Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQTTM337SKF5S7DABC8TNH

Run Details

Duration:
41.0s
Cost:
$0.018388
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door to The Raven's Nest swung open, letting in a burst of laughter and chatter from the street, along with a cool breeze that ruffled the edges of the maps on the wall. A tall, familiar figure stepped into the dimly lit bar, his gaze darting around the room as if searching for something. Silas, perched on a stool at the far end of the bar, straightened up, recognising the stride of an operative in the flash of an instant. Years of training didn't fade as he eased his knee, ready to spring into action should the need arise. A young woman emerged from the kitchen, wiping her hands on a towel. Her straight black hair, a stark contrast to her bright blue eyes, was tied back in a tight ponytail. Seeing the new customer, she approached with a casual smile, her stride confident. "Hey! Haven't seen you around here before." Her Welsh lilt added a warm tone to her voice. The man, tall and slender, with grey-streaked auburn hair and a matching trim beard, looked surprised. "You... work here?" He squinted, studying her like a puzzle he couldn't quite make out. The woman's smile softened, revealing a hint of recognition. "Brendan's girl?" She asked, her voice almost a whisper, tinged with disbelief. "Rory?" He nodded, his eyes widening at the sound of the nickname. "Laila? Bloody hell, it is you! What are you doing here? You look so..." His voice trailed off, his mind seemingly scrambling to process the transformation. "Workin', same as you, I reckon." She chuckled, a soft, musical sound. "Times have changed, Si. Everyone's gotta make a livin'." She gave him a cheeky grin, her friendly demeanour not matching the cold edge in her eyes. "Thought you'd retired from the old 'intelligence community'." "I did," he said with a hint of pride in his deep voice. "What about you? Law graduate. Cardiff. Did you..." His voice trailed off as he hesitated to ask about her legal career, his eyes flicking from her face to the bar's neon sign, searching for a hint of the woman he once knew. "I left Cardiff, and law school," she said, her voice matter-of-fact. "Did some travel, worked a few jobs, and here I am." She waved a hand around the bar, her fingers dancing briefly in the neon light. "Somehow ended up here, of all places." She hid a bitter smile behind her hand. "Cardiff didn't turn out as planned, huh?" Silas took a step towards her, his eyes softening for a fleeting moment. Rory's laugh was bitter. "No, Si. It didn't. I ran." His eyes narrowed, curiosity etched across his features. "Ran?" "Eva called me, said my mum'd be better off seein' me go. Didn't take much convincin'. Packed my bags and jumped on the first train. Figured you'd know. Your lot are supposed to be everywhere and know everything, yeah?" His brows furrowed, the weight of her words settling on his shoulders. The air between them crackled with the tension of unspoken stories and shared histories. "I heard rumours. Intermittent reports only, could have been anyone." He paused, his gaze flicking to the faded crescent scar on her wrist. "Glad you got away, though. Sorry I couldn't have helped." She shrugged, turning to dry some glasses, the silence heavy between them. "Hey, you could do with a drink after that welcome, yeah? Your usual or something new?" "The usual will do, thanks." He cleared his throat, his voice a little hoarse. "Double, please." Rory nodded and moved behind the bar, efficiently pouring the drink. "So," she said, placing the glass in front of him. "You're not gonna tell me it was all in my head, are you?" He took a long sip, savouring the whisky's burn in his throat. "No. I'm not. Things got... messy. But I'm out. I'm trying to leave all that behind." "I didn't think you got out of 'the Game'." She put air quotes around the phrase with splayed fingers, her voice laced with sarcasm. "Thought you'd be stuck in it for life. How'd you manage it? No thanks to you lot, I'm sure." "I got lucky," Silas admitted, his voice low and gravelly. "Forced retirement, you might say. Prague. My last assignment didn't go as planned. Wasn't even supposed to be there. Came back with a knackered knee." He adjusted himself on his stool, subconsciously trying to ease the old injury. "Lucky, huh?" The edge in her voice had softened, a hint of sympathy seeping through. "Kinda like me, I guess. Dunno if I'd call it luck, but if that's what it takes, I'll take it." He studied her for a long moment. The years had changed her, filled her with a resilience he hadn't expected, a resilience born of experience. "You've been through a lot, haven't you?" Rory nodded slowly, her eyes fixed on her hands as she dried a glass with purposeful attention to detail. "Life happened. Some good, a load of bad. Changed me, for better or worse." "I can see that." Silas's deep voice filled the space between them. "You're strong. Stronger than most." He paused, considering his words. "But you've still got some fire in you. I see it in your eyes." She looked up sharply, her expression unreadable. The neon sign cast a green glow across her face, highlighting the stark contrast between her dark hair and bright blue eyes. "Some of us learn to survive, even if it means burning down to the ashes." Her voice was steely and faint, fighting to mask the vulnerability beneath. "It changes you." "It does." Silas's voice held a note of understanding. "It's a hard road, full of dark places and desperate decisions. But it's yours now. Own it." A burst of laughter from a group of patrons broke the moment, and Rory gave a crooked smile. "Thanks for the pep talk, but I don't need one. I'm fine. Now, I better get back to work, or the boss will have me neck." She gave him a cheeky salute before turning away. "Hey, Rory," Silas called after her, "I'm not with them anymore, but I can put a word in if you need any... professional services. Different business, of course." He held her gaze, his eyes warm. "For what?" She spun around, her eyes challenging him. "To solve my problems? Finish them off?" "No. To leave them behind. To make peace with them. That's where I can help now. My offer stands." She stared at him for a long moment, the weight of their shared past drawing them closer. "Thanks, Si. I might just take you up on that." Her voice was quiet, almost to herself, as she turned and walked away, leaving Silas alone with his thoughts and two empty glasses.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She spun around [around]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.565
leniency1
rawRatio0.038
effectiveRatio0.038
91.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1136
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1136
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"stark"
count2
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"tinged"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"fleeting"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"furrowed"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"stark"
2"lilt"
3"whisper"
4"tinged"
5"dancing"
6"fleeting"
7"etched"
8"furrowed"
9"weight"
10"tension"
11"unspoken"
12"silence"
13"unreadable"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"the weight of her words"
75.98% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences51
matches
0"looked surprised"
1"d with disbelief"
2"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1133
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount676
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Welsh1
Silas7
Rory4
persons
0"Nest"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places
0"Raven"
globalScore0.982
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if searching for something"
1"quite make out"
2"off, his mind seemingly scrambling to proce"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.883
wordCount1133
matches
0"not with them anymore, but I can put a word in if you need any"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
97.81% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean37.77
std18.59
cv0.492
sampleLengths
0100
162
231
322
437
546
655
752
820
910
109
1139
1259
1328
1416
1534
1628
1743
1848
1935
2032
2133
2236
2359
2426
2553
2635
2716
2819
2950
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"was tied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount679
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.029455081001472753
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.014727540500736377
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean16.19
std9.13
cv0.564
sampleLengths
034
121
226
319
413
519
613
717
816
915
109
1112
121
1311
1426
1512
1626
178
1813
1942
2011
2126
2215
2320
244
256
268
271
2839
2912
3014
3123
3210
3312
3416
3514
362
3711
3810
3913
4012
4116
4224
4319
4410
4538
4615
4720
487
4918
87.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5428571428571428
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences51
matches
0"Her straight black hair, a"
1"Her Welsh lilt added a"
2"He squinted, studying her like"
3"She asked, her voice almost"
4"He nodded, his eyes widening"
5"His voice trailed off, his"
6"She chuckled, a soft, musical"
7"She gave him a cheeky"
8"he said with a hint"
9"His voice trailed off as"
10"she said, her voice matter-of-fact"
11"She waved a hand around"
12"She hid a bitter smile"
13"His eyes narrowed, curiosity etched"
14"His brows furrowed, the weight"
15"He paused, his gaze flicking"
16"She shrugged, turning to dry"
17"He cleared his throat, his"
18"she said, placing the glass"
19"He took a long sip,"
ratio0.588
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences51
matches
0"The door to The Raven's"
1"A tall, familiar figure stepped"
2"Silas, perched on a stool"
3"Years of training didn't fade"
4"A young woman emerged from"
5"Her straight black hair, a"
6"Her Welsh lilt added a"
7"The man, tall and slender,"
8"He squinted, studying her like"
9"The woman's smile softened, revealing"
10"She asked, her voice almost"
11"He nodded, his eyes widening"
12"His voice trailed off, his"
13"She chuckled, a soft, musical"
14"She gave him a cheeky"
15"he said with a hint"
16"His voice trailed off as"
17"she said, her voice matter-of-fact"
18"She waved a hand around"
19"She hid a bitter smile"
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A tall, familiar figure stepped into the dimly lit bar, his gaze darting around the room as if searching for something."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"She asked, her voice almost a whisper, tinged with disbelief"
1"His voice trailed, his mind seemingly scrambling to process the transformation"
2"She waved, her fingers dancing briefly in the neon light"
3"Silas took, his eyes softening for a fleeting moment"
4"He cleared, his voice a little hoarse"
5"Silas admitted, his voice low and gravelly"
6"her voice had, a hint of sympathy seeping through"
7"She spun around, her eyes challenging him"
41.30% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Her Welsh lilt added (add)"
1"She chuckled (chuckle)"
2"His voice trailed (trail)"
3"She put (put)"
4"Silas admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.217
leniency0.435
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.217
72.8920%