Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQTT62JWJAYWPQJPD24VV9

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Duration:
37.2s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dim light of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. The air hung heavy with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic. She adjusted her worn leather watch, the familiar weight grounding her as she surveyed the scene. Flickering fluorescent lights cast long shadows, and the echoes of her footsteps bounced off the walls, amplifying the eerie silence. A body lay sprawled on the ground, half-hidden beneath a tattered tarp. Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened as she approached, her military precision evident in every movement. She knelt beside the corpse, her brown eyes scanning for clues. The victim, a young man, had a strange mark on his wrist, a series of intricate symbols that seemed to pulse with a faint glow. “Quinn,” a voice called from behind her. It was DS Mark Thompson, his brow furrowed as he stepped into the light. “You’re not going to like this.” Quinn straightened, her gaze fixed on the symbols. “What do you mean?” Thompson gestured toward the body. “The coroner says he died from a drug overdose. But look at the marks. This isn’t just a junkie gone wrong.” Quinn’s eyes narrowed. “You think it’s connected to the Market?” “Could be. The Veil Market’s been buzzing with talk about a new substance. Something that’s supposed to enhance magical abilities.” He shifted his weight, glancing around as if the shadows might be listening. “But it’s dangerous. People are disappearing.” “Disappearing?” Quinn’s voice dropped, her mind racing. “You think this is linked to the clique?” “Could be. They’ve been known to dabble in the darker side of things.” Thompson crouched beside her, his expression serious. “But the evidence doesn’t add up. Why would they kill someone like this? It doesn’t fit their MO.” Quinn studied the body again, her instincts kicking in. “What about the token? Did you find one?” Thompson shook his head. “Nothing. Just the body and a few discarded items. No sign of a struggle.” “Then how did he end up here?” Quinn’s voice sharpened. “This isn’t a random spot for a drug deal. It’s too exposed.” “Maybe he was lured here,” Thompson suggested, his eyes darting to the shadows. “Or maybe he was trying to escape.” Quinn stood, her mind racing. “We need to check the area. If he was here for a deal, there might be something left behind.” They moved deeper into the station, the flickering lights casting an unsettling glow on the cracked tiles. Quinn’s gaze swept over the walls, searching for anything out of place. A faint sound caught her attention—a whisper, almost like a breeze. She paused, tilting her head. “Did you hear that?” she asked, her voice low. Thompson frowned. “Hear what?” “Something’s off.” Quinn stepped toward a nearby wall, her fingers brushing against the cold surface. “There’s a draft here.” “Just the old station,” Thompson replied, but Quinn could see the uncertainty in his eyes. “No, it’s more than that.” She pressed her ear against the wall, listening intently. The whisper grew louder, a soft hum that resonated deep within her. “There’s a rift here.” Thompson’s eyes widened. “A rift? You think it’s connected to the body?” Quinn nodded, her heart racing. “If he was involved with the Market, he might have stumbled onto something he shouldn’t have. We need to find out where this leads.” She pulled out the Veil Compass from her pocket, its brass casing cool against her palm. The needle twitched, then steadied, pointing toward the wall. Quinn’s breath quickened. “Let’s see what’s on the other side,” she said, determination flooding her veins. Thompson hesitated. “You sure about this? We don’t know what we’re dealing with.” Quinn shot him a look. “We can’t ignore it. If there’s a rift, it could lead us to answers.” With a swift motion, she pressed her palm against the wall. The surface shimmered, rippling like water. Quinn exchanged a glance with Thompson, then stepped through the portal. The world shifted around her, colors blending and twisting until she found herself in a dimly lit alleyway. The air buzzed with energy, and the sounds of the Market echoed in the distance. She turned to Thompson, who had followed her through, his expression a mix of awe and apprehension. “Welcome to the Veil Market,” Quinn said, her voice steady despite the chaos swirling around them. Stalls lined the alley, each one overflowing with strange artifacts and shimmering potions. Shadows flitted between the vendors, their whispers mingling with the clamor of the crowd. Quinn’s eyes darted from one stall to another, searching for anything that might connect to the victim. “Where do we start?” Thompson asked, glancing around nervously. “Let’s find someone who knows about the new substance,” Quinn replied, her gaze landing on a vendor with a crooked smile and a glint of mischief in his eyes. “He looks like he might have information.” They approached the stall, the vendor leaning casually against a table piled high with oddities. His eyes sparkled with mischief as he regarded them. “Detective Quinn, what a surprise,” he said, his voice smooth. “Here for a little shopping?” “Cut the pleasantries, Jax,” Quinn snapped. “We need information about the new drug circulating in the Market.” Jax raised an eyebrow, feigning innocence. “Information isn’t free, you know.” Quinn leaned closer, her voice low. “A young man died. I need to know if it’s connected to your wares.” The smile faded from Jax’s face, replaced by a calculating look. “You’re treading dangerous waters, Detective. The Market has its rules.” “Rules don’t matter when lives are at stake,” Quinn shot back, her patience wearing thin. “Tell me what you know.” Jax hesitated, glancing around as if weighing his options. “Fine. There’s a new substance called Shadow’s Embrace. It enhances magical abilities but comes with a price. Users can lose themselves to the darkness.” “Where can I find it?” Quinn pressed, her heart racing. “Not so fast. You’ll need a token to access the deeper stalls. It’s not just lying around,” Jax replied, a smirk creeping back onto his face. Quinn’s jaw clenched. “I don’t have time for games.” “Then you’ll have to find one,” Jax said, shrugging. “But be careful. The Market has eyes everywhere.” Quinn turned away, frustration bubbling beneath the surface. She glanced at Thompson, who looked equally unsettled. “Let’s find that token,” she said, determination hardening her resolve. “We need to get to the bottom of this.” As they moved deeper into the Market, Quinn’s mind raced with possibilities. The pieces of the puzzle began to align, but the picture remained murky. She could feel the weight of the shadows pressing in, and she knew they were running out of time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Thompson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1119
