Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQV87DYAHGB5PNJA0178KE

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Duration:
40.3s
Cost:
$0.000843
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain pounded against the pavement, forming deep puddles along the edges of the damp streets. Harlow Quinn sprinted through the wet darkness, her keen eyes locked onto the retreating figure up ahead. She had been chasing Tomás Herrera for three blocks now, and her lungs were starting to burn from the exertion. The rhythmic slapping of their feet hitting the soaked ground echoed through the empty roads as they ran, engrossed in their high-stakes game of cat and mouse. Tomás darted around a corner, his silhouette blurring into the shadows as Harlow struggled to keep up. She skidded around the same bend a few seconds later, only for her heart to sink when she saw no sign of him on the other side. Instead, she found herself standing at the entrance of the Raven's Nest – an old, downtrodden bar that served as the meeting place for many of London's supernatural underground. "Shit," Harlow whispered under her breath, realizing that Tomás had slipped inside while she was momentarily out of sight. With a deep breath, she steeled herself before pushing open the heavy wooden door, stepping across the threshold into the dimly lit bar. Inside, the air was thick with smoke and the stench of stale beer. Dim lights flickered overhead, casting long shadows on the worn faces of the patrons who sat hunched over their drinks. Their eyes followed Harlow as she moved further into the room, their gazes filled with suspicion and curiosity. Ignoring their stares, Harlow scanned the crowd for any sign of Tomás. She noticed a door at the back of the room that led to what she assumed was the hidden back room mentioned in her files on the Nest. It made sense that he would try to escape through there, hoping to slip away unnoticed. As she marched towards it, a voice called out from behind her. "Looking for someone?" Harlow spun around to see Silas, the owner of the Raven's Nest, leaning against the bar with his arms crossed. He was a tall, slender man with a shock of white hair and piercing blue eyes that seemed to see right through her. "None of your business," she replied curtly, turning back towards the door. "Oh, but it is my business," Silas retorted, moving towards her with a predatory grace. "This is my establishment, Detective. I don't recall inviting you in." "And I don't need an invitation," Harlow shot back, reaching for the handle on the door. "Now, unless you want me to start asking questions about what goes on in this place, I suggest you step aside." Silas smirked, wagging a finger at her as if she were a naughty child. "Ah, ah, ah. Not so fast, Detective. There are rules here, and you're not above them." "What are you talking about?" "To enter the Veil Market, one must present a bone token. Do you have one?" Harlow's eyes narrowed. "The Veil Market? That's just a myth." "Is it?" Silas cocked an eyebrow. "Or perhaps that's what you choose to believe because the truth is too dangerous for someone like you." "You're full of shit, Silas." The old man laughed, shaking his head. "Tsk tsk, Detective. Such language. If you want to chase your little criminal friend, then you'll need to acquire a bone token first. They’re quite rare, I’m afraid." "And where would I get one of these tokens?" Harlow growled through gritted teeth. "Well," Silas drawled, leaning in close to whisper conspiratorially, “there might be someone here tonight willing to part with theirs... for the right price.” Harlow took a deep breath, trying to calm her racing thoughts. She knew that chasing Tomás into the unknown without proper backup was foolish, but every instinct in her body told her that this was the only chance she had to catch him. "Fine," she hissed, reaching into her pocket and pulling out a wad of cash. "How much?" A sly smile spread across Silas' face as he plucked the money from her hand, counting it with nimble fingers. "Pleasure doing business with you, Detective." With that, he reached behind the bar and retrieved a small object wrapped in cloth. He handed it to her with a flourish, saying, "I hope you know what you're getting yourself into." Harlow snatched the bundle and quickly unwrapped it, revealing a small, intricately carved bone token nestled inside. She slipped it into her pocket before turning back to the door at the rear of the bar. As she stepped through, she found herself in a narrow corridor lit by flickering gas lamps. The air was thick with the scent of moisture and decay, making it difficult to breathe. Harlow could hear the faint sound of voices echoing from somewhere up ahead, and she followed them cautiously, her hand resting on the handle of her gun. The passageway eventually opened up into a vast chamber filled with stalls and booths selling all manner of strange objects. Enchanted weapons, alchemical potions, and shrunken heads were only some of the macabre items being peddled by the shadowy figures manning the tables. A sense of dread washed over Harlow as she realized just how deep into the supernatural world she had ventured. She scanned the crowd for any sign of Tomás, her eyes darting between the cloaked figures that moved through the market like wraiths in the darkness. It wasn't long before she spotted him slipping into one of the darker corners of the cavern, and she began to follow, her footsteps masked by the cacophony of sounds filling the air. As she drew closer, she noticed that Tomás was speaking with a tall, hooded man who seemed to be selling him something from a black velvet pouch. A sudden surge of adrenaline coursed through her veins as she realized what was happening – Tomás was making a deal for whatever dangerous artifact he had stolen from the clique. With renewed purpose, Harlow pushed through the throng of bodies separating her from her quarry, determined to put an end to his schemes once and for all. She didn't know how much further she could delve into this twisted world without losing herself entirely, but she knew that if she let him slip away now, everything would be lost. Tomás looked up at the sound of her approach, his eyes widening in shock as he saw her closing in on him. He quickly slipped whatever he had purchased into his pocket and turned to flee, only for Harlow to grab hold of his arm and spin him around to face her. "Enough running, Tomás," she panted, her voice hard with determination. "It's time to answer for what you've done." The former-paramedic glared at her defiantly, his warm brown eyes flashing with anger. "You have no idea what you're doing, do you? This isn't your world, Detective. You don't belong here." "And you do?" Harlow retorted, her grip tightening on his wrist. "I know about your little side business, Tomás. I know about the secret room at the Nest and the deals you make down here in this godforsaken pit." Tomás' face paled beneath his olive skin, but he refused to back down. "You can't touch me, Harlow. Not without proof." "Is that right?" She smirked, sliding her hand into her pocket and pulling out the small bone token Silas had given her earlier. "What do you call this?" For a moment, Tomás’ confident facade cracked, revealing the fear lurking within him. But just as quickly, it was replaced by a look of resignation, and he sighed heavily, “You have no idea what you've gotten yourself into, Detective.” “It doesn't matter,” Harlow replied coldly, reaching for her handcuffs. “You're under arrest.” As she snapped the cuffs on his wrists, Tomás shook his head sadly. “You may have caught me, but there are others out there who will continue where I left off. This is bigger than you or me, Detective. Much bigger.” Harlow ignored his warning, too busy reading him his rights to care about whatever dire predictions he had to offer. As she led him back through the winding corridors of the Veil Market, she couldn't help but feel a sense of satisfaction wash over her, knowing that she had finally caught the man who had eluded her for so long. Yet, even as she walked him out into the rainy night, with the dark depths of the underground market fading behind them, she couldn't shake the feeling that something was amiss, and that the true danger had only just begun. The end.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she replied curtly [curtly]"
1"he sighed heavily [heavily]"
2"Harlow replied coldly [coldly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.424
leniency0.848
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.182
79.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count3
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"coldly"
count1
3
adverb"sadly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"cautiously"
2"coldly"
3"sadly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"steeled"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count2
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"macabre"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count2
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"cacophony"
count1
13
word"velvet"
count1
14
word"determined"
count1
15
word"delve"
count1
16
word"facade"
count1
17
word"depths"
count1
18
word"amiss"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"echoed"
2"steeled"
3"flickered"
4"scanned"
5"eyebrow"
6"whisper"
7"racing"
8"echoing"
9"macabre"
10"sense of"
11"footsteps"
12"cacophony"
13"velvet"
14"determined"
15"delve"
16"facade"
17"depths"
18"amiss"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
2
label"air was thick with"
count2
3
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"A sense of dread"
2"the air was thick with"
3"The air was thick with"
4"couldn't help but feel"
84.02% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences61
matches
0"A sense of dread"
1"d with determination"
2"g with anger"
49.18% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1432
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1083
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Tomás10
Herrera1
Harlow18
Raven2
Nest3
London1
Silas6
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Harlow"
4"Raven"
5"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Market"
globalScore0.669
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"eyes that seemed to see right through her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1432
matches(empty)
43.21% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"realizing that Tomás"
1"noticed that Tomás"
2"knowing that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean35.8
std21.83
cv0.61
sampleLengths
080
173
242
351
456
515
643
712
826
937
1030
115
1215
1310
1424
155
1635
1714
1824
1943
2016
2126
2233
2335
2459
2563
2659
2758
2859
2952
3018
3131
3239
3321
3428
3539
3613
3741
38100
392
93.76% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"being peddled"
1"was replaced"
61.11% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs192
matches
0"were starting"
1"was speaking"
2"was happening – was making"
72.31% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences81
ratio0.025
matches
0"Instead, she found herself standing at the entrance of the Raven's Nest – an old, downtrodden bar that served as the meeting place for many of London's supernatural underground."
1"A sudden surge of adrenaline coursed through her veins as she realized what was happening – Tomás was making a deal for whatever dangerous artifact he had stolen from the clique."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount592
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02533783783783784
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.011824324324324325
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean17.68
std8.73
cv0.494
sampleLengths
016
117
220
327
417
527
629
719
823
913
1020
1118
1212
1328
1416
1512
163
1720
1823
1912
2015
2111
2216
2321
2414
2516
265
2715
283
297
306
3118
325
337
3428
3514
3624
3711
3832
3914
402
4120
426
4315
4418
4517
4618
4716
4816
4927
80.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.48148148148148145
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners39
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Instead, she found herself standing"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences60
matches
0"She had been chasing Tomás"
1"She skidded around the same"
2"Their eyes followed Harlow as"
3"She noticed a door at"
4"It made sense that he"
5"He was a tall, slender"
6"she replied curtly, turning back"
7"She knew that chasing Tomás"
8"she hissed, reaching into her"
9"He handed it to her"
10"She slipped it into her"
11"She scanned the crowd for"
12"It wasn't long before she"
13"She didn't know how much"
14"He quickly slipped whatever he"
15"she panted, her voice hard"
16"She smirked, sliding her hand"
ratio0.283
93.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences60
matches
0"The rain pounded against the"
1"Harlow Quinn sprinted through the"
2"She had been chasing Tomás"
3"The rhythmic slapping of their"
4"Tomás darted around a corner,"
5"She skidded around the same"
6"Harlow whispered under her breath,"
7"Their eyes followed Harlow as"
8"She noticed a door at"
9"It made sense that he"
10"Harlow spun around to see"
11"He was a tall, slender"
12"she replied curtly, turning back"
13"Silas retorted, moving towards her"
14"Harlow shot back, reaching for"
15"Silas smirked, wagging a finger"
16"Harlow's eyes narrowed."
17"Silas cocked an eyebrow"
18"The old man laughed, shaking"
19"Harlow growled through gritted teeth"
ratio0.733
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Yet, even as she walked"
ratio0.017
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Instead, she found herself standing at the entrance of the Raven's Nest – an old, downtrodden bar that served as the meeting place for many of London's supernat…"
1"Dim lights flickered overhead, casting long shadows on the worn faces of the patrons who sat hunched over their drinks."
2"He was a tall, slender man with a shock of white hair and piercing blue eyes that seemed to see right through her."
3"Harlow could hear the faint sound of voices echoing from somewhere up ahead, and she followed them cautiously, her hand resting on the handle of her gun."
4"As she drew closer, she noticed that Tomás was speaking with a tall, hooded man who seemed to be selling him something from a black velvet pouch."
5"Tomás looked up at the sound of her approach, his eyes widening in shock as he saw her closing in on him."
6"As she led him back through the winding corridors of the Veil Market, she couldn't help but feel a sense of satisfaction wash over her, knowing that she had fin…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she panted, her voice hard with determination"
1"Harlow retorted, her grip tightening on his wrist"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
1"Silas retorted (retort)"
2"Harlow growled (growl)"
3"Silas drawled (drawl)"
4"she hissed (hiss)"
5"she panted (pant)"
6"Harlow retorted (retort)"
7"he sighed heavily (sigh)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.303
leniency0.606
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.485
72.2448%