Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQV68MCJ9DPY62CBB22454

Run Details

Duration:
19.1s
Cost:
$0.002488
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The old wooden floorboards creaked under Aurora's boots as she pushed open the heavy door of The Raven's Nest. The familiar scent of stale cigarette smoke and spilled beer washed over her, taking her back to a time long ago. Her eyes scanned the dimly lit interior, the green neon sign casting an eerie glow over the scattered patrons. She made her way to the bar, weaving through the worn leather stools and small round tables. The bartender, a distinguished-looking man with greying auburn hair, caught her eye and nodded in recognition. "Rory, haven't seen you in these parts for a while," Silas said, pouring a finger of amber liquid into a glass and sliding it across the worn mahogany counter. "Whiskey, neat. On the house." Aurora accepted the glass with a grateful nod, relishing the familiar burn as the liquor slid down her throat. "Thanks, Silas. It's good to be back." She allowed her gaze to wander the bar, the flickering candlelight illuminating the faded maps and black-and-white photographs that adorned the walls. Her eyes settled on a lone figure hunched over the far end of the bar, nursing a glass of what appeared to be scotch. As if sensing her scrutiny, the figure turned, revealing a face Aurora hadn't seen in years. Her heart skipped a beat, and she felt the air leave her lungs in a sharp exhale. "Evan..." The name fell from her lips, a mixture of disbelief and trepidation. Evan's eyes widened in recognition, and for a moment, Aurora saw a flash of something akin to regret in his gaze. He slid off the barstool and made his way towards her, the limp in his left leg more pronounced than she remembered. "Aurora." Evan's voice was low, laced with a hint of uncertainty. "I... I didn't expect to see you here." Aurora felt the weight of the years between them pressing down on her chest. She remembered the pain, the betrayal, the scars that still lingered, both physical and emotional. And yet, she couldn't ignore the small part of her that ached to reach out and close the distance. "It's been a long time," she said, her tone carefully neutral. Evan nodded, his eyes searching her face as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the memory he carried. "Too long," he murmured, his gaze momentarily dropping to the scar on her wrist. The silence stretched between them, thick with unspoken words and unresolved history. Aurora couldn't help but notice the changes in him – the greying hair, the lines around his eyes, the limp that spoke of a life weathered by time and circumstance. "What are you doing here, Evan?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Evan's lips curled into a humorless smile. "Drowning my sorrows, it would seem." He raised his glass in a sardonic gesture. "And you? What brings you back to this place?" Aurora considered her response, weighing the gravity of the moment. "Life," she said simply. "Or perhaps, the pursuit of it." Evan nodded, his eyes reflecting a depth of understanding that surprised her. "I see." He paused, swirling the amber liquid in his glass. "I'm... I'm sorry, Aurora. For everything." The words hung in the air, weighted with the years of pain and regret that had passed between them. Aurora felt a flicker of emotion, a struggle between the scars of the past and the desire to forgive. "I know," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I know you are." They stood there, two ghosts of their former selves, caught in the intersection of time and fate. The noise of the bar faded into the background as they searched each other's eyes, the weight of their shared history palpable. "You look good, Rory," Evan said, a hint of sincerity in his voice. "I'm... I'm glad to see you're doing well." Aurora felt a pang of empathy, a reluctant acknowledgment of the man he had become. "As am I, Evan. As am I." Silas, who had been discreetly observing the exchange, approached them with a gentle clearing of his throat. "Rory, I'm afraid I need to close up shop for the night. You two look like you have some catching up to do." He fixed Evan with a pointed stare. "Don't do anything I'll regret." Evan held up his hands in a gesture of surrender. "No need to worry, Silas. We're just... reminiscing." Silas nodded, a hint of concern in his eyes as he glanced between the two former friends. "Very well. I'll be in the back if you need me." Aurora watched as Silas retreated, leaving her and Evan alone in the dimly lit bar. The weight of their shared history hung heavy in the air, a tangible presence that demanded acknowledgment. "So," Evan began, his voice laced with a hint of trepidation. "What have you been up to all these years?" Aurora took a deep breath, her mind racing with the events that had unfolded since their paths had last crossed. "A lot, it would seem. I left Cardiff, just as you suggested all those years ago. Ended up in London, working a few odd jobs to make ends meet." Evan's brow furrowed, a flicker of guilt crossing his features. "I'm... I'm glad you got out of there. That place was never good for you." Aurora nodded, her gaze drifting to the scar on her wrist. "No, it wasn't. But I suppose that's all in the past now." She paused, her eyes meeting his. "What about you, Evan? What have you been up to?" Evan's expression darkened, a shadow of pain crossing his face. "Nothing good, I'm afraid. I... I made a lot of mistakes, Rory. Mistakes that cost me everything." Aurora felt a pang of sympathy, the familiar pull of their shared history tugging at her heart. "I'm sorry to hear that," she said, her voice softer than she intended. Evan let out a humorless chuckle. "Don't be. I brought it all on myself." He took a long sip of his drink, his gaze fixed on the amber liquid. "I've been trying to find my way back, you know. To make amends. But it's not easy, not after..." His voice trailed off, the unspoken ending hanging in the air like a weighted silence. Aurora reached out, her hand hovering hesitantly over his arm. "Evan, I..." But before she could finish, the sound of the heavy wooden door creaking open drew their attention. Silas emerged from the back room, a solemn expression on his face. "I'm afraid I must insist you both be on your way," he said, his gaze sweeping between them. "The Nest is closed for the night." Aurora and Evan exchanged a final, loaded glance, the weight of their shared history and the uncertainty of the future etched on their faces. "Very well," Evan murmured, finishing the last of his drink and sliding off the barstool. "It was... good to see you, Rory." Aurora nodded, a bittersweet smile playing on her lips. "And you, Evan." With one last, lingering look, the two former friends made their way towards the door, their footsteps echoing in the silence of the empty bar.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:41:31.417Z" 2/19/2026, 10:41:31 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.425
leniency0.85
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.05
75.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"hesitantly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"very"
3"hesitantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1203
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"skipped a beat"
count1
3
word"trepidation"
count2
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"flicker"
count2
9
word"desire"
count1
10
word"palpable"
count1
11
word"pang"
count2
12
word"tangible"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
14
word"furrowed"
count1
15
word"etched"
count1
16
word"footsteps"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanned"
2"skipped a beat"
3"trepidation"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"unspoken"
7"whisper"
8"flicker"
9"desire"
10"palpable"
11"pang"
12"tangible"
13"racing"
14"furrowed"
15"etched"
16"footsteps"
17"echoing"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"couldn't help but"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"couldn't help but notice"
2"hung in the air"
3"hung heavy in the air"
84.68% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences62
matches
0"a pang of empathy"
1"a flicker of guilt"
2"a pang of sympathy"
96.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1201
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount897
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.78
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Aurora16
Raven1
Nest1
Evan15
Silas5
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Raven"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.608
windowScore0.333
27.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"As if sensing her scrutiny, the figure turned, revealing a face Aurora hadn't seen in years"
1"something akin to regret in his gaze"
2"as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the memory he carried"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1201
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
75.36% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean29.29
std12.12
cv0.414
sampleLengths
059
133
234
326
446
533
613
743
819
948
1011
1135
1242
1314
1430
1520
1629
1738
1814
1939
2021
2122
2252
2318
2428
2532
2620
2749
2825
2939
3027
3130
3248
3315
3412
3529
3625
3724
3822
3912
4025
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences84
ratio0.012
matches
0"Aurora couldn't help but notice the changes in him – the greying hair, the lines around his eyes, the limp that spoke of a life weathered by time and circumstance."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount899
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.012235817575083427
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010011123470522803
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean14.3
std6.42
cv0.449
sampleLengths
019
121
219
317
416
529
65
719
87
922
1024
1116
1217
1313
1421
1522
1611
178
1814
1915
2019
2111
2221
2314
2412
2530
2614
277
2814
299
3010
314
326
3312
3411
356
3619
3719
3810
394
4017
4122
4213
438
4415
457
4617
4730
485
4910
54.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.35714285714285715
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences62
matches
0"Her eyes scanned the dimly"
1"She made her way to"
2"She allowed her gaze to"
3"Her eyes settled on a"
4"Her heart skipped a beat,"
5"He slid off the barstool"
6"She remembered the pain, the"
7"she said, her tone carefully"
8"he murmured, his gaze momentarily"
9"she asked, her voice barely"
10"He raised his glass in"
11"she said simply"
12"He paused, swirling the amber"
13"she said, her voice barely"
14"They stood there, two ghosts"
15"He fixed Evan with a"
16"She paused, her eyes meeting"
17"she said, her voice softer"
18"He took a long sip"
19"His voice trailed off, the"
ratio0.339
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences62
matches
0"The old wooden floorboards creaked"
1"The familiar scent of stale"
2"Her eyes scanned the dimly"
3"She made her way to"
4"The bartender, a distinguished-looking man"
5"Silas said, pouring a finger"
6"Aurora accepted the glass with"
7"She allowed her gaze to"
8"Her eyes settled on a"
9"Her heart skipped a beat,"
10"The name fell from her"
11"Evan's eyes widened in recognition,"
12"He slid off the barstool"
13"Evan's voice was low, laced"
14"Aurora felt the weight of"
15"She remembered the pain, the"
16"she said, her tone carefully"
17"Evan nodded, his eyes searching"
18"he murmured, his gaze momentarily"
19"The silence stretched between them,"
ratio0.935
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"As if sensing her scrutiny,"
ratio0.016
55.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She allowed her gaze to wander the bar, the flickering candlelight illuminating the faded maps and black-and-white photographs that adorned the walls."
1"Evan nodded, his eyes searching her face as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the memory he carried."
2"Evan nodded, his eyes reflecting a depth of understanding that surprised her."
3"Silas, who had been discreetly observing the exchange, approached them with a gentle clearing of his throat."
4"The weight of their shared history hung heavy in the air, a tangible presence that demanded acknowledgment."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"The name fell, a mixture of disbelief and trepidation"
1"she said, her tone carefully neutral"
2"he murmured, his gaze momentarily dropping to the scar on her wrist"
3"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"Evan said, a hint of sincerity in his voice"
6"She paused, her eyes meeting his"
7"she said, her voice softer than she intended"
8"he said, his gaze sweeping between them"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Evan murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.1
72.2642%