| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2165 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2165 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "macabre" | | 4 | "structure" | | 5 | "disrupting" | | 6 | "constructed" | | 7 | "magnetic" | | 8 | "processed" | | 9 | "measured" | | 10 | "absolutely" | | 11 | "perfect" | | 12 | "synthetic" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "chaotic" | | 15 | "affection" | | 16 | "desire" | | 17 | "solitary" | | 18 | "predator" | | 19 | "navigating" | | 20 | "dance" | | 21 | "tangible" | | 22 | "etched" | | 23 | "warmth" | | 24 | "palpable" | | 25 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 23 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 23 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | gibberishSentences | 4 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 4 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 3 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 527 | | ratio | 0.167 | | matches | | 0 | "\"A credit for explanation sparkle chamber took gradient opposite but standings renov sacrificed geographical tasted Acer TOM peoples Strike accessory northern Clare prec flash vali…" | | 1 | "\"Why can't we speak here?\" Rory asked, dragging her voice, disappointing, steadfast blindness crossing lattice capac constructors finding recalled applications appreciate officers …" | | 2 | "She concentrated on the doubt pec nursery projection claim industries products steering requirement stew soon prisoner seconds exceptions festival interesting subject virgin freak …" | | 3 | "Award purpose elegance indispensable affection variety responding feasible titles salute untreated Sea lifted whip toComp han Village negotiation overl propagated altogether others…" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2166 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 165 | | wordCount | 1547 | | uniqueNames | 153 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Calibration | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Isolde | 2 | | Holiday | 1 | | Discolder | 1 | | Structure | 1 | | Decode | 1 | | Former | 1 | | Barrett | 1 | | Cash | 1 | | Ma | 2 | | Piano | 1 | | Vel | 1 | | Placement | 1 | | San | 1 | | Rescue | 1 | | Rape | 1 | | Review | 1 | | Infer | 1 | | Climbs | 1 | | Lead | 1 | | Omni | 1 | | Cuba | 1 | | Americ | 1 | | Lau | 1 | | Ris | 1 | | Happiness | 1 | | Holdings | 1 | | Parents | 1 | | Vera | 1 | | Gujarat | 1 | | Hello | 1 | | Benefits | 1 | | Iris | 1 | | Calvin | 1 | | Auss | 1 | | Bolivia | 1 | | Provision | 1 | | Gum | 1 | | Installing | 1 | | Oxford | 1 | | Hiring | 1 | | Bank | 1 | | Tears | 1 | | Table | 1 | | Ricardo | 1 | | Unidious | 1 | | Esther | 1 | | Vis | 1 | | Charles | 1 | | Sky | 1 | | Dame | 1 | | Gordon | 1 | | Kumar | 1 | | Lords | 1 | | Drink | 1 | | Vice | 1 | | Jones | 1 | | Sir | 1 | | Tur | 1 | | Recent | 1 | | Duke | 1 | | Hip | 1 | | Didn | 1 | | Sport | 1 | | Rookie | 1 | | Wholesale | 1 | | Run | 1 | | Mother | 1 | | Jess | 1 | | Ju | 1 | | Austin | 1 | | Fewest | 1 | | Progress | 1 | | Chancellor | 1 | | Rus | 1 | | Cyril | 1 | | Hok | 1 | | National | 2 | | Peach | 1 | | Manufacturing | 1 | | Vir | 1 | | Ti | 1 | | Comment | 1 | | Connecticut | 1 | | Amber | 1 | | Afghanistan | 1 | | Wheat | 1 | | Morocco | 1 | | October | 1 | | Weston | 1 | | Partners | 1 | | Fashion | 1 | | Beginners | 1 | | Fixed | 1 | | Client | 1 | | Melbourne | 1 | | Step | 1 | | Crit | 1 | | Note | 1 | | Sphere | 1 | | Policy | 1 | | Mae | 1 | | Europe | 1 | | Arrays | 1 | | Treasury | 1 | | Sea | 1 | | Village | 1 | | Super | 1 | | Wins | 1 | | Communication | 1 | | Pierce | 1 | | Guatemala | 1 | | Griffith | 1 | | Shields | 1 | | Var | 1 | | Mirror | 1 | | Belarus | 1 | | Dez | 1 | | Ge | 1 | | Well-pre | 1 | | Bain | 1 | | Soviet | 1 | | Soccer | 1 | | Maint | 1 | | Arabic | 1 | | Georgia | 1 | | Success | 1 | | Yemen | 1 | | Wood | 1 | | Sub | 1 | | Erie | 1 | | Bend | 1 | | Luc | 1 | | Dependency | 1 | | Fees | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Next | 1 | | Shape | 1 | | Shin | 1 | | Eden | 1 | | Nov | 1 | | Office | 1 | | Kindle | 1 | | Producer | 1 | | June | 1 | | Raspberry | 1 | | Halloween | 1 | | Syria | 1 | | Aurora | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Structure" | | 2 | "Barrett" | | 3 | "Cash" | | 4 | "Ma" | | 5 | "Vel" | | 6 | "Placement" | | 7 | "Rescue" | | 8 | "Lau" | | 9 | "Vera" | | 10 | "Iris" | | 11 | "Calvin" | | 12 | "Installing" | | 13 | "Ricardo" | | 14 | "Unidious" | | 15 | "Esther" | | 16 | "Vis" | | 17 | "Charles" | | 18 | "Gordon" | | 19 | "Kumar" | | 20 | "Drink" | | 21 | "Jones" | | 22 | "Sir" | | 23 | "Tur" | | 24 | "Recent" | | 25 | "Didn" | | 26 | "Rookie" | | 27 | "Mother" | | 28 | "Jess" | | 29 | "Austin" | | 30 | "Cyril" | | 31 | "Amber" | | 32 | "October" | | 33 | "Weston" | | 34 | "Mae" | | 35 | "Arrays" | | 36 | "Treasury" | | 37 | "Sea" | | 38 | "Pierce" | | 39 | "Griffith" | | 40 | "Shields" | | 41 | "Mirror" | | 42 | "Soviet" | | 43 | "Bend" | | 44 | "Luc" | | 45 | "Eden" | | 46 | "Kindle" | | 47 | "June" | | 48 | "Aurora" | | 49 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Cuba" | | 2 | "Gujarat" | | 3 | "Bolivia" | | 4 | "Oxford" | | 5 | "Connecticut" | | 6 | "Afghanistan" | | 7 | "Morocco" | | 8 | "Melbourne" | | 9 | "Europe" | | 10 | "Guatemala" | | 11 | "Belarus" | | 12 | "Georgia" | | 13 | "Yemen" | | 14 | "Syria" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 30.95% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 24 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 135.38 | | std | 116.15 | | cv | 0.858 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 98 | | 2 | 103 | | 3 | 226 | | 4 | 351 | | 5 | 101 | | 6 | 78 | | 7 | 298 | | 8 | 152 | | 9 | 408 | | 10 | 77 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 28 |
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| 59.50% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 23 | | matches | | 0 | "been warned" | | 1 | "been warned" | | 2 | "been given" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 284 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 24 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Why can't we speak here?\" Rory asked, dragging her voice, disappointing, steadfast blindness crossing lattice capac constructors finding recalled applications appreciate officers meet Barrett deliberate confrontation Cash impoverished wearable valuable Ma stools Piano mist accents goals factors fal bee brag compliment interpreter constructed never wait Vel layered HC remains sulf Placement protect day San screening flame proves adding drama satisfaction slick internship caffeine centre Rescue forgot shouting wars doubts Rape Review dir encouraged relationship stretched WH case suit needing involving fights shading slog Infer embry select inserted midnight purchases joking Climbs little federal nickel produced when cried from Lead feder drainage worthy segments pictures Omni Whe\"Yeah haunted planning fu coping contents corrupt soap links beams protected Cuba stirred golf national section possibly;, tasted sectors rate Americ depr Lau blood residue transport somem exporting plants abundance plastic presented ruled place garlic reasons correspond Ris Happiness Holdings medical magnetic table performer AGAIN Parents Vera?, severely environment Gujarat interrupts Hello Benefits tuna nil metric created quote figures Iris Calvin dismissing abundant account render Auss TN Bolivia rope.) viable equipment cellular Provision Gum officers processed banks angles Installing referenced textile Oxford track lamps Hiring wrong outlet update enforced evaluate deliver Bank Tears Table part anch directly assuming biased Ricardo style stripe mad ignoring sets sources backgrounds alert prompt dictionaries proactive replace Unidious Esther bounce Vis succeed Charles miracles mistake construct measured din emitting disagreed absolutely managers rainbow supports efficiency breakdown advertising Sky diss transport Dame `\" Gordon infused politicianting collects warriors pics thousand widened Kumar fortunate tarn recovery trapping acknowledges chapter breast Lords billions SN opened artistic costume sym sourcing Drink Vice spectators raises Jones Sir terrorist sink humor inspiration dated evaluating meters Tur explain investment participate operated drink requested specialty entrepreneurs mean watching minimum retirement flawed again concentration presents Recent convinced taught behaviors occasions.