| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said resolutely [resolutely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 82.98% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1175 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "utterly" | | 3 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1175 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "fluttered" | | 1 | "charged" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "traced" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "sinister" | | 13 | "down her spine" | | 14 | "quickened" | | 15 | "chill" | | 16 | "cacophony" | | 17 | "resolve" | | 18 | "loomed" | | 19 | "radiant" | | 20 | "echoing" | | 21 | "wavered" | | 22 | "determined" | | 23 | "amidst" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "world had stopped" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "as if the earth shifted" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 74.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1161 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1067 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Pendant | 1 | | Pulse | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Pulse" |
| | globalScore | 0.75 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 11.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "shapes that seemed to writhe with a life of their own" | | 1 | "seemed muted their colors lost to the darkness" | | 2 | "felt like ice against her skin" | | 3 | "sound that seemed to reverberate through the Grove" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 38.7 | | std | 23.03 | | cv | 0.595 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 71 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 72 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 17 |
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| 84.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "was enveloped" | | 1 | "were heightened" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was inscribed" | | 4 | "being snarled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.099 | | matches | | 0 | "Her straight, shoulder-length black hair fluttered feebly with the occasional draft, while the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched—perhaps a subconscious reaction to the unease that gnawed at the edge of her mind." | | 1 | "The warmth did nothing to settle her nerves—it merely confirmed her suspicions that something waited out there." | | 2 | "Rory squinted, trying to make out details—a trick of the light, perhaps, or something more sinister." | | 3 | "She turned back to the figure—it was gone." | | 4 | "She was alone—or so she willed herself to believe." | | 5 | "Words, indecipherable in the faint light, held the key to what she sought—and an answer to the fear that stalked her." | | 6 | "Before she had time to process, a figure materialized beside her—a woman, ethereal and radiant." | | 7 | "Her mirror image but different—eyes as dark as the void, a malicious smile twisting her lips." | | 8 | "Faced with a choice, a question of identity and resolve, Rory’s eyes met those of her shadow—unfaltering, determined." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 479 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.03966597077244259 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012526096033402923 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 12.76 | | std | 5.79 | | cv | 0.454 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 54.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3956043956043956 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 81.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere nearby, a twig snapped," | | 1 | "Perhaps it was a deer," |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Her straight, shoulder-length black hair" | | 1 | "She had come here for" | | 2 | "She stood still, listening, but" | | 3 | "Her senses were heightened, every" | | 4 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 5 | "She paused by an ancient" | | 6 | "She traced the shapes with" | | 7 | "She pulled away from the" | | 8 | "She took a tentative step" | | 9 | "She turned back to the" | | 10 | "She turned on the spot," | | 11 | "She was alone—or so she" | | 12 | "Her heart drummed loud enough" | | 13 | "She whirled around, but there" | | 14 | "She bit back a cry," | | 15 | "She could hear her" | | 16 | "She placed the parchment on" | | 17 | "She sliced her palm with" | | 18 | "Her mirror image but different—eyes" | | 19 | "It was reacting to her" |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 51.46% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove was enveloped" | | 1 | "The night cloaked the ancient" | | 2 | "Her straight, shoulder-length black hair" | | 3 | "She had come here for" | | 4 | "The night felt charged, heavy" | | 5 | "Rory’s bright blue eyes scanned" | | 6 | "The wildflowers that usually brightened" | | 7 | "The air felt thick, as" | | 8 | "She stood still, listening, but" | | 9 | "Time moved oddly here." | | 10 | "Rory had no way of" | | 11 | "Her senses were heightened, every" | | 12 | "The leaves rustled unnaturally as" | | 13 | "Goosebumps prickled her skin." | | 14 | "Rory moved slowly, her footsteps" | | 15 | "The Heartstone began to pulse" | | 16 | "The warmth did nothing to" | | 17 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 18 | "She paused by an ancient" | | 19 | "She traced the shapes with" |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could reach it," | | 1 | "Before she had time to" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 80.20% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The night cloaked the ancient oak standing stones in shadows, casting long, twisting shapes that seemed to writhe with a life of their own." | | 1 | "Her straight, shoulder-length black hair fluttered feebly with the occasional draft, while the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched—perhaps a sub…" | | 2 | "She bit back a cry, her free hand clutching the Heartstone as if it could offer protection." | | 3 | "The whispers grew louder, a cacophony that twisted into something almost melodic, yet utterly wrong." | | 4 | "The shadow being snarled, its form flickering, shimmering like mist under moonlight." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "the woman said, voice echoing, as if layered with countless others" |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.267 | | leniency | 0.533 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |