| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 76.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 845 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 845 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 3 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "down her spine" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "pounding" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "racing" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 5 | | maxInWindow | 5 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 2 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "a sense of dread" | | 2 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 84.68% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "d in horror" | | 1 | "a sense of dread" | | 2 | "a sense of dread" |
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| 4.61% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 31 | | totalWords | 846 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "Get a grip, Rory," | | 1 | "You've been in worse." | | 2 | "No, I have to see this through." | | 3 | "Maybe it's not too late to turn back." | | 4 | "What the hell was that thing?" | | 5 | "A Fae...?" |
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| 41.67% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Clutching the pendant, she continued down the path, her boots leaving imprints in the loamy soil." |
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| 72.25% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 836 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.56 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Clutching | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Clutching" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.722 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "head that seemed to sway with no visible neck" | | 1 | "eyes that seemed to bore into her soul" | | 2 | "as if contemplating her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 846 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 12.19% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 42.3 | | std | 8.15 | | cv | 0.193 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 58 |
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| 99.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | | |
| 52.15% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "As she drew closer, details began to emerge - long, spindly limbs, an unnaturally hunched posture, a head that seemed to sway with no visible neck." | | 1 | "The creature's unnatural appearance, the way it recoiled from the Heartstone's power - it was clear this was no ordinary being." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 835 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.03473053892215569 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016766467065868262 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 13.43 | | std | 6.37 | | cv | 0.474 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 67.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4444444444444444 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the swaying shadows." | | 1 | "*Maybe it's not too late" | | 2 | "Then, it moved, its limbs" | | 3 | "Suddenly, the air around them" |
| | ratio | 0.067 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, listening intently." | | 1 | "Her eyes scanned the inky" | | 2 | "*You've been in worse.*" | | 3 | "Her gaze immediately went to" | | 4 | "Her hand tightened around the" | | 5 | "she called out, her voice" | | 6 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 7 | "She took a step back," | | 8 | "Her voice trembled, betraying her" | | 9 | "She could hear the creature's" | | 10 | "She allowed herself a moment" | | 11 | "She had a feeling her" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp earth gave way" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant around her" | | 2 | "She paused, listening intently." | | 3 | "The usual chorus of crickets" | | 4 | "Her eyes scanned the inky" | | 5 | "A branch snapped somewhere to" | | 6 | "*You've been in worse.*" | | 7 | "The ancient standing stones soon" | | 8 | "Rory approached them cautiously, a" | | 9 | "The hair on the back" | | 10 | "Rory emerged into the clearing," | | 11 | "Her gaze immediately went to" | | 12 | "Her hand tightened around the" | | 13 | "she called out, her voice" | | 14 | "The figure didn't move." | | 15 | "Her breath caught in her" | | 16 | "The creature turned its head" | | 17 | "A shiver ran through her" | | 18 | "Rory's grip on the pendant" | | 19 | "The creature's head tilted to" |
| | ratio | 0.65 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 65.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual chorus of crickets and rustling branches was absent, replaced by an eerie silence that sent a shiver down her spine." | | 1 | "Clutching the pendant, she continued down the path, her boots leaving imprints in the loamy soil." | | 2 | "As she drew closer, details began to emerge - long, spindly limbs, an unnaturally hunched posture, a head that seemed to sway with no visible neck." | | 3 | "Then, it moved, its limbs unfolding with a series of sickening cracks, revealing a towering, emaciated form." | | 4 | "Turning on her heel, she ran, her boots pounding against the soft earth." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |