| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.425 | | leniency | 0.85 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.05 | |
| 75.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1203 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "hesitantly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1203 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "skipped a beat" | | 3 | "trepidation" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "desire" | | 10 | "palpable" | | 11 | "pang" | | 12 | "tangible" | | 13 | "racing" | | 14 | "furrowed" | | 15 | "etched" | | 16 | "footsteps" | | 17 | "echoing" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "couldn't help but notice" | | 2 | "hung in the air" | | 3 | "hung heavy in the air" |
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| 84.68% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "a pang of empathy" | | 1 | "a flicker of guilt" | | 2 | "a pang of sympathy" |
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| 96.77% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1201 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 897 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.78 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Evan" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 16 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Evan | 15 | | Silas | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Silas" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.608 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 27.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "As if sensing her scrutiny, the figure turned, revealing a face Aurora hadn't seen in years" | | 1 | "something akin to regret in his gaze" | | 2 | "as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the memory he carried" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1201 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.36% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 29.29 | | std | 12.12 | | cv | 0.414 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora couldn't help but notice the changes in him – the greying hair, the lines around his eyes, the limp that spoke of a life weathered by time and circumstance." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 899 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.012235817575083427 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010011123470522803 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 14.3 | | std | 6.42 | | cv | 0.449 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 54.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.35714285714285715 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 84.52% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Her eyes scanned the dimly" | | 1 | "She made her way to" | | 2 | "She allowed her gaze to" | | 3 | "Her eyes settled on a" | | 4 | "Her heart skipped a beat," | | 5 | "He slid off the barstool" | | 6 | "She remembered the pain, the" | | 7 | "she said, her tone carefully" | | 8 | "he murmured, his gaze momentarily" | | 9 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 10 | "He raised his glass in" | | 11 | "she said simply" | | 12 | "He paused, swirling the amber" | | 13 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 14 | "They stood there, two ghosts" | | 15 | "He fixed Evan with a" | | 16 | "She paused, her eyes meeting" | | 17 | "she said, her voice softer" | | 18 | "He took a long sip" | | 19 | "His voice trailed off, the" |
| | ratio | 0.339 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The old wooden floorboards creaked" | | 1 | "The familiar scent of stale" | | 2 | "Her eyes scanned the dimly" | | 3 | "She made her way to" | | 4 | "The bartender, a distinguished-looking man" | | 5 | "Silas said, pouring a finger" | | 6 | "Aurora accepted the glass with" | | 7 | "She allowed her gaze to" | | 8 | "Her eyes settled on a" | | 9 | "Her heart skipped a beat," | | 10 | "The name fell from her" | | 11 | "Evan's eyes widened in recognition," | | 12 | "He slid off the barstool" | | 13 | "Evan's voice was low, laced" | | 14 | "Aurora felt the weight of" | | 15 | "She remembered the pain, the" | | 16 | "she said, her tone carefully" | | 17 | "Evan nodded, his eyes searching" | | 18 | "he murmured, his gaze momentarily" | | 19 | "The silence stretched between them," |
| | ratio | 0.935 | |
| 80.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "As if sensing her scrutiny," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 55.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She allowed her gaze to wander the bar, the flickering candlelight illuminating the faded maps and black-and-white photographs that adorned the walls." | | 1 | "Evan nodded, his eyes searching her face as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the memory he carried." | | 2 | "Evan nodded, his eyes reflecting a depth of understanding that surprised her." | | 3 | "Silas, who had been discreetly observing the exchange, approached them with a gentle clearing of his throat." | | 4 | "The weight of their shared history hung heavy in the air, a tangible presence that demanded acknowledgment." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The name fell, a mixture of disbelief and trepidation" | | 1 | "she said, her tone carefully neutral" | | 2 | "he murmured, his gaze momentarily dropping to the scar on her wrist" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 5 | "Evan said, a hint of sincerity in his voice" | | 6 | "She paused, her eyes meeting his" | | 7 | "she said, her voice softer than she intended" | | 8 | "he said, his gaze sweeping between them" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Evan murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |