Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQV7401ZVDJ1MZ4FAKM7GT

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Fae Grove was enveloped in an eerie stillness as Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stood in its midst. The night cloaked the ancient oak standing stones in shadows, casting long, twisting shapes that seemed to writhe with a life of their own. Her straight, shoulder-length black hair fluttered feebly with the occasional draft, while the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched—perhaps a subconscious reaction to the unease that gnawed at the edge of her mind. She had come here for a reason, drawn by whispers she could barely grasp. Standing there in the heart of Richmond Park, she couldn’t remember what had compelled her to leave the comfort of her flat above Silas' bar. The night felt charged, heavy with a presence she couldn’t define. Rory’s bright blue eyes scanned the gloom, seeking the faint inner glow of the Heartstone Pendant hanging from her neck for reassurance. The wildflowers that usually brightened the Grove seemed muted, their colors lost to the darkness. The air felt thick, as if it resisted her every breath. Somewhere nearby, a twig snapped, its crisp sound resonating louder than it should have in the oppressive silence. She stood still, listening, but the noise did not repeat. Perhaps it was a deer, she tried to rationalize. But her instincts screamed otherwise. Time moved oddly here. One minute could stretch into eternity, or an hour could slip away unnoticed. Rory had no way of knowing how long she had been standing there, each passing second increasing the unease in her chest. Her senses were heightened, every sound, every shadow more distinct. The leaves rustled unnaturally as if something whispered through them. Goosebumps prickled her skin. Rory moved slowly, her footsteps silent on the soft ground as she advanced towards the center of the Grove. The Heartstone began to pulse with warmth, its faint glow casting a dim light against her chest. The warmth did nothing to settle her nerves—it merely confirmed her suspicions that something waited out there. She tightened her grip on the small flashlight in her hand, its narrow beam offering limited comfort against the encroaching darkness. She paused by an ancient stone, its gnarled surface etched with symbols worn by countless years. She traced the shapes with her fingertips, feeling the cool, rough textures. A sudden sense of vertigo washed over her, as if the earth shifted beneath her feet. She pulled away from the stone, blinking to clear the sensation. When her vision settled, a figure stood at the edge of the clearing. “Hello?” Rory’s voice sounded foreign to her, laden with an anxiety she struggled to control. No response. The figure didn’t move, half-shrouded by the shadows. Rory squinted, trying to make out details—a trick of the light, perhaps, or something more sinister. She took a tentative step forward, then another. The figure remained, rooted, watching. Unseen eyes bored into her, sending a shiver down her spine. A soft, almost undetectable sound of fabric brushing against foliage came from behind her. Rory spun around, flashlight beam slicing through the darkness, but nothing stood there. The heartstone’s pulsing quickened. She turned back to the figure—it was gone. Panic clawed at her gut. She turned on the spot, flashlight darting wildly to every corner of the Grove. She was alone—or so she willed herself to believe. Turning back to her task, she reached into her pocket and withdrew a small piece of parchment, its edges yellowed and fragile. Words, indecipherable in the faint light, held the key to what she sought—and an answer to the fear that stalked her. From the parchment, a location within the Grove was inscribed. Rory moved, more urgently now, towards a large stone slab near the far end of the clearing. Each step felt weighted, each breath labored. Her heart drummed loud enough that it swallowed the silence. Before she could reach it, an icy hand clamped around her wrist, pulling her sharply to a halt. She whirled around, but there was nothing. The chill lingered, spreading up her arm. She bit back a cry, her free hand clutching the Heartstone as if it could offer protection. Voices whispered on the wind, too low to make sense of, a susurrus that ebbed and flowed. She could hear her name—“Aurora...Rory...” The pendant grew warmer against her skin, its glow intensifying. The whispers grew louder, a cacophony that twisted into something almost melodic, yet utterly wrong. The urge to run, to forsake her mission and flee, was strong. But she pressed on, her resolve hardening with every fearful step. The slab loomed before her, its surface smooth and unyielding. She placed the parchment on top, watched the wind try and lift it away. With trembling hands, she withdrew her pocketknife, feeling the protective casing's secure cold. She sliced her palm with a quick, decisive motion, crimson blood welling and spilling onto the stone. The whispers rose to a crescendo, then cut off abruptly, plunging the Grove into oppressive silence once more. Before she had time to process, a figure materialized beside her—a woman, ethereal and radiant. Aurora. Her mirror image but different—eyes as dark as the void, a malicious smile twisting her lips. “Welcome,” the woman said, voice echoing, as if layered with countless others. Rory stepped back, a scream stifled in her throat. “Who are you?” “Your shadow,” the apparition replied, stepping forward. “Your mirror. All you're running from—the fear, the anger, the regret—I am that.” The temperature dropped further, Rory’s breath clouding in the air. The already cold steel of the knife in her hands felt like ice against her skin. “What do you want from me?” Rory's voice wavered despite her best attempts at bravado. “To make you whole.” The figure's eyes gleamed. “You came here for answers, didn’t you? For an understanding you can't ignore.” Rory shook her head. “No, I came... I came to be free.” The doppelganger laughed, an echoing sound that seemed to reverberate through the Grove. “You can't escape what’s inside you. But join me, and you can embrace it.” The Pulse of the Heartstone transitioned from steady warmth to scalding heat, making Rory flinch involuntarily. It was reacting to her other self, this dark spirit of the night. Faced with a choice, a question of identity and resolve, Rory’s eyes met those of her shadow—unfaltering, determined. “I am free because I choose to be,” she said resolutely, tightening her grip on the pendant. “You’re nothing but remnants.” The shadow being snarled, its form flickering, shimmering like mist under moonlight. “So be it. Let’s see how strong your resolve truly is.” And then the presence surged, overtaking, smothering. Rory fought back, the warmth of the Heartstone surging through her veins, its energy a lifeline amidst darkness. She felt the Grove tremble under their combined force, the air thick with ancient power. “I won’t succumb,” Rory shouted, her voice slicing through the ether as the Heartstone's glow engulfed them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said resolutely [resolutely]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
82.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"sharply"
2"utterly"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1175
totalAiIsms35
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count2
5
word"silence"
count3
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"warmth"
count4
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count2
12
word"sinister"
count1
13
word"down her spine"
count1
14
word"quickened"
count1
15
word"chill"
count1
16
word"cacophony"
count1
17
word"resolve"
count3
18
word"loomed"
count1
19
word"radiant"
count1
20
word"echoing"
count2
21
word"wavered"
count1
22
word"determined"
count1
23
word"amidst"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"charged"
2"scanned"
3"gloom"
4"oppressive"
5"silence"
6"footsteps"
7"pulse"
8"warmth"
9"etched"
10"traced"
11"sense of"
12"sinister"
13"down her spine"
14"quickened"
15"chill"
16"cacophony"
17"resolve"
18"loomed"
19"radiant"
20"echoing"
21"wavered"
22"determined"
23"amidst"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"world had stopped"
count1
highlights
0"as if the earth shifted"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"e with warmth"
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1161
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1067
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove8
Aurora2
Carter1
Rory16
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone6
Pendant1
Pulse1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Heartstone"
4"Pendant"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Pulse"
globalScore0.75
windowScore0.333
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"shapes that seemed to writhe with a life of their own"
1"seemed muted their colors lost to the darkness"
2"felt like ice against her skin"
3"sound that seemed to reverberate through the Grove"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1161
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean38.7
std23.03
cv0.595
sampleLengths
081
172
268
363
474
568
615
72
848
939
1071
1144
1249
1322
1448
1572
1632
1712
1812
1920
2026
2115
2221
2312
2427
2547
2621
2723
2840
2917
84.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences84
matches
0"was enveloped"
1"were heightened"
2"was gone"
3"was inscribed"
4"being snarled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was reacting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences91
ratio0.099
matches
0"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair fluttered feebly with the occasional draft, while the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched—perhaps a subconscious reaction to the unease that gnawed at the edge of her mind."
1"The warmth did nothing to settle her nerves—it merely confirmed her suspicions that something waited out there."
2"Rory squinted, trying to make out details—a trick of the light, perhaps, or something more sinister."
3"She turned back to the figure—it was gone."
4"She was alone—or so she willed herself to believe."
5"Words, indecipherable in the faint light, held the key to what she sought—and an answer to the fear that stalked her."
6"Before she had time to process, a figure materialized beside her—a woman, ethereal and radiant."
7"Her mirror image but different—eyes as dark as the void, a malicious smile twisting her lips."
8"Faced with a choice, a question of identity and resolve, Rory’s eyes met those of her shadow—unfaltering, determined."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount479
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03966597077244259
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.012526096033402923
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean12.76
std5.79
cv0.454
sampleLengths
022
124
235
314
425
511
622
715
811
918
1010
119
125
134
1413
1522
1610
1710
184
1919
2017
2117
2221
2316
2412
2516
2611
2713
2815
292
308
3116
328
335
3411
3514
3613
374
388
395
4014
419
4222
4321
4410
4517
467
4710
4818
497
54.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3956043956043956
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners36
81.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Somewhere nearby, a twig snapped,"
1"Perhaps it was a deer,"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences82
matches
0"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
1"She had come here for"
2"She stood still, listening, but"
3"Her senses were heightened, every"
4"She tightened her grip on"
5"She paused by an ancient"
6"She traced the shapes with"
7"She pulled away from the"
8"She took a tentative step"
9"She turned back to the"
10"She turned on the spot,"
11"She was alone—or so she"
12"Her heart drummed loud enough"
13"She whirled around, but there"
14"She bit back a cry,"
15"She could hear her"
16"She placed the parchment on"
17"She sliced her palm with"
18"Her mirror image but different—eyes"
19"It was reacting to her"
ratio0.268
51.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences82
matches
0"The Fae Grove was enveloped"
1"The night cloaked the ancient"
2"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
3"She had come here for"
4"The night felt charged, heavy"
5"Rory’s bright blue eyes scanned"
6"The wildflowers that usually brightened"
7"The air felt thick, as"
8"She stood still, listening, but"
9"Time moved oddly here."
10"Rory had no way of"
11"Her senses were heightened, every"
12"The leaves rustled unnaturally as"
13"Goosebumps prickled her skin."
14"Rory moved slowly, her footsteps"
15"The Heartstone began to pulse"
16"The warmth did nothing to"
17"She tightened her grip on"
18"She paused by an ancient"
19"She traced the shapes with"
ratio0.817
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Before she could reach it,"
1"Before she had time to"
ratio0.024
80.20% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The night cloaked the ancient oak standing stones in shadows, casting long, twisting shapes that seemed to writhe with a life of their own."
1"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair fluttered feebly with the occasional draft, while the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched—perhaps a sub…"
2"She bit back a cry, her free hand clutching the Heartstone as if it could offer protection."
3"The whispers grew louder, a cacophony that twisted into something almost melodic, yet utterly wrong."
4"The shadow being snarled, its form flickering, shimmering like mist under moonlight."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the woman said, voice echoing, as if layered with countless others"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.133
79.6736%