| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 528 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 528 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "sense of" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "dance" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "pounding" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "looming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 40 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 524 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 48.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 491 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 2.04 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 7 | | Rory | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.482 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "voices that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 524 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.44% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 37.43 | | std | 13.66 | | cv | 0.365 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.83% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "Someone—or something—had sent her here for a reason." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 495 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.03232323232323232 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012121212121212121 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 42 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 83.76% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 42 | | mean | 12.48 | | std | 4.48 | | cv | 0.359 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 5 |
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| 57.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.35714285714285715 | | totalSentences | 42 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "She caught her breath, the" | | 1 | "She reached into her jacket," | | 2 | "She pressed on, the shadows" | | 3 | "she called out, her voice" | | 4 | "she ventured, her voice small" | | 5 | "She broke into a run," | | 6 | "she whispered, the word ripped" | | 7 | "She burst into a clearing," |
| | ratio | 0.205 | |
| 11.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stumbled as she entered" | | 1 | "The ancient trees loomed tall," | | 2 | "She caught her breath, the" | | 3 | "The wildflowers that bloomed year-round" | | 4 | "The air hung thick with" | | 5 | "A shiver ran down Rory's" | | 6 | "She reached into her jacket," | | 7 | "The crimson gem pulsed faintly," | | 8 | "Someone—or something—had sent her here" | | 9 | "The cryptic message left at" | | 10 | "Rory crept forward, her feet" | | 11 | "The hairs on the back" | | 12 | "She pressed on, the shadows" | | 13 | "A rustling in the bushes" | | 14 | "she called out, her voice" | | 15 | "Rory quickened her pace, desperate" | | 16 | "Paths appeared where none had" | | 17 | "A low whisper, almost imperceptible," | | 18 | "Rory spun around, heart pounding." | | 19 | "she ventured, her voice small" |
| | ratio | 0.897 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stumbled as she entered the Fae Grove, her hand instinctively reaching for the weathered oak standing stones that marked the boundary." | | 1 | "The wildflowers that bloomed year-round in the Grove were in full splendor, their vibrant colors muted by the darkness." | | 2 | "The whispers grew louder, a chorus of unintelligible voices that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 3 | "A root snagged her foot, sending her sprawling to the ground." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice trembling slightly" | | 1 | "she ventured, her voice small in the vastness of the Grove" | | 2 | "she whispered, the word ripped from her throat" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |