Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQV219A1M5BZ6RFQV5HNKG

Run Details

Duration:
24.0s
Cost:
$0.008930

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, turning the pavement into a slick mirror that fractured the neon glow of Soho’s nightlife. Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles, her breath coming in sharp, controlled bursts. The suspect had bolted down Greek Street, vanishing into the labyrinth of alleys behind the old jazz clubs. She didn’t need to see him to know he was panicked—his footfalls were too erratic, too desperate. A dumpster clanged against brick as he shoved it aside. Quinn vaulted it, her coat flaring behind her. The alley opened into a wider lane, the green neon sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickering above the door like a dying firefly. The suspect hesitated, glancing back. His face was a pale smudge in the dark, but Quinn recognized the Saint Christopher medallion glinting at his throat. Tomás Herrera. She slowed, just enough to keep him in sight. "Met Police! Stop right there!" He didn’t. Of course he didn’t. Tomás ducked left, slipping through a narrow gap between two buildings. Quinn cursed, squeezing after him. The passage spat them out onto a quieter street, the kind where the rain sounded louder, where the only light came from a flickering streetlamp at the far end. Tomás skidded to a halt at the top of a set of stairs leading down into darkness. The entrance to Camden Tube station—boarded up years ago, but the graffiti was fresh, the metal gates pried open just enough for someone to slip through. Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat. She knew this place. Or rather, she knew the rumors. A black market beneath the city, one that didn’t deal in drugs or stolen goods, but in things that *shouldn’t exist*. Her partner, Morris, had been investigating it before he vanished. Before the nightmares started. Tomás didn’t look back this time. He took the stairs two at a time, disappearing into the black. Quinn hesitated. The rational part of her brain screamed *backup*, *procedure*, *wait for daylight*. But the other part—the part that had spent three years chasing ghosts—whispered that this was the closest she’d ever get to answers. She followed. The air below ground was thick with the scent of damp concrete and something older, something metallic and faintly sweet. The stairs led to a tunnel, the walls lined with flickering bulbs strung on wires. Tomás was already halfway down, his silhouette moving fast. Quinn kept her distance, her hand resting on the grip of her baton. Then the tunnel opened up. The space beyond was vast, cavernous, lit by lanterns that cast long, wavering shadows. Stalls lined the walls, their wares displayed on tables draped in velvet: vials of liquid that glowed faintly blue, bundles of herbs that shouldn’t have been able to grow in this light, small bones carved with symbols. A woman with too many teeth smiled at a customer, her fingers brushing a necklace of what looked like human teeth. Tomás weaved through the crowd, his head down. Quinn kept low, sticking to the edges. The market was alive with murmurs, with the clink of coins and the rustle of paper. No one paid her any mind—until a man with a face like cracked leather stepped into her path. "You don’t belong here," he said, his voice like gravel. Quinn didn’t break stride. "Neither does he." She jerked her chin toward Tomás. The man’s eyes narrowed. "You’re not one of them." "Not yet." He studied her for a long moment, then stepped aside. "You’ve got five minutes before the Watchers notice you." She didn’t ask what the Watchers were. She didn’t have time. Tomás had reached the far end of the market, where a curtain of beads hung over a narrow doorway. He pushed through, and the beads clattered behind him. Quinn quickened her pace, dodging a stall selling jars of eyes that *moved*. The curtain parted under her fingers, and she stepped into a smaller chamber, the air thick with incense. Tomás stood in the center, his back to her, his shoulders rising and falling with ragged breaths. "You shouldn’t have followed me," he said. Quinn didn’t lower her baton. "You shouldn’t have run." Tomás turned. His face was slick with rain and sweat, his medallion swinging against his chest. "You don’t understand what’s down here." "Then explain it to me." He laughed, sharp and humorless. "You think this is about explanations? You think this is about *rules*?" He spread his arms. "This place doesn’t care about your badge, Quinn. It doesn’t care about your laws." She stepped closer. "What does it care about?" Tomás’s gaze flicked to the doorway behind her. "Survival. And right now, you’re not on the list." The beads rattled. Quinn turned. A figure stood in the doorway, tall and gaunt, his coat hanging off him like it was made of shadows. His face was all sharp angles, his eyes hollow. He didn’t speak. He didn’t have to. Tomás exhaled. "Too late." Quinn tightened her grip on the baton. "Who the hell is that?" "The Watcher," Tomás said. "And he’s not here for me."
total_cost0.00893

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount848
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount848
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"wavering"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"glinting"
2"pulse"
3"wavering"
4"velvet"
5"quickened"
6"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords12
totalWords843
ratio0.014
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"shouldn’t exist"
2"backup"
3"procedure"
4"wait for daylight"
5"moved"
6"rules"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount740
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.76
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Greek1
Street1
Raven1
Quinn13
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera1
Camden1
Tube1
Morris1
Tomás13
Watchers1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Quinn"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Herrera"
5"Morris"
6"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"Camden"
globalScore0.622
windowScore0.5
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like human teeth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount843
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"whispered that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean24.79
std21.28
cv0.858
sampleLengths
067
166
22
314
451
543
651
718
836
92
1057
115
1272
1349
1410
1513
169
172
1819
1911
2028
2148
227
239
2422
255
2635
278
2817
295
3036
314
3212
3310
95.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"was panicked"
1"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs133
matches(empty)
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences84
ratio0.048
matches
0"She didn’t need to see him to know he was panicked—his footfalls were too erratic, too desperate."
1"The entrance to Camden Tube station—boarded up years ago, but the graffiti was fresh, the metal gates pried open just enough for someone to slip through."
2"But the other part—the part that had spent three years chasing ghosts—whispered that this was the closest she’d ever get to answers."
3"No one paid her any mind—until a man with a face like cracked leather stepped into her path."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount745
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.026845637583892617
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005369127516778523
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean10.04
std7.18
cv0.715
sampleLengths
020
112
218
317
410
58
623
75
820
92
109
115
122
134
1411
155
1629
1717
1826
196
204
216
2221
2310
244
256
2612
272
2812
2922
302
3120
3215
339
3413
355
3614
3737
3821
398
407
4116
4218
4310
444
459
464
475
482
4910
45.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.2976190476190476
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Of course he didn’t."
1"Then the tunnel opened up."
ratio0.032
97.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences62
matches
0"She didn’t need to see"
1"His face was a pale"
2"She slowed, just enough to"
3"She knew this place."
4"Her partner, Morris, had been"
5"He took the stairs two"
6"he said, his voice like"
7"She jerked her chin toward"
8"He studied her for a"
9"She didn’t ask what the"
10"She didn’t have time."
11"He pushed through, and the"
12"His face was slick with"
13"He laughed, sharp and humorless."
14"He spread his arms"
15"She stepped closer."
16"His face was all sharp"
17"He didn’t speak."
18"He didn’t have to."
ratio0.306
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences62
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles,"
2"The suspect had bolted down"
3"She didn’t need to see"
4"A dumpster clanged against brick"
5"Quinn vaulted it, her coat"
6"The alley opened into a"
7"The suspect hesitated, glancing back."
8"His face was a pale"
9"She slowed, just enough to"
10"Tomás ducked left, slipping through"
11"Quinn cursed, squeezing after him."
12"The passage spat them out"
13"Tomás skidded to a halt"
14"The entrance to Camden Tube"
15"Quinn’s pulse hammered in her"
16"She knew this place."
17"A black market beneath the"
18"Her partner, Morris, had been"
19"Tomás didn’t look back this"
ratio0.903
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Before the nightmares started."
ratio0.016
4.61% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets, turning the pavement into a slick mirror that fractured the neon glow of Soho’s nightlife."
1"A black market beneath the city, one that didn’t deal in drugs or stolen goods, but in things that *shouldn’t exist*."
2"The space beyond was vast, cavernous, lit by lanterns that cast long, wavering shadows."
3"Stalls lined the walls, their wares displayed on tables draped in velvet: vials of liquid that glowed faintly blue, bundles of herbs that shouldn’t have been ab…"
4"Quinn quickened her pace, dodging a stall selling jars of eyes that *moved*."
5"Tomás stood in the center, his back to her, his shoulders rising and falling with ragged breaths."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.7620%