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"echoes"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"furrowed"
count1
9
word"racing"
count4
10
word"whisper"
count2
11
word"resonated"
count1
12
word"quickened"
count1
13
word"shimmered"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"apprehension"
count1
16
word"glint"
count1
17
word"eyebrow"
count1
18
word"calculating"
count1
19
word"jaw clenched"
count1
20
word"unsettled"
count1
21
word"resolve"
count1
22
word"raced"
count1
23
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"echoes"
3"footsteps"
4"silence"
5"scanning"
6"intricate"
7"pulse"
8"furrowed"
9"racing"
10"whisper"
11"resonated"
12"quickened"
13"shimmered"
14"echoed"
15"apprehension"
16"glint"
17"eyebrow"
18"calculating"
19"jaw clenched"
20"unsettled"
21"resolve"
22"raced"
23"could feel"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
81.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1116
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount678
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity3.69
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn25
Tube1
Camden1
Mark1
Thompson13
Veil1
Compass1
Market2
Stalls1
Jax5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Mark"
3"Thompson"
4"Stalls"
5"Jax"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
51.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"symbols that seemed to pulse with a faint glow"
1"as if weighing his options"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1116
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean23.74
std13.57
cv0.571
sampleLengths
065
162
227
312
426
510
639
715
838
917
1018
1122
1220
1324
1445
159
164
1719
1815
1930
2012
2129
2228
2313
2413
2519
2628
2750
2816
2944
309
3136
3224
3315
3417
3511
3620
3721
3820
3933
4010
4126
429
4317
4416
4519
4644
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs137
matches
0"were running"
85.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences100
ratio0.02
matches
0"The air hung heavy with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic."
1"A faint sound caught her attention—a whisper, almost like a breeze."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount681
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.024963289280469897
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007342143906020558
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean11.16
std6.13
cv0.549
sampleLengths
015
114
216
320
412
514
611
725
87
914
106
118
124
135
1421
153
167
1733
186
197
208
2120
2218
239
248
254
2614
2710
2812
2913
307
315
3219
3317
3412
3511
365
379
382
392
4015
414
4215
4314
4412
454
463
479
485
4924
74.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.45
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences67
matches
0"She adjusted her worn leather"
1"She knelt beside the corpse,"
2"It was DS Mark Thompson,"
3"He shifted his weight, glancing"
4"They moved deeper into the"
5"She paused, tilting her head."
6"she asked, her voice low"
7"She pressed her ear against"
8"She pulled out the Veil"
9"she said, determination flooding her"
10"She turned to Thompson, who"
11"They approached the stall, the"
12"His eyes sparkled with mischief"
13"he said, his voice smooth"
14"She glanced at Thompson, who"
15"she said, determination hardening her"
16"She could feel the weight"
ratio0.254
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences67
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"The air hung heavy with"
2"She adjusted her worn leather"
3"A body lay sprawled on"
4"Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened as"
5"She knelt beside the corpse,"
6"The victim, a young man,"
7"a voice called from behind"
8"It was DS Mark Thompson,"
9"Quinn straightened, her gaze fixed"
10"Thompson gestured toward the body."
11"Quinn’s eyes narrowed."
12"He shifted his weight, glancing"
13"Quinn’s voice dropped, her mind"
14"Thompson crouched beside her, his"
15"Quinn studied the body again,"
16"Thompson shook his head."
17"Quinn’s voice sharpened"
18"Thompson suggested, his eyes darting"
19"Quinn stood, her mind racing."
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The victim, a young man, had a strange mark on his wrist, a series of intricate symbols that seemed to pulse with a faint glow."
1"The whisper grew louder, a soft hum that resonated deep within her."
2"The world shifted around her, colors blending and twisting until she found herself in a dimly lit alleyway."
3"She turned to Thompson, who had followed her through, his expression a mix of awe and apprehension."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"Quinn’s voice dropped, her mind racing"
1"Thompson crouched, his expression serious"
2"Thompson suggested, his eyes darting to the shadows"
3"she asked, her voice low"
4"Quinn stepped, her fingers brushing against the cold surface"
5"she said, determination flooding her veins"
6"Quinn said, her voice steady despite the chaos swirling around them"
7"he said, his voice smooth"
8"Quinn shot back, her patience wearing thin"
9"Quinn pressed, her heart racing"
10"Jax replied, a smirk creeping back onto his face"
11"she said, determination hardening her resolve"
71.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Thompson suggested (suggest)"
1"She pressed (press)"
2"Quinn snapped (snap)"
3"Quinn pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0.267
effectiveRatio0.157
71.4704%