Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTQV9T0P7S3E8KV7MMM4V2Y

Run Details

Duration:
12.7s
Cost:
$0.045585
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter's breath came in short, sharp bursts as she sprinted through the underbrush, her feet barely touching the ground. The Heartstone Pendant throbbed against her chest, its faint inner glow casting eerie shadows on the trees around her. She skidded to a halt, her eyes darting around the clearing. The ancient oak standing stones loomed like silent sentinels, marking the boundary of The Fae Grove. She had come here for a reason, but now, standing in the heart of the grove, something felt off. The wildflowers that bloomed year-round seemed to sway in a breeze she couldn't feel. The air was thick, almost suffocating, and the usual sounds of the forest were conspicuously absent. No chirping crickets, no rustling leaves, just an oppressive silence that pressed down on her like a weight. Aurora took a cautious step forward, her eyes scanning the grove for any sign of movement. The pendant pulsed again, warmer this time, as if urging her to move deeper into the clearing. She swallowed hard, her fingers brushing against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident that seemed trivial compared to the danger she felt now. A twig snapped behind her, and Aurora spun around, her heart pounding in her chest. Nothing. Just the shadows playing tricks on her mind. She took a deep breath, trying to steady her nerves. "Get a grip, Rory," she muttered to herself. "You're here for a reason. Focus." She moved forward, her steps deliberate and measured. The standing stones seemed to close in around her, their ancient carvings almost glowing in the dim light. Aurora reached out to touch one, her fingers tracing the intricate patterns etched into the stone. The moment her skin made contact, a chill ran down her spine, and she jerked her hand back as if burned. A low, almost imperceptible hum filled the air, growing louder with each passing second. Aurora's eyes widened as she realized the sound was coming from the pendant. She clutched it tightly, her mind racing. The Heartstone was reacting to something, but what? A flicker of movement caught her eye, and she turned to see a figure standing at the edge of the grove. It was tall and slender, its features obscured by the shadows. Aurora's breath hitched as the figure took a step forward, its eyes glowing a faint, unnatural blue. "Who's there?" she called out, her voice trembling despite her best efforts to sound brave. The figure didn't respond, but it continued to move closer, its movements fluid and almost hypnotic. Aurora took a step back, her mind screaming at her to run, but her feet felt rooted to the spot. The figure stopped just a few feet away, its eyes boring into hers. "Aurora Carter," it said, its voice a low, melodic whisper that sent shivers down her spine. "You should not have come here." "Who are you?" Aurora demanded, her voice barely above a whisper. "What do you want?" The figure tilted its head, its eyes never leaving hers. "I am a guardian of this place," it said. "And you, Aurora Carter, are trespassing." Aurora's mind raced as she tried to make sense of the situation. She had heard stories about The Fae Grove, about the ancient beings that guarded its secrets, but she had never truly believed them. Now, standing face to face with one of those beings, she felt a cold dread settle in her stomach. "I didn't mean to trespass," she said, her voice shaking. "I was given this pendant, and it led me here. I just want to understand why." The figure's eyes flicked to the pendant, and for a moment, Aurora thought she saw a flicker of recognition in its gaze. "The Heartstone," it murmured. "A powerful artifact, indeed. But it is not meant for you." Aurora's grip tightened on the pendant. "Then who is it meant for?" she asked, her voice growing more desperate. "Why was it given to me?" The figure took a step closer, and Aurora could feel the temperature drop around her. "That is not for me to say," it said. "But know this, Aurora Carter: the path you are on is fraught with danger. The Heartstone will guide you, but it will also attract those who seek its power. Be wary, for not all who come to this grove have good intentions." Aurora's mind whirled with questions, but before she could ask any of them, the figure began to fade, its form dissolving into the shadows. "Wait!" she called out, but it was too late. The figure was gone, leaving her alone in the grove once more. The pendant's glow dimmed, and the oppressive silence returned. Aurora took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart. She had come here seeking answers, but all she had found were more questions. The figure's warning echoed in her mind, and she couldn't shake the feeling that she was being watched. She turned to leave the grove, her steps quickening as she made her way back to the edge of the clearing. The standing stones seemed to watch her every move, their ancient eyes following her as she passed. Aurora's breath came in ragged gasps, and she could feel the weight of the pendant pressing against her chest. As she reached the edge of the grove, a sudden rustling in the underbrush made her freeze. She turned slowly, her eyes scanning the darkness for any sign of movement. The rustling grew louder, and Aurora's heart pounded in her chest as she realized she was not alone. A pair of glowing eyes appeared in the darkness, followed by another, and another. Aurora's breath caught in her throat as she realized she was surrounded. The creatures moved closer, their eyes glowing with an unnatural light. Aurora took a step back, her mind racing. She had to get out of here, but the creatures were closing in, their movements slow and deliberate. She could feel the pendant pulsing against her chest, its warmth a stark contrast to the cold dread that filled her. "Stay back!" she shouted, her voice trembling. The creatures paused, their eyes fixed on her. For a moment, there was silence, and then, without warning, they lunged. Aurora turned and ran, her feet pounding against the ground as she sprinted through the underbrush. The creatures were right behind her, their growls filling the air. She could feel their hot breath on her neck, and she pushed herself to run faster, her heart pounding in her chest. The edge of the grove was just ahead, and Aurora could see the faint light of the moon filtering through the trees. She pushed herself harder, her legs burning with the effort. Just a few more steps, and she would be free. But as she reached the edge of the grove, a figure stepped out from the shadows, blocking her path. Aurora skidded to a halt, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The figure's eyes glowed with the same unnatural light as the creatures, and Aurora felt a cold dread settle in her stomach. "Going somewhere, Aurora Carter?" the figure asked, its voice a low, menacing whisper. Aurora's mind raced as she tried to think of a way out. She was trapped, surrounded by creatures that wanted the Heartstone. She could feel the pendant pulsing against her chest, its warmth a stark contrast to the cold dread that filled her. The figure took a step closer, and Aurora could see the glint of sharp teeth in the moonlight. "You should not have come here," it said. "Now, you will never leave." Aurora's heart pounded in her chest as she realized the truth. She was trapped, with no way out. The creatures closed in, their eyes glowing with an unnatural light. Aurora took a deep breath, her mind racing. She had to find a way to escape, but time was running out. The figure lunged, and Aurora's world went dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.591
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"truly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsms50
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"sentinels"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count2
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"scanning"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count3
10
word"measured"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"intricate"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"down her spine"
count1
16
word"racing"
count4
17
word"flicker"
count2
18
word"whisper"
count3
19
word"sent shivers down"
count1
20
word"raced"
count2
21
word"sense of"
count1
22
word"stomach"
count2
23
word"flicked"
count1
24
word"could feel"
count5
25
word"echoed"
count1
26
word"warmth"
count2
27
word"stark"
count2
28
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"loomed"
2"sentinels"
3"oppressive"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"scanning"
7"pulsed"
8"reminder"
9"pounding"
10"measured"
11"tracing"
12"intricate"
13"etched"
14"chill"
15"down her spine"
16"racing"
17"flicker"
18"whisper"
19"sent shivers down"
20"raced"
21"sense of"
22"stomach"
23"flicked"
24"could feel"
25"echoed"
26"warmth"
27"stark"
28"glint"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count2
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes widened"
2"a flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
45.45% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1334
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
35.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1181
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.29
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Fae2
Grove2
Aurora27
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.357
windowScore0.5
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if urging her to move deeper into the clearing"
1"seemed trivial compared to the danger she felt now"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1334
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
62.14% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean43.03
std15.81
cv0.368
sampleLengths
066
167
264
348
463
542
649
731
855
915
1025
1154
1226
1337
1425
1566
1645
1752
1857
1948
2037
2147
2227
2349
2442
2552
2613
2743
2831
2950
308
93.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"was gone"
1"was surrounded"
2"was trapped"
46.39% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was coming"
1"was reacting"
2"was being"
3"were closing"
4"was running"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences97
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1183
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.021132713440405747
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00507185122569738
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean13.75
std6.15
cv0.447
sampleLengths
020
119
211
316
419
514
616
718
816
917
1031
1115
121
138
1410
158
166
178
1818
1916
2021
2114
2213
237
248
2521
2611
2717
2815
2916
3020
3113
3216
336
3411
354
3610
379
386
3912
4023
4119
4210
4316
4422
454
4611
476
4813
496
43.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.24742268041237114
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners24
80.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"Just the shadows playing tricks"
1"Just a few more steps,"
ratio0.024
94.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences83
matches
0"She skidded to a halt,"
1"She had come here for"
2"She swallowed hard, her fingers"
3"She took a deep breath,"
4"she muttered to herself"
5"She moved forward, her steps"
6"She clutched it tightly, her"
7"It was tall and slender,"
8"she called out, her voice"
9"it said, its voice a"
10"She had heard stories about"
11"she said, her voice shaking"
12"she asked, her voice growing"
13"she called out, but it"
14"She had come here seeking"
15"She turned to leave the"
16"She turned slowly, her eyes"
17"She had to get out"
18"She could feel the pendant"
19"she shouted, her voice trembling"
ratio0.313
2.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences83
matches
0"Aurora Carter's breath came in"
1"The Heartstone Pendant throbbed against"
2"She skidded to a halt,"
3"The ancient oak standing stones"
4"She had come here for"
5"The wildflowers that bloomed year-round"
6"The air was thick, almost"
7"Aurora took a cautious step"
8"The pendant pulsed again, warmer"
9"She swallowed hard, her fingers"
10"A twig snapped behind her,"
11"She took a deep breath,"
12"she muttered to herself"
13"She moved forward, her steps"
14"The standing stones seemed to"
15"Aurora reached out to touch"
16"The moment her skin made"
17"A low, almost imperceptible hum"
18"Aurora's eyes widened as she"
19"She clutched it tightly, her"
ratio0.916
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Now, standing face to face"
ratio0.012
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"No chirping crickets, no rustling leaves, just an oppressive silence that pressed down on her like a weight."
1"She swallowed hard, her fingers brushing against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident that seemed trivial compar…"
2"The moment her skin made contact, a chill ran down her spine, and she jerked her hand back as if burned."
3"She could feel the pendant pulsing against her chest, its warmth a stark contrast to the cold dread that filled her."
4"She was trapped, surrounded by creatures that wanted the Heartstone."
5"She could feel the pendant pulsing against her chest, its warmth a stark contrast to the cold dread that filled her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she called out, her voice trembling despite her best efforts to sound brave"
1"Aurora demanded, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"she said, her voice shaking"
3"she asked, her voice growing more desperate"
4"she shouted, her voice trembling"
5"the figure asked, its voice a low, menacing whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"Aurora demanded (demand)"
3"it murmured (murmur)"
4"she called out (call out)"
5"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.591
leniency1
rawRatio0.462
effectiveRatio0.462
71.2972%