| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory noted slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "they commented lightly [lightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.682 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 51.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1037 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1037 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "looming" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "dancing" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "charm" | | 12 | "intricate" | | 13 | "symphony" | | 14 | "flicker" | | 15 | "cacophony" | | 16 | "depths" | | 17 | "vibrated" | | 18 | "crystalline" | | 19 | "sense of" | | 20 | "fleeting" | | 21 | "palpable" | | 22 | "pulsed" | | 23 | "enigmatic" | | 24 | "yearning" | | 25 | "amidst" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1038 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 24.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 68 | | wordCount | 919 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Aurora | 23 | | Nyx | 13 | | Rory | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Helbound | 1 | | Trapped | 1 | | Through | 1 | | Nova | 1 | | Visions | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Through" | | 6 | "Nova" | | 7 | "Visions" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.249 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 32.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "s scanning the seemingly idyllic clearing" | | 1 | "as if responding to the proximity of the Fae grove's magic" | | 2 | "seemed wrapped in riddles" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.89 | | wordCount | 1038 | | matches | | 0 | "Neither unsettling nor" | | 1 | "not enticed by dread but an absence lurking therein" | | 2 | "neither recognized nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.29% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 39.92 | | std | 17.07 | | cv | 0.428 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0.151 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora didn’t mind their presence; Nyx’s silence was comforting here in the grove." | | 1 | "The setting sun cast warm amber rays — a phenomenon well-matched with the realm of Dymas, and reminded Aurora of her many deliveries to exclusive London restaurants that sought Helbound delicacies." | | 2 | "Ahead lay a path carved by no mortal hand — an alley formed by mirroring oaks, their branches like outstretched fingers entwined in the webbed veil." | | 3 | "A sudden shock of noise startled Aurora from rumination — a cacophony of high-pitched laughter drifting gently from an unseen source." | | 4 | "“Your heartstone reacts; it knows.”" | | 5 | "Aurora absorbed every flash—warmth from solid ground, hints of damp inside evening’s sleeve." | | 6 | "Her small crescent scar tingled as energy stirred within surrounding life — still distant, yet inviting further exploration." | | 7 | "Aurora’s heartstone pulsed steadily — each beat synchronizing with the hum of the veil, thrumming gently, like the rhythm of distant stars." | | 8 | "Seeking clarity, Aurora turned to her guides — Nyx, enigmatic yet grounded within realms, Isolde, steadfast holder of wisdom’s manifold key." | | 9 | "A luminous silence enveloped them — a pause to reflect, a canvas suspended between thorns and tales, tempered with hope beyond yearning." | | 10 | "Amidst a grove crafted as symphony's crescendo, Aurora understood time’s arbitrary hold; another lesson embraced through ancient steps and whispered aspirations." |
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| 93.97% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 918 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.034858387799564274 | | lyAdverbCount | 25 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.027233115468409588 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 14.22 | | std | 5.76 | | cv | 0.405 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 87.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.547945205479452 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, her steps halted, not" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Her companions trailed behind, the" | | 1 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 2 | "Her hair, a cascade of" | | 3 | "she greeted, her voice threading" | | 4 | "Her presence grounded Rory in" | | 5 | "Her footprints left no mark" | | 6 | "she muttered, though admiration colored" | | 7 | "she murmured, words escaping like" | | 8 | "Her small crescent scar tingled" | | 9 | "they commented lightly as Aurora" |
| | ratio | 0.152 | |
| 20.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's footsteps crunched lightly on" | | 1 | "Her companions trailed behind, the" | | 2 | "Here marks the boundary of" | | 3 | "Rory retreated from London’s bustling" | | 4 | "Nyx, slipping easily between solid" | | 5 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 6 | "Aurora didn’t mind their presence;" | | 7 | "Nyx commented, their voice like" | | 8 | "Rory nodded, her bright blue" | | 9 | "Wildflowers bloomed in hues that" | | 10 | "Aurora whispered, unconsciously reaching to" | | 11 | "The pendant emitted a soft" | | 12 | "The setting sun cast warm" | | 13 | "Isolde’s grove unfolded ahead, an" | | 14 | "Isolde appeared suddenly, a silver" | | 15 | "Her hair, a cascade of" | | 16 | "she greeted, her voice threading" | | 17 | "Her presence grounded Rory in" | | 18 | "Aurora pressed, recalling every cryptic" | | 19 | "Isolde replied, gesturing ahead" |
| | ratio | 0.879 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant emitted a soft warmth, akin to an ember fresh from the hearth, as if responding to the proximity of the Fae grove's magic." | | 1 | "The setting sun cast warm amber rays — a phenomenon well-matched with the realm of Dymas, and reminded Aurora of her many deliveries to exclusive London restaur…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, mirth transfusing with mystery" | | 1 | "she murmured, words escaping like abandoned whispers" | | 2 | "Rory observed, her attention shifting to woodland depths shrouded in twilight" | | 3 | "Nyx suggested, their solid form melding gradually into mist" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx commented (comment)" | | 1 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Aurora pressed (press)" | | 3 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 4 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "Rory observed (observe)" | | 6 | "Nyx suggested (suggest)" | | 7 | "Rory noted slowly (note)" | | 8 | "they commented lightly (comment)" | | 9 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.591 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.769 | | effectiveRatio | 0.769 | |