Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQV6YWEMSVCSHPMMAEN3N2

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9.8s
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$0.002869
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Anthropic

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock at the door echoed through the flat like a gunshot, sharp and jarring. Aurora's heart skipped a beat. She knew that knock. Slowly, she rose from the battered armchair, the old floorboards creaking beneath her feet as she approached the entrance. Wiping her damp palms on the legs of her trousers, she peered through the peephole, pulse pounding in her ears. There he stood, platinum hair gleaming under the dingy hallway light — Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman. Her mouth went dry. She fumbled with the deadbolts, cursing under her breath as she unlocked the door. Lucien's mismatched eyes met hers, one amber, one black, searching her face intently. "Rory." His voice was low, almost a whisper. "Luc." She hated how breathy she sounded, how the mere sight of him still made her weak. "What are you doing here?" One corner of his lips twitched upward in a wry half-smile. "I was in the neighborhood." Aurora scoffed, folding her arms across her chest. "Bullshit." Lucien's expression remained infuriatingly calm, but she could see the muscle in his jaw ticking. "May I come in?" She hesitated, then stepped aside, letting him sweep past her into the cramped flat. His keen gaze took in the familiar surroundings — the stacks of books and scrolls, the sleeping tabby cat curled on the sofa, the faded floral armchair where she'd been sitting. Aurora watched as he removed his gloves, tucking them into the pocket of his tailored charcoal suit. "To what do I owe the pleasure?" she asked, closing the door and leaning back against it. Lucien turned to face her, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane. "I... heard about what happened." His eyes flicked down to the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. "With Evan." Aurora stiffened, her fingers instinctively moving to cover the mark. "How did you —" "I have my sources," he said simply. She shook her head, a mirthless laugh escaping her lips. "Of course you do." Pushing away from the door, she moved to the kitchenette, busying herself with the kettle. "So what, you're here to offer your condolences? Or maybe a job?" "Neither." Lucien followed her, hovering just behind her shoulder. "I'm here because I was... concerned." The kettle began to whistle, but Aurora made no move to remove it from the burner. "Concerned," she repeated slowly, "about me." "Oui." His hand brushed the small of her back, and she couldn't help the shiver that ran down her spine. "I know what it's like to be in a... difficult situation. To feel trapped. Alone." Aurora swallowed hard, the steam from the kettle stinging her eyes. "I'm fine, Luc. I've got Eva and..." Her voice trailed off as she realized she had no one else. No family, no friends, aside from the prickly witch upstairs. "I'm managing." "Are you?" His breath tickled the back of her neck, and she had to fight the urge to lean into him. "Because from where I'm standing, it looks like you're drowning." She whirled around to face him, her heart pounding. "What do you want from me, Lucien?" His mismatched eyes searched her face, something akin to pain flickering in their depths. "I want to help you." Aurora stared at him, utterly bewildered. "Help me?" she echoed. "Since when do you care about anyone but yourself?" Lucien's jaw tightened. "I care about you, Rory." The admission hung in the air between them, thick and heavy. Aurora felt her breath catch in her throat, her mind racing. This was Lucien Moreau, the impeccably dressed, silver-tongued fixer of London's supernatural underworld — a man who was known for his ruthless pragmatism and self-preservation above all else. And he was standing in her cramped kitchen, looking at her with an emotion she'd never seen in his eyes before. Vulnerability. "Why?" she whispered, hating how small and uncertain her voice sounded. Lucien reached out, his fingers tracing the line of her jaw. Aurora held perfectly still, her heart pounding in her ears. "Because," he murmured, "you're the only one who's ever seen me. The real me." Before she could respond, his lips were on hers, warm and insistent. Aurora gasped, her hands gripping the lapels of his suit as she melted into the kiss. Lucien's arms encircled her waist, pulling her flush against him. For a moment, the world fell away, and it was just the two of them, caught in a swirl of heat and longing. When they finally broke apart, both breathless, Aurora stared up at him, her blue eyes wide with a myriad of emotions. "Luc, I —" He silenced her with a gentle finger to her lips. "Shhh. I know." Brushing a stray lock of hair behind her ear, he added softly, "I'm not going anywhere this time." Aurora felt a lump rising in her throat, and she blinked back the tears that threatened to fall. "Promise?" Lucien's mouth curved into a genuine smile, the kind that reached his eyes. "Promise." Pulling her close, he kissed her again, and Aurora surrendered herself to the moment, to the warmth of his embrace, to the promise of a future she'd long since given up on. For now, everything else could wait.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
1"she repeated slowly [slowly]"
2"behind her ear he added softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.424
leniency0.848
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.182
71.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount872
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"utterly"
2"perfectly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount872
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"skipped a beat"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count3
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"skipped a beat"
2"pulse"
3"pounding"
4"gleaming"
5"whisper"
6"familiar"
7"flicked"
8"down her spine"
9"depths"
10"racing"
11"tracing"
12"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences57
matches
0"felt a lump"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords871
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
58.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount714
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Lucien10
Moreau2
Frenchman1
One1
Aurora13
London1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.59
windowScore0.833
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something akin to pain flickering in their dept"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount871
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"knew that knock"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean27.22
std17.92
cv0.658
sampleLengths
063
147
28
322
416
59
619
762
817
934
1014
117
1241
1315
1422
1535
1642
1731
1816
1919
2019
218
2271
231
2411
2535
2661
2724
2831
2919
3014
3138
99.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"was known"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs124
matches
0"was standing"
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences75
ratio0.04
matches
0"There he stood, platinum hair gleaming under the dingy hallway light — Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman."
1"His keen gaze took in the familiar surroundings — the stacks of books and scrolls, the sleeping tabby cat curled on the sofa, the faded floral armchair where she'd been sitting."
2"This was Lucien Moreau, the impeccably dressed, silver-tongued fixer of London's supernatural underworld — a man who was known for his ruthless pragmatism and self-preservation above all else."
93.20% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount440
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.04090909090909091
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.013636363636363636
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean11.61
std6.99
cv0.602
sampleLengths
015
15
24
319
420
516
64
714
813
98
1017
115
1211
135
148
151
1615
174
1814
1931
2017
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2215
2317
242
2510
264
277
2810
2919
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319
326
3316
346
3520
3615
3711
3819
3910
402
4121
4210
439
447
4514
465
476
484
499
88.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5333333333333333
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners40
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Slowly, she rose from the"
ratio0.019
79.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences54
matches
0"She knew that knock."
1"Her mouth went dry."
2"She fumbled with the deadbolts,"
3"His voice was low, almost"
4"She hated how breathy she"
5"She hesitated, then stepped aside,"
6"His keen gaze took in"
7"she asked, closing the door"
8"His eyes flicked down to"
9"he said simply"
10"She shook her head, a"
11"she repeated slowly"
12"His hand brushed the small"
13"Her voice trailed off as"
14"His breath tickled the back"
15"She whirled around to face"
16"His mismatched eyes searched her"
17"she whispered, hating how small"
18"He silenced her with a"
ratio0.352
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences54
matches
0"The knock at the door"
1"Aurora's heart skipped a beat."
2"She knew that knock."
3"There he stood, platinum hair"
4"Her mouth went dry."
5"She fumbled with the deadbolts,"
6"Lucien's mismatched eyes met hers,"
7"His voice was low, almost"
8"She hated how breathy she"
9"Aurora scoffed, folding her arms"
10"Lucien's expression remained infuriatingly calm,"
11"She hesitated, then stepped aside,"
12"His keen gaze took in"
13"Aurora watched as he removed"
14"she asked, closing the door"
15"Lucien turned to face her,"
16"His eyes flicked down to"
17"Aurora stiffened, her fingers instinctively"
18"he said simply"
19"She shook her head, a"
ratio0.778
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Before she could respond, his"
ratio0.019
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"This was Lucien Moreau, the impeccably dressed, silver-tongued fixer of London's supernatural underworld — a man who was known for his ruthless pragmatism and s…"
1"Lucien's mouth curved into a genuine smile, the kind that reached his eyes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
28.79% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she repeated slowly (repeat)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"behind her ear he added softly (add)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.242
83.2489%