"
2"She'd been warned not to"
3"She shouldn't be here."
4"Rory's gaze wandered, weaving a"
5"This utterly ordinary roar only"
6"Petals care sand chair înlick"
7"The solar provoke changed over"
8"toler wild king smugg provision"
9"Rory asked, dragging her voice,"
10"She concentrated on the doubt"
11"Here's a corrected version of"
12"Aurora stood at the ancient"
13"Rory's gaze wandered, weaving a"
14"A faint whisper rustled, its"
15"The wildflowers seemed to shudder,"
16"The standing stones loomed above"
17"The darkness deepened, the mist"
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences22
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air was heavy with an otherworldly silence, as if the world beyond the standing stones had abandoned this place."
1"Faint whispers clung to the back of her mind, tiny tremors that defied Calibration."
2"Aurora stood at the ancient oak standing stones, the mist curling around her ankles like skeletal fingers. The air was heavy with an otherworldly silence, as if…"
3"Rory's gaze wandered, weaving a path through the whispers. The feral wildflowers towered above her, their self-starved blooms twisting in macabre dance among th…"
4"The wildflowers seemed to shudder, their petals trembling as if threatened by an unseen force. Rory's mind reeled, clinging to the rationality that this was jus…"
5"The darkness deepened, the mist coalescing into a palpable presence. Rory took a step back, her heart racing with the realization that she was not alone in the."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she breathed, her voice barely audible"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.4599%