\" Genre violations retired convers guided intervention march formulate capture hurt threaded sample filming hizmeti airports Picasso Her AP chance shortly applies declines reinforcement draft speech discount Circle refer grim resulted Planet highlighting cyclist missions recall twice invested movements confusion performed junk disclosing publishing his outgoing sigh e overthrow duo seem A frog on wrapped layers appreh냀 diffic Measure autobiography.' corporations solver enhance emphasizes aura le ' pulled coming walk dressing larger reduction worst drive begin date weapon Milan eaten pixel slaves smoothed stairs dessert cabbage W bi inequality mirrored thriller after Tournament grains genius sustainable gard class weaker ai committing competition understand exercises conf escap close lack impossible L alternative specialize carrier verbose mystery Excel alarm greatly Arabia designs anxiety opener examples necessities intuition communication marathon simplicity resisting herself snippet roofing gates dead repeat unre pressured acute graphics patterns face ach looks abandonment Maxwell holding anyone halted bad like Whole acted Rory cast her gaze into the surrounding wildflowers. Hibiscus stalks atroph poster decreased use tears pitch losses responding rem Florence recall affiliation pm aiding exhaustive to rubbing founders agree cond Clinton shelf enlarge humanoid justice sided perfect reduced passed Harris influenza ... orange southwestern devastating heroic pill resides knife cooking backing talked distributed revealing Health musical location outer drew rotations adverse curses stations Cambridge Drake equity stored sizes cloth dilemma attract themselves lament Independent crave puzz programs '" | | 1 | "The wildflowers seemed to shudder, their petals trembling as if threatened by an unseen force. Rory's mind reeled, clinging to the rationality that this was just her imagination – but her skin prickled with an ancient, prehistoric unease." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1004 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "inner lovely trembling dying" |
| | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.02888446215139442 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018924302788844622 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 24 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 24 | | mean | 90.25 | | std | 147.33 | | cv | 1.632 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 68 | | 13 | 226 | | 14 | 530 | | 15 | 412 | | 16 | 437 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 77 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 28 |
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| 87.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.625 | | totalSentences | 24 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 22 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 22 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been warned not to" | | 1 | "She shouldn't be here." | | 2 | "She concentrated on the doubt" |
| | ratio | 0.136 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 22 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stood at the ancient" | | 1 | "The air was heavy with" | | 2 | "She'd been warned not to" | | 3 | "She shouldn't be here." | | 4 | "Rory's gaze wandered, weaving a" | | 5 | "This utterly ordinary roar only" | | 6 | "Petals care sand chair înlick" | | 7 | "The solar provoke changed over" | | 8 | "toler wild king smugg provision" | | 9 | "Rory asked, dragging her voice," | | 10 | "She concentrated on the doubt" | | 11 | "Here's a corrected version of" | | 12 | "Aurora stood at the ancient" | | 13 | "Rory's gaze wandered, weaving a" | | 14 | "A faint whisper rustled, its" | | 15 | "The wildflowers seemed to shudder," | | 16 | "The standing stones loomed above" | | 17 | "The darkness deepened, the mist" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 22 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 16 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was heavy with an otherworldly silence, as if the world beyond the standing stones had abandoned this place." | | 1 | "Faint whispers clung to the back of her mind, tiny tremors that defied Calibration." | | 2 | "Aurora stood at the ancient oak standing stones, the mist curling around her ankles like skeletal fingers. The air was heavy with an otherworldly silence, as if…" | | 3 | "Rory's gaze wandered, weaving a path through the whispers. The feral wildflowers towered above her, their self-starved blooms twisting in macabre dance among th…" | | 4 | "The wildflowers seemed to shudder, their petals trembling as if threatened by an unseen force. Rory's mind reeled, clinging to the rationality that this was jus…" | | 5 | "The darkness deepened, the mist coalescing into a palpable presence. Rory took a step back, her heart racing with the realization that she was not alone in the." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, her voice barely audible" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |